定语从句在写作中的应用

1、定语从句,在 写作 中的应用,Writing Attributive Clause,什么是 定语?,我是一个好老师。,I am a,good,teacher.,定语,定语：用来修饰、限定、说明名词或代词的品质与特征。,什么是 定语从句?,我是一个深受学生喜爱的老师。,深受学生喜爱的！,deeply loved by the students,I am a teacher who is deeply loved by the students.,定语从句之于写作的 ？,意义,Writing,基础写作,读写任务,定语从句 名词性从句 状语从句 非谓语动词 连词,Solution,Step 1,St

2、ep 2,Step 3,基础写作,你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇快讯，报道一次比赛情况。,比赛目的：培养保护环境的意识 主 题： 废物利用创意作品大赛 组 织 者： 学生会 评选过程：1. 元月1日至2月10日 2. 有900多人参赛，提交了1,000多幅作品 3. 材料主要为废物，利用网络展示 结 果： 1. 有近200名同学分获一、二、三等奖 2. 李明用旧报纸和杂志制作的作品“保护森林，人人有责” 获得了第一名 意 义： 同学们显示了热情，提高了环保意识,她叫前面听歌的同学向中间玩游戏的同学说一声不要吵到后面睡觉的同学。,1. 同学在前面听歌。 The student was l

3、istening to music in the front. 2. 同学在中间玩游戏。 The student was playing games in the middle. 3. 同学在后面睡觉。 The student was sleeping in the back.,句子拆分,整合句子,She asked the studentwho was listening to the music in the front to tell the student who was playing games in the middle not to disturb the student wh

4、o was sleeping in the back.,翻译,Tips for Translation,Step1. 找出定语,Step2. 翻译主干,Step3. 使用定语从句翻译修饰成分,Step1: 她想嫁给一个长的帅、有钱又有车的人。 Step2: She wants to marry a man. Step3: She wants to marry a man who has a good look, much money and a car.,她想嫁给一个长得帅、有钱又有车的人。,她就是我一见钟情的那个辣妹。,Step1: 她就是我一见钟情的那个辣妹。 Step2: She is

5、the hot girl. Step3: She is the hot girl whom I had a crush on at first sight/glance.,Lets practice more!,按照步骤把下面的简单句整合成定语从句。 1. 那些只顾个人利益而滥砍树木的人应当受到惩罚。 Step1. 那些只顾个人利益而滥砍树木的人应当受到惩罚。 Step2. _ Step3. _ 2我昨天借杂志的那个图书馆很大。 Step1：我昨天借杂志的那个图书馆很大。 Step2：_ Step3：_ 3. 流过村庄的小河对他们有很大帮助。 Step1: 流过村庄的小河对他们有很大帮助。 S

6、tep2: _ Step3: _ 4. 中秋节是一个全家团圆, 赏月、吃月饼的传统节日。 Step1: 中秋节是一个全家团圆、赏月、吃月饼的传统节日。 Step2: _ Step3: _,Practice,Practice,那些只顾个人利益而滥砍树木的人应当受到惩罚。,Step1: 那些只顾个人利益而滥砍树木的人应当受 到惩罚。 Step2: Those people should be punished. Step3: Those people who cut down the trees just for their own interest should be punished.,Pra

7、ctice,我昨天借杂志的那个图书馆很大。,Step1: 我昨天借杂志的那个图书馆很大。 Step2: The library is very big. Step3: The library where I borrowed magazines yesterday is very big.,Practice,流过村庄的小河对他们有很大帮助。,Step1: 流过村庄的小河对他们有很大帮助。 Step2: The river is very helpful to them. Step3: The river which flows through the village is very helpf

8、ul to them.,Practice,中秋节是一个全家团圆, 赏月、吃月饼的传统节日。,Step1: 中秋节是一个全家团圆, 赏月、吃月饼 的传统节日。 Step2: The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival. Step3: The Mid-autumn Festival is a traditional festival when families get together to watch the moon and eat mooncakes.,How to introduce a,Movie,With Attributive

9、Clauses,Three Idiots,is an encouraging movie which teaches us to make efforts for our interests.,You Are the Apple of My Eye,is an excellent movie _ teaches us to cherish puppy love and youth.,三傻大闹宝莱坞是一部励志电影, 教我们要为了自己的兴趣而努力。,which,The Flowers of War,reminds us of a tough period_ Chinese met with gre

10、at sufferings.,reminds us of our childhood when we lead a happy and free life.,Love Me If You Dare,两小无猜使我们想起了童年时代, 当时我们过着幸福自由的生活。,when,shows us a planet_we can enjoy beautiful scenery.,shows us a world where we face various disasters.,The Day after Tomorrow,Avatar,后天为我们展示了一个世界，在那里我们面临着各种各样的灾难。,where

11、,Forrest Gump 阿甘正传,Try to introuce,Forrest Gump 阿甘正传,基本信息： 上映年份：1994年 导演：Robert Jimmy 主演：Tom Hanks, Robin Penn 主要内容： Forrest Gump, 一名智障人士，适应社会，取得成功。 经典场景： Gump和Jenny重逢，在湖中心拥抱彼此。 推荐原因： 它提醒我们关注残疾人，不要歧视他们。,2. Directed by Robert Jimmy, Forrest Gump came out in 1994, _ Tom Hanks and Robin Penn played lea

12、ding roles.,基本信息： 上映年份：1994年 导演：Robert Jimmy 主演：Tom Hanks, Robin Penn,whose,in which,1. I am honored to introduce to you a movie _ name is Forrest Gump.,3. It tells us about Forrest Gump, a mentally disabled man, _ adapted to the society and achieved success.,Forrest Gump, 一名智障人士，适应社会，取得成功。,who,4. 我

13、永远不会忘记这一幕：Gump和Jenny重逢， 在湖中心拥抱彼此。 I will never forget the scene _ Gump and Jenny met again and hugged each other in the center of a lake.,5. 我推荐这部电影的原因是它提醒我们关注残疾人，不要歧视他们。 The reason _ I recommend this movie is that it reminds us to pay attention to the disabled and not to look down upon them.,where,

14、why,I am _ to introduce to you a movie _ name is Forrest Gump. _ by Robert Jimmy, Forrest Gump _ _ in 1994, _ _ Tom Hanks and Robin Penn played _ roles. It tells us about a mentally disabled man _ _ to the society and achieved success. I will never forget the scene _ Gump and Jenny met again and hugged each other in the center of a lake. The _ _ I _ this movie is that it reminds us to _ _ _ the disabled and not