新人教版高中英语必修第一册原创1：Writing-Write a page in a wellness bo

Unit3SportsandFitnessWritingWriteapageinawellnessbook本单元的写作任务是健康生活类作文。此类话题作文主要围绕以下几个方面写：1.健康生活的必要性、重要性。2.如何才能健康生活：加强锻炼、注意饮食、均衡营养、养成良好的生活习惯等。3.个人对健康生活的认识：如何从自我做起，如何制定计划改变不良生活习惯等。Step1Leadin健康生活类话题作文还可以围绕“体育锻炼的重要性；健康与财富哪一个更重要；学生健康状况调查及改善建议”等方面命题，这类话题属于说明文、议论文或夹叙夹议文的范畴，常使用现在时态和过去时态；陈述论点说明情况多使用现在时态，记叙文典型事例常用过去时态，对典型事例发表看法使用一般时态。常用表达1.Havingagooddietisveryimportant.2.Eatinglotsofdifferentkindsoffoodandlotsoffreshfruitandvegetablemeansalottoourbody.3.Doingexerciseisanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4.Runningisthebestworkoutforweightlossbecauseit’scheapandaccessible.5.It’simportanttoaskyourdoctorforahealthcheckonceayear.保持身体健康很重要。请根据下面四副图的内容，以HowLiMingKeepsFit为题写一篇100词左右的短文。Step2Practise审题1.确定文体：本文为说明文2.确定人称：本文的主要人称为第三人称3.时态：以一般现在时为主构思第一段：引出话题：健康的重要性，并以李明为例引出下段详细介绍；第二段：介绍李明如何保持健康：锻炼；良好的生活——休息；饮食等；第三段：表达向李明学习的愿望等。审题构思——分析透彻是关键精挑细选——核心词汇想周全_____________保持健康

_____________________给……树立好榜样_____________锻炼

_________例如

_______________打篮球

__________上床睡觉

_________晚上keephealthygivesb.agoodexampletakeexercisesuchasplaybasketballgotobedatnight________起床

________________照顾好

____________洗澡

_________________洗手

___________各种各样的

___________健美

_____________向……学习

getuptakegoodcareoftakeabathwashone’shandsallkindsofkeepfitlearnfrom遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现1.对我们来说保持健康是很重要的。It'simportant____________________.2.李明给我们树立了一个很好的榜样。LiMing_______________________.3.他总是锻炼身体。Healways_________________.4.他喜欢游泳、跑步和打篮球等运动。Helikessports_________________,runningandplayingbasketball.forustokeephealthygivesusagoodexampletakesexercisesuchasswimming5.他晚上10点上床睡觉，早上6点起床。He__________at10atnightand_______atsixinthemorning.6.他也很会照顾自己。Healso______________________.7.他每天洗澡，饭前洗手。He__________everydayand________________beforemeals.8.他吃饭。吃各种各样的食物，像鱼，鸡蛋，蔬菜和肉。Hehasmeals.Heeats____________________,eggs,vegetablesandmeat.goestobedgetsuptakesgoodcareofhimselftakesabathwasheshishandsallkindsoffoodlikefish9.他也吃很多水果。Healsoeats___________.10.他看起来强壮健康。Helooks________________.11.我们应该保持健康。Weshould_________.12.我们也应该向李明学习。Weshouldalso___________LiMing.alotoffruitstrongandhealthykeepfitlearnfrom斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点1.用时间状语从句，改写句8为主从复合句__________________,heeatsallkindsoffoodlikefish,eggs,vegetablesandmeat.2.用不定式短语形式合并句11、12为简单句________________,WeshouldalsolearnfromLiMing.WhenhehasmealsInordertokeepfit连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇HowLiMingkeepsfitIt'simportantforustokeephealthy.LiMinggivesusagoodexample.Healwaystakesexercise.Helikessportssuchasswimming,runningandplayingbasketball.Hegoestobedat10atnightandgetsupatsixinthemorning.Andhealsotakesgoodcareofhimself.Hetakesabatheverydayandwasheshishandsbeforemeals.Whenhehasmeals,heeatsallkindsoffoodlikefish,eggs,vegetablesandmeat.Healsoeatsalotoffruit.Sohelooksstrongandhealthy.Inordertokeepfit,WeshouldalsolearnfromLiMing.Writeapageinawellnessbook,usingtheabovefivesteps.Step3Homework(湖北省黄梅国际育才高级中学2018-2019学年高一下学期期中)假设你叫李华，是一家英文杂志社的心理咨询师。某中学生小王给你写信，提到自己偏胖，想节食减肥，征求你的意见。请你给她回一封信，谈谈你对该问题的见解。内容要点如下：1.健康比漂亮更重要；2.学生以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；3.可通过多锻炼身体保持健康，要改变不良的饮食习惯；4.健康的心态也很重要。注意：1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2．词数：100左右；3．参考词汇：stateofmind心态。DearXiaoWang,Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHuaDearXiaoWang,Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyoumentionedthatyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Itisonlynaturalthatyounggirlsatyouragehopetolookbeautiful.However,inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeauty.Forastudent,studyingisthefirstthingtoconsiderwhileappearanceisthesecond.Sodonotletothers'opinionsaffectyournormallife.However,ifyoudowanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingunhealthyeatinghabits.Themostimportantthingisthatyoukeepahealthystateofmind,asitwillhelpwithyourstudies,andwillalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.IhopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyouandI'mlookingforwardtoyournextletter.YoursLiHuaThebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldneversayno