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1、短文改错51、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线( )划掉。修改:在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more pop
2、ular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other st
3、udents think that there is some information on line which is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separat
4、e good plants from wild weeds.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及修改均仅限一词 ;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。't have my camera with me at that time,Last Sunday morning, when I was ha
5、ving a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my f avorite actor. I didn but I rushed back home to get. Unfortunately, by the time I got back, they have finished the sceneand the actor couldn ' t be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to
6、 leave when he walked out a building. He was right there in the front of me! I couldnnot only believe my luckdid I had my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线(/
7、)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。When talked about my dream. I recalled my childhood, which I started learning to sing. At that time it was my interest led me to sing. Hard although I learned, I was happy then. And with time going on, I have gradually real
8、ized sing is my whole life. I like it or enjoy it. I want to stand on an even big stage to sing where not only will my dream be come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer happy and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.4、假定英语课上老师要求
9、同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。We voluntarily participated in an activity organized by our school in Saturday. We got together at the Goodwill Sq
10、uare and handed out leaflets to passers-by, tell them the significance of environmental protection. The leaflets soon attract the attention of the public. Some of us alsodelivered a public speech to tell people some knowledges about how to protect the environment. They were also told where to take a
11、ction in a properly and efficient way. This activity was offered us a chance to contribute to our society but I have learned much from it. I think someone should be concerned about our environment and take active part in improving it.5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一
12、个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号 (A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处。Last night a strong wind as well as a heavily rain struck our area. News came that the trees in the park two kilometers away from our school was blown down. This afternoon, they set of
13、f the park to do some cleaning. The head of the park met us or gave us some advice on how to clear away the falling trees, branches and leaves. Some times later, we were working hard when it begins to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, so we were all wet. A rain lasted a
14、bout an hour and it was a pity that they had to stop our work.6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。t obey our parents orIt is clear shown tha
15、t many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won' teachers. Personally, I think we student should bal
16、ance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can ' t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy li
17、fe.7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及二个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。It is known to us all, different people have different hobby. For me, what we enjoy most is painting.
18、When I was very young, I began to show my great interest in painting. My parents sent me learn from a famous painter. With a help of the painter, my painting skills improved quickly and a lot. By the age of 17, I took part in a painting competition in our city and win first prize.Since then, I have
19、taken part in all kinds of competitions and I have won many prizes. I have become a well-known figure out in my city. What's more, it is these competitions which have made me more confidently in overcoming the difficulties in my life.8、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一
20、个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的,用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2 .只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。t agree with your view whichFirst, I ' d like to thank you for your reminding, although I don students should spend more time on their lessons instead of read novels
