MBA作文讲座课堂应用版最终版

1、MBA作文讲座1 幅：150/100字 达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-52 布局：3-5段式 只写一段为0-4分，只写两段0-9分 3 评分标准（5个模块评分，平均半分钟一份卷） 结构、内容、语言：3段，长短句结合，一定难度的词汇和短语，少词汇语法错误 卷面书写工整：心情一好分数就不会低 篇幅一定要不长不短2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（即表达得一塌糊涂）5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。（即表达得糊里糊涂）8分 基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。（即表达得勉勉

2、强强）11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（即表达得清清楚楚）14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（即表达得漂漂亮亮）例如： 1） 有人认为机会是极少的 2） 有人认为机会人人都有 3） 我的看法 Sample 1 As to the opportunity, there is two different opinions: first, someone think opportunity is little in their life. Secondly, someone consider that opportunity i

3、s existing everywhere everybody has some kinds of chance. According to my life experiment and knowledge I agree with the second idea. There is chance for everyone in some unexpected case. But if you has no preparing for it, the opportunity will lose. Those who have many preparation and much knowledg

4、e, and some good virtue, may I quip the opportunity firmly. For example, two men are appealing for a job in a company, and there is only one vacant job for the only one of the two men. How, the two man has an opportunity to get the job but the boss certainly would accept the good one. So I think the

5、 opportunity is existing to every one, but more opportunity is belongs to who has knowledge, experience, encourage and confident. 该篇文章条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎，几乎没有正确的句子，得2分。 Sample 2 People have different views on opportunity. Some think that there are few opportunities for them in the world, while others h

6、old that everybody will have some kind of chances in his or her life. As far as I am concerned, I am for/prefer the latter. People who claim that they don't have good luck may be those who are not able to take chances. Maybe they fail to recognize opportunities even when they are in front of the

7、m. However, wise men can seek opportunities rather than wait for chances to appear. So we can conclude that everybody has the opportunity to succeed, but it is up to himself to take it. 该篇文章切题，思想表达清楚，文章结构合理，行文连贯，符合逻辑，属于14分档作文。 4 行文要求 1） 切题：统一，无不相关细节内容 2） 条理清楚：连贯、和谐 - 注意衔接语的使用 3） 简洁：句子要简练 4） 准确：减少语法错

8、误，符合英语的表达习惯，避免汉语式英语 In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, / As I see it, this is not necessarily a bad thing, becauseIn the first placeFor instance In the second place Even more important is the fact that/what more/moreoverIn conclusionin a brief 文章的内容不重要！重要的是框架（背）！习惯先看每段的首句+文章末句，再浏览全文挑错字和语法错误，所以要

9、写成3段，每段首句为中心句，结尾再总结一下，这样老师只看34句话就可以给出分数了，节省时间自然分数就高了。 中心句的写法模式性，一般背20句，不管出什么题都能从中挑出34句用上，各种题型背一些。    拼写不大确定的词一定不要写！判卷老师最强的能力就是找错字，而且这是他判断你写作能力的重要尺度！当你文章中出现了3个以上的拼写错误的时候，可以说你已经mission fail了。 作文中出现一些闪光词汇和句型（比如成语chances prefer to ready ones, all roads lead to Roma等，多被动句，插入语等，句式变化多样），对分数的提高有很大

10、帮助的！建议背一些模块长句。如“重要”一词，用important太一般了，如果用vital, critical，essential，crucial就能使老师眼前一亮！ more and more这个词是一定不要用，可以用A growing number of sth 或 An increasing number of sth， 或说is on the rise。Attach importance to词汇和句式的转化很重要，你背的中心句一定要能体现这两点，如问题解决型文章末段首句可以这样写An immediate step must be taken before the problem be

11、comes too serious to solve.（必须在问题严重之前及时采取有效措施解决）Measures, when it comes to this problem/as far as this issue is concerned/as far as the problem goes, are to be taken so as to, I believe.(就这个问题而言，我认为应该采取措施改进以便。)正反观点对比可以说 Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the l

