英语作文——利弊选择型.ppt

1、观点论证型,观点论证型模板（一）,观点论证型模板（一） (1)论点.(2)For论点涉及的对象，/For anyone/At any time, whether 论点涉及对象的所属范围一or论点涉及对象的所属范围二，正确性表现一. (3) No doubt,正确性表现二. (4) Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument./There are many facts which can support this argument. (5) Above all/First of all, 论据一. (6)进一步说明论据一. (7) Wh

2、ats more, /moreover, 论据二.(8)For example, 支持论据二的事例.(9) In addition/Besides/Moreover, 论据三. (10) (ALL mentioned above tell us that /Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that重申观点.(11)But (what is worth noting is)需要注意的问题./违背该观点可能的影响.(12)To conclude/Therefore,指出正确的做法或态度。,

3、Work Is a Necessity 1) 在现代社会，工作对于一个人来说意义 重大 2) 论证工作的必要性,Work Is a Necessity,Para 1: (1) Work is becoming more and more indispensable to mans existence. (2) For modern people, whether men or women, work is more than a means of making a living, but is a necessity. (3) No doubt, without work, one will

4、feel senseless. (提出观点段）,Para 2（4) Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument. (5) First of all, for most people, work is a source of happiness and satisfaction. (6) They apply their talents and knowledge to their work, in which they realize their personal values. (7) Whats more, many facts

5、prove that the more one uses his brain, the more active and efficient he is in thinking. (8)For example, scientists always have sharper minds than ordinary people. (9)Besides, work also offers ambitious people chances to realize their dreams. (观点论证段）,Para 3: (10) All mentioned above tell us that wor

6、k is of great importance in modern society. (11) Those without work for a long time will find life boring and miss many wonderful things from work. (12) Therefore, there is no denying that everyone should work to realize his personal value. (总结观点段）,（原因）列举： 1）first, second, third, last but not least

7、2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 4）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 5）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 6）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 7）most important of all, moreover, f

8、inally,Practice,The Ability to Make a Public Speech Is Important 1) 演讲能力十分重要 2) 试论证该观点,（1）The ability to make a public speech is of great importance. (2) For anyone, whether ordinary people or statesmen, the ability to make a public speech directly decides whether they could attract the listeners at

9、tention. (3) No doubt, it also reveals the speakers charming personality and can help the speaker establish a good image,(4) Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument. (5) Above all, the good ability to make a public speech can precisely convey the speakers thoughts. (6) Therefore, he can

10、successfully make himself understood. (7) Whats more, a persuasive public speech can help the speaker win support from the audience.,(8) For example, every four years in America, president candidates compete to win votes by making speeches around the country. (9) In addition, an inspiring public spe

11、ech can lighten the audiences mood.,(10) All mentioned above tell us that an excellent public speech has tremendous power. (11) The lack of this ability may result in ineffective communication. (12) Therefore, there is no denying that the ability to make a public speech should be fostered and attach

12、ed great importance to.,观点论证型模板（二） (1)It is well-known/generally accepted/acknowledged/believed/held that论点.(2) 正确性表现之一,(3)Besides/In addition,正确性表现二. (4)There are numerous examples supporting this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.(5)A case in point is例证一.(6)This is clo

13、se to suggest例证一的道理.(7)For another example, 例证二.(8)进一步说明例证二.(9)Moreover,例证三/其他 论据. (10)Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that重申观点.(11)But (what is worth noting is)需要注意的问题./违背该观点可能的影响.(12)To conclude/Therefore,指出正确的做法或态度。,Practice Makes Perfect 1) 怎样理解“熟能生巧” 2) 例如

14、：在英语学习中 3) 又如,Practice Makes Perfect,(1)It is well-known/generally accepted that “Practice makes perfect”. (2) It tells us that if we practice unfamiliar things again and again, well be able to perform it perfectly. (3) The truth of it is deep and profound.,(4)There are numerous examples supporting

15、this argument./Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.(5)A case in point is in order to learn English well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, listening to English broadcast, or communicating with foreigners. (6) This is close to suggest people can grasp English onl

16、y if they follow the saying “Practice makes perfect.”,(7) For another example, if we want to be skilled at using computers, we also need to practice more often. (8) In that case, you can acquire more knowledge about computer and then you may become a computer expert yourself. (9) Moreover, in other

