考研英语作文写作历年真题范文

★功能句的写法支

作文增光润色的100个好句

1.图表漫画类文章描述图表漫画句

Fromthecartoonwecanseethat.

Wecanseefromthecartoonthat.

Asisindicatedinthecartoon,.

2.引出暗含主题句

Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthat.

Whathasbeendescribeinthecartooncarriesgreatimplicationsforourlife,esp.howto.

Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditconveysthesymbolicmeaningof.

3.引出漫画人画图目的句

Whatisthepurposeofthedrawerofthiscartoon?Inthefirstplace,.Inthesecondplace,.

4.引出原因句

Therearequiteafewpossiblereasonssuggestedhere.Tobeginwith,.Inthesecondplace,.

Finally,.

Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthistendency.Tobeginwith,.Inthesecondplace,.

Finally,.

Whatcausedtheeffect?Thereareatleasttwopossiblereasons.Tobeginwith,.Inthesecondplace,.

5.引出对策句

Itis,therefore,necessarythateffortsshouldbemadetocopewiththeproblemasearlyaspossible.

Weshouldtakeimmediatemeasures,forifthepresentsituationcontinuesasbsfore,seriousoutcomewillcome

up.

AsfarasIamconcerned,mysuggestionsasto___areasfollows.

6.过渡句

Itisclearthat___playsaimportantroleinourlifeandwork.

Theremaybesomeotherreasonsresponsiblefor___,butIthinkwhathasbeenmentionedaboveisgenerally

acceptable.

Thisismypointofviewastohowto___,andIamsurethatmyideasarebothsoundandreasonable.

7.举例子

Acaseinpointismyneighbor,who.

I'dliketoquoteafurtherexamplehere.

AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyprofessorWang,headofsocialdepartmentinPekingUniversity,90%of

thepeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromtheproblem.

Anothersurveyalsoshowsthatthetrendisturningfrombadtoworse.

8.结论句

Onlyinthiswaycanwe.

9.列举意义的短语

Inthefirstplace,___.Inthesecondplace,___.Lastbutnottheleast,___.

Tobeginvzith,___.Furthermore,___.Themostimportantofall,___.

Ontheonehand,___.Ontheotherhand,___.Inaddition,___.

Foronething,___.Foranother,___.What'smore,___.

Firstofall,__.Inthesecondplace,___.Conversely,.

★长难句的写法支

英语句子处理的十步骤

l.Thisis,saysLuban,adesk.（简单句中加上插入语）

2.Toacertainextent,youcanbeagoodteacher.（简单句前面力口上程度状i吾）

3.Ratherthandecreasing,thepopulationinChinaisincreasing.（简单句前面加上分词短语）

4.Withskilledworkers,wecouldaccomplishthetaskwithinthedeadline;withoutproficientworkers,weshould

havetogiveuphalfway.（排比句型增加句子可读性）

5.Acaseinpointismyneighbor,wholostbothlegsinatrafficaccident.（举例子方法）

6.AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyprofessorWang,headofsocialdepartmentinPekingUniversity,90%of

thepeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromtheproblem.（举例子方法）

7.WiththerapidadvancesinthestandardoflivingoftheChinesepeopleinrecentyears,airconditionershave

joinedotherhouseholdelectricalappliancesasitems.（举例子方法）

8.isusuallythefirsttobeconsidered,butitisnotthemostimportant.Themostimportantaspectofthe

phenomenonhasmuchtodowith___.Itisin（hisareathat___findthemselveshavingtofacemanyconfusing

andconflictingfeelings.（经典原因段）

9.Basically,whatweseeinthispicturc/rcallymattersisabirdlamentingthefactthatitshomehasbeen

destroyed.（主语从句描述现象）

10.Thereisnodenyingthatautomobilesareindicationsofcivilization,progressanddevelopment;nevertheless,

automobilescausetheseriousproblemofairpollution.

（名词性从句引出观点）

★功能段落的组织★

考研英语短文写作高分评判标准及写法概述

•图表漫画类文章问题段

描述漫画图表句

引出暗含主题句

简短解释句

过渡句

Fromthecartoonwecanseethat.Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,andit

conveysthesymbolicmeaningof.AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyprofessorWang,headofsocial

departmentinPekingUniversity,90%ofthepeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromtheproblem.Itisclear

that___playsaimportantroleinourlifeandwork.

2.河段

引出原因句

列举原因句

过渡句

Whatcausedtheeffect?Thereareatleasttwopossiblereasons.Tobeginwith,.Inthesecondplace,.

Theremaybesomeotherreasonsresponsiblefor___,butIthinkwhathasbeenmentionedaboveisgenerally

acceptable.

3.对策段

引出对策句

列举对策句

过渡句

Weshouldtakeimmediatemeasures,forifthepresentsituationcontinuesasbefore,seriousoutcomewillcome

up.Firstofall,thegovernmentshouldpropagandizetoarousepublicawarenessof.Inthesecondplace,the

governmentshouldtakeeffectivemeasuresto.Finally,shouldbebannedbylaw.Thisismypointof

viewandIamsuremyideaisbothreasonableandworkable.

4.漫画人目的段,

引出目的句

列举目的句

Whatisthepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures?Ononehand,thedrawerintends,byproducingthesetwo

picturesofsharpcontrast,toarousepublicawareness/concemofthe.Ontheotherhand,thedrawerwants

toattracttheattentionofgovernmentsanddepartmentsconcernedandurgethemtotakeeffective

counter-measures.

5.暗含主题段

引出暗含主题句

列举暗含主题句

过渡句

Whatitillustratesisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditconveysthesymbolicmeaningof.

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodemlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecademoredramatically

thanthatofpeople'sviewontheirownlife.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthat.Ontheonehand,nodoubt,

.Ontheotherhand,.Whatismore,.Therearemanycasesshowingthat.

★篇章的组织★

根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。

例如：

1.DIRECTIONS:

A.Studythefollowingcartooncarefullyandwriteanessayinnolessthan150words.

B.YouressaymustbewrittenclearlyontheANSWERSHEETIL

C.Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:

1.Writeoutthemessagesconveyedbythecartoon.

2.Giveyourcomments

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♦本除力输内，

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谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息1.Writeoutthemessagesconveyedbythecartoon.本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画

段，引出暗含主题段。

根据提纲中的信息2.Giveyourcomments本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即持有该观点的

原因和最后得出的结论

☆SAMPLE

Asisshowninthecartoon,thehenthathasjustlaidaneggisshouting,withherheadraisedhigh,"Iensurethat

myeggbringsnocornersandthatitconsistsofsuchthreepartsaseggshell,eggwhiteandyolk."

WhatI'vementionedaboveisthesurfacemessagesconveyedbythecartoon.Itseemsfromthehen'sproudlook

thatsheisexpectedtomakeapromisefortheeggshelays.Itfact,itisclearthatthehenpromiseswhatturnsout

tobeherownduty.

Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthiscommonsocialphenomenon.Foronething,thesocialcompetitionis

becomingsofiercethatalltradestendtoproduceadstomakethemselvesbetterknowntothepublic.Foranother,

they'renotpreparedtofacethechallengeandasaresult,theycandolittleexceptdeclaretheirowndutyas

somethingpraiseworthy.

Inmyopinion,everytradeshouldtryeverymeanstoimproveitscompetitiveforcesinsteadofboastinglikethe

heninthecartoon.Therefore,Idrawmyconclusionthatjustasahenshouldn'tpromiseforheregg,sonotrade

inthesocietyshouldboastthemselvesforsomethingwithintheirdutyandthattheyshouldworkhardtoprovide

morebenefitsforthesociety.Inaword,trynottobeliketheboastingheninourlife!

2.DIRECTIONS:

A.Studythefollowinggraphscarefullyandwriteanessayinatleast150words.

B.YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEETII.

C.Youressayshouldcoverthesethreepoints:

1.effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife

2.possiblereasonfortheeffect

3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection

THEUPSA3DOWNS>POPULATIONGROWTH

根据提纲中的信息I.effectofthecountry'sgrowinghumanpopulationonitswildlife本文开头需要两个段

落，即描述漫画段，引出问题产生影响段。

根据提纲中的信息2.possiblereasonfortheeffect本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即持有该

观点的原因°

根据提纲中的信息3.yoursuggestionforwildlifeprotection本篇文章结尾处体现出作者对该现象的评论，

即改变这种现象的具体建议。

☆SAMPLE

Asisshownfromthefirstgraph,theUSAwitnessedarapidgrowthofpopulationduringtheperiodoftimefrom

theyearof1800to1990.Fromthesecondgraph,wecanfindoutthattherewasaquickerandquickerriseinthe

numberofspeciesofwildlifenolongerexistingintheUSAfrom1600to1900,reaching60inall.Itisobvious

thatthecountry'spopulationexplosionexertedagreateffectonitswildlifeandresultedinthesharpdeclinein

theirnumber.