12、atter/former point of view.(权衡正反两种观点，我倾向于后者前者的看法)，这样就不用为字数发愁了！ 大作文的时间-35分钟，分钟构思（确定模块，举例，论据等），分钟写，分钟检查。 内容切题，但不新颖不重要，不要为了想个好的例子浪费时间，第一是你未必想的出来，第二是你想出来了也写不出来，第三是你写出来了老师也不会看！所以要写最简单的例子。 检查，这个时间千万不要数字数，主要是找拼写和语法的错误，主要是全篇文章时态一致、单复数、主谓一致！记住小的地方可以改，但决不要整句整句的改，缩短老师的评卷时间、使老师高兴是及格和打高分的首要条件！注意一些常用词，常用短语不要用错！Co

13、nvenient, essential, obvious, characteristics/feature, environmental protection, prefer。to。,definitely, 5模块1.议论型模块 (89 words)谋篇布局 - 将提示的第一句作为文章的第一句 - 将提示的第三句作为第一段的最后一句 - 将提示的第二句展开成文章的中心段落 - 结论段归纳概括，提出建议Some people believe (argue, hold，advocate，recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opp

14、osite side. They firmly advocate that 观点2. As for me/as far as I am concerned, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind/ to support my belief. First of all/in the first place, 论据1.More importantly/ in the second place, 论据2. Most important of all/ the more important is fa

15、ct that, 论据3.Last but not the least.In summary, 总结观点. As a citizen of the global village, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测.例如：2002年1月MBA作文题Failure and SuccessSome believe that failure and success are an inevitable part of their daily life and both contribute to their final s

16、uccess. But others take an opposite side. They firmly advocate that failure will destroy their confidence in their work and life. As far as I am concerned, I agree to the former.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, failure should not be regarded as the end of the world. On th

17、e contrary, it can teach us a lot of lessons and experience, with which we avoid making mistakes again and finally succeed. Second/In the second place, if everything runs smoothly and we make achievements effortlessly, we will become arrogant and be blind to potential problems, which may lead to our

18、 total failure.From above, we can see we should take a proper attitude toward failure and success.对比选择型模版 (56 words)1. There is a heated debate over _. It is commonly accepted that _. In contrast, others claim that_.2. Those who hold the first opinion suggest _. In their view,_. However, others thin

19、k _. They argue that _.3. Considering one after another, I stand on the side of On Marriage of College Students1. There is a heated debate over whether college students should get married or not. It is commonly accepted that they are entitled to get married. In contrast, a small minority of people a

20、re against it.2. Those who hold the first opinion suggest that college students are both physically and mentally mature enough to get married and that they know what they are doing. In their view, if college students get married, they will be more disciplined, more motivated and more responsible. Ho

21、wever, others think todays college students are mostly from one childs family. As a matter of fact, they are usually spoilt and not psychologically prepared for undertaking the responsibility of a family. They argue that marriage will distract them from study and plunge them into financial dilemma.3

22、. Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the former. If I am lucky enough to meet my Mr. Right, I may marry him. Then we may love each other, support each other and encourage each other. Oh, what a rosy picture it is!非对立观点题：只阐述好处或者坏处Benefits of Sports and Games With the quicker pace o

23、f our life and greater stress from our work, an increasing number of modern people attach much importance to sports and games./An increasing number of modern people, with the quicker pace of our life and greater stress from our work, attach much importance to sports and games. Why are they becoming

24、so popular?First, sports and games do a lot of good to our health. They can make us strong, prevent us from getting too fat, and keep us healthy. They can be of great value to people who work with their brains most of the day, for sports and games give people valuable practice in building up a stron

25、g constitution.Whats more, they make our life richer and more colorful. “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”, just as the saying goes. So people of all ages enjoy watching and taking part in various kinds of sports.Sports and games are also very useful in character training. They demand not

26、only physical skill and strength but also courage, enthusiasm, discipline and teamwork. For boys and girls, what is learned in the playground often has a deep effect/impact on/influence on their character. If each of them learns to work for his team and not for himself on the football field, he will

