江苏省常熟市高考英语书面表达冲刺训练2(1).doc

江苏省常熟市2014高考英语书面表达训练【广东珠海市高三上期末质量监测】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）the train was forced to slow from 200 kilometers per hour to 120 km/h, a police officer with the shenyang railway public security bureau told xinhua news agency. the smoker, a 23-year-old from dalian, was fined 200 yuan ($30) for violating regulations. smoking is strictly forbidden on high-speed trains, even in the toilets, washing rooms and connecting areas between cars, xinhua quoted the unidentified officer as saying. smoking can trigger fire alarms or even cause a fire on the train. violators may be subject to warnings, fines or administrative detention for disturbing order on public transport facilities, he said. on saturday, the first day of the harbin-dalian high-speed railways operation, a passenger was found smoking on a train to harbin, capital of heilongjiang province, leading to a deceleration of the train, railway police said. the next day, a passenger in his 20s smoked in a washroom on a train also heading for harbin, triggering the fire alarm. his actions nearly resulted in an emergency braking, according to zhao yang, chief conductor on the train. it is not uncommon for smokers to cause trouble on bullet trains. on jan 11, a bullet train traveling from shenzhen to changsha was forced to brake after a smoker activated the emergency braking system. the halt delayed more than 20 trains. in december 2008, a passenger was given three days detention because his smoking caused a bullet train from tianjin to beijing to automatically brake just a minute after it had departed tianjin railway station. 写作内容1以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2以约120个词写出你看完这篇报道后的想法，内容至少包括：（1）吸烟可能对公共安全造成的危害和对他人的影响。（2）你对在公共场所“吸烟”的看法。写作要求1作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。评分标准概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。【参考范文】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）the passage reports a fact that a smoker smoked on a high-speed train and caused it to automatically slow down abnormally. some more cases are offered to show that smoking on a bullet train causes trouble and danger to others.as is known to everybody, smoking is very common in china. almost everybody just considers it as a personal affair and does it at free will wherever they feel like it. not only do people smoke in their own homes, but they also smoke in almost every public place, from their offices to the theatre. they feel it their private freedom, and few regard it as an offense to other people. but i do think smoking is not a personal affair but a social problem. when one smoker is enjoying his smoke, what he produces in his smoke affects the surroundings. he is at the same time forcing the people around to smoke second-hand. i once read a news story that a tourists smoking caused a fire on the top of mount huangshan. and i frequently read about fire disasters in homes or factories caused by smoking. i quite agree that trouble-making smokers should be severely punished with a view to cutting down smoking. i suggest that smoking be banned in all public places.【评卷建议】读写任务：内容概括要表达出吸烟造成火车减速的具体事件并总结出吸烟给高速列车造成麻烦和危险。表述部分主要表达读完此报道后对于吸烟危害的思考，可包括对吸烟很广泛的客观现实的认知，必须表达吸烟对他人的危害，可包括使别人被动吸烟、引发火灾给别人造成损失、导致火车延误给别人造成麻烦等，必须表达个人对于在公共场所吸烟的看法。内容概括：1-3分：句子正确但只有部分要点或有全部要点但句子的拼写、语法错误多。4-5分：句子正确、包括全部要点、字数不超过40。表述部分：1-5分：只写出极少内容或部分相关词汇。6-10分：内容少，有部分句子，拼写、语法错误较多、字迹潦草。11-14分：内容多，但不够连贯，拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。15-17分：内容充实，叙述清楚，但拼写、语法错误较多，字迹清楚。18-20分：内容充实，语句连贯，没有或极少语法错误，字迹工整。【北京市丰台区2014统一模拟】第一节（15分） 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，下个月英国saint gorge high school的交换学生要来你校学习。学校招募接待家庭。请你根据以下信息，提出申请并说明理由。 1. 家里住宿条件好； 2. 英语听说能力强； 3. 了解英国人的文化习俗。注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。dear sir or madam, yours,li hua第一节 应用类作文（15分）一、评分原则： 1. 本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3. 评分时应考虑：内容是否完整，条理是否清楚，交际是否得体，语言是否规范。 4. 拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 5. 词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。二、各档次给分范围和要求：第一档完全完成了试题规定的任务。内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达时充分考虑到交际对象的需求；体现出较强的语言运用能力。完全达到了预期的写作目的。13分15分第二档基本完成了试题规定的任务。内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求；运用的语法和词汇基本满足任务要求；语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。9分12分第三档未恰当完成试题规定的任务。所用词汇有限，语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，未能清楚地传达信息。4分8分第四档未完成试题规定的任务。写了少量相关信息；语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对写作内容的理解。1分3分0分未传达任何信息；所写内容与要求无关。三、possible versionspossible version 1dear sir or madam, i would like to host a student from saint george high school. my house is big enough to give him a room to live in. also, i am good at english listening and speaking. i have studied a lot about british culture and customs. i can create a welcoming atmosphere for him. i would be very happy, if you give me this opportunity. thank you! yours, li hua (65 words)possible version 2dear sir or madam, i feel very excited to know that the exchange students from saint gorge high school will come and study at our school. i would like to be a host family. the reasons are as follows: first, my home is big with three bedrooms and two bathrooms. this makes it possible for me to provide the exchange student with good living accommodations. moreover, i have a good command of english and i am good at listening and speaking. i would be able to communicate with the student easily. in addition, i have a good understanding of british customs and culture, allowing us to have a lot to talk about. because of the above mentioned reasons i am applying to be a host family. i sincerely hope i will be granted this great opportunity. thank you very much! yours, li hua (136 words)【2014高考英语模拟题】短文写作（共l题；满分30分） 请根据以下提示，以my understanding of happiness为标题，用英语写一篇短文。the understanding of happiness varies from person to personmaterial basis doesnt necessarily equal happinesshow to enhance（提升）the sense happiness is of vital importance.注意；1、除诗歌外，文体不限； 2、文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； 3、词数为120左右，如引用提示语则不计人总词数。【2013届广东省六校第二次联考】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你是校报小记者，最近学校进行了一次问卷调查。以下是这次调查的情况: 时间: 上个月对象: 本校的学生主题: 请家教情况结果: （1）请家教率: 大约25；（2）家教时间: 大多在周末或假期；（3）学生的不同看法：a：家教能提高学习成绩；b：家教占用休息和娱乐时间。家教private tutoring；家庭教师：private tutor【写作内容】根据以上情况给校报写一篇报道，并包括如下内容: 1. 调查的时间、对象和主题； 2. 调查的结果；3. 你对请家教的看法。 【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内