中考英语作文写作指导-精华PPT课件

Englishwriting 中考英语作文写作 ByLuSulinSheHongMiddleSchool Englishwriting 初中英语新课程标准 五级写作目标 能根据写作要求 收集 准备素材能独立起草短文 短信等 并在教师指导下进行修改能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系能简单描述人物或事件能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明 7 9年级分别完成三 四 五级目标 Englishwriting 中考英语作文8个常考话题 一 介绍人和事件 自己 家庭 朋友 老师 个人变化 个人感受等 二 介绍地点 旅游等 三 校园生活 春游 校规 科目 学习困难等 四 课外生活 家庭生活 家务劳动 电影 个人爱好等 五 假期安排 计划 过去经历等 六 节假日活动 志愿者活动 过去经历 七 环境 健康 环保 疾病 食品健康等 八 个人观点建议 提建议 劝告等 Englishwriting DearDr Know I mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy First someofusaren tinterestedinEnglish WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing Andthenit ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts Solotsofusdon thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion What smore therearesomanynewwordswehaven tmeetbeforeinthepassage Idon tknowwhattodo Sometimeswecan tunderstandthemainidea letalone 更不用说 answerthequestionsaboutthem Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences Canyouhelpus HowcanweimproveourEnglish Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice Thankyouverymuch Pleasewritesoon Mary thebeginning theending thebody 正文 basicstructure 基本结构安排 Englishwriting basicsteps 基本写作步骤 search 审 list 列 add 加 开头和结尾 connect 连 beautify 美 谚语 例子 Englishwriting 健康很重要 在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天 会休息的人才会有健康的身体 人们是如何度过假期的呢 国际健康组织对此作了一次调查 右图是他们此次的调查结果 根据你所得的信息 请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告 并提倡大家进行假日休闲 审 search travel stayathome visitfriendsorparents work Englishwriting 如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲 stayathome work visitfriendsorparents travel 列 list 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 Englishwriting Alotofpeopletravel Somepeoplestayathome Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents Afewpeoplework Enjoyyourvacation 列 list Englishwriting Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport thebeginning Alotofpeopletravel Somepeoplestayathome TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents Afewpeoplework Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell theending 加 add 加首尾 使结构完整 可以采取总分总结构 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁 漂亮 Englishwriting Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport Accordingtoit alotofpeopletravel Andsomepeoplestayathome TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents However afewpeoplework Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 连 connect Englishwriting Writingskills 写 的技巧 方法一 善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇 Englishwriting Whichisbetter 他们在海滩上听音乐 ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach Englishwriting Whichisbetter 我希望你能帮助我 AIwishyoucanhelpme BI mlookingforwardtoyourhelp Englishwriting Whichisbetter 他们很早就到了 ATheyarrivedearly BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould Englishwriting Whichisbetter 最后 他的狗得救了 他感到很惊讶 AHisdogwassavedatlast Hewasverysurprised BTohissurprise hisdogwassavedatlast Englishwriting AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish 我认为学英语很有趣 我们应该保护环境 AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment BIt sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment Englishwriting 方法二 活用多种句型 Writingskills 写 的技巧 Englishwriting 她还小 搬不动这么重的箱子 ASheisveryyoung Shecan tcarrytheheavybox BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox CSheissoyoungthatshecan tcarrythe DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe Englishwriting 方法三 妙用关联词 Writingskills 写 的技巧 Englishwriting 1 表示并列或递进 and aswellas both and what smorenotonly butalso neither nor2 表示选择 or either or3 表示转折 but however although though afterall anyway4 表示因果 because so therefore since for asaresult5 表示条件 if unless6 表示对比 instead not but while inthesameway ontheonehand ontheotherhand7 表示解释 forexample forinstance suchas thatistosay inotherwords totellthetruth8 表示顺序 tobeginwith firstly first ofall second ly next later sincethen fromthenon finally intheend9 表示强调 also besides especially actually infact10 表示结论 allinall altogether inaword generallyspeaking inshort 关联词 connectionwords Englishwriting Let stry Iamtired Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight Hedidn tgotomovies hewenttotheconcert Welikedoingkindsofsports swimming runningandhiking hestoodup Thenhegotout hewentback hesmiled Though Although instead like First Next Finally Atlast Englishwriting Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport Accordingtoit alotofpeopletravel Andsomepeoplestayathome TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents However afewpeoplework Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 连 connect 美 beautify Englishwriting Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport Accordingtoit mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays Thensomepeopleliketostayathome watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed However afewpeoplehavetowork Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 美 beautify Englishwriting Accordingtoit mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays Thensomepeopleliketostayathome watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest However afewpeoplehavetowork Asthesayinggoes AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy Comeandenjoyyourvacation Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell 美 beautify Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed Proverb 谚语 saying Englishwriting 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于 beginning 和 ending 多用后者 锻炼对学生有好处 Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise Asthesayinggoes AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy