人教版英语必修5：Unit1periodⅳwriting.ppt

1、Period ,Writing,原句1 John Snow was a famous doctor in Londonso expert, indeed ( 插 入 语 ), that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.(教材 P2)约翰斯诺是伦敦一位著名的医生他的 确医术精湛，因而成了维多利亚女王的私人大夫。,点评,这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成：,John Snow was a famous doctor in London. He was expert.,He attended Queen Victoria as h

2、er personal physician. 合并之第一步：由于句和句之间有“如此以至 于”的逻辑关系，可以用“so.that.”将其合并：He was so,expert that he attended Queen Victoria as her personal physician.,合并之第二步：省去第句的 he was，改用破折号引出后,面的内容，再在其后加入插入语。,仿写,张老师是个热心的老师。他那么善良，我想，当他的学,生遇到麻烦时他一定乐意帮助他们。,(提示：热心的 warm-hearted),_ _ 李平是我们班一位用功的学生。他那么勤奋，我想不到,晚上 11 点他不会上床睡

3、觉的。,( 提示：用功的，勤奋的 hard-working/diligent; 直到,才 not.till/until.),_ _,Mr.Zhang is a warmhearted teacherso kind, I think/I believe/ I suppose, that he is sure to help his students when they are in trouble.,Li Ping is a hardworking boy in my classso diligent, I suppose, that he never goes to bed until 11

4、at night.,原句2,Although he had tried to ignore them, all his mathematical,calculations led to the same conclusion：that the earth was not the centre of the solar system.(教材 P7)虽然他曾经试着不去理睬那 些数字，然而他所有的数学计算都得出了一个相同的结论：地 球不是太阳系的中心。 点评,这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成： He had tried to ignore them.,All his mathematical calc

5、ulations led to the same conclusion. The earth was not the centre of the solar system.,合并之第一步：句和句之间有“尽管但是”,的逻辑关系，我们可以用 although 将其合并。,合并之第二步：句是解释说明 conclusion 的具体内容，,可以用冒号加 that 从句充当同位语从句。 仿写,虽然她不相信别人说的话，可她所收集的证据得出的结,论是：她的实验结果是错误的。,(提示：收集证据 collect evidence(s),_ _ _,Though she didnt believe what oth

6、er people said, the evidences that she collected led to the conclusion: that the result of her experiment was wrong.,他很聪明，但他不勤奋。他从这学期所经历的失败中得出,的结论是：不劳不获。,(提示：经历失败 experience the failure; 不劳不获 no pains,no gains.),_ _ _,Though he was very clever, he didnt work hard and all his failures that he experie

7、nced in this term led to the conclusion: that no pains, no gains.,原句3,He placed a fixed sun at the centre of the solar system with the planets going round it and only the moon still going round the,earth.(教材 P7)他把太阳固定在太阳系的中心位置上，而行星则 围绕着太阳转，只有月球仍然绕着地球转。 点评,这个长句是由三个简单句合并而成：,He placed a fixed sun at th

8、e centre of the solar system. He had the planets going round it.,He only had the moon still going round the earth.,合并之第一步：句和句之间有并列的逻辑关系，可以 用 and 将其合并：He had the planets going round it and only (had),the moon still going round the earth.,合并之第二步：句和句之间有伴随关系，可用“with,宾语宾补”的复合结构来表示。 仿写,当你步入校园，在你面前是一个种着各种花

9、草的大花坛,和两幢高大的楼房。(提示：花坛 flower bed),_ _ _,When you enter the school, you can see in front of you a big flower bed with various kinds of flowers and grass growing in it and two large buildings.,他看到花朵在点头，叶子在跳舞，风儿正在柔声歌唱。,_ _,He saw flowers nodding and leaves dancing with the wind singing softly.,描述一位科学家

10、本单元出现的相关词汇：,scientist (n.科学家), expert (n.专家,adj. 熟练的；经验或知,识丰富的), neither.nor. (既不也不), every time (每次),not.until (直到才),be linked to (与相关), be to blame,( 该 受 责 备 ), prevent.from doing ( 阻止 ),be strict with,(对严格的),be absorbed in (专注于),put forward (提出),be exposed to (暴露在),announce with certainty (肯定地宣布)

11、,apart from ( 除 之 外 ),draw a conclusion ( 总 结 ),make,contributions to (对做出贡献) 本单元出现的相关句式： 1Who put forward a theory about.？谁提出了关于的 理论？ 2John Snow was.so expert.that.约翰斯诺是他如此 专业以至于,3 To prevent. from., John Snow suggested that. 为了阻,止发生， 约翰斯诺建议 4Only if.did.只有，才能,描写人物的作文，内容一般包括“概、貌、育、平、估” 五个方面，即概况(出生年

12、月，年龄，性别，背景等)，外貌/性 格(高矮胖瘦，性格等)，教育，生平(经历，成就等)，评估(影 响，评价等)。,Einstein, the world-famous expert on physics, was born in,Ulm, Germany, in March 1879 and died in April, 1935.,He was so naughty when he was young that neither his parents nor his teacher thought that he could be a scientist. However, it seeme

