新人教版高中英语必修第一册：Writing-有关旅行计划的电子邮件

Writing——有关旅行计划的电子邮件内容索引点拨·写作技巧积累·写作素材示例·分步写作

本单元的写作任务是以电子邮件的方式向朋友告知旅行计划，属于应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。一、亮点词汇1.entrance/admissionticket门票2.placesofinterest风景名胜3.coveranareaof有……面积4.haveapopulationof有……人口

5.goonatour/sightseeing旅行/观光6.packup整理；把……打包7.makepreparationsfor为……做好准备8.makearrangementsfor为……安排9.bookaticket订票10.takeabus/train乘公共汽车/火车11.enjoythescenery欣赏风景12.broadenone’sview/horizons开阔眼界二、高级句式1.Withwinterholidaycoming/approaching，Ihaveaplanforit.

寒假要来了，对此我有一个计划。2.MayDayisaroundthecorner,andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.

五一就要到了，我要去上海旅游，看看它美丽的风景。3.BeijingislocatedinthenorthofChina,whichisoneofthelargestcitiesinChina.

北京位于中国的北部，是中国最大的城市之一。4.TherearemanyfamousplacesofinterestinBeijing,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalace,theForbiddenCityandsoon.

北京有很多的著名的名胜古迹，例如：长城、

颐和园、故宫等。5.Ifyouwanttohavefunhere,pleasekeepthefollowingadviceinmind.

如果你想在这里玩得愉快，请牢记以下建议。6.Itisconvenientforyoutogettherewhetherbybusorbytrain.

无论你乘公交还是坐火车，到那里都很方便。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim即将毕业，并且他所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给出些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：①你建议的线路；②你的理由；③你的祝愿。第一步：要点翻译1.我很高兴得知你从毕业后就一直梦想着来中国旅行，并且你已经决定来中国。I’mdelightedtoknowthatyou___________________________________eversincegraduation，andthat_______________________________________.havebeendreamingofvisitingChinayou’vemadeupyourmindtocometoChina2.我对你的到来感到很兴奋，所以我迫不及待地想给你我的推荐。I’msoexcitedaboutyourcoming，soI______________________________________________________________________________.3.在前往长江和泰山的两条路线中，两者都被强烈推荐。OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,I_____________________.4.就我个人而言，我更喜欢游览长江，而不是游览泰山。Personally，I________________________theYangtzeRivertoMountTai. canhardlywaittogiveyoumyrecommendationhighlyrecommendbothpreferthetouralong5.通过长江之旅，你可以充分了解中国的历史和中国人民。_________________________theYangtzeRiver，youcanknowwellaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Throughthetripto6.沿江的风景令人惊叹，还有许多著名的观光景点。Thesceneryalongtheriver________________，withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.isamazing7.最重要的是，那里的空气呼吸起来是新鲜的。Mostimportantly，theairthere_______________________.8.这就是为什么我坚持沿长江旅行将是一个更好的选择。That’swhyI_________________________theYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice.9.希望你能在中国玩得开心。Ihopeyou’ll_________________inChina.isfreshtobreatheinsistthetripalonghavefun第二步：词句升级1.用被动语态升级要点3OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai，

__________________________________.2.用高级词汇升级要点5ThroughthetriptotheYangtzeRiver,youcan______________________________________ofChinaandChinesepeople.3.用副词作状语升级要点9________________，you’llhavefuninChina.botharehighlyrecommendedhaveagoodknowledgeofthehistoryHopefully第三步：连句成篇DearJim， I’mdelightedtoknowthatyouhavebeendreamingofvisitingChinaeversincegraduation,andthatyou’vemadeupyourmindtocometoChina.I’msoexcitedaboutyourcoming，soIcanhardlywaittogiveyoumyrecommendation. OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai，botharehighlyrecommended.Personally，IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRivertoMountTai.ThroughthetriptotheYangtzeRiver,youcanhaveagoodknowledgeofthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Inaddition，thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing，withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.Mostimportantly，theairthereisfreshtobreathe.That’swhyIinsistthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverwillbeabetterchoice. Hopefully，you’llhavefuninChina.Yours，LiHuaThebestclassroomintheworldisatthefeetofanelderlyperson.世界上最好的课堂在老人的脚下.Havingachildfallasleepinyourarmsisoneofthemostpeacefulfeelingintheworld.让一个孩子在你的臂弯入睡,你会体会到世间最安宁的感觉.Beingkindismoreimportantthanbeingright.善良比真理更重要.Youshouldneversaynotoagiftfromachild.永远不要拒绝孩子送给你的礼物.So