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f单元书面表达目录f单元书面表达1f1书面表达记叙文1f2 书面表达议论文8f3 书面表达说明文15f4 书面表达应用文16f5书面表达夹叙夹议文26f1书面表达记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届湖北省黄冈中学高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第二节：短文写作 (共1题，满分30分)请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。pain means progress. in most cases, things that bring us pain can make us grow.注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示； 2. 除诗歌外，文体不限； 3 .内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例； 4. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5词数为不少于120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】on the way to success all of us may meet with such kind of things that bring us pain. but in my opinion, it is just through pain that we strengthen ourselves and make progress.in the first year of senior high school, i entered for the 3,000-metre race in the sports meet and started training for it. but a few days later, my legs were so painful that i wanted to quit. however, with my classmates encouragement, i picked up my courage again and went on training. as a result, i took the first place in the race and was highly praised by the school.many an example shows that we shouldnt be afraid of painful experiences which will help us grow strong both physically and mentally.【技巧点拨】1. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；2. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；3. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；4. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷(解析)2015届山东省泰安市高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第二节 写作(满分30分)假设你是高三学生李华，你的美国笔友sam来信询问你目前如何进行高效复习的。请根据以下要点，结合自身实际写封回信。 1学习方面：科学规划，提高效率； 2生活方面：加强锻炼，健康饮食； 3其他注意： 1词数120150左右； 2开头语和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。dear sam， thank you for your concern_best wishes!【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】dear sam，thank you for your concern. in your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. as a student, its important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. as far as i am concerned, the following are all that i do in my study life. to start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. next , you ought to keep in a good mood. only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? thirdly, healthy body is a must. there is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. as a consequence , youd better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you youll find some questions difficult to deal with.im more than glad to help you. and i hope these suggestions can give you some help. yours li hua【技巧点拨】5. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；6. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；7. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；8. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷解析2015届河北省唐山一中高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第四节 书面表达（满分25分）星光中学（xingguang high school）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1.时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（daqing mountain）；2.活动的过程；3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1词数100左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】in order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on april 10. hundreds of us took part in it.it was a nice day. at 8:00 am. we gathered at the foot of daqing mountain and set out for the top in high spirits. all the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. when some fell behind, others would come and offer help. about two hours later, we all reached the top. bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.the activity benefited us a lot. not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. what a wonderful time! 【思路点拨】本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句what a wonderful time及倒装结构not only.but also的运用。好的短语：set out for出发,动身，着手做某事 in high spirits 情绪高昂fall behind落后非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy。【英语卷(解析)2015届黑龙江省大庆铁人中学高三10月月考（201410）】第二节：书面表达（共一题，满分25分）广告（advertisement）在我们的日常生活中非常普遍，很多同学很容易被广告影响，盲目购买厂家通过大量广告所宣传的商品，甚至上当受骗。就“广告”这一主题为你的校报写一篇短文，让同学们对广告有清楚的了解。内容包括： 1. 做广告的真实目的。 2. 如何避免被广告误导。要求：1. 词数：100-120 2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】【技巧点拨】9. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；10. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；11. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；12. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省哈六中高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第三节：书面表达（25分）假定你是李华。请你给笔友peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜航班号：ca985到达：8月6日上午11:30注意：1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。dear peter,how are you doing?_ _looking forward to your reply.yours,lihua【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】dear peter,how are you doing?im writing to tell you that my uncle li ming is going to your city for a conference, and ive asked him to bring you the chinese painting youve asked for before.also, id like you to do me a favor. would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the u.s.? thank you in advance!his flight number is ca985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. august 6. my uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. and he will be in blue jacket.looking forward to your reply.