17、areas of our life, practice is also necessary, and we can hardly do things well without practice and preparation.,(10) Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that continuous practice and efforts will lead to final success. (11) But what is worth noting is that if ther

18、e is mo right theoretical direction, practice might go towards a wrong direction. (12) To conclude, both practice and theory are very vital to achieve our goals.,Where There Is a Will, There Is a Way 1)怎样理解“有志者事竟成” 2）试举例说明,(1) The proverb “Where there is a will, there is a way” has been generally ac

19、cepted. (2) It tells us that as long as a person possesses a strong will he will certainly accomplish a task no matter how difficult it is. (3) The truth of it is deep and profound.,(4) There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (5) A case in point is that Karl Marx, who spent five years

20、on his greatest work Das Kapital, won the respect of people all over the world. (6) This is close to suggest that a strong will is a vital factor to ones final success. (7) For another example, Cao Xueqin was confronted with great hardship in his pursuit for literature, but he finally completed his

21、world-famous book Dreams of Red Chamber. (8) If he had given up on the half way, we would have no opportunity to appreciate such excellence. (9) Moreover, among college students, those who persist in studying hard and make it eventually are also good examples.,(10) Judging from the evidence offered,

22、 we might safely draw the conclusion that if we wish to succeed, we must firstly have a resolution and remember the saying “Where there is a will, there is a way”. (11) But what is worth noting is that a strong will should be accompanied by a right direction leading to the success. (12) To conclude,

23、 whatever you do, please remember “Where there is a will, there is a way”.,观点论证型模板（三） (1)Nowadays still many people believe/For years many people have such thought that/ Nowadays there still exists/there are still many people who与论点冲突的背景观点或现象.(2)进一步说明背景观点或现象.(3)However,论点.(4) The following reasons c

24、an support the argument. (5)Undoubtedly,论据一.(6)进一步说明论据一.(7) Furthermore/Moreover,论据二.(8)For example,支持论据二的事例,/进一步说明论据二.(9)In addition/Whats more,论据三. (10)All mentioned above tell us that重申观点.(11)进一步阐述论点.(12)Therefore, we should正确态度或做法。,It Pays to Be Honest 1) 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2) 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实, Nowada

25、ys there still exists many dishonest phenomena, such as cheating, overcharging, producing or selling fake commodities, etc. (2) The main reason for these dishonesties is only to make a huge profit. (3) However, in the long run, dishonesty can not bring any profit and it pays to be honest. (4) The fo

26、llowing reasons can support the argument（提出观点段）,(5) Undoubtedly, being honest is not only beneficial to others but also to ourselves. (6) If you are honest, those who associate with you will certainly profit from you and in turn you will win trust and respect from them. (7)Furthermore, honesty can b

27、uild up a more stable and harmonious society. (8) For example, Singapore, which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate. (9) In addition, being honest is essential for a countrys survival in the modern world, since only an honest country would have won su

28、pport from other countries if it were in trouble.（观点论证段）,(10) All mentioned above tell us that it pays to be honest. (11) Only in an honest society can people enjoy their life really. (12) Therefore, we should foster the spirit of honesty and let dishonesty have no place to stay in our society (总结观点

29、段）,Practice,Wealth and Happiness 1）每个人都想获得财富，财富似乎就是幸福，其实不然 2）世界上有许多东西是财富换不来的。试论证说明该观点,(1) Nowadays still many people believe that wealth equals happiness. (2) They deeply believe that they will surely lead a happy life with a great amount of money. (3) However, wealth is not necessarily associated w

30、ith happiness. (4) The following reasons can support the argument.,(5) Undoubtedly, good health is more important than wealth to a happy life. (6) For example, if someone is diagnosed with an incurable disease, he can only buy pills and medical treatment to extend his life no matter how much money h

31、e has, but cannot regain the health. (7) Furthermore, there is a kind of happiness that is indispensable and priceless, but it can not be bought by money. (8) For example, love, no matter in what kinds of forms, can only be won by your genuine emotion. (9) In addition, too much wealth, if not proper

