A 娇 作文--目的和措施

1、作文高分特点 外表美结构美 合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰 每一段落要有一个主题句topic sentence和几个支撑句supporting sentences 写人状物及叙事记叙文先写主题句，给予总体评价，然后详细介绍事件发生的人物，时间，原因结果等，最后照应全文，构成总分总结构。 议论文一般分三段：主题段提出问题或论点；发展段围绕主题讨论，举例或讲明道理；结尾得出结论。词汇美 两点词汇不等于偏难怪的词，而是使用生动，具体，形象的词汇，关键是地道准确。 The job is very difficult to do. The job is very challenging. Seeing

2、 the lines of trees, we all felt happy. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.句式美 句式单一，缺乏生气，哪怕无任何错误也难得高分。精彩句式的合理使用，会使本来结构单一语句乏味的句子极富可读性。 单句变并列句/复杂句：紧凑，多变，灵活 省略与替代：避免不必要的重复和累赘 主动和被动交替：丰富句子多样性 分词及with结构：灵活，形象，紧凑 Only in this way can we live a healthy life. How time flies! It has

3、 been 10 years since we last saw each other. We will meet at the gate of our school, where a blue bus will be waiting. As the saying goes, Actions speak louder than words. With the bright moon high up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes.衔接美：增强句子间逻辑性和紧凑性衔接美：增强句子间逻辑性和紧凑性 There are many adva

4、ntages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life, life will smile on us in return. So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible, First, I would like to smile at my parents because they have given me life and take all the trouble to bring me up

5、. They arrange almost everything for me. With their help, I have made great progress. I would like to say “Thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life. In a word, lets greet eve

6、ry day with a smile. Tomorrow is another day. 在我们队里有30名成员。Our team consists of/is composed/made up of 30 members.我们很容易找到了村庄。We had no difficulty/trouble (in) finding the village.这次英语演讲比赛非常成功。The English speech contest was of great success.众所周知，好的学习习惯对于学习非常重要。As is known to all, good learning habit i

7、s of vital importance to study. 我想到了一个主意。 A good idea occurred/struck to me. 我坚持写了一年的日记，最后发现对我帮助很大。 I have kept writing diaries for a whole year, which turn out to be of great help. 最后这次计划失败了。 The plan turned out to be a failure. 结果我的努力得到了回报。 It turned out that my efforts paid off. 当谈到好的学习习惯时，我建议每天坚

8、持阅读半小时。 When it comes to good learning habits, I suggest reading for half an hour every day. 随着高考的临近，部分学生变得越来越紧张。 With the final exam approaching near, some students are getting more and more nervous.目的和措施目的和措施 词汇储备： Be faced with(面临), be concerned about(对担忧/忧心忡忡) ，be impressed with, take measures/s

9、teps, take action(采取行动), deal with/cope with(处理), overcome/get over (克服),prevent/stop/keep sth from doing (阻止做某事), make efforts to do(竭尽全力做某事), spare no effort to do sth不遗余力做某事, do what/all/everything sb can to do(尽某人所能去做某事), effective, practical(实用的), urgent (紧急的), carry out实施, protect sth from过渡词过

10、渡词 列举：to begin/start with, then, next, last but not least(最后但同样重要的是) firstly, secondlylastly For one thing, .for another；On the one hand, on the other hand一方面，另一方面 原因：because of, as a result of, owing to, result from 导致结果：result in/lead to/contribute to/cause, as a result, therefore, thus 因此 递进：besi

11、des, moreover, whats more, furthermore 此外，而且 转折：however/but, instead, on the contrary 让步: though, in spite of, despite 总结：in conclusion, on the whole, in a word, all in all 见解：as far as I am concerned(就我而言), from my point of view, personally speaking 环境恶化 environmental degradation 空气污染浓度 air polluti

12、on concentration 温室效应 greenhouse effect 酸雨 acid rain 空气污染物 air pollutants雾霾 haze 空内空气污染 indoor air pollution 气候问题 climatic issues保护和改善生活和生态环境protect and improve the living environment and the ecological environment保护珍贵动植物protect rare animals and plants普及环保知识popularize environmental protection knowle

