概要写作visit_the_collegePPT课件

1、 I lost a Samsung digital camera on the evening of September 9th, 2018 ,in the English reading-room on the 4th floor of the new library . Lost 具体时间，具体地点，丢了什么东西 The digital camera can be generally described as follows: It is brand new and silver gray in color with a black leather coat. Whats more, th

2、e camera is as big as a piece of cake and as light as a regular mobile phone. It is brand new with silver gray cover and a black leather coat , inside which stores many wonderful photos of sports players in our shool. 学会用with短语和定语从句来描述事物 This camera is a birthday present from my best friend, so losi

3、ng it upsets me a lot. My name is Li HuaThe one who found it please contact me ator email me at at any time. Thank you very much! 2018年年11月概要写作月概要写作 -visit colleges Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same.

4、 Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and,of course,the students.It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses,and

5、 it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away.But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one. Theres no excuse not to visit the school

6、s in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and obviously, if you live across the country that wont be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out! If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least y

7、ou should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you dont like about certain campuses, things that you wouldnt know unless you actually visit. Now, if time an

8、d money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. Its a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors(倾问)，and it wont cost you a penny! You can register for its online college fair at . While visiting an online college fa

9、ir cant take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities youd like to attend. Its a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites ca

10、n all start to look and sound the same. Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus(校园) like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms, classrooms and athletic equipment and, of course, the students. It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to f

11、ind the time to visit college campuses, and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away. But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life, and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right o

12、ne. your desired college key sentence Its a really good idea to visit your desired colleges before you make a decision to apply for them. u Which words dont need to be restated? colleges, apply for them 同义转换同义转换 1. It is of great necessity to pay a visit to your dream colleges before you reach a pro

13、per decison to apply . 2. It is definitely worthwile visiting colleges before deciding on ideal ones to apply for . a must 3. Its highly recommended to visit your longing colleges before you apply. 同义词： visit-pay a visit to desired-dream / ideal/ longing make a decision-come to a proper decision rea

14、ch a right decision decide on ideal colleges 1.It will help a lot if you pay a visit to colleges before application. 2.It is a good idea to. (.是一个好主意) 3.It is advisable to pay a visit to colleges. 4.It is highly recommended to pay a visit to. 5.It would be wise to visit colleges before . 6.It is of

15、great necessity to pay a visit to colleges in advance. 7 It will be beneficial if you pay a visit to colleges in advance and make a wise decision. 复习“建议” 经典句型 Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area. In fact, a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus, and

16、 obviously, if you live across the country that wont be as much of a possibility, but if you live nearby, go check it out! Key sentence Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area, because a lot of college applications will wish / encourage you to. Theres no excuse not to visit the

17、schools in your local area, because a lot of college applications will encourage you to. 下划线直接表达成：下划线直接表达成：visit your local colleges 改写要点句改写要点句 1. You are supposed to visit your local colleges, which is likely to be included in applications. “应该应该”的表达方式的表达方式 1. We are supposed to. 2. We are advised

18、to. 3. We are expected to. 4. We are required to. 5. We are recommended to. Theres no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area, because a lot of college applications will encourage you to. 改写要点句改写要点句 2. It is a must for you to visit your local colleges, because many applications wish you t

19、o . 3. You are highly recommended to visit your local colleges, which is involved in many applications. If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend.

20、It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you dont like about certain campuses, things that you wouldnt know unless you actually visit. u 本段要点与前一段要点的区别？ 如果不能够申请之前参观，至少要在录取通知书到来之 前去参观。 Key sentence If you cant visit it before application, you should do it before the accep

21、tance letters arrive. If you cant visit it before application, you should do it before the acceptance letters arrive. 改写要点句改写要点句 1. If you cant visit it before application, you are supposed to make it before being admitted. 2. Anyway, if you cant make it before application, it is acceptable to do it

22、 before you receive the admission letter. Now, if time and money are making it impossible, then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive. Its a chance to chat online with admissions officers, students, and college counselors(倾问)，and it wont cost you a penny! You can register for its onl

23、ine college fair at . While visiting an online college fair cant take the place of an actual campus visit, it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities youd like to attend. Key sentence If you are sh

24、ort of time and money, checking out the online college fairs will help you make an informed decision. If you are short of time and money, checking out the online college fairs will help you make an informed decision. 改写要点句改写要点句 1. If you are short of time and money, visiting online college fairs is

25、beneficial for you to make a wise decision. 2. If you lack time and money, it is a practical way to gain information from online college fairs to help you reach a wise decison. If you are short of time and money, checking out the online college fairs will help you make an informed decision. 综合全文，综合全

26、文，help you make an informed decision 这一目的可以替换成这一目的可以替换成 help you better understand colleges. A new key sentence If you are short of time and money, checking out the online college fairs will help you better understand colleges. 改写要点句改写要点句 1. If you lack money and time, visiting online college fairs

27、is a good alternative to help you better understand colleges. 2. In the situation where students are short of time and money, visiting online college fairs is a helpful approach to having a better understanding of colleges. 文章结构文章结构 第一段：全文第一段：全文main idea: visit colleges 连接词：连接词：Undoubtedly；Actually；

28、Particularly 第二段：事实：必须要第二段：事实：必须要visit local colleges 连接词：连接词： However; 第三段：退一步：至少要在录取前第三段：退一步：至少要在录取前visit 连接词：连接词：Step back again 第四段：再退一步：可以网上了解信息第四段：再退一步：可以网上了解信息 the problems in writing For students who are short of money and time, registering online is a good alternative to help you better und

29、erstand schools. 1. 整篇文章，人称始终保持一致！整篇文章，人称始终保持一致！ For students who are short of money and time, visiting online college fairs is a good alternative to help them better understand schools. 参考范文参考范文1(第二人称第二人称) Applying to colleges is an important decision in your life, so you should visit the colleges

30、you want to attend in advance, especially when they are near where you live. However,if you cant make it before application, you should do it before the acceptance letters arrive. Step back again, if you do have no time or money for it, visiting the online college fairs can also help you make the wi

31、se decision. 参考范文参考范文2(you) It is of great necessity to pay a visit to colleges before deciding on an ideal one when applying for a college. Particularly, it is a must to visit your local colleges, because many applications encourage it. However, if you cant make it before application, it is accepta

32、ble to do it before admission letter.Step back again,in the situation where you lack time and money, visiting online college fairs is also a helpful approach to helping you make the right decision. Applying to colleges is an important decision in your life,so you should visit the colleges you want t

33、o attend in advance, especially when they are near where you live. If you cant make it before application, you should do it before the acceptance letters arrive. Finally, if you do have no time or money for it, visiting the online college fairs can also help you make the right decision. 高考参考答案：高考参考答

34、案： 主旨句主旨句 1+4个要点个要点 参考范文参考范文3(第三人称第三人称) Its really worthwhile for students to pay a visit to their desired colleges personally before applying. Undoubtedly, students should visit their local colleges, which may be included in applications. At least, they should visit the school and figure out its re

35、al conditions in advance. For students who are short of money and time, registering online is a good alternative to help them better understand schools. Tip：注意理清各个要点间的联系。：注意理清各个要点间的联系。 本次概要本次概要4个要点不是递进关系，而个要点不是递进关系，而 是退而求其次的关系。是退而求其次的关系。 学生作文学生作文1 学生作文学生作文2 学生作文学生作文3 学生作文学生作文4 学生作文学生作文5 学生作文学生作文6 If campus visits arent going to happen before you apply, at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools youd like to attend. It can save you a lo