备考2012对比议论型书面表达学案.doc

备考2012写作专题 对比议论型书面表达学案应试策略：十句三段式作文法 十句三段式作文法是有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高写作水平。其基本模式为：1 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，点明全文主题；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。两者关系也可倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句点明主题。2 第二段为正文，共七句。第三句为主题句，提出本段的主题，它应与第一段的主题相关或一致。第四至九句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意好过渡，以使段落逻辑合理，结构得当。3 第三段为结尾，简化为一句，也是全文的总结句， 它将前面的内容总结为一个结果，表明自己的论点。实例：（用十句作文法和三段式表达）1下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况，并附带表明你自己的观点。比例40%学生赞同60%学生不赞同理由1.便于同亲友联系；2.可以上网查资料；3.空余时间玩玩游戏调节大脑；4.储存有用信息。1.手机辐射对人健康有害；2.响铃影响自己和他人学习；3.属奢侈品；4.容易引起相互攀比。注意：1.要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；2.字数约100字。3.信的开头和结尾已写好Dear Sir,Im writing to tell you Best wishes范文：Dear Sir,Im writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic“Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones (Cell phones) at the class meeting.（主题句）Forty percent students agreed students can have their own mobile phones,(支持方主题句) they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends. （扩展句一） They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store some useful information in the meantime. （扩展句二）Besides, they could play games for rest if they feel tired after a long times study. （扩展句三）However, sixty percent of us were against it. (反对方主题句) They said the radiation of cellphones was harmful to health, and the ringing sound did somewhat affect the cellphone holders and others. （扩展句一） Also, cellphones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other. （扩展句二）As far as I am concerned, I agree with the majority. It is not suitable for middle school students to have cellphones.（观点句） We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves.（总结句）Best wishes.建议对比观点型写作模块Recently,we have had a discussion about _ (主题). There are two opposite opinions about it.Those who favour the idea think that_(支持方的理由一 ) .Whats more, _(支持方的理由二) . Moreover,_. (支持方的理由三) On the other hand,those who are against the idea believe that_(反对方的理由一).Secondly,_( 反对方的理由二).Last but not least,_( 反对方的理由三).Personally/From my point of view,every coin has two sides._(我的观点).The reasons are_(理由),Only in this way can we_(观点). 注意：要学会使用过渡词。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“粘合剂 ”。恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清楚，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：递进型： also, (and)besides, whats more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, whats worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only but also等；解释型：that is (to say), in other words, namely, in reality, as a matter of fact等；转折型：however, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等举例型：for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take for example等；因果型：because (of), since, now that, thanks to, due to; thus, therefore, as a result (consequence),so that, so that等；让步型：though, although, in spite of, despite 等；顺序型：firstnextand thenfinally, firstthenafter thatfinally 等；并列型：and, bothand, or, eitheror, as well as, 等时间型：afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardlywhen, no soonerthan 等总结型：in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等见解型：in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned，Im sure 等条件型：if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 常用百搭句子：翻译以下句子1、 众所周知，越来越多的人拥有私家车。As is known to all,more and more people have their own private cars.2、 目前，大多数人认为它为我们的生活提供了便利，然而其他人认为它也带来很多麻烦。At present,most people think that it brings great conveniece to our life while others hold the view that it causes a lot of troubles as well.3、 针对这个问题有不同的说法There are different opinoins about the problem.4、 然而，事情都有两面性 :However,every cion has two sides.5、 原因有几个There are several reasons behind the situation.6、 我认为我们应该重视它对社会发展的作用In my opinion,we should attacth importance to the roles it plays in the development of our society.7. 虽然他对于社会和人们都有好处，但我们要充分利用它的优势。Although it is good to both the citizens and the government,we should make the best of its advantages.实战演练随着人们生活水平的提高，越来越多的人拥有了自己的汽车，你班同学就此展开了一次讨论，提出两种不同的观点和看法。请你根据所提供的信息给报社写一封信，客观介绍这两种看法。 赞同者认为：1.方便、快捷、舒适的交通工具；2.反映出国民生活条件提高，国家富强；3.带动其他行业发展。反对者认为：1.废气污染严重；2.过多则影响交通，导致更多事故；3.停车问题日益突出。注意：1.词数：100左右；2.参考词汇：方便的 convenient；交通 transportation Dear editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion we recently had about whether it is good or not for families to own cars. With the development of peoples living conditions，more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it good to own a car. Firstly，its a fast , convenient，and comfortable means of transportation tool. You can go to a lot of places at any time. Secondly，it shows that people are becoming richer，and the country stronger. It also makes businesses and industries develop faster. However, others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the air. Whats more, too many cars will have some bad effects，such as more accidents. Last but not least，parking cars is another big problem. In my view, cars are bringing more problems now, maybe people should think carefully before they buy a car. Yours, LiHua预习：(2009年辽宁卷)假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英语以短文形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。要点：时间：下周六上午8:00至11:00内容：采摘苹果报名：办公室，下周四下午5:00前提示：带帽子、手套欢迎踊跃参加注意：词数100左右，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。参考词汇：社区communityLadies and Gentlemen,_递进型： also, (and)besides, whats more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, whats worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only but also等；解释型：that is (to say), in other words, namely, in reality, as a matter of fact等；转折型：however, nevertheless, instead, on the coutrary,on the other hand 等；列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally, on the one hand, on the