32、ly used, may encourage its weak-willed owner to be addicted to some harmful habits and bring about his ruin.,(10) All mentioned above tell us that wealth does not equal happiness. (11) We cant only count on wealth to obtain happiness. (12) Therefore, we should take a proper attitude towards wealth a

33、nd make best use of wealth to pursue happiness.,句子翻译练习（观点论证型文章常用句式造句）,（）我认为玩电脑游戏不仅浪费时间，而且危害身体健康 As far as I am concerned, playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health. （）就我个人经验来看，大多数公司倾向于雇佣高学历的人 According to my personal experience, most companies are inclined to empl

34、oy the people with high diploma. （3）我深信预防比治疗更重要。 I am greatly convinced/assured/I firmly believe that prevention is better than cure. （）在众多观点之中，我偏向于知识比文凭更重要的观点 Among various kinds of viewpoints, I prefer the one that knowledge is more important than diploma. （）依我来看，这种观点站不住脚 In my opinion/To my mind,

35、 this point of view doesnt hold water.,（）对于这些不诚信的行为，有很多原因可以解释 There are many reasons explaining these dishonest behaviors. （）主要的原因是很多人在追求他们自身利益的过程中忽略了传统的道德原则 The main/chief reason is that countless people neglect the traditional moral principles in pursuit of their own interests. （）更重要的是我们缺乏有效的法律和监管

36、制度，所以很多不诚信的人能够逃脱惩罚 Whats more, we lack effective laws and regulations of supervision so that a great many dishonest people can escape punishment. （）因此不诚信的问题变的非常严重 As a result, the problem of dishonesty becomes very serious. （）不诚信的行为有如下几个原因 The reasons of dishonest behaviors lie in several aspects. /

37、 Many factors contribute to ,观点论证型常用句型,（1）Its fairly well known thatplays an important role in/Its fairly well known thatis of great/vital importance to 众所周知，起着重要作用。 (2)There are many reasons explaining 解释有很多原因。 (3)Many reasons can be figured out to prove 证明有许多原因。 (4)I feel that it would be benefici

38、al if 我觉得如果将会很有好处。 (5)There is no denying that无庸置疑。 (6)We have good reason to believe that 我们有（充分/正当）理由相信。 (7)The above analysis naturally leads us to the following possible conclusion that上面的分析很自然地使我们得出结论,(8)Considering the possible reasons, it is rational for us to conclude鉴于以上可能的原因，我们可以得出结论。 (9)N

39、ow people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/be aware that现在越来越多的人开始意识到/接受。 (10)Obviously,If we want to do sth, it is essential that显然，如果我们想做，是很必要的。 (11)There is no evidence to suggest that没有证据表明。,(12)Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea tha

40、t也许到了重新认识态度/看法的时候了。 (13) It may be true that, but it doesnt mean that可能.是对的，但者并不意味着 (14)It is natural to believe that, but we shouldnt ignore that认为是很自然的，但我们不应忽视。 (15)It is time to take the advice of and to put special emphasis on the improvement of该是采纳的建议，并对的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。,利弊选择型,要求：对一个论题的正反两个方面加以阐述分

41、析，进一步做出选择，推导出自己认为合理的解决该问题的模式,写作步骤,Para 1：简述事件 Para 2：阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明 主题句理由/举例1理由/举例2理由/举例3 Para 3：阐述提纲中列举的另一种看法，给出理由或者举例说明 主题句理由/举例1理由/举例2理由/举例3 Para 4：表明自己的观点，结束全文。,模版一,提出观点段 (1). When it comes to 谈论主题, there is no complete agreement among people. /When asked谈论主题, different people will giv

42、e different answers/offer different views/have different choices/preferences. (2) Some people take it for granted/believe/claim/choose 一种观点/选择/倾向. (3) However, others maintain/argue/prefer/would rather 另一种观点/选择/倾向.,对比论证段 （4） Those people who hold the first opinion/make the former choice/have the fir

43、st preference believe 观点/选择/倾向一的理由一. (5) (In addition,) in their eyes/they insist/they maintain/they point out观点/选择/倾向一的理由二. (6)However, still others think differently/do not agree this/have different choices/preferences. (7) In their opinions观点/选择/倾向二的理由一. (8) Besides, they argue观点/选择/倾向二的理由二.,总结观点