21、. Indeed, reading novelstakes up some of the time that should spent on lessons, but it' ll make us know what hard lifeis.Besides, by reading novels we can gain what we can' t learn from our textbook.Of course,reading novels has it ' s shortcomings. Novels that have wrong ideas will make
22、us to dbisomet wrong. Maybe, in your eyes, the disadvantages of reading novels outweighs the advantages. And in my opinion, reading novels is just as another pair of eyes, which broadens my horizon.答案以及解析1答案及解析:答案:Nowadays, the computer technology develops v-y fast that the Internet has become more
23、and somore popular. Some students'一"" it as a great helper. Because there -a- a lot ofregardisinformation on line, so-you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short timewithout working hard in the library.is also very convenient to talk with others by using theMoreov
24、erInternet.Howeverother students think that there is some information on line which is notgood for students. In addition,'Pe"'too much time playing games will not only have a badspendingof the Internet. It is of greatimportantimportanceto separate good plants from wild weeds.effect on t
25、heir studies but also do harm health. Therefore, we should make pOpedy use toproper解析:1、very 一so考查固定句型。Sothat如此以致于。2、regarded regar曲查动词的时态。根据第一句话提到Nowadays可知用一般现在时。3、has 一 is考查固定句型。 There be表示"有"。4、so去掉考查连词。在英语中有因为没有所以,故去掉。5、This 一 It考查代词。It is convenient to do做某事很方便。It做形式主语。6、Moreover How
26、ever考查副词。句意:然而一些学生认为网上有些不好的信息。与第二行 提至U Some students regarded it as a great helper表示对比,故用 however.7、spend spending考查动名词做主语。句意:玩游戏花费过多的时间不仅仅影响学习还有 害健康;8、for 一 to考查固定短语。Do harm to 有害;9、properly prope考查形容词。Make use of利用。Use是名词,故用形容词来修饰。10、 important f importance查名词。 Be of importance 等于 be important 重要。
27、2答案及解析:答案: Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I camet have my cameraacross a crew m",a new film with one of my favorite. I didnmakingactor sbutwith me at that time, so / andI rushed back home to getit . Unfortunately, by the time I gotback, theyhave hadfinis
28、hed the scene and the actor couldneverywhere rbe seen. I wasanywherereally isappo'nng and about to leave when he walked out of a building. He was right theredisappointedhadin the front of me! I couldnbelieve my luck not only did I my photo taken with him,havebut he signed his name on my shirt!解析
29、:考查非谓语动词。此处是非谓语动词短语作补语,make和被修饰的名词crew之间是逻辑上的主动关系,所以应用现在分词形式。考查名同。one of后该接可数名词的复数形式,表示"中的一个“。考查连词。逗号前后不是转折关系,而是因果或者顺承关系。考查代记。炉t意为 去取(或带来)”是及物动词,其后应该接代词it,指代my camerao考查动词的时。卞据时间状语by the time I got back可知,此处应该用过去完成时。 考查副词。anywhere用于否定句时表示全部否定,符合语境.everywhere和否定词连用时表示部分否定,不符合语境。考查形容词。disappointi
30、ng用来形容事物;disappointed用来形容人。此处表示 我感到非常失望 考查介词。walk out of a building意为 从一栋楼里走出来”。考查冠词。in the front of意为 在(内部)的前面”;in front of意为 在(外部)的前面”。考查谓语动词。此处为部分倒装,为一般过去时,把助动词did提到主语之前时,谓语动词应 该用原形。3答案及解析:答案:When tak" about my dream. I recalled my childhood, w"。' i started learning to sing. talking
31、whenAt that time it was my interest that led me to sing. Harda'"°ug" I learned, I was happythough/ asthen. And with time going on, I have gradually realizedsingsingingis my whole life. I like itenjoy it. I want to stand on an even 一如一 stage to sing where not only will my dream and
32、biggerbe come true but also I can send my beautiful song to all the audience. I want to transfer"-00' and encouragement to the audience by singing, letting us cheer up.happinessthem解析:1 .句意:当谈到我的梦想时,我回忆起我的童年,那个时候我开始学习唱歌。分析句子可知,talk的逻辑主语是I,二者是主动关系,故要用talking about,作状语。故把talk改为talking。2 .句意:我
33、回忆起我的童年,在那个时候我开始学习唱歌。分析句意可知which,指代前面的先行词my childhood,而My childhood在定语从句中彳时间状语 ,而which不能作状语。故把which 改为 when。3 .句意:是我的兴趣引导我唱歌。分析句子可知本句是强调句型It was+被强调部分+剩余部分。如果把被强调部分去掉句子完整。如 it was my interest that led me to sing.。因此要添加 上 that。4 .句意:虽然我学得很苦,但是我很开心。本句是部分倒装,只有though/as才能倒装,而although 只能用于陈述句 :although I
34、 learned hard, I was happy then.故把 although 改为 though/as。5 .句意:随着时间的推移,我逐渐意识到唱歌是我的全部生活。sing是个动词不能作主语,因此要用 singing 作主语,故把 sing改为 singing。6 .句意:我喜欢而且享受音乐。分析句意可知喜欢和享受是并列关系,故要用并列连词and。7 .句意:我想站在一个更大的舞台上唱歌。big前有一个副词even,even修饰的是比较级,且根据句意可知是一个更大的舞台,故把big改为bigger 08 .句意:我想站在一个更大的舞台上唱歌,不仅我的梦想会成真,而且我可以把我美丽的歌
35、声 送给所有的听众。come true实现,是不及物动词,不能用被动语态,故要用主动语态。故把 be 去掉。9 .句意:我要传递快乐。Happy是形容词,不能作transfer的宾语,要用名词happiness作宾语, 故把 happy 改为 happiness10 .句意:我想通过唱歌把快乐和鼓励传递给观众,让他们振作起来。分析句意可知是把快乐传递给观众,让他们(观众)振作起来,而不是我们,故把us改为them。4答案及解析:-in- Saturday. We got on工 them the tellingthe attention of the public.答案:We voluntar