Itisgoodforusstudentstotakeexercise Englishwriting 集中注意力于学习 Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies Asthesayinggoes Nopains nogains Weshouldconcentrateonourstudies 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于开头和结尾 多是结尾 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于 beginning 和 ending 多用后者 Englishwriting 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法 JoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish Asthesayinggoes Practicemakesperfect SojoiningtheEnglishclubisagoodwaytolearnEnglish 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于开头和结尾 多是结尾 加谚语 Proverb saying 可用于 beginning 和 ending 多用后者 Englishwriting Enjoysomeproverbs 1 Practicemakesperfect 2 Thinktwicebeforeyoudo 4 DoastheRomansdo 三思而后行 熟能生巧 有志者事竟成 入乡随俗 早起的鸟儿有虫吃 失败是成功之母 5 Theearlybirdcatchestheworm 3 Wherethereisawill thereisaway 6 Failureisthemotherofsuccess Englishwriting Enjoysomeproverbs 7 Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk 8 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway 9 AllroadsleadtoRome 10 Nevertoooldtolearn 覆水难收 一天一个苹果 医生远离我 条条大路通罗马 活到老 学到老 Englishwriting 方法四 妙用引文和例子 多用于 thebody Writingskills 写 的技巧 Englishwriting 青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球 Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth Forexample wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags stopusingnapkins plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy 加例子 Englishwriting 加例子 在家里 我经常帮助父母亲干家务活 Ioftenhelpmyparentsdohousework suchaswashingdishes foldingtheclothes takingoutthetrashandsoon Englishwriting 结尾 提出倡议或号召 Englishwriting Let s Doitnow Don tdoitagain Asstudents weshouldstartfromourselves Don twait Joinusnow Starttojoinusnow Don tputitoff Becomeavolunteertoday Howamazing Ican twait Saveanimals SaveOurselves Saveourplanet Don thesitate 犹豫 Itwillbegreatfun Englishwriting 书面表达写作技巧 审 列 加 连 美 Englishwriting 知己知彼 学范文 Englishwriting First someofusaren tinterestedinEnglish WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing Andthenit ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts Solotsofusdon thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion What smore therearesomanynewwordswehaven tmetbeforeinthepassage Idon tknowwhattodo Sometimeswecan tunderstandthemainidea letalone 更不用说 answerthequestionsaboutthem Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences Let sgoforit Englishwriting DearMary Iheardyoudidn tdowellinEnglish Hereissomeadviceforyou Yours IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish Youknow Practicemakesperfect itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou Yourturntogoforit 试填一填 Englishwriting DearMary Iheardyoudidn tdowellinEnglish Hereissomeadviceforyou Yours IthinkreadingEnglisheverydayandlisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclassarethemostimportant youcanjointheEnglishclubtopracticeEnglish Youknow Practicemakesperfect itisnecessaryforyoutolistentotheEnglishradioeverymorning Itcanimproveyourlisteningskill EnglishisnotdifficulttolearnandIhopewhatIhavesaidishelpfulforyou Tobeginwith Ofcourse Infact Then Yourturntogoforit check Englishwriting TheLifeasaGrade9StudentHowtimeflies NowI minGradeNine ActuallyIfeelthelifeisquitedifferentfromitusedtobe NowI masbusyasabee There salotofhomeworkandexams TheonlyfeelingIhaveis ThelifeasaGradeNinestudentisverybusyandchallenging There sanoldsaying Hewhofailstoplanplanstofail Idon twanttofail soIcreateaplanforthefollowingdays SincenothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit IwillchangemyattitudetowardsmathsandphysicswhichIampooratnow I llspendtheresttimeefficiently Asthere snoelevatortosuccess I lltrymybesttodoeverythingstepbystep IbelievethatIcandoit It syourturn 请分析以下的文章 Englishwriting Yourturntogoforit Goodwords Goodsentences Connectionwords Englishwriting 随着人口的增多 人类不仅需要越来越多的地方居住 而且需要越来越多的食物 人类把森林变成了耕地 新的城市和道路占据了动物的栖息地 许多动物遭到猎杀 所有这些都导致了越来越多的动物濒临灭绝 然而动物是我们人类的朋友 我们有责任去保护他们 而不是伤害或猎杀它们 请根据上述内容写一篇不少于80词的英语短文 要求 1 语言规范 意思连贯 表达完整 2 提示的内容要全部用上 It syourturn 练练笔 Englishwriting Let sHelpOurFriendsWiththeincreasingpopulation humanneedsmoreplacestoliveinandmorefoodtoeat Asaresult wechangetheforestsintofarmland Ifeelpityfortheanimals Moreandmorenewcitiesandroadsarebuiltonanimals habitat Alotofanimalsarekilledbecauseoftheirtastymeatorbeautifulfur Thereusedtobelotsofanimals butnowmoreandmoreanimalsbecomeendangeredbecauseofourcrazyandsillybehavior Forexample thereareonly2500manateesintheUSAnow Doyouwanttoseethesegentleandshyanimalsdisappear Doyouwantourchildrenonlytoseemodelanimalsinthefuture Don tyouthinkanimalsareourlovelyfriends Iknowyouransweris No Soit sourdutytoprotecttheminsteadofhurtingorkillingthem Don tputitoff Let stryourbesttohelpourfriendstoday Englishwriting Yourturntogoforit Goodwords Goodsentences Connectionwords Englishwriting 模板作文 开头公式一 名人名言1 Aproberbsays Asanoldsayinggoes Youareonlyyoungonce 2 Aseveryoneknows Asisknowntous noonecandenythat 开头公式二 数字统计1 Accordingtoarecentsurvey about78 9 ofthecollegestudentswantedtofurthertheirstudyaftertheirgraduation 2 Arecentstatisticsshowsthat 附 Englishwriting 结尾公式一 结论1 Obviously wecandrawtheconclusionthatgoodmannersarisefrompolitenessandrespectforothers 2 tosumup inconclusion inbrief onaccountofthis thus 结尾公式二 建议1 Accordingly Irecommendthatsomemeasuresbetaken 2 Consequently tosolvetheproblem somemeasuresshouldbetaken Englishwriting 写作的 五项基本原则 一 长短句原则Asacreature Ieat asaman Iread Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind theyareinawayquitesimilar 二 主题句原则Tobeginwith youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam 主题句 Withoutsufficientpreparation youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorr