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1、中考英语总复习作文,优秀水平标准,1、能准确运用词汇和句型结构,较生动和详细地描述情境或叙述所给话题,能准确自如地表达态度和感情。 2、能用流畅的语言组织常见体裁的短文,逻辑清楚,结构完整,层次清晰,内容充实,文体恰当。 3、能在写作中恰当地引用资料,能应用谚语、俗语等,能清楚地阐述自己的观点和评述他人的观点,具有一定的人文意识。,学会审题 写人物 写事件 写物件 写场所 写感想,03年:To be a lovely Shanghainese (做可爱的上海人) 04年:Leaving school(毕业时分) 05年:Growing pains and gains (成长的烦恼与快乐) 06
2、年:I have a dream (我有一个梦想) 07年:Things I hate to do (我不喜欢) 08年:Love around me (我身边的爱) 09年:I want to do something for my school (我想为学校做点事) 10年:I am proud of myself (我为自己感到自豪) 11年:I am a member of _ (我是的一员),12年:Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much ab
3、out the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. (假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在 意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信,谈谈你 的看法,并给她一些建议。),确定模式 以我为主 凸显学校 凸显家庭 凸显未来 夹叙夹议,把握要求,要用正确的时态 要用恰当的词语 要用清晰的思路 要用不同的句子 要用合理的连接 要用充分的情感,框架,As we all know First, Second, After that, Later on, Last, ,过度,whats more, in addition
4、 表示递进 in fact, as a matter of fact 表示承接 as a result 表示结果 for example, in other words 表示列举 on the other hand 表示对比 to ones joy/ surprise 表示反应,结论,in my opinion 表示想法 in return for that 表示回报 anyway, needless to say 表示强调 generally speaking 表示总结 in a word, on the whole all in all 表示结论,Our class meeting was
5、 held last Sunday. We invited many teachers to our meeting. First we gave a lot of performances, such as singing and dancing. Then our class teacher spoke at the meeting. Whats more, she also took a lot of photos of us. On the whole, we had a good time. Needless to say we will always remember the la
6、st class meeting.,My Opinions about the Internet,Nowadays the Internet plays an important part in our life. It is not only fast but convenient as well. We can do many things with the Internet. First of all, we can get the latest news. Secondly, we can find and download information that we need. What
7、s more, we can send emails to friends. We can even play games and watch various matches on it. In a word, we cant work or live well without the Internet. (77words),My Opinions about traveling,Of all the ways of traveling, I like traveling by train best. First, I neednt worry about traffic jams. Seco
8、nd, the trains are fast and comfortable. You can kill your time in different ways. You can just sit and read something, or you can enjoy the scenery out of the window. Third, you can have a meal in the buffet car or sleep in the sleeping car. All in all, traveling by train is my first choice when ma
9、king a decision.,My Opinions about School Uniforms,In my opinion, school uniform rule must be obeyed. First of all, we dont have to spend time thinking about what to wear every day. Second, we dont need to worry about competing with others based on how we look, either. In addition, we will be carefu
10、l about how we behave when we wear uniforms because people can easily identify us. In brief, uniforms should be required in schools.,My Opinions about computers,Before computers were widely used, our life was simple and a bit dull. Everything had to be done by hand so that it wasted a lot of time. H
11、owever, it all changed when we started using computers. Projects can be done on computers, so it saves us time and money. Besides, weve been able to know more since more information is available on the Internet. We are glad to see that these changes have brought us much convenience and enabled us to
12、 work faster. In one word, computers have changed our life dramatically.,Beautiful sentences,你对生活微笑,生活也会用微笑回报你。 If you smile at life, life will smile back at you. 朋友,是在最后可以给你力量的人。 Friend is who can give you strength at last. 伤痛其实是一种财富,它让你学会更好地去把握和珍惜你爱的人。 Sadness is kind of treasure, which makes you
13、better to hold and cherish the people you love. 别人都走开的时候,朋友仍与你在一起。 A friend walks in when the rest of the world walks out.,真正的朋友会与你一同度过困难、伤心和烦恼的时刻。 Your forever friend gets you through the hard times, the sad times, and the confused times. 有时每个人都需要一只可以握住的手和一颗信任的心。 Sometimes all a person needs is a h
14、and to hold and a heart to understand. 生命是艰难的,而你更坚强。 Life is tough, but youre tougher. 不管遇到什么困难,你最终都能克服。 Youll make it through whatever comes along. 善待我们的地球,不要愚弄自然母亲。 Treat our earth in a friendly way, dont fool around with mother nature.,Sayings and proverbs,On self-help: Pride goes before a fall 骄