13、d that he was curious about everything.Every time he faced a question, he would never be satisfied until he found the answer, which was linked to his success in the future. In 1895, he failed the college entrance examination, in which his poor history and language were to blame.To prevent himself,fr

14、om failing again, he faced the challenge bravely, began to be strict with himself and was absorbed in study.Finally, he defeated others and entered ETH.In 1905, he put forward the Theory of Relativity, which was a hit in scientific field.During the outbreak of the Second World War, he was exposed to

15、 various dangers.He announced with certainty that he was against war.Apart from this, he contributed his works to raise money for the poor. It is not difficult to draw a conclusion that Einstein has made,great contributions to the world in his whole life.,结构分析：,第一段描写爱因斯坦的概况； 第二段描写他的性格；,第三段描写他的教育和生平；

16、 第四段是对他的评价。 亮点点评：,1应用了丰富多变的句型，使文章很有层次感。 2叙述生平按照时间顺序来写，有条理。,1介绍人物特征时，多使用一般现在时。若描述人物具体 的过去行为，或描述人物已过世，则使用一般过去时。,2积累常用的描写人物外貌和性格的词汇。,3描写人物性格特征时，可使用多种句型结构，丰富人物,形象。,4可使用副词或“withn.”的状语结构进一步描写人物,的行为动作。,5使用同位语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等丰富人物信,息。,必背词汇,1be born in a poor family 出生于贫穷家庭 2attend school 上学,3at the age of 在岁时,

17、4during his childhood 在他童年时 5sense of humour 幽默感,6be always ready to 总是乐于 7modest and honest 谦虚诚实 8be regarded as 被认为是,9have a gift for 在方面有天赋,10work hard at 致力于,11devote ones life to 致力于 12graduate from 从毕业 13take an active part in 积极参加,14open-minded and optimistic 乐观开朗 15be admitted to 被录取；考入 16go

18、 abroad for further studies 出国深造 17be honored for 因而受到尊敬,18dream of being a. 梦想成为一位 19have a strong interest in 对有浓厚兴趣,常用句式,1soadj./adv.that 如此以至于 2adj.enough to do sth.足够去做某事 3a person withn.一个有的人,【小试牛刀】,请根据以下信息写一篇英语短文。,写作内容,钟南山，1936 年 10 月出生于福建厦门，是治疗呼吸道疾 病的专家。他对自己在工作方面要求很严格，每次遇到问题， 不找到解决方法，决不放弃。20

19、03 年，SARS 袭击了广东省， 他不怕暴露在危险中，勇于面对挑战。终于他发现了一种病毒， 这正是罪魁祸首，从而阻止了疾病传播。我们可以得出结论， 他对人类做出了巨大贡献。 写作要求,只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容。,参考词汇：呼吸道疾病 respiratory disease,参考范文：,Zhong Nanshan, an expert on curing respiratory disease, was born in Xiamen, Fujian Province, in Oct.1936.He was so strict with himself in work that every

20、 time he faced a problem, he would never give up until he found the answer.In 2003 when SARS hit Guangdong Province, he was not afraid of being exposed to danger and faced the challenge bravely.Finally he found a virus which was to blame and managed to prevent the disease from spreading. Therefore,

21、we can draw a conclusion that he has made great contributions to the human beings.,如何以约30词概括短文要点,1故事类：The author argues that _ ( 故事主旨) by telling the story of _ ( 故事 主人公), who _ (主人公的经历) 2议论/说明类：The passage mainly conveys that _ _ (议论的道理或说明的现象) by showing the _ _ (例子、报道、数据等) that _ (具体的内容或影响、作用等),【小

22、试牛刀】,1阅读下面的短文，然后以约 30 词概括文章的大意。,In one way of thinking, failure is a part of life.In another way, failure may be a way towards success.Edison, the inventor of the light bulb, made hundreds of models that failed before he found the right way to make one.Abraham Lincoln, the famous American president,

23、 lost elections more times than he won them! He never gave up in the face of failure but kept trying and was eventually elected to Congress and then the presidency.,So what? First, always think about your failure.What caused it? Were conditions right? Were you in top from yourself? What can you chan

24、ge so things will go right next time?,Second, is the goal youre trying to reach the right one? Try to do some thinking about what your real goals may be.Think about,this question.“If I do succeed this time, where will it get me ？”,This may help you prevent failure in things you shouldnt be doing any

25、way.,The third thing to bear in mind about failure is that its part of life.Learn to “live with yourself” even though you may have failed.Remember, “You cant win them all.”,2阅读下面的短文，然后以约 30 词概括文章的大意。 I have a friend Monty Roberts who owns a horse ranch (牧马 场) in San Ysidro.When he was a senior, he was asked to write a,paper about what he wanted to be and do when he grew up. The next day he handed it in to the teacher.On the front was a,la