新人教版高中英语必修第一册课件2：Reading for Writing

ReadingforWritingUnitTeenagelifeWhatisthepurposeofaletterofadvice?Whatkindofaspectsshouldbeincludedinsuchkindofletter?建议信的目的是针对有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和合理的建议。建议信的基本框架：开头(beginning)—开门见山,向对方陈述自己的观点(stateyouridea)。主体(body)—对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)。结尾(ending)—呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion)。ReadtodiscoverwritingdetailsⅠ.Readtheletterofferingsomeadviceonpage18andthensolvethequestionsbelow.1.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?Her/Hisbestfriendspendstoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesonline.Readtodiscoverwritingdetails2.DoyouthinkMsLuo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?Yes.SusanadvisesWorriedFriendtoencourageChenLeitotrynewhobbiesanddiscusstheproblemtogether;IthinkChenLeiwillfollowthe3.advice,becausetheyarebestfriends.Readtodiscoverwritingdetails3.Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?IadviseChenLeitotakesomeoutdooractivitiessuchasplayingballsorreadinginterestingbooksorevenlisteningtogoodmusic.Wecangowalkingtogether.Ifheisbored,hecanturntomeforhelp,thuswecanhavefuntogether.Ⅱ.WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Writethemdown.Iunderstandquitewell….Irecommendthatyou….Ithinkyoushould…Whynotdo…Iamsurehewill…ReadtodiscoverwritingdetailsReadthepassageonpage18againandfigureouttheorganizationoftheletterWritedownthesentencesfromthepassagethatmatchthefollowingpoints.A.Iknowwhattheproblemis.Yourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.C.Thisismyadviceandreasons.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehavior.Spendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.…cannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Iamsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.WritingIalwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.WhatcanIdo?Usewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetotheteenagerbelow.XuTing14HangzhouTips____________Showthereaderyouknowaproblemis.Dear______

Youwrotethat___________________Iunderstandthat______________Ithink____________________Because_____________.Iamsure_______________BestWishes,(closeandsigntheletter).______Tellthereaderyouunderstandhe/shefeels.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.Explainyourreasons.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.WritethedateandgreetthereaderPossibleversion8October2019DearXuTingYouwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeelquitewell.Ithinkitisagoodideatomakesomegoodfriendsinyouclassandhavefunwiththemafterschool.Inthisway,youwillfeellesslonelybecauseyoucantalktoeachotherabouttheunhappythingstoreduceyourbadfeelingsandhavefuntogether.Itisagoodideanottobealone,tryingtobewithyourbestfriends.PossibleversionIamsurefinallyyouwillbecheerfulandgetusedtoyourpresentlife.BestWishes,Yourssincerely,Susan建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信有可能是写给某个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容和提出建议的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。这类文章的基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。建议信写作总结具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陈述建议，具体为：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。注意千万不要让对方认为是投诉，而不是建议。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结。注意要有礼貌，使对方容易接受。建议信常用句式：1．段首常用语(照应材料，表明写作意图)：Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat...Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto...2．表达建议常用语：①Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...②Iwouldliketosuggestthat...③You’dbetter.../It’sbetterto...④AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion/...⑤Foronething...;foranother...⑥IfIwereyou,Iwould...⑦Itseemstomethatyoucould...⑧Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...3．段尾常用语：①Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.②Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.③Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.④Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.假定你是李华。某中学生英语报社准备增设一个EnvironmentalProtection栏目，为此报社就报道内容与方式向读者征求建议。请你根据以下提示给编辑写封信，提出你的建议。1．报道内容广泛；2．报道应包括原因、危害并重点突出应对方法；3．语言简单易懂，适合更多的读者。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。典题欣赏【审题导引】本题要求写一封建议信，文体上是应用文。人称是第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。环保问题一直以来都是一个热点话题，学生对此并不陌生，同时提示较为详细。本书信的难点是提出这些建议的理由要具体、得当，具有较强的说服力。【参考范文】Deareditor，I’mgladtoknowfromyourpaperthatyouareaskingreadersforsuggestionsonyournewsection,Environmental

Protection.Mineareasfollows：Itispracticalthatthesectioncoversawiderangeofenvironmentalconcernsandmeanwhile,eachreportshouldincludecauses,effectsandmoreimportantly,effectivemeasures,thusmakingthepublicawarethateveryoneshouldandcandosomethingtodealwithenvironmentalproblems.Besides,reportsshouldbewritteninsimpleEnglishinordertoattractasmanyreadersaspossible.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemytipsintoaccountandIdohopethatyourpaperwillmakeadifferencetoenvironmentalprotection.Yourstruly，LiHua【名师点评】本文格式准确、要点齐全、结构完整、层次清晰。尤其是关联词语的运用恰到好处，使整个语篇结构紧凑。在题目所列提示之外，又阐述了提出这些建议的理由，而且具体、得当，逻辑通顺，具有很强的说服力。高级词汇effective;aware;attract精彩短语和关联词asfollows;coverawiderangeof;dealwith;takemytipsintoaccount;makeadifference;moreimportantly;meanwhile;besides增分句型...thusm