投诉信教学设计

1、英语写作：投诉信1 writing: a letter of complainti. what is a complaint letter? （什么是投诉信？）?背景：遇到一些不文明现象、 所购商品质量差、 售后服务不满意等情况下向相关机构或人员写信，旨在解决问题。?语言：要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正、礼貌。?内容：1. 表明写作目的，因何事投诉；2. 具体存在的问题； 3. 希望得到回复并解决问题。ii. task presentation （任务呈现）?假如你是学生会主席李明， 请你代表全校同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视。问题包括：1. 菜价昂贵； 2.过于

2、油腻， 味道不佳， 菜品种类少； 3.排队时间长， 浪费午休时间。?注意：1. 词数不少于 120；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。iii. brainstorming（头脑风暴）?structure of the text: paragraph 1: introduce yourself and express the dissatisfaction directly.paragraph 2: describe the details of complaining.paragraph 3: expect a reply and express grat

3、itude （感激） .?notice:tense: present simple.person: the first person.key points: 菜价；味道、种类；排队时间。英语写作：投诉信2 iv. useful expressions（词语、句型储备）套用句式：1. 写作目的：i m writing to make a complaint about2. 投诉内容：the reason is that in the first place, whats more, last but not least,3. 希望得到的结果：i would appreciate it if yo

4、u could kindly reply us and give a solution.词语储备：?代表on behalf of?抱怨complain?餐厅canteen?对不满be dissatisfied with?油腻的greasy?路边摊stall?对造成威胁pose a threat to?排队wait in line?小憩nap句子储备：?写这封信是想代表全校同学对餐厅的服务质量提出不满。_ my fellow students, _ the poor service of the canteen. 英语写作：投诉信3 ?餐厅食物价格太高，成为一些同学的负担。_ in the ca

5、nteen is _ high _ it becomes a burden for us. ?餐厅食物过于油腻，味道不佳，菜品选择有限。the food in the canteen is _ and _, and we have _ of dishes. ?食物被浪费，有些学生转而购买校外路边摊食物，对健康造成威胁。_ is much food wasted, _ many students _ outside the campus, which can _ to our health. ?午饭排队时间长，浪费午休时间，下午上课犯困。waiting in line during lunch

6、_ for the nap at noon, _ in later classes. ?我们希望餐厅服务能得到改善。 如能得到您的回复并给出解决方案，我们将感激不尽！_ that the service of the canteen can be improved. we would really _ if you could kindly reply us and_. v. combining sentences（连接句子）a. as a consequence b. last but not leastc. basically d. all in all e. what s more f.

7、 in the first place _, there are three aspects that we are dissatisfied with. _, the price of the food in the canteen is so high that it becomes a burden for us. _, the food in the canteen is rather greasy and tastes bad, and we have limited choices of dishes. _, not only is much food wasted, but al

8、so many students turn to stalls outside the campus, which can pose a threat to our health. _, waiting in line during lunch results in decreased time for the nap at noon, making us sleepy in later classes._, it is our hope that the service of the canteen can be improved. we would really appreciate it

9、 if you could kindly reply us and give solutions.范文：英语写作：投诉信4 dear principal,i m li ming, president of the student union. on behalf of my fellow students, im writing to complain about the poor service of the canteen. the details are as follows:basically, there are three aspects that we are dissatisf

10、ied with. in the first place, the price of the food in the canteen is so high that it becomes a burden for us. whats more, the food in the canteen is rather greasy and tastes bad, and we have limited choices of dishes. as a consequence, not only is much food wasted, but also many students turn to st

11、alls outside the campus, which can pose a threat to our health. last but not least, waiting in line during lunch results in decreased time for the nap at noon, making us sleepy in later classes.all in all, it is our hope that the service of the canteen can be improved. we would really appreciate it

12、if you could kindly reply us and give solutions.best wishes!sincerely,li mingvi. practice （实战演练）假如你是红星中学生李明， 发现晚自习下课后校门前拥堵现象十分严重，给同学和外部车辆造成很大不便。请就此向校长写一封抱怨信。要点如下：1.车辆拥堵，给公共交通带来不便；2.道路狭窄，不利于学生安全；3.等待浪费时间。注意：1. 词数不少于 120；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯。?structure of the text: paragraph 1: introduc

13、e yourself and express the dissatisfaction directly.paragraph 2: describe the details of complaining.paragraph 3: expect a reply and express gratitude （感激） .?notice:英语写作：投诉信5 tense: present simple.person: the first person.key points: 拥堵造成不便；路窄不利安全；排队浪费时间。?useful expressions:晚自习self-study at night 交通/车辆拥堵traffic/vehicle jam 道路狭窄narrow roads 造成cause; result in; lead to; as a result;consequently; as a consequence不便inconvenience公共交通public transportation 现象phenomenon?连接词：表起始： first of all; in the first place; first and foremost. 表递进： furthermore; whats more; in addi