44、段 (9) Weighing up these two arguments/choices/preferences或其它具体选择/倾向, I prefer/am inclined to/would rather choose the former/latter one 或两种具体选择之一. (10) (For one thing,) 理由一 (11) For another/Furthermore/Moreover/whats more, 理由二/进一步说明理由一. (12)Considering these/Taking above-mentioned factors into consid

45、eration, we/I may reasonably conclude/I suggest/I think 重申观点. /In a word, 提出建议。,2005年12月作文: Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below :

46、1名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同 3我认为,Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? (1) When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, there is no complete agreement among people. (2) Some people take it for granted that university campus should embrace tourists acros

47、s the country. (3) However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.（提出观点段）,(4) Those people who hold the first opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness. (5) In addition, they insist that no university has the

48、right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds because it is public land. (6) However, still others think differently. (7) In their opinions, too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university. (8) Besides, they argue that these tourists will destroy the quiet environme

49、nt and influence students normal study.（对比论证段）,(9) Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion. (10) For one thing, it can enable high school students to get more information about the university and have better preparation for their choosing to get into the university. (11) For ano

50、ther, a university should be an open place and impart the spirit of openness to its students. (12) Considering these, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists. (总结观点段),Letters or Discussions? 1)有些学生认为讲授式教学模式更适合自己 2）另一些学生则更喜欢讨论式教学方式 3）我的看法,（1） When it comes to

51、which kind of teaching styles they like, lectures or discussions, different people will have different preferences. (2) Some people like lectures addressed to them. (3) However, others prefer discussions among all the students.,(4) Those people who have the first preference believe that teachers are

52、 the most knowledgeable persons in their own fields, so lectures addressed by them are the best way of teaching in universities. (5) In addition, in their eyes, teachers can teach students about theoretical knowledge and practical skills through lectures.,(6) However, still others think differently.

53、 (7) In their opinions, discussions can promote students ability of independent thinking and create a free and democratic atmosphere of learning. (8) Besides, they argue that discussions enable nearly all the students to be involved in the teaching process rather than just take notes passively.,(9)

54、Weighing up these two preferences, I prefer the former one. (10) For one thing, time is limited in the class, so lectures which can save time and energy are better. (11) For another, students can master the required knowledge and broaden their visions by listening to the lectures. (12) Taking above-

55、mentioned factors into consideration, we may reasonably conclude that lectures are much more suitable than discussion.,模版二,提出观点段 （1）Quite a few/a lot of people believe/take it for granted that 某种观点或做法. (2) Even some people 进一步说明该观点或做法. (3) However, I hold the entirely different view./I dont approve/

56、favor 这种观点或做法. /I dont think 该观点或做法的不当之处 /(1) (Nowadays/In recent years,) 一种现象. (2) Some people 一些人的看法或做法, while others另一些人的看法或做法. (3) As to me, I prefer to/am in favor of the former/latter (opinion).,反面论证段 (4) Of course, 我不赞同观点的合理性. (5) For example, 支持其合理性的例子. /(Also,) 进一步阐述其合理性. (6) But it dont me

57、an/it is worth noting that 我不赞同观点的不足. ( in their minds, Others maintain; in their eyes, 对于这种现象/对于解决该问题/对于该社会变化，一些人认为,在他们看来。其他人则认为，在他们看来。 Personally, I side with the former/latter opinion. 就我个人而言，我支持前/后一种观点。,I am of the opinion that priority should be given to我赞成首先。 When we consider A versus B on the

58、 basis of , shouldnt we think that the latter/former is a better? 在的基础上考虑A和B，难道我们不认为后者/前者是一种比较好的? With the development of , A will prove to hold greater superiority over B. 随着的发展，A将比B占有更大的优越性。 It may be briefly summed up as follows. 简而言之，总结如下。 From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the c

59、onclusion that综上所述，我们可以得出结论。,From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second. 在我看来，支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更合理。 I cannot entirely agree with the idea that 我无法完全同意这一观点。 In my opinion, it is more advisable to do than to do 在我个人看来，做比做更明智。 This case has aroused echoes throughout the country, with more and more people following its lead, but ideas about it vary widely. 这个事件在全国产生了反响，也有很多人纷纷效仿，但是人们对它的看法却极不相同。 The other side of the coin has voiced