27、 later find it natural to work for the good of his country instead of only for his own benefit.With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games seem to have become an essential part of our daily life.2004年10月MBA考题Should College Students Live outside the Campus?There is a heated debate

28、over whether college students are entitled to rent a flat and live outside the campus. It is commonly accepted that they have every reason to make their own choice about it. In contrast, others maintain that they should live in the dormitory provided by their colleges.Those who hold the first opinio

29、n suggest that college students are old enough to make their wise choice and take care of themselves. In their view, college students living outside the campus by themselves has a lot of advantages such as freedom, more space, better privacy, greater flexibility in the timetable, convenience and exc

30、ellent living facilities. However, others think it does harm for college students to live outside the campus. On the one hand, they argue that the society is complicated and that there exists danger everywhere. If something terrible happens, who will be responsible? On the other hand, college studen

31、ts will be hard to discipline and manage.Considering one after another, I stand on the side of the former. Were I a college student, I would choose to live by myself, for I value independence, freedom and privacy more than anything else.2009真题大作文It is well-known that text message has both advantages

32、 and disadvantages even though it plays an increasing critical role in our daily life. Some people believe that it is a blessing for text message enriches our life in a large degree. But others take an opposite side. They firmly advocate that it is a hell because sometimes it brings lots of troubles

33、 and even destroys our life. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to agree with the former idea even if it has some disadvantages.There are a dozen of reasons to support my belief. In the first place, we can send short messages to wish good luck to our relatives and friends, which bring us a grea

34、t deal of convenience. Whats more, short message can help its users to connect the outside world easily. For instance, some people subscribe weather forecast or news, with which peoples life will be greatly colorful. Last but not the least, text message can save a large amount of money and time, com

35、paring with phone calls. On the contrary, the short message with too much ads disturbs our peaceful life. However, the disadvantages of text message can be ignored.In summary, the text message owns pros and cons, but we can use it freely and avoid its negative effects.私人书信模版1 Dear John/Sirs or Madam

36、s,I am delighted to hear that you will come to Guangzhou for a visit soon. I cant wait to see you. Here Id like to give you several tips./Im here writing for you to thank/apologize/congulate/complain about for. First/ at first/at the beginning/to begin with/in the first place, Guangzhou is a big met

37、ropolitan city with a lot of vehicles and a huge crowd of people and the traffic is heavy, for which I hope you will be prepared. Second/ in the second place/ whats more/the more important is the fact that, people here are addicted to foods of different flavors, esp. seafoods and living animals, eve

38、n insects. I doubt youll like them. Besides, the weather here is changeable, so youd better bring more clothes and medicine. With people from different regions and countries, diverse cultures and exotic customs, you will definitely enjoy yourself. Then I may serve as your guide. If you have any doub

39、ts, dont hesitate to inform me please. I am looking forward to seeing you/early reply .Sincerely Yours,Signature: Li Ming2009书信作文Dear Sir or Madam,I am here writing to you to express my thanks for your warm reception while I was in America as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program.I h

40、ope you will come to visit China in due course.If you have any doubts, dont hesitate to inform me please. I am looking forward to seeing you/early reply .Sincerely Yours,Signature: Li Ming图表作文模块As is shown in the table (or in the graph/diagram), dropped(or decreased) by/greatly increased from in 199

41、4 to in 1996.There are at least two good reasons for On the one hand, Lets have an example to illustrate the great increase in On the other hand, is due to the fact that In addition, is responsible for Maybe there are some other reasons to show As far as I am concerned, Nouns: a rise/increase/fall/d

42、rop/decline/reach a peak/the lowest point Adjectives: sharp/dramatic/considerable/slight/gradual/remain steady/stay constant 2010 真题大作文As is shown from the given column/pie/table/curve chart as above, it is of direct link to mobile phone subscription in the years stemming/ranging from 2000 to 2008,

43、which is composed of two sorts of countries. The first kind of nation that catches our utmost attention, to start with, comes to the developed nations. The number of mobile phone subscription in the year 2008 was equal to that in 2007, that is, 1 billion, followed by the year 2006 (0.9 billion), whi

