公开课——如何写建议信.ppt

,36.B37.F38.D39.G40.E61.that62.a63.and64.sounds65.going66.celebration67.over68.yourself69.sent70.beautifully,Onceuponatimetherewasaboywhofondofreading.However,hewasverypoortobuyanybooks.Thatwasthereasonthathehadtoborrowbooksfromarichmanwhoownedalotofbooks.Theboyknewclearlythathehastofinishreadingthebookshehadborrowedthemandreturnthemtotheownerassoonaspossible.,Arichman,whowasreadytolendanyofhisbooktotheboy,readfewofhisownbooks.Withtimegoingon,theboyreadalotsbutfinallybecameafamouswriterinhistime.Thoughtherichmanhadsomanybooks,heremainedamanwithlittleknowledgebecauseofheseldomreadhisbooks.,Recently,ourclasshavehadaheateddiscussionaboutwhethertheBeijingZooshouldbemovedoutofthecity.,Someofmyclassmatesareinfavorofthemove.Theysaylargecrowdsoftouriststothezoowillresultintrafficjams.Theyalsosaythatoncemoved,animalswillhavemorespaceandbetterlivingconditionsinthesuburbs.,However,otherstudentsareagainsttheidea,sayingthattheBeijingZoo,builtin1906,hasahistoryof100years,andiswellknownathomeandabroad.Soitshouldremainwhereitis.Whatsmore,ifwemovethezoo,someanimalsmaydie.Tomoveornot,thisisabigdecisionwhichhastobemadebypeopleinBeijing.Yourstruly,LiHua,howtowritealetterofadvice,writing,DearMr.Wang,Knowingthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,Idliketogivesomeadvice.Whatweneedmostarepopularsciencebooks.Theyhelpusunderstandsciencesubjectsbetterandarouseourcuriosityaboutscientificdiscoveries.Inadditiontoreadingforknowledge,wereadforfunandinspiration.ThatiswhyIrecommendanothercategoryofbooks:literarybooks.Theynotonlyofferusjoyandexcitement,butalsoencourageustothinkcritically.Illbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.Yourssincerely,LiYue,建议信,Endingexpressyourhope,Beginningstateyourpurpose,Bodygiveadvice&reasons,1.Imgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon2.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning3.Knowingthat,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.,A.stateyourpurpose,sentencepatterns,B.giveyouradvice,1.Itshelpful/importantto2.Itwouldbeagoodideato3.Iwouldliketosuggestthat,C.expressyourhope,1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.Imsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwill,表达愿望：5、我相信如果你接受我的建议，你会变得更加苗条和保持健康。,Theuseofsentencepatterns,表明意图：1.你给Jane回信就如何减肥提建议。,提出建议：2、健康饮食3、多锻炼4、喝足够多的水,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.,Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.,Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.,Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.,Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.,假设你叫李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖，很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信，词数100左右。1、健康饮食2、多锻炼3、喝足够多的水,Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.,Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.,Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.,DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.,First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.,Inaddition,itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.,Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.,Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.,Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.,Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.,Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.,DearJane,Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,Idliketogivesomesuggestions.First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Besides,italsohelpsifyoutakemoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Inaddition,itshouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater,becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.Imsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua,假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。,引出话题，表明写作意图,1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。,提出建议：,总结，表达愿望,连接词,(多个建议+多个理由),Outline,评分标准,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwishes,LiHua,Homework,1.memorizethesentencepatterns2.polishyou