15、者必败 . A good beginning is half done.良好的开端是成功的一半。 Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.自信是走向成功的第一步。 Custom makes all things easy.有个好习惯,事事皆不难。 Great hopes make great man.伟大的抱负造就伟大人物。 Honesty is the best policy.做人诚信为本。 Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst.抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打
16、算。,Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。 If a thing is worth doing, its worth doing well. 值得做的是就值得做好。 Where there is life, there is hope. 生活充满了希望。/留得青山在,不怕没柴烧 On entertainment: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只用功不玩耍,聪明孩子也变傻。 On motherhood: A mothers love never changes.
17、 母爱永恒。,On health: A close mouth catches no flies.病从口入。 An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果,不用请医生。 Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起身体好。 Light supper makes long life.晚餐少吃人长寿。 On friendship: A friend is easier lost than found.得朋友难,失朋友易。 A friend is never
18、known till a man has need. 需要之时方知友。,On reading: A good book is the best of friends, the same today and forever.一本好书,相伴一生。 By reading we enrich the mind, by conversation we polish it.读书使人充实,交谈使人精明。 Choose an author as you choose a friend.择书如择友。 On life: We know not what is good until we have lost it.
19、好东西,失去了才明白。 Variety is the spice of life.丰富多彩是生活的调味品。 Life is just like a bowl of cherries.生活犹如一盘樱桃。 Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. 生活没有目标等于航行没有指南针。 Pleasant hours fly past.快乐时光去如飞。,Express one meaning in various ways,More and more young people enjoy computers. are keen on
20、This photo helps me to remember my grandmother. reminds me of He didnt know what to say at that time. was totally at a loss Another two railway lines will open to the traffic in two or three days. a couple of Many people were delayed by the traffic jam. A number of because of/due to People are doing
21、 their best to help the poor. trying their best/doing what they can/ doing everything they can,Suddenly the lights went out. All of a sudden She gave many excuses to refuse my request. various Ted is a nice person. Whenever I have problems, he will help me to solve it patiently. warm-hearted/helpful
22、/caring/ thoughtful/a person who is ready to lend a hand He loves reading books and playing the violin. as well as/andas well Sunday will be kept free for you to enjoy the sights of one of the worlds most beautiful cities. fantastic/amazing/attractive/charming/maganificent In fact, I have no interes
23、t in maths . As a matter of fact/To tell you the truth,We visited New York before we flying home. paid a visit to She promised to write to them once a month. made a promise The very thing that I want to say is that he once helped me a lot with my English. gave me a great help My father has collected
24、 a lot of records. has got a huge record collection Lets study harder to get better marks in the exam. redouble our efforts do better in schoolwork,As soon as we arrived there, the guide warmly welcomed us and took us around. gave us a warm welcome I saw little or nothing of him after graduation fro
25、m primary school. after I graduated from primary school They encouraged me to try again. have another try/give it another try He is very proud of his childrens achievements. takes great pride in We left so that my aunt can have some rest. took our leave,The lecture mainly aims to improve your writin
26、g. The main aim of the lecture is to improve your writing. My grandpa has been dead for a year. Its been a year since my grandpas death. Reading is good for our mind. Reading does good to our mind. You read more and you gain more. The more you read, the more you gain. Now we can buy digital TVs, com
27、puters and even cars. But we couldnt buy them twenty years ago. But these things couldnt be bought,I found that she had interesting ideas. Such ideas would bring happiness to us at times. I found that she had interesting ideas which would bring happiness to us at times. Its a very good film. I have
28、never seen a better film. This is the best film I have ever seen. My parents were satisfied with my progress. They agreed to take me to the Disneyland. My parents were so satisfied with my progress that they ,I hate cooking most. What I hate most is cooking./Cooking is what I hate most./Cooking is s
