(英语)初中英语书面表达试题(有答案和解析)及解析

1、英语） 初中英语书面表达试题 （ 有答案和解析 ） 及解析一、英语书面表达1书面表达 地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳 ”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生 活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几 点：1. 节约用水、用电； 2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林； 3. 节约粮食，在更多的土 地上种树； 4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境； 要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 80 词左右 提示词： the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生

2、活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better. 【答案】 How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases li

3、festyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be

4、 recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment. If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better. 【解析

5、】 【详解】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do ，live in ， aroundus， such as，as a middle school student ，and so on， close down the water ，turn off the lights， cut down ，make a contribution to our earth ， pollute our environment ， better and better 等。而固定结构 But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyl

6、e? 和 I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表 达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习

7、中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适 当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对 “初中生什么时候放学比较合适？ ”这一问题进行了热烈的讨 论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在 5 点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写 篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave sc

8、hoolActivities to do after school· at 5 o ' clock·exercise to keep healthy and read books·at 4:45·do what we want, such as listening to music· at 5 o ' clock·take a part-time job注意：（ 1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数： 80-100 ；This wve ek we ha（4）短文开头

9、仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头： “ What time should junior high school students leave school?held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.【答案】 “ What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of t

10、he discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listen

11、ing to music.A few think 5 o 'clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o'clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I

12、 like.【解析】【详解】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting ，talkabout ， the result of ，keep healthy ， after school ，have more time to do ，want to do ，such as， listen to music ， in favor of ，clean the room ，play tennis 等。而复杂并列结构 They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books af

13、ter school. 和 Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 'clock./ Some think that students should leaveschool at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most studentsthink / Some think / A fe

14、w th使in叙k 述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总 结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有 条理。【点睛】 书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理 后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要 尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。3假定你是 David，来自美国，你的 QQ好友 Li Ming 想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他来 信向你了解有关这方面的情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，并根据信中的内容和实际用英语 回

15、复，可以有适当的发挥。To: davidwoodlandschoolFrom: limingsunshineschoolSubject: VolunteeringDear David，about it.I ' m writing to ask you for advice. I know you often do volunteer work in your free time. I interested in it very much. I' m going to do some this summer vacation. But I know littleCould you

16、 help me answer the following questions? Why do you want to be a volunteer? What kind of vo1unteer work is suitable for us students? Do you have any problems with volunteering? If my parents don' t allow me to do so, what should I do?I ' m looking forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes

17、，Li Ming注意： 1.词数 90 左右。回复信的开头和结尾己经写好，不计入总词数;2. 回复中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Li Ming,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【答案】 Dear Li Ming

18、,Thanks for your letter. I'm glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.I volunteer because I enjoy helping others and can learn a lot from others. As students, we can take part in some interesting activities, such as looking after animals and working for sports matc

19、hes. Also, we can join charity organizations to help protect the environment and so on. It ' s OK to have problems, because volunteering takes much time and energy. Sometimes I can balance my study and work. If your parents donou to' vot luanllotewe ry, you should have a goodtalk with them.

20、Try to let them understand you.I hope you love volunteering and do well in it. Looking forward to your good news.Best wishesDavid【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文，给好友Li Ming 回信，介绍暑假做志愿者的情况。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主 要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： I'm glad ，we can， It 's OK to ， If your parents

21、 don' t allow you， toyou should .，I hope 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头为你想要成为一名志愿者而感到高兴，接下来介绍 我们可以从事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作带来的一些问题，最后我希望你喜欢志愿者工 作。此处 would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forwa

22、rd to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变 化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括 : 1. 变化是什么 ?2. 变化是如何发生的 ?3. 变化后有什么感受 ?【答案】 The biggest personal change I ' ve ever made is falling in love with rending. When I was a child, I didn't enjobyo orekasd aint ga ll. Later, my mother always

23、read stories forme and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more. 【解析】【分析】 这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】 结

24、合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意 主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： When I was ，my mother always read ，Gradually I began to ， Books are 等句式的 应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关 系。【点睛】 本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小 时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth,

25、beginto do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色 不少。5书面表达每年的 4 月 23 日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开 展“读好书，促成长 ”活动，请你根据这项活动的主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的意义1. 获取知识，开阔视野2. 使人愉悦，益于学习3. （自由发挥）现状1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯2. 不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议（至少两点）注意： 1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点

26、，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life.Let ' s start reading now!【答案】 Reading is very important in our daily life First of all ，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books It can also help to open up a whole n

