英语六级写作3-社会现象

英语六级写作3——社会现象

文章主体句式(Body):

一、原因结果

例：Thereareprobably+[many\several\three]+[reasons\causes]+forthis

+[dramatic\marked]+[increase\decline\change]+in...

二、比较对照

例：[Thereisnodoubtthat\Obviously,]+ithas

[its\both]+[drawbacks\disadvantages\negativeeffects]+[aswell

as\and]+[merits\advantages\positiveeffects]...

三、例证

例：Wemay+[cite\quote\mention\take\pointout]+[asingle\a

common\another]+exampleof...

四、事实

例：

Noonecan+[deny\doubt\ignore\overlook]+the

+[bare\hard\essential\profound]+factthat...

五、数据调查

例：

A+[recent\new\nationwide]+[study\survey\poll\investigation]+[conducted\ta

ken]+[atafactory\byofficials]...

六、权威(专家)

例：

Asone+[scientist\writer\doctor\psychologist]+[wrote\commented\pointed

outvoted],...

七、分析

例：

Itseems

+[quite\almost]+[(un)likely\(im)possible\(in)credible\(in)conceivable]+that...

2000.1

Direction:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositionon

thetopicHowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast120

words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.

1.上大学的费用(tuitionandfees)可以通过多种途径解决

2.哪种途径适合于我(说明理由)

Nowadays,tuitionandfeesforcolleqearemuchhiqherthaneverbefore.How

tofinanceyourcollegeeducationhasbecomeamatterofconcernformany.You

candealwithinmanyways.Youcangetallofthemoneyfromyourparents.You

canapplyforaloanespeciallysetupforcollegestudents.Youcanalsoacquire

themoneycompletelybyyourself,doingafull-timejobinsummerorwinter

holiday.Inaddition,voucanaskyourparentsformostofitandearntherestin

yoursparetimeincollege,bydoingapart-timejob.

注：1.第一句引言。

2.太多youcan重复使用，缺乏变化

Inmyopinion,Ipreferthelastway.Havingacquiredmostofthetuitionand

feesfrommyparents,Ineedn'tworrytoomuchaboutthemoneyandcan

concentrateonmystudy;ontheotherhand,apart-timejobinmysparetime

makesmycampus-lifecolorful.Icanmakealotoffriends,improvemyabilities

andlearnlotsofknowledge.So,Ichoosethiswaytocovermytuitionandfees.

缺点：缺少连贯性

一致性'发展性'连贯性

HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation?

PreviouslyinChina,auniversityeducationwasfundedbythegovernment.

Thissituationischangingandstudentsmustnowfinancetheirowneducation.As

aresult,studentsarenowfacedwiththequestion"howtopayformycollege

education"?

注：This指代前文

Thereareseveralpossiblewaystoraisethemoneytopayforfeesand

tuitions.Parentsareasourceforcollegefunding,asisthecasewithmost

students.Scholarshipsarealsoavailableforstudentswithoutstandingacademic

performance.Becausescholarshipsarecompetitive,theyarenotavailableto

everyone.Studentscanalsotakeoutaloanfromthebank.Bankscanprovide

loanstostudentswithoutcollateralforthosewhoneedthem.And,manystudents

cantakeonpart-timejobstohelpfinancetheireducation.IncitiessuchasBeijing,

ShanghaiandGuangzhou,therearemanypart-timejobopportunitiesforstudents

bothonandoffcampus.

注：1.source来源,TVprogramismainsourceofmypleasure.电视是我欢乐的

主要来源

2.available重要词汇，Areyoustillavailable?你还单身吗？

3.takepart-timejob打工，还可以用dooutjob\holdtemporaryjob

4.onandoff校园内外

Personally,Ibelieveascholarshipisthebestwaytofundaneducationasit

notonlypaysforfeesandtuition,butalsoencouragesstudyinghard.

MyViewonFakeCommodities

Theprevalenceoffakecommoditieshasbeenabigprobleminour

society.Almosteverydaynewspaperscarryarticlespertainingtofake

commodities.Althoughmeasureshavebeenimplementedtodealwiththis

problem,itstillremainsaseriousthreat.

