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1、例题1 （文字题）The staff at your company were recently asked what they thought about working conditions. Your line manager has asked you to write a report summarizing their opinions and suggesting possible improvements.Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.Th

2、en, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.Write 120-140 words.I know your had a meeting with staff recently.Can your write a report telling me what staff thought about working conditions, what changes can be made, and how the company will benefit from improving conditions?better produc

3、tivityMeeting with employees about working conditionsStaff had some good things to say but they also mentionedthese problems:、give an examplethe need for more flexibleworking hours'''''''-explain why neededpoor condition of some office areassuggest a solutionSample 1Repor

4、t on: Staff opinion about working conditionsThis report aims to summarize the results of the last staff meeting.FindingsFirst, most of the employeesare really satisfied with the new smoking policy. But there are also some problems.Due to the fact that many employees have to care for children they wo

5、uld rather prefer flexible working hours.Furthermore some office areas are in a poor condition, most important is that a few of them do not have sunlight at their workplace. There is also a problem with the payment when going on holiday, which is too less for our workers.ConclusionIn conclusion the

6、opinions about this topic are much better compared with last year, but there is still a lot to do. Recommendation:It is suggested to create a bonus system for increasing holiday payment and not of least to increase productivity.Band 3All the content points are covered and despite a number or languag

7、e errors, the messageis clearly conveyed. The report has been organised into sections, although at times paragraphing is in need of attention.Sample 2Report on satisfaction-level of staff membersIntroductionThis report aims to show weather our staff members are satisfied with their working condition

8、s or not.FindingsThe recent meeting shows clearly that our staff is quite satisfied with the working conditions. Especially, a lot of them have praised our pension scheme and our childcare vouchers.Nevertheless, some complained about unflexible working hours, as they have to take care of their child

9、ren at home.Apart from this, the poor condition of some office areas was mentioned. A lot of them are dissatisfied with the dirt on the floors and the old-fashioned computer systems.Finally, I would suggestto increasethe number of days off, as most members feel quite exhaustedafter 6 months without holiday.ConclusionIn my opinion, we should try to improve working conditions for this will lead to more productivity in the end.Band 5All the content points have been addressed and the target reader would be fully informed. The report is effectively organised, making use of headings and