【思路点拨】范文为应用文中的书信。书信的开头结尾已给出，写作重点放在所给要点的组织上。第一段先用that引导的宾语从句来说明写信的目的，然后又用一个定语从句交代了写作要点“带去他想要的那幅中国画”。第二段用“would you please”礼貌地询问是否可以接机。最后一段交代清楚了航班信息和叔叔的特征。特别是注意了一般将来时的应用。【英语卷（解析）2015届湖北省黄冈中学高三上学期期中考试（201411）】第二节：短文写作 (共1题，满分30分)请根据以下提示，并结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。pain means progress. in most cases, things that bring us pain can make us grow.注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示； 2. 除诗歌外，文体不限； 3 .内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例； 4. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；5词数为不少于120左右，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】on the way to success all of us may meet with such kind of things that bring us pain. but in my opinion, it is just through pain that we strengthen ourselves and make progress.in the first year of senior high school, i entered for the 3,000-metre race in the sports meet and started training for it. but a few days later, my legs were so painful that i wanted to quit. however, with my classmates encouragement, i picked up my courage again and went on training. as a result, i took the first place in the race and was highly praised by the school.many an example shows that we shouldnt be afraid of painful experiences which will help us grow strong both physically and mentally.【技巧点拨】13. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；14. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；15. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；16. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷(解析)2015届湖南省浏阳一中、攸县一中、醴陵一中三校高三联考（201411）】section c (25 marks)directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below.伴随我们成长，长辈们在不经意间老去。 一曲时间都去哪儿了戳中了所有人的泪点，引起很多人的共鸣。相信你也会有些感触。请以此为话题写一篇短文： 内容： 1. 你和一位长辈之间发生的一件事 2. 你的感触和反思注意：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域; 2.短文词数120词左右; 3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯; 4.书写清晰、工整; 5.不能出现真实的姓名和学校名 【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】one possible version: the song where has the time gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me. when i was 13, my parent worked in guangdong province and i was take care of by my grandpa. i got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. my parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. but grandpa said no. he decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. until one day he was seriously ill, i was touched and felt guilty. he used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. now he is getting older and older. i cant afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but i can help him with the housework. whats more, i am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.【技巧点拨】17. 主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；18. 一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；19. 恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；20. 注意卷面整洁，书写标准。【英语卷解析2015届北京市重点中学高三上学期第一次月考（201410）】情景作文 （20分）假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华。今天是你父亲的生日，你给父亲买完生日蛋糕后，在回家途中做了几件好事。请根据图片的先后顺序，写一篇英文日记，介绍事情的全过程。注意：1日记的开头已为你写好。 2词数不少于60。march 23, friday sunnytoday is dads birthday and i wanted to buy him a gift. _【答案】【知识点】f1书面表达记叙文【范文】last monday,my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip.he would be away for three days.juet the next morning.i found my mother wasnt feeling well. she had a cold.i immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. with my special care, my mother recovered quickly. when my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. he praised me for what i had done.i feel very happy that i have done something for my mother.【思路点拨】这几件事看似很简单，但是要想把文章写好，写的连贯，自然，要求考生要在给出的图片信息中扑捉到有用的信息，有时候要适当的进行扩充才行，不如第二、第三幅图，需要考生根据自己的生活经验，做出合理的补充，是文章的内容充实而又自然，同时要注重文章的结构，前后时态、动作要做到一致，连贯。总之，把没一幅图吃透，加上合理联想，还是可以写出优秀的作文的。【英语卷(解析)2015届湖北省孝感高中高三10月阶段性考试（201410）】第二节：短文写作（共l题；满分30分）请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。 we all know that chances favor the prepared mind. only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.注意：1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。 2. 除诗歌外，文体不限。 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学习名称。 4. 词数不少于120词。 【答案】【知识点】f1 书面表达记叙文 【范文】there is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. however, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. i didnt realize it until i went to high school.soon after i became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school. i love singing but i was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public. i could only sing to myself most of the time. somehow, i wanted to have a try. when i talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as i got well prepared, i would make it. with their encouragement, i became confident and practiced hard after class. sometimes, i would turn to my music teacher for help. when i felt i was ready, the day came. standing on the stage, i took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. it turned out that i won the first prize . this experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life. if you are not successful yet, most probably you havent been well prepared. once you have, chances will surely favor you.f2 书面表达议论文【英语卷(解析)2015届广东省惠州市第一中学（惠州市）高三第二次调研考试（201410）word版】随着智能手机的广泛应用，越来越多的年轻人成为低头族。