写作：致外教的感谢信 讲义 高一下学期阶段一测试英语试题

写作假定你是李华，上周你参加了校英语演讲比赛。在外教Walsh的指导之下，你获得了第一名。请你给他写一封电子邮件，对他表示感谢，内容包括：1.介绍比赛情况；2.表达感谢。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMr.Walsh,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua致外教的感谢信一、文本主旨李华通过邮件向外教Walsh表达在其指导下参加校英语演讲比赛获得第一名的感激之情，阐述比赛竞争激烈，强调外教在发音、语调及内容组织方面的耐心指导是自己脱颖而出的关键因素。二、高频词汇gratitude（感激）guidance（指导）contest（比赛）fierce（激烈的）participant（参与者）tutoring（辅导）achievement（成就）prize（奖品，奖项）三、短语expressone'sgratitudefor（表达某人对……的感激）schoolEnglishspeechcontest（校英语演讲比赛）withone'sguidance（在某人的指导下）numerousexcellentparticipants（众多优秀参与者）patienttutoringon（在……方面的耐心辅导）standout（脱颖而出）bedueto（由于）winthefirstprize（获得一等奖）writingto（写信给……）hope...findsyouwell（希望……你一切都好）四、佳句Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I'mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourguidanceintheschoolEnglishspeechcontestlastweek.希望这封邮件能让你一切安好。我写信是为了表达我对上星期在校英语演讲比赛中您给予指导的诚挚感谢。Thecompetitionwasfierce,withnumerousexcellentparticipants.比赛竞争激烈，有众多优秀的参与者。However,withyourpatienttutoringonpronunciation,intonationandcontentorganization,Iwasabletostandout.然而，在您对发音、语调和内容组织的耐心辅导下，我得以脱颖而出。I'mextremelyhappytotellyouthatIwonthefirstprize.我非常高兴地告诉您我获得了一等奖。Thisachievementislargelyduetoyou.这项成就很大程度上归功于您。五、写作示范示范一DearMr.Walsh,Isincerelyhopethisemailreachesyouingoodhealth.IamwritingtoconveymyheartfeltgratitudeforyourinvaluableguidanceduringtheschoolEnglishspeechcontestlastweek.Thecontestwasanintensebattle,withalargenumberoftalentedstudentsvyingforthetopspot.Theatmospherewasfilledwithexcitementandnervousness.Eachparticipantpresentedtheirspeechwithgreatpassion.Butthankstoyourdetailedinstructionsonperfectingmypronunciation,adjustingmyintonationtobemorenatural,andorganizingmycontentinalogicalway,Imanagedtoshineamongthem.IamoverjoyedtoinformyouthatIwonthefirstprize.Withoutyourpatienthelp,thisaccomplishmentwouldnothavebeenpossible.YourguidancehasnotonlyhelpedmeinthiscompetitionbutalsoinspiredmetokeepimprovingmyEnglish.Thankyouagainfromthebottomofmyheart.Yours,LiHua示范二DearMr.Walsh,Itrustthisemailfindsyouinhighspirits.IamwritingtoexpressmyprofoundgratitudeforyourguidanceintherecentschoolEnglishspeechcontest.Thecompetitionwasextremelyfierce.Thereweresomanyoutstandingstudents,eachdeliveringtheirspeecheswithremarkableskills.Somehadexcellentlanguagefluency,whileothershadveryengagingtopics.Butyourtutoringonpronunciation,whichmademywordssoundmorenative-like,andyouradviceonintonation,whichaddedmoreemotiontomyspeech,alongwiththeperfectcontentorganizationyouhelpedmewith,gavemeanedge.IamdelightedtosharethatIwonthefirstprize.Thissuccessisadirectresultofyourefforts.Yourteachingshavebeenagreatsourceofmotivationforme.Iwillalwaysbethankfulforyourhelpandlookforwardtolearningmorefromyouinthefuture.Yours,LiHua示范三DearMr.Walsh,Ihopethisemailbringsyouapleasantday.IamwritingtowholeheartedlythankyouforyourguidanceintheschoolEnglishspeechcontestheldlastweek.Thecontestwasahighlycompetitiveevent,filledwithnumerousbrilliantparticipants.Everyonewaswell-preparedandeagertoshowtheirbest.Thecompetitionwassotoughthatitwashardtopredictthewinner.Butyourpatienttutoringonpronunciation,intonation,andcontentorganizationwaslikeamagicwandforme.Itmademyspeechmorepolishedandappealing.IamextremelyexcitedtotellyouthatIwonthefirstprize.Thisachievementbelongstoyouasmuchasitdoestome.YourhelphasnotonlybroughtmethishonorbutalsodeepenedmyloveforEnglish.Thankyouagainforeverythingyou'vedone.Yours,LiHua参考答案DearMr.Walsh,Iamwritingtoextendmysinceregratitude.ItwasduetoyourinvaluableguidancethatIsucceededduringtheschoolEnglishspeechcompetitionlastweek.Itwasanunbelievableexperience,andIamthrilledtosharethatIsecuredthefirstplace.Yourinsightfuladviceonpronunciationandbodylanguagetrulymadeadifference.Thecompet