Fakegoodsareharmfulonmanylevels.Peoplesellfakecommoditiesto

makeaquickprofitwhichunderminestheeconomyandfakegoodscanalsobe

dangeroustoone'shealth.Theeffectisageneralmistrustamongconsumers

towardsellersandthefreemarketingeneral.Inaddition,manyfakecommodities

havebeenexportedoverseaswhichhasresultedinapoorreputationforgoods

comingoutofChinaandhashadanegativeinfluenceonexports.

Thereareseveralwaystoaddressthisproblem.Lawsandregulations

shouldbeimplemented/make/workouttobanthemanufacturingand

distributionoffakegoods.Atthesametime,consumersshouldbeeducatedto

enhancetheawarenessofidentifythesefakegoods.Withtoughlawsandan

educatedpublic,fakegoodswillbecomeathingofthepast.

用MyViewOnFakeCommodity改写BrainDrain

BrainDrain

Braindrainisadelicateproblemwithwhichourcountryisconfronted.Inthe

lasttenyearsorso,alotofscientistsandtechnicianshaveswarmedinto

developedcountriesforfurtherstudiesorresearchwork,letalonenumerous

promisingstudents.Andtherearenoindicationsthattheywillbebackhome

beforelong.Ourcountryhaspaidtheexpensesoftrainingthembutlostthem.

Howdidthatcomeabout?

Itisself-evidentthattheirdelayofcomingbackisduetothosefavorable

workingandlivingconditionswhichareessentialtoresearchwork.Sophisticated

equipmentmakesiteasierforonetogainacademicachievements.Our

competentscientistsabroadareofferedhigherrewardsandgreateropportunities

whichcontributetotheirsuccessincareer.

Itseemsthatitisn'timpossibletosolvetheproblemandattractthescientists

andthelikebackhomesolongasgreatimportanceisattachedtothe

intellectual'sdeservingtreatmentandeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprovide

themwithexcellentpayandagreeableconditions.

MyViewonFakeCommodities

Theprevalenceoffakecommoditieshasbeenabigprobleminour

society.Almosteverydaynewspaperscarryarticlespertainingtofake

commodities.Althoughmeasureshavebeenimplementedtodealwiththis

problem,itstillremainsaseriousthreat.

Fakegoodsareharmfulonmanylevels.Peoplesellfakecommoditiesto

makeaquickprofitwhichunderminestheeconomyandfakegoodscanalsobe

dangeroustoone'shealth.Theeffectisageneralmistrustamongconsumers

towardsellersandthefreemarketingeneral.Inaddition,manyfakecommodities

havebeenexportedoverseaswhichhasresultedinapoorreputationforgoods

comingoutofChinaandhashadanegativeinfluenceonexports.

Thereareseveralwaystoaddressthisproblem.Lawsandregulations

shouldbeimplemented/make/workouttobanthemanufacturingand

distributionoffakegoods.Atthesametime,consumersshouldbeeducatedto

enhancetheawarenessofidentifythesefakegoods.Withtoughlawsandan

educatedpublic,fakegoodswillbecomeathingofthepast.

用MyViewOnFakeCommodity改写BrainDrain

BrainDrain

Braindrainisadelicateproblemwithwhichourcountryisconfronted.Inthe

lasttenyearsorso,alotofscientistsandtechnicianshaveswarmedinto

developedcountriesforfurtherstudiesorresearchwork,letalonenumerous

promisingstudents.Andtherearenoindicationsthattheywillbebackhome

beforelong.Ourcountryhaspaidtheexpensesoftrainingthembutlostthem.

Howdidthatcomeabout?

Itisself-evidentthattheirdelayofcomingbackisduetothosefavorable

workingandlivingconditionswhichareessentialtoresearchwork.Sophisticated

equipmentmakesiteasierforonetogainacademicachievements.Our

competentscientistsabroadareofferedhigherrewardsandgreateropportunities

whichcontributetotheirsuccessincareer.

Itseemsthatitisn'timpossibletosolvetheproblemandattractthescientists

andthelikebackhomesolongasgreatimportanceisattachedtothe

intellectual'sdeservingtreatmentandeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprovide

themwithexcellentpayandagreeableconditions.

MyViewOnBrainDrain

Theprevalenceofbraindrainhasbeenadelicateprobleminour