(S)2015 南京市英语中考写作指导

1、一类（13-15分）：写出全部内容要点，语句流畅。基本无语法和词汇方面的错误。二类（10-12分）：写出大部分要点，语句较流畅。有少量语法和词汇方面的错误。三类（7-9分）：写出部分要点。语句基本通顺。有一些语法和词汇错误，有少量单词及标点错误。 四类（4-6分）：写出少量内容要点，语句不通顺。语法、词汇、单词拼写、标点错误较多。只有少量句子表达正确。 五类（1-3分）：基本上没有写出内容要点，语法、词汇、单词拼写错误较多。基本上没有通顺的句子。只写出一些单词，不知所云。1. 要点齐全；2. 语法正确，段落清晰；3. 书写工整，语言优美。What to write?What to write?

2、How to write?How to write?Make your article better.Make your article better.1. 1. 要点全；要点全；2. 2. 层次清；层次清；3. 3. 卷面净；卷面净；4. 4. 行文美。行文美。TipsTips：审题：审题TipsTips：提纲，时态、句型：提纲，时态、句型【2010南京】南京】书面表达（满分书面表达（满分15分）分）假如你是王林，你的美国朋友假如你是王林，你的美国朋友Daniel将来南京学习，他想了解所到中学附近的将来南京学习，他想了解所到中学附近的滨江图书馆（滨江图书馆（Binjiang Public L

3、ibrary）。请根据海报中的信息，给他发一封电）。请根据海报中的信息，给他发一封电子邮件，介绍滨江图书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。子邮件，介绍滨江图书馆的情况及部分馆区的功能。注意：注意：1. 电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。电子邮件中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 2. 2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 3. 3. 词数词数80左右。电子邮件的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。左右。电子邮件的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。Binjiang Public LibraryBinjiang Public LibraryOver 900,000 books an

4、d 13,000 electronic journalsver 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journalsLocation: 18 Binjiang Road, Jianye Districtocation: 18 Binjiang Road, Jianye DistrictOpen: 8:00 a.m. (Mon. pen: 8:00 a.m. (Mon. Fri.) 9:00 a.m. (Sat. & Sun.)Closed: 5:00 a.m. (Mon. Closed: 5:00 a.m. (Mon. Fri.) 8:00 a.m.

5、 (Sat. & Sun.)Sections: Loan Desk(ections: Loan Desk(借书处借书处)， Reading Room, Computing Room,Electronic Resources(Electronic Resources(资源资源)，Childrens Story Corner, Book s Story Corner, Book ShophopFunctions:unctions: borrow & return books borrow & return books search for information on th

6、e Internet search for information on the Internet Dear Daniel,Dear Daniel,I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. 【2010南京】南京】书面表达书面表达Dear Daniel,Dear Daniel, I am pleased to know that you will come to Nanjing. am pleased to know that you

7、will come to Nanjing. Hereeres s some information about Binjiang Public Library.some information about Binjiang Public Library. The library, located at 18 Binjiang Road, has over 900,000 he library, located at 18 Binjiang Road, has over 900,000 books and 13,000 electronic journals. books and 13,000

8、electronic journals. It is open from 8:00 a.m. t is open from 8:00 a.m. to 5:00 p.m. on weekdays. to 5:00 p.m. on weekdays. On weekends it is open for 11hours. n weekends it is open for 11hours. It t is a good place for people to read and borrow books.is a good place for people to read and borrow bo

9、oks. There are different sections in the library. There are different sections in the library. You can not only ou can not only borrow and return books at Loan Desk, but also read newspapers borrow and return books at Loan Desk, but also read newspapers and magazines in Reading Room. and magazines i

10、n Reading Room. If you want to search for f you want to search for information on the Internet, you can go to Computing Room. information on the Internet, you can go to Computing Room. You ou can also buy some new books in Book Shop.can also buy some new books in Book Shop. I believe you will find t

11、he library useful. believe you will find the library useful. Yours sincerely,ours sincerely, Wang Lin Wang Lin【2011南京】南京】书面表达。书面表达。假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛。请根假如你是李平，准备参加学校组织的英语征文比赛。请根据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的据下面所提供的信息，介绍今天在你校操场举行的“ONE for ONE ”图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受。图书义卖活动的情况并谈谈你的感受。注意：注意：1 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。文

