2018年秋九年级英语上册Unit4Growingup主题写作四导学课件新牛津版.pptx

1、单元主题写作四,话题分析,典型例题,思路点拨,素材积累,小试身手,单元主题写作四,本单元以“成长”为话题，激励人们只要不懈努力，就能实现自己的梦想，同时学习如何描述对自己最有影响的人，进一步提高英语写作能力。,话 题 分 析,风景在旅途中，成长在过程中，改变在不知不觉中。请你以“I Am Not a Child Any More”为题，写一篇英语短文，记述你学习、生活中经历的一件事，说明你的成长变化。 要求：1.不少于90词； 2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。,单元主题写作四,典 型 例 题,单元主题写作四,思 路 点 拨,短语： 1过去常常做某事_ 2习惯做某事_ 3在过去年里_ 4在某人二

2、十多岁的时候_ 5改变很多_ 6关心_ 7不再_ 8直到才_,单元主题写作四,素 材 积 累,in the pastyear(s),used to do sth,be used to doing sth,notuntil,in ones twenties,change a lot,care about,no longer,句型： 1is in ones twenties/thirties 2You will not finduntil 3has always been 4， since 5To ones surprise, has decided to 6When I， I 7Now I re

3、alize that,单元主题写作四,高考模板 I Am Not a Child Any More I have changed a lot during the past three years.I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others. It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no o

4、ne was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said,单元主题写作四,the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you have grown up.” It was th

5、e first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.,单元主题写作四,名师点评 本文结构清晰，层次分明，句子通顺，语法正确，事例经典。作者巧妙地运用but, so, although等连词使文章富于变化；used to, asas， notuntil， notany more等短语的使用使文章锦上添花。,单元主题写作四,生活，宛如一个万花筒，无奇不有。在生活中，我们会受到各种影响，对你影响最大的人是谁呢？请你以“The person who has influenced me most”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文。,单元主

6、题写作四,小 试 身 手,One possible version： The person who has influenced me most My father is the person that has had a great influence on me. When I was a child, my father told me I should learn to take care of myself. So I had to go to school myself, clean my bedroom myself and even make study plans for myself. In fact, I didnt understand why my father did that to me. He should take good care of me, but not myself. But now I understand that. One should learn to take the responsibility himself. Your parents can look after you when you are young, but not the whole life. Sooner or later, yo