河南省郑州市高考英语一轮 短文改错、书面表达训练（4）.doc

郑州市 2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（4）附参考范文passage 5dear mr. brown, i am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1_before you came to teach us, i had not interest in 2_english.my pronunciation was terribly.i could 3_only speak a few words.but one and a half year later, 4_i now think english fun to learn.i got a lot from your 5_encouraging words.i will always remember what you 6_said, “if you try to, you can be no 1 !”i hope youve _had pleasant journey home and will come to china _again sometimes in the future.i will write again 9_and send you the photos we take together 10_【参考答案】key 5dear mr. brown, i am writing to thank you with your kind help. for before you came to teach us, i had not interest in noenglish.my pronunciation was terribly.i could terribleonly speak a few words.but one and a half year later, yearsi now think english fun to learn.i got a lot from your isencouraging words.i will always remember what you rightsaid, “if you try to, you can be no 1 !”i hope youve /tohad pleasant journey home and will come to china aagain sometimes in the future.i will write again sometimeand send you the photos we take together took*结束*结束高考英语书面表达讲义：要点作文(4)(25 min.)(2012长郡月考)假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应该包括下面的内容： 1. 安全意识的重要性；2. 在运动中要注意安全；3. 在校内要注意人身安全；4. 同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；5. 逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。注意： 1. 不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；2. 词数不少于120。参考词汇： 校园安全 safety at school_【参考范文】one possible version：my dear classmates, there is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay in.i consider this as indeed a good practice, which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life, whether when we stay at school or outside it. when we are doing sports, we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt. furthermore, when we get into trouble with our classmates, we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting, which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically.as far as im concerned, i feel all the students and teachers should work hard and try to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind. besides, we are supposed to observe the law discipline wherever we are at any moment.thanks.*结束(2012武汉武昌五月调研)请根据以下提示，结合自己的学习生活，就“如何缓解压力”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的建议或做法。nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of pressure.its necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds.注意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。_参考范文one possible version：pressure is a common serious problem nowadays.many students in our class worry about their exams.much pressure as we have from our studies，we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy.furthermore，burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study.im always under pressure，too.my parents expect me to go to a key university.one evening，i had a talk with my mother.i told her i was not lazy and i really felt tired.i needed time to relax.my mother agreed with me at last.so i think a conversation with parents or teachers or good friends is an essential way to solve the problem.besides，we can listen to music after class or we can even cry or shout in the open in order to refresh ourselves.*结束短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾()；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线()划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。 although all the students seem very happily at our school, as 66_far as we concerned, the buildings would be more beautiful67_if the school could be decorated. we students thought the school68_looks like a desert and the concrete walls like the grey sky in69_a rainy day. we would be much happier and are able to study70_better if the walls of the school could be decorated with posters, 71_photos and paintings, that could certainly broaden our horizons72_and enrich our lives. original art work are too expensive, but 73_unless we buy art posters, the cost will be low. using only a74_little money, it can make our school a nicer place. 75_参考答案、短文改错66. happilyhappy 67. we后加are 68. thoughtthink69. inon 70 去are或arebe 71.正确 72.thatwhich73.workworks 74. unlessif 75. itwe*结束2013高考英语：写作综合训练集(1)（参考范文）发言稿篇90后出生的学生，思想特殊、行为方式和价值观令人担忧。假如你是一名90后出生的学生刘林，请根据下表中所提供信息以do trust us-a generation born in the 90s为题写一篇英语演讲稿，以消除人们的忧虑。90后的境遇面临更多的升学和就业烦恼，所处环境竞争更加激烈。人们的忧虑1注重自我，轻视合作，.2缺乏毅力，容易气馁，.3盲目追求，渴望成名，.我们的长处敢于挑战，.（请考生联系自己拟定内容，再列举两至三点。）注意：1对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。【参考范文】-one possible version:good afternoon, everyone!the topic of my speech today is “do trust usa generation born in the 90s”.living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised peoples concern. they worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. besides, they consider us as lacking in perseverance, and this is what it takes to do any job well. without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. they are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.however, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. in addition, we are quick-minded and creative. we can do our work more efficiently. yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced. please do trust us!thank you for your listening!faithfully, li hua文章针对90s后的特点，让学生写一篇演讲稿。文章素材贴近学生生活实际，他们本身作为90s后所以他们感到格外亲切，有话可说。文章人称用第一、三人称；时态应用现在时态。*结束高考英语作文精选范文（看图作文类）2. 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。注意：1词数：100左右2生词：通讯：communicate 互联网：the internet great changes have taken place in the way of communication in peoples life.in the past, people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone. but now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.people can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time. whats more, people have easy access to the internet, which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.with these changes, peoples pace of life has been quickened and peoples work has been made more efficient. it used to take several days to hear from each other, but now it takes only several minutes, even if they are in two different countries. in a word, people have an easier life nowadays.*结束(201*重庆调研)today is sunday. we had not lessons. after breakfast1._i wanted to do with my homework when li lei rang me.2._he asked me to go to the cinema with he. i agreed, but3._i have to finish my homework first. about an hour later，4._we went out. in the way we saw kate; she was mending5._her bike. she looked very worry.“let us help you.” li lei6._and i all said. “all right.” and we stopped to help her.7._there was nothing much wrong with the bike, so it cost8._us only several minutes time to finish it. kate was very 9._thankful. when we hurried to the cinema, the film had10._been on for ten minutes. but we felt happy.答案与解析：1notno“没有课”应是have no lessons或dont have any lessons。2去掉withdo是及物动词，直接跟名词作宾语。3hehim介词后跟代词时要用宾格。4havehad本文是叙述过去发生的事情。5inon“在途中”是on the way。6worryworried“她看上去很着急”，应该用形容词作表语。7allboth因为只有我和李蕾两人。8costtook“花费时间做什么”要用it takes some time to do something。9去掉time有具体的时间名词minutes，无须再用time。10*结束【1】据报道，几位慈善人士最近几年一直在资助五名贫困大学生，但是，这些学生从来没有表达过他们的感激之情，所以这几位慈善人士决定停止资助。此事在社会上引起了广泛的争论，某英文报为此在读者中展开了调查。请你以“do they have to say thanks