29、omething that I hate most.,Tips,学会审题,直奔主题 亮出观点,借问发挥 逻辑严密,衔接自然 首尾呼应,画龙点睛,注意,审题要切中题意 描述要条理清楚 表达要语句通顺 书写要清晰规范 身份要绝对避免 字数要力争达到,各类题材作文,Mr Li teaches us geography. He is tall and thin. Though Mr Li is in his fifties, he is still very active. He likes traveling very much and often shows us the photos of ma
30、ny historical interests he took during his trips. He has a great knowledge in geography, and it makes his lessons very interesting. Most of us are fond of his lessons, because they let us know the world better. Besides, he is always friendly and kind to us all. In a word, Mr Li is my favorite teache
31、r.,MY TEACHER,As we all know, the Great Wall is located in North China. It is 6,700 kilometers long and thus known as the “10,000-li Great Wall”. The building of the wall went on for more than 2,000 years, from 700 BC to 1,400 AD. Thousands of people lost their lives while building it. As one of the
32、 seven wonders in the world, the Great Wall was used to protect the Chinese nation from the enemies in history. It is our pride and shows the wisdom of the Chinese people.,THE GREAT WALL,My hobby is collecting stamps. I took up this hobby on my twelfth birthday when my uncle gave me some wonderful s
33、tamps as a present. Some of them were Chinese, but most of them were foreign. They looked so beautiful that I decided to collect stamps from then on. So far I have collected thousands of stamps from different countries. I not only get fun out of stamps but enrich my knowledge as well. I have learned
34、 a lot about history, culture and customs of the countries they come from.,MY HOBBY,Dancing is my hobby. When I was a little girl, I always admired the girls dancing with beautiful dresses and even wanted to be a member of them. Soon I joined a dancing group at the age of six. I attended dancing cla
35、sses every Saturday. Dancing is a good way to express my feelings. My teacher told me dancers must show our best part to the audience even though we feel bad. From then on I didnt spread bad feelings to someone else any longer. Needless to say dancing is my hobby and I will enjoy it all my life.,MY
36、HOBBY,Jim, Thank you for inviting me to the weekend party, but Im sorry to tell you that I wont be able to come. One of my friends called me from America that he would come to Shanghai this weekend. He said that he would arrive at Pudong International Airport and asked me to meet him there. During h
37、is stay in Shanghai, Ill show him around some places of interest, and even our school. How happy I will be to see him after his long absence. Hope you will have a good time with your friends at the party. Yours,A LETTER TO ,Dear Editor, Im a student of Class Two, Grade Nine. Im interested in English
38、. In my opinion, English is very useful and important to us. Thats why I try to listen to English on the radio and keep a diary every day. However, I find it not easy for me to memorize words. Besides, we have many chances to speak English, but Im very shy. So when it is my turn to speak, I often fe
39、el very nervous and I am afraid of making mistakes. No matter how hard I try, I cant improve my English. What should I do? Please give me some advice. Looking forward to your reply.,A LETTER TO ,Thanks to the open-door policy, Shanghai is developing fast. Every day thousands of tourists come here fo
40、r a visit. As students of Shanghai, we should act well to show that the city and its people are lovely. In order to be lovely Shanghainese, we should always be ready to help others. We should neither speak loudly in public places nor throw litter here and there. Especially we shouldnt cross the road
41、s when the traffic light is red. I want to be a lovely Shanghainese, and I know I must try every day.,TO BE A LOVELY SHANGHAINESE,The summer holiday is coming. To me, a 9th-grader, this means that Im leaving my school and becoming a senior high student. So it might be necessary for me to attend seve
42、ral classes to set a good base for further study. As Im good at English and physics, I plan to learn these subjects ahead of time so that I can do better in the competition in the future. Im sure to enjoy the process of learning. And the coming holiday, I think, will certainly be busy and rewarding.
