记叙文写作专练.ppt

1、【写作任务和要求】,纳尔逊曼德拉(Nelson Mandela)是一位著名的黑人领袖，他的事迹鼓舞和感动了许多人。请以Life of Nelson Mandela为题，写一篇记叙文，讲述纳尔逊曼德拉(Nelson Mandela)的生平事迹。记叙文的写作在行文时往往要按照一定的顺序进行。写人时，要注意介绍人物的身世、经历和事迹等；叙事时，要写清楚事情发生与发展的过程或事情发生的前因后果等。 根据写作要求和提示，本文应该以时间为线索，叙述发生在纳尔逊曼德拉(Nelson Mandela)身上的大事、要事。所以时间线索就是文章的提纲，要根据提纲扩展相关要点，运用恰当的连接词，形成一篇完整的文章。,

2、【写作分析与指导】,本文在介绍纳尔逊曼德拉(Nelson Mandela)的生平事迹时，需要注意以下几个方面： 1. 认真审题：本次写作要求以时间为顺序，搜集和整理相关的信息，组织和运用语言进行表达。 2. 写作提示：把握要点，有所删减，依据提示，列出提纲，充分运用连接词，构成完整的文章段落。 3. 时态与人称分析：时态应以一般过去时为主；人称应以第三人称为主。 4. 篇章结构：本文大体上应该分为三个段落：第一段为总体描述；第二段为具体介绍；第三段为总结评价。,【写作素材储备】,1. 写作中可能使用的高级词语有： 获得法律学位get ones law degree 建立政府set up a g

3、overnment 被判处五年监禁 be sentenced to five years in prison 被从中释放出来be released from 在某人七十多岁的时候in ones seventies 被选作总统be elected President,2. 写作中可能使用的高级句式有： 当白人政府在南非建立后，纳尔逊曼德拉极力反对。 When the white government was set up in South Africa, Nelson Mandela was strongly against it. 他因为是ANC的其中一位领导人而被判入狱。 He was se

4、ntenced to prison for being one of the ANC leaders. 这就是曼德拉，一位把毕生精力全部投入到非洲人民自由解放斗争中的伟人。 Such is Nelson Mandela, a great man who devoted all himself to the fight for the freedom of the African people.,【范文】,Life of Nelson Mandela Nelson Mandela, the former South Africa President, was born near Transkei

5、 in 1918. At the age of 19, he entered a university but did not complete his degree. Three years later, he got his law degree. In 1944, he formed the ANC Youth League. In 1952, he set up a law office to help poor black people in Johannesburg, but later on, the law office was closed by the government

6、 because he attacked anti-black laws. When the white government was set up in South Africa, Nelson Mandela was strongly against it. In 1963, a building was blown down by the ANC and he was sentenced to prison for life on Robben Island for being one of the ANC leaders. He was sentenced to prison for 26 years. Then in his 70s, he was elected President of the ANC. After two years, he was honored the Nobel Peace Prize for his work for the black people. In 1994, when Nelson Mandela was already 76, he was elected President of South Africa. Such