36、ily participated in an activity organized by our school together at the Goodwill Square and handed out leaflets to passers-by,attractsignificance of environmental protection. The leaflets soon attractedSome of us also delivered a public speech to tell people some knowledges about how to protect know
37、ledgethe environment. They were also told where to take action in a proper" and efficient way. howproperThis activity wasoffered us a chance to contribute to our societybutandI have learned much fromit. I thinksomeone答案:Last night a strong wind as well as aheavilyheavyrain struck our area. News
38、 came that theshould be concerned about our environment and take an active part ineveryoneimproving it.解析:1.考查介词。在某一天用on,所以在 星期六”应该用on,故把in改成on。2 .考查现在分词。我们在the Goodwill Square聚集在一起,向路人分发传单,告诉他们环境保护的重要性。此处是现在分词做伴随状态,故把 tell改成telling。3 .考查时态。传单很快引起了公众的注意。文章指的是过去的事情,所以句子用一般过去时 态,故把 attract 改成 attracte
39、d。4 .考查不可数名词。knowledge是不可数名词,没有复数形式,故把 knowledges改成 knowledge。5 .考查疑问词。他们还被告知如何以适当和有效的方式采取行动。此处是 how+动词不定式 做宾语,故把where改成how。6 .考查形容词。way是名词,所以用形容词做定语修饰名词,故把 properly改成proper。7 .考查语态。这一活动为我们提供了一个为我们的社会做出贡献的机会,我从中学到很多东西。offer sb. sth.提供给某人某物,此处是主动语态,故去掉was。8 .考查并列连词。这一活动为我们提供了一个为我们的社会做出贡献的机会,我从中学到很 多东
40、西。此处表示递进的并列关系,故把 but改成and。9 .考查不定代词。我认为每个人都应该关心我们的环境,并积极参与改善环境。故把someone改成 everyone o10 .考查固定搭配。我认为每个人都应该关心我们的环境,并积极参与改善环境。take an activepart in积极参加-,此处active是以元音音素开头,故前面加an。5答案及解析: trees in the park two kilometers away from our school was blown down. This afternoon, theywereset off for the park to
41、do some cleaning. The head of the park met us -o gave us some adviceandon how to clear away the 回"“' trees, branches and leaves. Some es later, we were fallentimeworking hard when it ','M、to rain. Because few of us had taken along umbrellas or raincoats, beganso we were all wet.A ra
42、in lasted about an hour and it was a pity that they had to stop our Thewework.解析:考查形容词作定语修饰名词用形容词,故将heavily改为heavy. 考查主谓一致同位语从句中的主语the trees是复数形式,故将was改为were。考查动,短语:set off表示 动身.启程”接宾语时要加介词for.意为 动身前往”。考查并列连词上下文之间是并列关系而非选择关系,故应将or改为and.考查非谓语动词:fall是不及物动词,故其现在分词falling和过去分词fallen只表示时间上 的差异,而不表示语态上的差异
43、,即前者表示动作正在进行中,后者则表示动作已经完成;根据 语境可知此处指已经倒下的树,故将falling改为fallen. 考查名词表示“一段时间之后”要用some time later time表示时间时为不可数名词;time表示次数时,为可数名词.考查动词的时态全文的主体时态是一般过去时,故应将begins改为began.考查连词本句已经出现了从属连词Because且首字母为大写字母,故将并列连词so去掉.考查冠词特指这场雨”应用定冠词the.考查代词根据语境可知,位将they改为we.6答案及解析: .ciearIt is shown that many middle school st
44、udents have physical and mental problems. 68% ofthe studentshave studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a largeriacikfourt obeypercentage sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students wonparents or teachers. Personally, I think weshould balance our physical exercise ands
45、tudies. Without s sound body, one can ' t achieve anything. However, too much attention has onarebeen paid only studies. As a result, I suggest we given less homework -or more time for andout-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.同析| 1.考查副词。修夕过去分词shown,应该
46、用副词。故 clear改为clearly。2 .考查过去分词。句意:被调查的68%的学生有学习焦虑以及视力问题。students和survey之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词作定语。故 surveying改为surveyed。3 .考查副词。too和as well as重复,均表示 也"。故删去too。4 .考查主谓一致。完整的主语应该是a larger percentage(of the students)应该用复数谓语。故lack 改为 lacks。5 .考查代词。根据句意"42%的学生不服从他们的父母和老师",应该用their。故our改为their。6 .考
47、查同位语。student作了 we的同位语,应该用复数。student改为students。7 .考查冠词。根据句意"没有一个健康的身体”,所以加上a。8 .考查介词。固定搭配 pay attention to sth。故on改为to。9 .考查虚拟语气。suggest后跟宾语从句,谓语动词用should+动词原形,should可以省略。故 are改为be。10 .考查连词。根据句意"我们应该给予更少的作业和更多的时间”。肯定句中表示和”应该用and。故 or 改为 and。7答案及解析:答案: is known to us all, different people ha
48、ve different'"by . For me, what AshobbiesIenjoy most is painting.When I was very young, I began to show my great interest in painting. My parents sent meto learn from a famous painter. With - help of the painter, my painting skills improved theBywinquickly and a lot. the age of 17, I took p
49、art in a painting competition in our city and first prize.Since then, I have taken part in all kinds of competitions and I have won many prizes. I havebecome a well-known figure out-in my city. What's more, it is these competitionsw"。、havethatmade me more。"汨,“",所 overcoming the difficulties in my life. confident解析:考查定语从句。关系代词as引导非限制性定语从句可以置于句首,指代下文一整句话,且as在从句中作主语,并保留本意。考查名词。形容词
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