Whatcausedtheeffect?There'rcatleasttwopossiblereasonsprovidedhere.Inthefirstplace,withthegrowthof

population,thereismoreandmorelivingspaceforhumansand,therefore,lessandlessforwildlife.Secondly,

thelargehumanpopulationcausesseriousenvironmentalpollutionsothatitishardforwildlifetoliveinaclean

andfavorablesurrounding.Asaresult,somerareanimalsbecomeendangeredandextinct.(Heremaybesome

otherfactorscontributingtothedecliningtendency,butIthinkwhathasbeenmentionedaboveisgenerally

acceptable.)

AsfarasIamconcerned,mysuggestionsastohowtoprotectwildlifeintheUSAareasfollows.Firstofall,the

governmentshouldpropagandize(宣传)/makeeffortstoarousepublicawarenessoftheimportanceofwildlife

protection.Inthesecondplace,thegovernmentshouldtakeeffectivemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateand

preventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.Finally,excessivekillingofanimalsshouldbebannedbylaw.This

ismypointofviewandIamsuremyideaisbothreasonableandworkable.

3.DIRECTIONS:

Studythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteandessayofatleast150words.

YouressaymustbewrittenneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.

Youressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:

1.Describethepictures.

2,Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures*

3.Suggestcounter-measures.

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谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息1.Describethepictures,本文开头需要一个独立的段落，即描述漫画段。

根据提纲中的信息2.Deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures.本篇文章下文耍体现出作者对该现

象的评论，即漫画人画这幅漫画的目的。

根据提纲中的信息3.Suggestcounter-measures.本篇文章结尾处要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即解决这

种问题的具体措施。

☆SAMPLE

Ascanbeseenfromthetwopicturesshowingabriefhistoryofworldcommercialfishing,fewcasesof

commercialfishingoccurredin1900andsolovelyfishesofvariouskindsswamfreelyinthewater.Things,

however,werebecomingmuchworseintheyearof1995.Countlessfishingshipssailedalongthewaterand,asa

result,fewfisheswereseenswimming.Itisclearthatbecauseofexcessivecommercialfishing,theecological

systemhadbeenthrownoutofbalance.

Whatisthepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures?Ononehand,thedrawerintends,byproducingthesetwo

picturesofsharpcontrast,toarousepublicawareness/concernoftheharmfulnessofworldwidecommercial

fishingandtheimportanceofprotectingsearesourcesonearth.Ontheotherhand,thedrawerwantstoattractthe

attentionofgovernmentsanddepartmentsconcernedandurgethemtotakeeffectivecounter-measures.

AsfarasIamconcerned,mysuggestionsareasfollows.Foronething,organizationsconcernedshouldtryevery

meanstomakepeopleconsciousofthenegativeeffectsofcommercialfishing.Foranother,lawsshouldbe

passedtoprohibitcommercialfishing.(Inaddition,theworldshouldn'tneglectthepreviouslessonsof

destroyingecologicalbalanceorattempttodoeverythingfortheonlysakeofitsownbenefits.)Theremaybe

someothercountermeasuresforthisissue,butitisgenerallybelievedthattheaboveideasarecommonly

acceptable.

4.DIRECTIONS:

Amongalltheworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,buteveryonehashis/herown

understandingofit.Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyontheissueinanewspaper.Writeanessaytothe

newspaperto

1)showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,

2)giveaspecificexample,and

3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息1)showyourunderstandingofthesymbolicmeaningofthepicturebelow,本文开头需要

一个独立的段落，即描述漫画段同时要体现出作者提炼的主题。

根据提纲中的信息2)giveaspecificexample,and本篇文章下文作者需要举例说明这种现象。

根据提纲中的信息3)giveyoursuggestionastothebestwaytoshowlove.本篇文章结尾处要体现出作者对

该现象的评论，即如何表现自己的爱。

☆SAMPLE

Asisindicatedinthepicture,loveislikealamp,whichgivesabrighterlightindarkerplaces.Itisclearthatthe

picturebringswithitsomesymbolicmeaningandthatthelampissymbolicoflove.Asweallknow,amongall

theworthyfeelingsofmankind,loveisprobablythenoblest,rarestandmostimportant.Inmyopinion,itisa

virtuehighlyvaluedforustoshowlovefortheonewhoneedslovebadlyinhislife.

