大学英语写作模板,3,4级通用

1、英语写作英语写作外语学院外语学院 卢培卢培东西方思维模式差异东西方思维模式差异中国人的思维模式中国人的思维模式中国画中国画 意合意合书法，草书书法，草书 外人还真看不懂！外人还真看不懂！东西方思维模式差异东西方思维模式差异亚里士多德亚里士多德 古希腊演说古希腊演说现代西方思维模式现代西方思维模式直截了当，环环相扣，步步为营直截了当，环环相扣，步步为营西方思维模式西方思维模式西方人写作模式西方人写作模式 第一句话话概述主题思想第一句话话概述主题思想 引出具体事例，发展思路引出具体事例，发展思路主题句（主题句（Topic Sentence)发展句发展句 （developer）结尾句结尾句 (Ter

2、minator)Version1: We live in a world in which science and technology is developing very quickly. The development of science needs scientists from all over the world to exchange their work more and more frequently. However, scientists from different countries speak different languages. So they cant c

3、ommunicate with each other freely. Scientists also write journals in different languages. So if they dont understand English, they can not understand what others had written, since most journals are in English. So, English is very important to scientists.Version2: English is important to scientists.

4、 To begin with, English is the vehicle of information. Its widely used in the world, and most journals are written in English. So scientists need to use English to get information. Whats more, English is the working language of many meetings in the world, especially science meetings. All in all, sci

5、entists should learn English well.阅卷老师的盲点，兴奋点以及残留点阅卷老师的盲点，兴奋点以及残留点1.阅卷老师的弱点：阅卷老师的弱点： 厌倦厌倦 Bored疲劳疲劳 Tired气愤气愤 Fretful长时间的阅卷，气愤的老师脑子中就有了一个长时间的阅卷，气愤的老师脑子中就有了一个框架框架每篇文章都被套进这个每篇文章都被套进这个框架框架中审阅中审阅抓住弱点！抓住弱点！作文作文箭箭一箭命中要害一箭命中要害阅卷人的兴奋点阅卷人的兴奋点1.行文结构行文结构2. 论据以及细节论据以及细节3. 一两个高级词汇或者修辞运用（亮点）一两个高级词汇或者修辞运用（亮点）阅卷老师的

6、盲区阅卷老师的盲区1. 选择了什么论点选择了什么论点2. 少量标点或拼写错误少量标点或拼写错误3.论据是否天衣无缝论据是否天衣无缝阅卷老师的残留点阅卷老师的残留点阅卷老师在身心俱疲的情况下，阅卷老师在身心俱疲的情况下，快速浏览了作文，绝对是边看边快速浏览了作文，绝对是边看边忘。但是如果有亮点，少数还是忘。但是如果有亮点，少数还是会进入老师的潜意识，老师在很会进入老师的潜意识，老师在很大程度上就是根据亮点打分大程度上就是根据亮点打分兴奋点越多，残留点越多兴奋点越多，残留点越多5个常用单词的替代个常用单词的替代Think claim / suggest / believe / advocate /

7、 maintain / supposeGood beneficial / profitable / helpful / sound / decent / positiveBad harmful / detrimental / hazardous / negativeAdvantage merit / virtue / benefit / profit / proDisadvantage demerit / drawback / flaw / shortcoming / con 开头方法：开头方法：Nowadays， the issue onis highly debatable， and id

8、eas vary from person to person（不要用（不要用different people ）Some would claim ，while some others may suggestSome would claim，while the ideais still held by some others. (Idea倒装，句子更好看。不能用倒装，句子更好看。不能用somethe other这样只有两种可能性，太绝对了这样只有两种可能性，太绝对了)中间方式：中间方式：On one hand，.contribute greatly toOn the other hand/On

9、the contrary/in contrast，the demerits of.can not be ignored.To begin with/firstly/first and foremost/首先首先Besides/in a addition/moreover/其次其次Thirdly/furthermore/last but not least/最后最后末段（总结）末段（总结）:All in all/to conclude/in conclusion/in general/ to sum upWhen all the above-mentioned factors are taken

10、 into consideration, a conclusion could be drawn that (主要用来凑字数主要用来凑字数)词的选择词的选择 The choice of words形容词的选择形容词的选择1. 贫穷的：贫穷的：poor = needy = impoverished 2. 富裕的：富裕的：rich = wealthy = affluent3. 优秀的：优秀的：excellent = top = outstanding4. 积极的，好的：积极的，好的：good = beneficial=advantageous5. 消极的，不良的：消极的，不良的：bad = det

11、rimental =undesirable6. 明显的：明显的：obvious = apparent = evident7. 健康的健康的: healthy = sound = wholesome8. 惊人的：惊人的：surprising = amazing = extraordinary 9. 美丽的：美丽的：beautiful = attractive = gorgeous 10. 有活力的：有活力的：energetic = dynamic = vigorous11. 流行的：流行的： popular = prevailing = pervasive 高频动词高频动词1. 提高，加强：提高

12、，加强：improve = enhance= promote = strengthen 2. 引起：引起：cause = trigger = endanger3. 解决：解决：solve =resolve = tackle =cope with = deal with4. 拆除：拆除：destroy = tear down = knock down5. 培养培养: develop = cultivate = foster = nurture6. 激发，鼓励：激发，鼓励：encourage = motivate = stimulate = spur7. 认为：认为： think = assert

13、 = hold = claim = argue8. 完成：完成：complete = fulfill = accomplish= achieve9. 保留：保留：keep = preserve = retain = hold10. 有害于：有害于：destroy = impair = undermine 11. 减轻减轻: ease = alleviate = relieve = lighten 高频名词高频名词1. 影响：影响：influence= impact2. 危险：危险：danger = hazards3. 污染：污染：pollution = contamination4. 人类：人

14、类：human beings= mankind = humane race5. 老人：老人： old people= the elderly = the aged = senior citizens6. 幸福：幸福：happiness = cheerfulness 7. 老师：老师：teachers = instructors = educators = lecturers8. 教育：教育：education = schooling = upbringing10. 责任：责任： responsibility = obligation = duty = liability11. 能力：能力： a

15、bility = capacity = power = skill12. 职业：职业： job = career = employment = profession13. 娱乐：娱乐： enjoyment = pastimes = entertainment 高频短语高频短语1. 充满了：充满了：be filled with = be inundate with 2. 努力：努力：struggle for = strive for = spare no efforts for3. 从事：从事： embark n = take up = set about = go in for4. 在当代在当

16、代: in contemporary society = in present-day society= in this day and age5. 大量的大量的: a host of = a multitude of = a vast number of = a vast amount of词汇的替换词汇的替换1.useemploy/utilize 2.more and moreincreasing/growing/an increasing number of3.hardlymerelybarely4.big citymetropolis5.throughin term of/via 6.

17、butnonetheless/nevertheless 7.in my opinionfrom my own perspective/as far as I am concerned8.helpful beneficial, rewarding作文题目：作文题目：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should one Except a reward when doing a Good Deed? You should write at least 150 w

18、ords following the outline given below.初稿：初稿：Should one except a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different ideas. Some people expect a reward when doing a good deed. They think they give, so they should paid back. If they do the good deed for vain, they wont do it next time.修改后：修改后：Recently theres b