英语六级写作4-例子和图表

英语六级写作4——例子和图表

Directions"

Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthe

topicHasteMakesWaste.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushould

baseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.

1.为什么"欲速则不达”？

2.举例说明。

谚语格言题文章逻辑结构：

ParagraphI:(1)点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general)；

(2)用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反

两面的逻辑(specific)(.

ParagraphII:(1)作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；

(2)支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证(至少两点，有

时有正反两面的逻辑)；

(3)本段总结(可以省略)。

ParagraphIII:(1)总结全文，定下结论(通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义)。

HasteMakesWaste

By"Hastemakeswaste"ismeantthatoneshoulddoeverythingstepbystep.

Evensimpleoperationscaneasilybespoiledifwerushtocompletethem,

neglectingimportantstagesintheprocess.Oneshouldmakefullpreparations

beforebeginningantask.

注：spoilt=spoiled被毁坏;Sparetherod,spoilthechild.棍棒出孝子

TakeEnglishstudyforexample.Withoutagoodcommandofpronunciation,

wecanneverhopetospeakinanunderstandableway.Similarly,ifwedonot

learntospellproperlyandtoacquireabasicgraspofgrammar,wewillnever

succeedinwritinggoodcomposition.

Inshort,lavinqasolidfoundationisessentialifwewanttomake

achievementsinourstudiesorwork,orindeedinanyotheraspectofourlives.At

everystep,reviewwhathasbeenachievedandassesstheproblemsahead

beforemovingtothenextstep.Andremember,Romewasnotbuiltinaday.

注：layingasolidfoundation打下坚实的基础

英文学习和体育锻炼作为例子

[讲义P7]

Example:

AnEnalishproverbsays,

Oneoftheareatmenonceremarked,“HasteMakesWaste”.

Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb:

Itmeansthat

Inotherwords,

History/Oursocietyaboundswiththeexamplesof"HasteMakes

Waste"........Ontheotherhand/Onthecontrary,........

Foruscolleaestudents,thesavina/proverbhasaprofoundandrealistic

sianificance:.......

图表题：

三图一表一柱状图(BarGraph)、线形图(LineGraph)、饼状图(PieGraph)、表格

(Table)

PieGraph

图表题文章写作逻辑结构：

ParagraphI:(1)描述图表：趋势描写；

(2)描述图表：必要数据支持(细节性)。

ParagraphII:(1)提出自己理由和观点；

(2)细节性分论点(支持自己观点)。

ParagraphIII:(1)预测未来和提出解决方法；

(2)总结全文和表达作者自己观点。

CarAccidentsDeclininginWaltonCity

Accordnatothearaph,theriseandfalloftherateofcaraccidentsinWalton

Cityvarieswiththeseasons.FromJanuarytoMarchlastyearitincreasedby68%,

fromMarchtoJuneitdroppedbyabouthalfthepreviousrate;andfromJuneto

Augusttherewasasteeuriseof66.6%.Afterthat,however,therewasasteady

decrease,andthismakesusoptimisticthatcaraccidentsaredeclininginWalton

City.

注：1.Accordingtothegraph如图所示，还可以说成Ascanbeseenfromthe

graph

increaseby上升了increaseto上升至U

2.steeprise陡然上升，steadydecrease缓慢下降

Therearethreereasonsforthisimprovement.First,newtrafficregulations

havemadedriversmorecareful,法律法规second,morepeopleareusing

bicyclesfortransportation,andthird,inthelaterpartoftheyeargoodweather

madetheroadssafertodriveon.

Thisyear,majorroadshavebeenrepairedandthenumberofpublicbuses

hasbeenincreased.政府的做法Moreover,atrafficsafetycampaignhasmadeall

thelocalpeoplemoreawareofthedangersofunsafedriving.So,Iamconfident

thattherewillbeevenfewercaraccidentsinWaltoninthefuture.好的方面,未来

光明；坏的方面，尽量避免

FilmIsGivingWaytoTV

(A)

Thelateststatisticsshowthatthenumberofpeopleattendingcinemasis

aettinasteadilysmaller.Atthesametime,thenumberoftelevisionviewersis

Qrowinqatalmostthesamerate.

Expertssavthatthesetwotrendsareconnectedinthreewavs.First,overthe

pastfewdecadestelevisionsetshaveappearedinalmosteveryhome.Second,

filmveryquicklybecomeavailableonvideo,andcanbeshownontheTVscreen.

Third,itisbecomingmoreexpensivetomakefilms,andsothepricesofcinema

seatsarerising.

However,thisdoes