12、中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 2 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。 3 词数词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school. _【2011南京】南京】 This afternoon a charity sale was held on This afternoon a charity sale was held on the playground in our school. I

13、ts purpose wasthe playground in our school. Its purpose wasto donate books to children in poor areasIf you bought one book，you gave a new one to a child in need at the same timeAll the teachers and students took an active part in this eventEveryone looked quite happyAs we know，books are bridges to k

14、nowledge. If a child in poor areas can receive a better education and get more knowledge, he will have more chances of success. In this way，his life can be greatly improved【2012南京】南京】六、书面表达（满分六、书面表达（满分15分）分）上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英

15、语园地写一篇题为写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。的英文稿件。注意：注意：1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3、词数、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。One possible versionOne possible version: A Brave Young Man It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qi

16、nhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river.

17、 At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.【2013南京】六、书面表达（满分15分） 为了迎接2014南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件，内容必须包括：1. 表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情；2.

18、说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊；3. 请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。参考词汇： 2014 青奥会 the 2014 Youth Olympic Games ; 丹麦 Denmark 文化角 culture corner; 增进友谊 build up friendships注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。One possible version:【2013南京】南京】D Dear Sir/Madamear Sir/Madam I am Li

19、 Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing. I am writing to ask for some information am writing to ask for some information about your culture, as our school is about your culture, as our school is preparing a Denmark a Denmark culture corner to build up friendships between t

20、eens.culture corner to build up friendships between teens. Im very proud that m very proud that our city will be the host of the city will be the host of the 2014 Youth Olympic Games. 2014 Youth Olympic Games. We are planning to introduce e are planning to introduce your culture and your life. your

21、culture and your life. Would you ould you please send some send some to us? to us? We would be grateful for your help if you do.e would be grateful for your help if you do. At the same time, we are really happy to invite you t the same time, we are really happy to invite you and your students to com

22、e to Nanjing in the summer of and your students to come to Nanjing in the summer of 2014. 2014. Welcome to Nanjing!elcome to Nanjing! Yours sincerelyYours sincerely Li MingLi Ming 书面表达(满分15分) 假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Daniel, 你想参加英文报纸Jinling Daily 广告中介绍的机器人培训班。 ROBOT COURSERobot course for beginners at Starlig

23、ht SchoolOrganized visits to Friendly Robots CompanyE-mail: robotcourse Jinling. Com 请根据该广告内容，用英语写一封电子邮件，询问与该班相关的具体信息，邮件内容应包括：培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；参观机器人公司的具体安排1.你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。An e-mail Ask for information: When will the course start and finish? Are there any classes at the weekend?培训班的起止时间以及周末是否上课；2. 参

24、观机器人公司的具体安排3. 你还想了解到该培训班其他信息。What do you want to know about the visits toFriendly Robots Company?Some more information about the course, such as.Tips：认真审题，勾画要点文章分为三部分来写作；考虑所用句型： I want to know/ I wonder. I would like to know Could you tell me注意宾语从句中的语序。Tips：列出提纲，确定时态、句型。 写好后检查： 作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误：时态错误（

25、扣分多，一个时态错误扣分在1分左右）。单词拼写错误及大小写（单词拼写一定要过关）。 名词单复数（细心就可以避免的错）1. 中国式的英语（不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分）。作文中书写不规范，卷面不整洁也是要失分的（中考中有12分的卷面整洁分，这两分不能丢！）。解决方法： 先打草稿，修改完善后再誊抄到试卷先打草稿，修改完善后再誊抄到试卷上。上。平时认真规范书写，决不使用胶带或修平时认真规范书写，决不使用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。正液，尽量减少涂改。What to write? 认真审题，勾画要点How to write? 列出提纲 (段落清晰) 确定时态、 句型Make your article better. 适当使用连接词 变换句式 正确使用复合句 恰当使用谚语 写好后检查 注意书写Remember to follow the steps:审审编编变变查查连接词连接词 p.59 8B表并列表并列表