27、ew world to us Second， reading will/can make us clever and happy It is good for our study and it can help us grow up Third， reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful However ， there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don't have enough time for read

28、ing Moreover ， some of us don't have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet In my opinion ， our school can have a"Reading Week"once a term Teachers should encourage students to borrow books from the library We must spend more time r

29、eading some useful books As a result ，we can have a better future Let's start reading now! 【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短 语，例如 first of all ， all kinds of books ， help to do ，be good for ， more and further ，so much ， spend too much time doing ， search the Internet ，in my opinion ，as a r

30、esult 等。同时 First of all ，/ Second， / Third 等时间副词和 However/ Moreover / As a result 等结构副词的运 用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮 点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要 点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构 以便得到较高的分数。6 “美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她 ”。自双创以来，我们的生活环境得到了

31、很大的 改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。作为一名中学生，请你写 一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；2. 必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4. 词数 80 左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role i

32、n building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students,Let ' s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【答案】 Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone pla

33、ys an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be politeto others and try to behave well. It' s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can helpclean up our cit

34、y in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn' t do. We shouldn' t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. We can' t spit anywhere and we shouldn' t throw rubbish everywhere.At the same

35、 time, we shouldn' t break traffic rules.Let ' s take action now. Our aocntis can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【详解】琼海正在进行 “双创 ”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的 改变。这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到 “双创 ”活动中来。题 目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不

36、应该做什么。根据这个内容， 写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。整篇短文应使用一般现 在时态，第一人称 we 来叙述。写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不 能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句 型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文 章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。【点睛】 这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市 “双 创”活动中来。首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内 容，从

37、应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。文章条理清 晰，有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符 合英语的表达习惯。短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较 复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others andt throwtry to behave well. 、It 's kind of you to help people in need、. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order t

38、o make it clearer and tidier. 、We can't spit anywhere and we shouldn rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn' t brea等k 等tra。ffic rules.7书面表达 难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来 的期待。请以 My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文 介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。注意:1.词数 90 左右。短文的开头

39、已为你写好，不计入总词数;2.短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。语言连贯、通顺 ;3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 【答案】 How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt

40、a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn ' t do well in Maths

41、 because I gave up easily when meetign difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn ' t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better.

42、I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以 “My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，”结合本题 所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和 一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文 意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达 出自己的感想和看法。写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。文中not only but also，help

43、a lot ，share happiness and sadness， do well in ， give up, besides， so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.， therefore, be proud of 等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章 的最后 I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me! 表达了自己愿望与想法， 使文章增色不少，值得学习。8李华的英国笔友 Jessica来信说 , 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华

44、, 请你给 Jessica 写一封信 , 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：1. 中秋节的时间；2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月 , 吃月饼等；3, 我最期待的活动。要求： 1.80-100 词开头和结尾已给出 , 不计入总词数）； 2.语句通顺 , 意思连贯 , 书写工 整。Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】 Dear Jessica,I'm glad to hear f

45、rom you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15 th of the 8th lunar month. It's a big day for us Chinese people. Allthe family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside

46、 and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest.With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours

47、, Li Hua 【解析】【详解】 本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文 可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的 活动。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习 惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together ， enjoy the fullmoon， share our stories 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连 贯。9书面表达 假如你是英语俱乐部的 Cathy,上周五你们收到了外教 Angel 为同学们网购的英文书籍

48、。俱乐 部的同学们很喜欢网购图书这种便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流读书后的感受。请你根 据以下信息 , 给 Angel 写一封电子邮件，告诉她俱乐部的活动情况，并说说网购图书的好 处。写作要点：1 表达收到图书后的喜悦与感激之情。2 介绍活动的情况：（l）上周五，俱乐部成员们一起读英文书。（2）本周五的下午 3 点，大家将共同交流读书的体会。（3）同学们将在下个月网购其他的英文书。3 说一说网上购书有什么好处。 写作要求：1 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4 至少 80 词。Dear Angel,How are

49、 you doing?Best wishes!Yours,Cathy【答案】 Dear Angel,How are you doing? I' m writing to tell you that we received the books that you bought for us. Weare grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。t goLast Friday， we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are

50、going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bo

51、okstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yours, Cathy 【解析】【详解】 本文属于材料作文，向外教介绍俱乐部中读书交流会的活动，并且告诉外教同学们现在喜 欢网购图书并阐述网购图书的好处。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思 连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习 惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to,be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concer