13、dge增强环境意识enhance the awareness of the importance of environmental protection改善生态环境improve the ecoenvironment加强生态建设improve the ecoconstruction防治污染prevent and control pollution Be faced with(面临), be concerned about(对担忧/忧心忡) ， be impressed with, take measures/steps, take action(采取行动), deal with/cope wi

14、th(处理), overcome/get over (克服), prevent/stop/keep sth from doing (阻止做某事), make efforts to do(竭尽全力做某事), spare no effort to do sth不遗余力做某事, do what/all/everything sb can to do(尽某人所能去做某事), effective, practical(实用的), urgent (紧急的), carry out实施, protect sth from Attach importance to sth 重视. Make a differen

15、ce 起作用、有所作为 Play an active role in在.方面起积极的作用 Live in harmony with nature 与自然和谐相处 Lead/ live a low-carbon lifestyle 采用低碳的生活方式 Put an end to使.结束 Do harm to 对有害 End up doing sth 最终 Keep the balance of nature 保持自然界的平衡 Maintain sustainable development 保持可持续发展优秀句型表达优秀句型表达(以环保为例以环保为例) We should keep a bala

16、nce between nature and human being so that we can live together in harmony. Weve come to a stage when we need do take action to protect our environment. Our government has taken a series of measures, aiming at reducing the environment pollution./ Our government has taken a series of measures with th

17、e aim of reducing the environment pollution. We have taken a great many measures, which turn out to be of great use/help. It is not words but actions that matters more for environment protection. It is hard to imagine a world without clean water./It is hard to imagine what the world will be like wit

18、hout clean water. As is known to all, environment is of vital importance to us human being. Measures should be taken to protect our environment./ Something must be done to /Immediate action should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment. Only in this way can we live a b

19、etter life. Only if/when we take effective measures/steps to deal with the problem can we prevent a worse situation in the near future. Faced with this severe problem, it is high time that we should take some measures. we took some measures. It is high time for us to take some measures before it is

20、too late. We should make every effort to protect our living surroundings from becoming worse and worse. The sooner effective/preventive预防measures are taken, the better our world will be. What we are doing now will make a big difference to our future generation.起影响/作用(积极的) There is no denying that ai

21、r pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take strong measures to deal with it. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. When it comes to environment, we1 A number of factors might contribute to（lead to ）（account for ）the phenomenon（problem）. 2. The answe

22、r to this problem involves many factors. 3. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.4. Instead of just throwing thins away, we can use them again.5. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment6. We should take part in the activities which aim to make people aware of the need to pro

23、tect our living environment.仿写（举一反三，灵活运用） 班长采取了一系列的措施，旨在创建一个和谐的班级。 面对这样严重的疾病，采取一些日常措施以保持健康十分重要。 我们应竭尽全力来克服这些困难。 人们应该尽快采取有效措施来确保此类事件再也不会发生。 我们只有采取有效的预防措施，才能阻止疾病的迅速蔓延。 班长采取了一系列的措施，旨在创建一个和谐的班级。Monitor took series of measures, aiming at create a harmonious class.面对这样严重的疾病，采取一些日常措施以保持健康十分重要。Faced with su

24、ch severe diseases, its of vital importance to take daily measures to keep fit/ healthy.我们应竭尽全力来克服这些困难。We should do all that we can to overcome the difficulties.人们应该尽快采取有效措施来确保此类事件再也不会发生。People should take effective measures to make sure that similar things will never happen again as soon as possibl

25、e.我们只有采取有效的预防措施，才能阻止疾病的迅速蔓延。Only when we take effective measures can we prevent the disease from spreading quickly.In recent years, a large number of cities in China have been afflicted by serious air pollution. Though there may be various causes for the phenomenon, the increasing number of motor-driven vehicles is widely accepted as the major source to the deteriorated atmosphere. Therefore, its high time we took measures to tackle the problem.To purify the