44、le that in the year 2000 was the smallest, say, about 0.6 billion. Following that, well continue to the next unit, in other words, the developing countries, which observed/saw/witnessed a faster rising rate of subscription in the same period. The figure/data of the year 2008 was the biggest, taking

45、the leading position (4 billion), next to which was the year 2007, put it in another way, nearly 3.3 billion, with the year 2000 being the least in number by 0.4 billion.The above-illustrated aspects, so far in a word, indicate that the growing proportion of mobile phone subscription in the developi

46、ng countries was much senior to that of the developed ones.It Pays to Be HonestRecently, we often hear complaints about dishonesty. What amazes us most is students' dishonesty in exams. It is true that cheating and dishonest practices are in every walk of our lives.There are many reasons explain

47、ing these dishonest behaviors. The main reason is that most people neglect the moral values in pursuit of their material benefits. What is more, we lack effective laws and regulations of supervision. Thirdly, most dishonest people can escape the punishment. As a result , the problem of dishonesty be

48、comes more and more serious.Considering all these, I still want to argue that it pays to be honest in the long run. For one thing,honesty is a traditional virtue of our Chinese. For another, even dishonest people like making friends with honest people. In conclusion, people seldom deny that it pays

49、to be honest.It Pays to Be HonestAs is known to all, we often hear complaints about dishonesty. People seem to get accustomed to many dishonest behaviors. In fact, there are dishonest practices in every walk of our lives.The reasons of social dishonesty lie in several aspects. Firstly, most people n

50、eglect moral values in pursuit of their material benefits. Secondly, unfair competitions worsen the situation. Thirdly, we lack powerful and effective laws to cope with this problem. Finally, many dishonest people may escape punishment easily. As a matter of fact, to be honest will be good for both

51、honest people and others. On the one hand, behaving yourself in an honest way can win respects from others. On the other hand, being honest is an essential step towards our spiritual civilization. Therefore, it pays to be honest in the long run.How to Solve the Energy Problem a. 有人认为解决能源危机的方式是厉行节约 b

52、. 有人则认为开发新的能源是最好的办法 c. 我的看法 Some people hold that the solution to energy crisis is to save energy while others claim that the best approach is to develop new sources of energy. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter.It is obvious that even if we can save much energy, we can only delay the ene

53、rgy crisis, but cannot solve the problem completely. On the other hand, there are still limitless sources of energy waiting for to explore: such as the sun, the sea and the air. For example, we can make use of the sun to produce solar energy.So in the long run, we must develop new sources of energy

54、instead of merely conserving the known, limited supplies. 标题：How to Achieve Success 提纲：1）有人说成功主要靠运气； 2）有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫无关系; 3）我的观点 Some people say the key to success is good luck, while others claim it is hard work. As far as I am concerned, there are many factors contributing to success and the th

55、ree fundamental ones are diligence, devotion and perseverance. Diligence is the first key factor to success. Diligence helps us remove ignorance, overcome difficulties, and enlighten our minds. It makes a fool wise, and a poor man rich. Devotion is another factor to success. Whatever we do, we must

56、love it and do it whole-heartedly. Only when we set our minds on the job, can we do it well. Furthermore, perseverance, or a strong will, is the last key to success. Without a strong will, we are likely to give up when we meet some difficulties, let alone perform wonderful deeds. To conclude, all gr

57、eat men achieve success through diligence, devotion and perseverance. Just as the famous saying goes, "No pains, no gains" "Where there is a will, there is a way." 标题：City Life and Suburban Life 提纲：1) 最近几年越来越多的人迁往近郊居住 2）城市生活和近郊生活各有特点 3） 比较起来，我喜欢的是 Nowadays business, government and recreation tend to be concentrated in the centers of the cities. Although most people are reluctant to move to the outskirts of the cities, I feel like living in the suburbs. It is true that the city can provide much convenience and entertainment, the very reason why people can't bear