43、,MY SUMMER HOLIDAY PLAN,In my opinion, its everybodys duty to do the housework. Mothers shouldnt always be responsible for the chores as they arent “machines” and they need rest as well. Too much housework will do harm to their health. I suggest children share some chores with their parents because
44、it is their duty to do housework. Besides, it can also help them develop a sense of independence and responsibility, which will surely be useful in future. Therefore, each of the family members should do his part in the housework, no matter who he is!,MY OPINIONS ABOUT HOUSEWORK,I will never make fr
45、iends with people who are selfish and dishonest and they are also the kind of people I hate most. First, I dont think theyll regard me as their real friends, and theyll always try to make use of me. Second, they wont give me a helping hand at all when Im in trouble. Besides, Im sure that they will h
46、ave little in common with me. Thats why I dont want to make friends with them.,THE PERSON I DONT LIKE TO MAKE FRIENDS WITH,The World Expo has brought us many changes. In the past two months, people around us have changed a lot, some people used to speak loudly in public, but now they pay more attent
47、ion to their behavior. And on the other hand the World Expo has showed the importance of protecting the environment. This encourages people to do many things in our daily lives, such as saving water, planting more trees and so on. These are really great changes around me. I think we should be thankf
48、ul to the World Expo. And at the same time, we should do our best to keep these great changes longer so as to make our life better.,THE CHANGES THE WORLD EXPO HAS BROUGHT,As we all know, the environment around us is becoming worse and worse. When I see someone damaging the environment, I will be ang
49、ry easily. Last Sunday, I set off for the Peoples Park with friends. When we got there,we found some children climbing the trees with the help of their parents. I felt very angry at that time. But instead of arguing with them, I persuaded the children to get down from the tree. Later, their parents
50、also learned the importance of environment. I think its our duty to take good care of our environment. If everyone does his bit of share to protect the environment, the world will become more and more beautiful. Thus we will live without anger all the time.,PROTECTING THE ENVIRONMENT,When I talk abo
51、ut the winter holiday, it will remind me of the most unforgettable thing Ive ever did in winter. Last winter, it snowed heavily. With snow here and there, the traffic was stuck and people fell on the freezing ice easily. What a mess! As a warm-hearted student, I volunteered to clear the ice. I put o
52、n my gloves, took a tool and began working in my neighborhood. Little by little, I removed the snow and ice in front of my house. Then, everybody could walk past my house with ease! Volunteering was great, and it also made others life more convenient. My volunteer work was not only unforgettable but
53、 also made my whole winter holidays meaningful.,AN UNFORGETTABLE THING,Cruel things in the world always make me angry. One of them was a piece of news about Yao Jiaxin, who killed an innocent person with a knife after his car hit her. I felt rather angry when he refuses to apologize. To make matters
54、 worse, his lawyer explained that Yao was a “piano boy” and got excited easily. I was also learning the piano and I thought it unbelievable, since the piano was always considered as a way to make us be better persons. His problem was that he only got skills from piano learning and was short of love
55、and respect. I would let my anger remind me of being a kind person all the time.,THINGS THAT MAKE ME ANGRY,With the blooming flowers, I paid my first visit to the Expo this time last year. Though I had learned something about the Expo before, I was still amazed to see it with my own eyes. Wonderful constructions impressed me deeply. The Korea Pavilion was like an ancient castle while the Macao Pavilion was like a big rabbit. Science and technology was another highlight, too. The robots in Japan Pavilion caught every ones eye including mine. The first time I visited the
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