初中英语作文写人作课件.ppt

Writing,XX中XXX,本节课的学习任务:写一篇描述人的外貌(look)、性格（characters）、爱好（hobbies）的文章,1.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?,thin,heavy/fat,Whatdoeshelooklike?,shorthair,longhair,Whatdoeshelooklike?,2.Pair-work:A:Whatdoesxxxlooklike?B:He/SheisA:Whatishis/hercharacter?B:He/SheisA:Whatdoeshe/shelike?B:He/Shelikes,描述外貌的单词：short,tall,thin，ofmediumheight，strong,good-looking,slim苗条描述穿着的短语：wearaT-shirt,wearapairofglasses描述性格的单词：lazy,quiet,friendly,shy,kind善良的,polite有礼貌的，strict严厉的,out-going外向的描述爱好的短语：likereading,liketohelpothers,enjoyeating,enjoyplayingbasketball,3.Wordcollection:,表达兴趣和能力短语：beinterestedinsth,begoodatdoing,dowellinsth.,beabletodo表达梦想：Mydreamistobea/an表达最喜欢的科目/食物/运动：Myfavouritesubject/food/sportis,翻译句子,1、我叫李明，今年15岁。2、我个高，戴眼镜。3、我头发很短很黑4、未来我想成为一名画家。5、我最喜欢的学科是科学6、我在九年级1班学习。7、我很害羞，友善待人。8、我喜欢收集邮票和绘画,MynameisLiming.Im15yearsold.,Imtallandwearapairofglasses.,Ihaveshortblackhair.,Mydreamistobeapainter.,Myfavouritesubjectisscience.,IstudyinClassOne，GradeNine.,Iamshyandfriendly.,Ilikecollectingstampsandpainting.,With的用法,他是一个有着黑色头发的高个男孩。,Heisatallboywithblackhair.,我住在一栋有着美丽花园的房子里。,Iliveinahousewithabeautifulgarden.,中国是一个历史悠久的国家。,Chinaisacountrywithalonghistory.,Lily是一个戴着眼镜的女孩。,Lilyisagirlwithapairofglasses.,4.Writesomethingaboutthisboy.(3-5句话),提示词：tall，thin，blackhair;wearshortsandaT-shirt;polite(有礼貌的)，happy,Iamtallandthin.Ihaveblackhair.IwearshortsandaT-shirt.Iampolite.Iamveryhappy.,5.Writingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词,开头已经给出。,开头：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.He,6.写作步骤,1)审题2)列纲3)连句4)修饰句子组织文章5)检查纠错,（定体裁、人称、格式、时态）,（加上主谓宾，把短语连成完整的句子）,（适当运用承上启下的过渡词,使文章更完整更精炼）,（字数、内容要点、主谓一致、习惯用法、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号）,（用单词、短语列出内容要点）,8.Letssharesomecompositions.,Writingtask:根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的笔友马小跳，80个左右的单词,开头已经给出。,开头：MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.He,10.例文:MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.Heis15yearsold.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.,10.例文:MaXiaotiaoismypenpal.Heis15yearsold.Heistallandthin.HehasblackhairandhelikeswearingshortsandT-shirts.Helooksverycute.Helikeshamburgersandfriedchickenbest.Hisfavoriteclassesarescience,artandP.E.Helikeslittleanimals.Heoftenplayswithhisgoodfriendsatschoolandhelpsothers.Heisverypoliteandkind-hearted.Heisagoodboy.Ilikehimverymuch.,假设你是一名来自深圳的中学生李红，今年14岁，暑假你将参加学校组织的赴北京的夏令营活动。请你用英语写一篇在开营仪式上的自我介绍发言稿。（开头、结尾已给出）内容包括以下几点：1.你爱好画画2.课余