Unit 3-Writing.ppt

1、Writing,Such writing approaches the topic from a brief description of phenomena typical of the issue in question.,Back,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Pattern of Writing,This part, as the main body of writing, serves to probe into deep-seated problems behind the phenomena as mentioned above.,As a conclusion, the writ

2、ing comes up with some constructive suggestion as to what can be done about the very issue.,Phenomena,Problems behind them,Suggestion,Back,Pattern of Writing,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Example abridged from the text,Topic: Longing for a New Welfare System Outlines: 现行福利制度下的种种现象； 现行福利制度的深层问题； 作者的建议。,Back,Pattern

3、of Writing,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Longing for a New Welfare System,Para 1 Under the present welfare system, a client is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of their livings, most clients bleed the system for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become det

4、ectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.,Back,Pattern of Writing,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present system can boil down to three. One comes from little tru

5、st between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to en

6、dure a lecture from,Back,Pattern of Writing,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,the caseworker first and then have a long wait for the main welfare office to approve of the repair to it. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from

7、welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made.,Back,Pattern of Writing,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Para 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a lawyer who can act as a cham

8、pion for the rights of clients because the system so easily lends itself to abuse. Clients like me should also fight for the interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guilt or fear.,Back,Writing Practice,写作

9、实践,随 笔,写作模式,Dynamic Writing,For More,An American educationist once said, “No amount of change with a cart will produce a car.” The same is true for writing in English. If our focus is merely on the target words, it is like taking apart the car to find its parts for our old cart. There will be no way

10、 to write well in English. So our best course of action is to take their pattern of writing as a model to follow. That is just where our dynamic writing enters.,Topic: Longing for a Purer Climate of Doing Business Outlines: 1. 经商中的不良现象； 2. 商业领域的深层次问题； 3. 你的建议。,Back,Writing Practice,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Lon

11、ging for a Purer Climate of Doing Business,Para 1 Under the present welfare system, a client is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of their livings, most clients bleed the system for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspic

12、ious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.,Para 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of their livings, most clients bleed the system for more money

13、. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.,Para 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed

14、 to cheat. Faced with the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money. On the other hand, caseworkers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every client. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extreme

15、ly hard to accept the reality.,Para 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money. On the other hand, customers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious o

16、f every businessman. For the clients like me who opt to live a life of honesty, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.,Para 1 In the current climate of business, a businessman is supposed to cheat. Faced with the worsening of competition, many businessmen bleed customers for more money

17、. On the other hand, customers, due to being often made fools of, have become detectives, suspicious of every businessman. For the businessmen like me who opt to do business in an honest way, however, it is extremely hard to accept the reality.,Back,Writing Practice,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Para 2 If taken ser

18、iously, the problems with the present system can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunge

19、r and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between caseworkers and clients. That is why I have a strong feeling

20、 of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the pr

21、esent business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the caseworker visits my family. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of

22、us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the cus

23、tomer questions the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that government cuts in welfare have resulted in hunger and suffering for most of us. Each time my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present busi

24、ness can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the customer questions the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that this field is hit with practices of trading power for money. Each time

25、my wheelchair breaks down, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Para 2 If taken seriously, the problems with the present business can boil down to three. One comes from little trust between customers and businessmen. That is why I have a strong feeling of guilt whenever the customer question

26、s the quality of a product. Another arises from the fact that this field is hit with practices of trading power for money. Each time I want to expand my business, for example, I have to endure a lecture from,Back,Writing Practice,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,the caseworker first and then have a long wait for the m

27、ain welfare office to approve of the repair to it. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being ques

28、tioned and accounting for every penny they have made.,the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that period I could do nothing but lie in bed. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away fr

29、om welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made.,the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that per

30、iod I could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a gradual shift away from welfare. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they hav

31、e made.,the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that period I could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a severe punishment on the dishonest in doing bus

32、iness. If clients make some money on their own, they have to go through the embarrassing situation of being questioned and accounting for every penny they have made.,the official in charge first and then have a long wait for the department concerned to approve of my application. During that period I

33、 could do nothing but secure its approval with money. And worst of all, there is no provision in the law for a severe punishment on the dishonest in doing business. If profit-minded people make money in an illegal way, they have little need to go through any legal process of being questioned or acco

34、unting for the money they have made illegally.,Back,Writing Practice,写作实践,随 笔,写作模式,Para 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a lawyer who can act as a champion for the rights of clients because the system so easily lends itself to abuse. Clients like me should also fight for th

35、e interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guilt or fear.,Para 3 In the response to the problems above, there needs to be a code of rules that can leave no room for dishonesty in doing business because the the present rules so easily lend themselves to abuse. Clients like me should also fight for the interests of their own. And above all, I long for a new welfare system that will encourage clients to develop their talents without any guil