近日，重庆划设了中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道。请根据以下内容写一篇报道。【写作内容】 地点重庆洋人街景区基本情况3米宽，50米长人行道一分为二；一边划设给手机使用者，另一边则为非手机使用者使用目的保障手机使用者的行走安全看法一些人赞同：认为人行道的设置是合理的，可避免手机使用者在行走中造成不必要的伤害一些人反对：认为最好的办法是加强行人的安全教育，改掉手机使用者沉迷手机的不良习惯。参考词汇：人行道：sidewalk； 洋人街景区：yangrenjie scenic spot【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them._ _【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them. to ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in china” was built in yangrenjie scenic spot, chongqing. it is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. as for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. however, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，主要讨论是否应该为手机族设专线的问题，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式结构作状语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了as for，while，however等连接结构。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。【英语卷(解析)2015届广东省惠州市第一中学（惠州市）高三第二次调研考试（201410）word版】随着智能手机的广泛应用，越来越多的年轻人成为低头族。近日，重庆划设了中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道。请根据以下内容写一篇报道。【写作内容】 地点重庆洋人街景区基本情况3米宽，50米长人行道一分为二；一边划设给手机使用者，另一边则为非手机使用者使用目的保障手机使用者的行走安全看法一些人赞同：认为人行道的设置是合理的，可避免手机使用者在行走中造成不必要的伤害一些人反对：认为最好的办法是加强行人的安全教育，改掉手机使用者沉迷手机的不良习惯。参考词汇：人行道：sidewalk； 洋人街景区：yangrenjie scenic spot【写作要求】 1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them._ _【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】with the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in china are glued to them. to ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in china” was built in yangrenjie scenic spot, chongqing. it is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. as for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. however, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.【思路点拨】 本文是议论文，主要讨论是否应该为手机族设专线的问题，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式结构作状语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了as for，while，however等连接结构。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。【英语卷（解析）2015届湖南省衡阳八中高三上学期第四次月考（201411）】section c写作（满分25分）directions: write an english composition according to the instructions given below in chinese.最近，某英文报就“如何处理师生间的矛盾”发起了一个专题讨论。假设你是李华，请你写一篇不少于120词的短文阐述自己的观点。内容包括以下要点：1. 师生间冲突时有发生，并举例说明；2. 造成冲突的原因；3. 解决的方法。【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】dear editor, it is very common that conflicts between teachers and students often happen. for example, a girl in our class didnt hand in her homework yesterday and was criticized by our english teacher. she felt it was unfair to be treated like that and talked back to the teacher, which made the teacher very angry. later, it turned out that the girl didnt feel well the day before yesterday so she couldnt finish her homework. so in most cases, conflicts between people come from misunderstanding. if the girl had realized that the teacher acted so just for her sake, or the teacher had first asked the girl why she didnt finish her homework, the conflict would have been avoided. so teachers and students should communicate more and understand each other. in my opinion, putting yourself in others shoes is the key to avoiding conflicts. yours, li hua【思路点拨】范文围绕如何处理师生间的冲突展开讨论，是典型的三段论。第一段第一句用it is very common that从句说明师生间发生冲突是普遍现象。紧接着通过举例来说明。本段用了which的非限定性定语从句，so引导的结果状语从句以及被动语态。第二段解释了造成冲突的原因。本段第二句用了if的虚拟语气if the girl had realized. the teacher had first asked the girl the conflict would have been avoided. 在if的条件句中还包含that和why引导的宾语从句。最后一段针对这种现象，作者提出了自己的观点。用了表明观点的短语in my opinion，以及一个the key to doing。总体来说范文要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句。【英语卷解析2015届重庆市重庆一中高三上学期第二次月考（201410）】写作二（满分20分） 高三学生学习任务繁重。体育课已成为难得的放松时间，可目前你们体育课内容单一, 有时甚至被占用。请你用英语写一篇短文, 给校报投稿,词数不少于80,内容应包括: 1.目前体育课的现状2.你对此现象的看法 3.提出一些合理的建议dear editor,as the college entrance examination is drawing near, _ yours sincerely, li hua【答案】【知识点】f2 书面表达议论文【范文】dear editor,as the college entrance examination is drawing near, we senior high school students are occupied with busy work. to a certain extent, pe class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. however, it is a pity that our present pe class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.not only can pe class build our body but also can shape our personality. it serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. therefore, personally i hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. meanwhile, i think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. after all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.i hope pe class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleas