小学英语北师大版三年级起点《六年级下册unit10review》ppt课件（1）

短文改错篇,英语专题之,by Qin Shengyue,1. 句子越看越正确，无从下手。 2. 句子越看越错，但不知道怎么改。,Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?,Any rules？,Any skills？,How to correct？,第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加 删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。,题目要求：,1、话题有关学生学习生活 2、多以书信和日记的形式出现 3、浅显易懂，没有生僻、超纲词汇。 4、句子结构简单，基本是简单句和并不复杂的复合句。,1.短文改错材料特点：,高考短文改错的短文通常有120个词左右，共10个错误，一般错误类型为1+1+8.,1个多词； 1个缺词； 8个需要找出错误并改正。,2.短文改错命题特点：,一.词的用法 1）连词 2）冠词 3）介词 4）形容词和副词,二.一致性问题： 1）主谓一致 2）名词的单复数一致 3）代词的指代一致 4）时态语态一致 5）非谓动词与逻辑主语一致 6）行文逻辑关系的一致,动 词,3.短文改错考查内容：,动词形，名词数 区分形和副 非谓语细辨别 代词格，细领悟 冠词连词常光顾 习惯用法要记住 句子成分多分析 逻辑错误需关注,4.短文改错熟记口诀：,动词的几种形式：,1.原形,2.三单,3.过去式,4.过去分词,一.谓语动词,写出下列动词的三单，过去式，过去分词的形式：,练一练：,e.g. do does did done,1.play 2.go 3.catch 4.begin 5.choose 6.hurt,plays played played goes went gone catches caught caught begins began begun chooses chose chosen hurts hurt hurt,用给出动词的适当形式填空：,1.I_ (play) basketball with my friends everyday. 2.He/She/ Nancy often _ (play) basketball with his/her friends. 3.Many students _ (play) basketball yesterday. 4.Xiao Ming _ (play) basketball with his parents yesterday. 5.This basketball_ (play) by a lot of students yesterday.,play,plays,played,played,was played,动词的错误类型：,错误主要包括三类： 时态 2.语态 3.主谓一致（人称）,2008浙江卷 Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends , while I chose to take a part-time job. 2006安徽卷 Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.,decided,wishes,1.1时态,1.2主谓一致,2009海南卷 If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will first improve my English so that I can talk easily with foreign visitors. 2006天津卷 Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.,chosen,admitted,1.1语态,名词单、复数形式,2010全国卷 He agreed to read my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer 2008浙江卷 I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope.,envelopes,不可数名词,advice,二.名 词,Schools should be clean and pure place. But now something bad happens.Some student cheated in examination at school. As student , we often have examinations , many of which is sometimes too difficult for us. In addition, some students not work hard at their lesson .,修改下面的短文：,places,cheat,examinations,students,are,do,lessons,三、还要注意形和副,1. 形容词和副词混用，2. 三级错用,2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2010辽宁卷 Like the rest of my classmates, I didnt really want to get closest to her.,proud,close,修饰名词，感官动词，系动词要用形容词 修饰动词，形容词，副词和整个句子用副词 比较级和最高级的使用,2006辽宁卷： She was usual patient with her students and never made them disappointed.,usually,四、非谓语，细辨别,不定式符号to的多余与遗漏 现在分词与过去分词混用,NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. 2011课标卷 I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.,talking,buying,2008浙江卷： It is one of the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year. 2011全国卷 He begged my parents to staying another couple of day.,stay,found,五、 代词格，细领悟,高考链接6： I heard that Mr. Wang would teach our English this term.,us,1. 人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词的使用 反身代词oneself 的使用 3不定代词的使用 4Both,all,either,neither,none的使用. 5. Whose 和whos，its和 its的区别,I,me,we,us,you,you,you,you,he,him,she,her,it,it,they,them,人称代词格的误用 代词与所指代的内容在性别和数方面不一致 作形式主语与形式宾语it的遗漏或误用,五、 代词格，细领悟,2007陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!,myself,2011课标卷 When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.,friends,连词but， and， or和so的用法错误 冠词 a, an, the 误用或混用,2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school,a,六、冠词、连词常光顾,Be strict at sb Be responsible with sb/sth Have sth on common Have an effect in sb Lose the heart Make a great progress The war was broke out The accident was happened In the hurry Share sth for sb A pair of shoe A lot of equipments General speaking As soon as possibly,with for in on,a with Shoes equipment Generally possible,多词、少词和搭配,七、习惯用法要记住,八、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,2008年安徽卷 : She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?”I asked.,Why,九、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,2011课标卷 I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor.,and,2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. 2011全国卷 Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals.,when,us,Practice,challenge yourself,Dear Mrs. Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think Id email you and let you know what things are going.,how,句子成分: 是不及物动词,从句不缺宾语.what,疑问代词,在从句中充当主语或宾语成分.how,疑问副词,在句子中充当状语,所以改为how,Im glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.,everything,the,friends,with,warm,found,动词形,名词数,