书面表达附解析（2018年中考英语试题分类汇编第三期）

书面表达附解析（2018年中考英语试题分类汇编第三期）专题13 书面表达1.初中三年即将过去，你在这三年中一定有没有实现的愿望。为此，校园广播站特向全校 初三学生征稿。请你根据下面提示，写一篇广播稿。1. 没有实现的愿望(如:学会吉他)；2. 没有实现愿望的原因（至少两个）；3. 进入高中后为实现愿望的计划。 要求：1短文应条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明，90 词左右。（开头己给出，不计入 总字数）2短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。3短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.【答案】How time flies! Three years of junior high school has gone by before we know it.Each time I look back on my school days, I feel regretful, because one of my wishes hasnt been realized. That is to learn how to play the guitar.Although I am really interested in playing the instrument, I was busy working at my lessons. Besides, there was much homework to every day.The end of junior high school is the beginning of new life. If I can enter the senior high school, I will take part in after-school activities to learn to play the guitar. I believe Ill live a colorful life in the senior high school. 2.【2018年浙江省金华】在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。 注意：发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；词数80100；文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival falls in January February. It is Chinese New Year and also the biggest day of year.So people come back home from different places and get together for a big dinner. Many people stay up late to welcome the new year,hoping they will have a bright new start. During the festival, people visit their relatives and friends and wish each other good luck for the new year, Children can often get hongbao from their elders. Do you think it interesting?Thats all. Thanks for listening 【高分句型一】Many people stay up late to welcome the new year, hoping they will have a bright new start. 许多人熬夜迎接新年，希望他们有一个光明的开端。动词不定式to welcome the new year用作目的状语，分词短语hoping they will have a bright new start.用作伴随状语。【高分句型二】Children can often get hongbao from their elders. 孩子们通常可以从长辈那里得到红包。此句写出了春节的传统习俗，也是孩子们最开心的事情之一。get sth. from从得到某物。3.【2018年浙江省绍兴中考】你校英语社团正在开展主题为“ How do students find study partners？”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。 注意:（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；（2）你的理由至少两条；（3）词数:80-100；（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。参考词汇:学伴 study partner方便的convenient短文首句: I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.【答案】I have recentlydone a survey about how students find study partners. Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe its convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides， they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. Whats more， they think working out problems together helps learn more easily. As for me， Id like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also， its a good way to learn how to get on well with others. 题目中已经给出；接下来我们来介绍两种不同的方式以及理由；最后阐述自己的方式及理由。所以短文可以分成三段来叙述。时态应该是一般现在时态为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称复数为主。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语，写完整的句子。句式结构以主谓宾和主系表为主，辅以并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息。短文共分成三部分，第一部分是题目中给出的一句概括的句子，点明了文章的主题。第二部分中作者介绍了不同学生们寻找学伴的不同方式以及他们的理由；最后作者介绍了自己的方式及理由。分段叙述，使文章结构清晰，有条理。其次短文使用了恰当的英语表达方式，句式符合英语的表达习惯，语言地道、得体。文章以一般现在时态为主，第二段使用了第三人称叙述，最后一段使用第一人称，语法规范、准确。最后短文中使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They believe its convenient to find partners to study with online中使用了宾语从句，和非谓语动词作主语的句型；再如Some students Prefer to Join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face中使用了目的状语从句；再如Id like to get study partners by going to summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun.中原因状语从句等等。同时文章中使用了恰当的连接成分，如Besides, Whats more, As for me, Also等等，使文章意思连贯、表达流畅。 4.【2018年甘肃省白银】书面表达 “读万卷书，行万里路”，旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文，发表你的看法。注意：1要点齐全，适当发挥；2从思维导图Saying部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中；3句子及篇章结构准确、连贯，书写规范；4词数：80-100词左右；5文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。 【答案】TravellingTravelling is one of the best ways for learning. You may have read or heard about something, but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself. Seeing is believing. Furthermore, if you are a careful observer, you can learn much during your travel about the geography, biology and history of the places you visit. While travelling, you can meet more people and make more friends. You can also create great memories for your lifetime. No matter how well educated you are, there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling. 5.【2018年河北省中考】请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示：（1）What are the man and the woman doing?（2）What should you do when you see people litter like this? Why?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 （3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：throw, environment, civilized(文明的I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is_【答案】I can see a man and a woman in the picture. The man is throwing his rubbish in the public place.The other woman is stopping him and telling him to put it into the dustbin.The city is our home. We should protect it. Therefore, when we see someone litter like this, we should act like the woman.The environment should be protected by everybody.We should be civilized citizens. 点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。6.【2018年湖北省黄冈市中考】美丽中国,美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明,请你以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡黄冈。要点提示：1.黄冈位于长江之边,大别山之南；2.黄冈历史悠久,名人辈出；3.黄冈风景迷人,乡村秀美;4.人人参与,从小事做起,黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境;5.邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。写作要求：1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _Best wishes!Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tell you.My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.Its a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers and green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了黄冈的地理位置，接下来介绍黄冈的历史、风景和环保情况，最后邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。此处ask sb about sth, a number of, be proud of, asas possible, play a role in doing sth, fall in love with, have a wonderful time等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。7.【2018年湖北省宜昌中考】为了更好地开展八年级学生的研学旅行( study travel)，学校现面向全年级征集活动意向。假如你是