Let'shaveanexampletoillustratelove.ProjectHopewasinitiatedseveralyearsagoforthepurposeofextensive

educationalloverourcountry.Eachcitizenisexpectedtofinishhispossiblesmallpartofdonationtohelp

childreninpoorareasreturntoschool.Everyshareofdonation,whetheritisbigorsmall,standsforaheartof

love,whichcontributesmoreorlesstothegreatProjectHope,(Howhappyyouwillbeifonedayinthefuture

someoneofsomeimportancevisitsyouandthanksyoufbrthehelpyoueverofferedhim,youforgetallaboutit

andhetellsyouthatyoueverfinancedhiselementaryeducationbymeansofProjectHope.)

Thenhowtoshowlovetoothers?AsfarasIamconcerned,mysuggestionisasfollows.Thebestwayforoneto

showlove,inmyopinion,istotryone'sbesttothinkforthoseinneedofhelpandloveanddoone'sbestto

providelove.RememberaChineseproverb,"Doagoodthingthoughitisverytrivial(勿以善小而不为).”

Onlyinthiswayistheworldfulloflove;onlyinthiswaycantheworldexpectabrightprospect.

5,DIRECTIONS:

Studythefollowingpicturecarefullyandwriteanessayentitled“Cultures—NationalandInternationar\

Intheessayyoushould

1)describethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,and

2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

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谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息1)describethepictureandinterpretitsmeaning,本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画段，

引出暗含主题段。

根据提纲中的信息2)giveyourcommentonthephenomenon.本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评

论，即这种现象的具体表现和最后得出的结论。

☆SAMPLE

Whatanimpressivepictureitis!AnAmericangirl,wearingatraditionalChinesecostume,issmilingheartily.

Thebc-jewelcdheaddress,beadednecklaceandcarringswithtassels,andsilk,attirewithribbonscharacterizes

thetraditionalcostumeofChineseminoritynationalitygirl.Thecostumeaddsorientalcharmstoherbeauty.Her

radiantsmileisasatributetoChinesecultureastotheprogressChinahasrecentlymade.

Obviously,wecandeducefromthispicturethatwiththedevelopmentofChina,theincreasingcharmofChinese

traditionappealstomoreandmoreforeignerswhocometoChinawithaneagernesstoseethetruecolorof

China.First,itheightensoursplendidChineseculture——nowuniversallyacceptedastheinvaluabletreasureof

theworld.AttractedbythesplendidChineseculture,nowmanyforeignersfloodtoChinatostudyortowork.

Next,itreflectsourgreatachievements.WhenChinawasthenengulfedwithpoverty,backwardness,corruption

andforeigninvasion,whocaredaboutthecultureassociatedwiththepigtailedcoolies?Butduringthelasttwo

decadesonecanhardlyignoretherapidprogressofChina.ThreemonthsafterChinawontherighttostagetheir

firstOlympicsin2008,Chinacappedthemostsignificantyearinitssportinghistorywhenthenationalsoccer

teamreachedtheWorldCupfinalsforthefirsttime.Howcan'tpeoplebefascinatedwithsuchanenergetic

countrywithalongandcolorfulculture!

Weshouldcherish,rejuvenateandpopularizeourcultureasaggressivelyasAmericansdo.Weareconfidentthat

abeUer-educatedChinaarmedwithmodemscienceandtechnologywillsurprisetheworldwithgreaterprogress.

HownicetobeamodemChinese!

6,DIRECTIONS:

Studythefollowingsetofdrawingscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

1)describethesetofdrawings,interpretitsmeaning,and

2)pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

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谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息I)describethesetofdrawings♦interpretitsmeaning,本文开头需要两个段落，即描述

漫画段，引出暗含主题段。

根据提纲中的信息2)pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论,

即这种现象在生活中的具体表现和最后得出的结论。

☆SAMPLE

Howimpressivethesetofdrawingsare!

Inthefirstdrawing,itisstronglywindyandheavilyrainyoutside,andyettheflowerinthegreenhouseisatits

best,withoutanyinfluencefromtheterribleweathercondition.Intheseconddrawing,however,thingsarequite

different.Whenexposedtotheoutsidewindandrain,theflowerappearsweakenoughandfailstostandagainst

thebadweather.

Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthatonecanhardlychallengepossibledrawbacksifhestaysina

comfortablesurroundingtoolongaperiodoftimetolacktheabilitytocopewithhardships.Likeatigerthatis

fosteredbyman.Setitfreeintheforest,anditwillnotpossiblysurvive.

Whathasbeendiscussedabovecarriesgreatimplicationsforourdailylife,esp.howtobettereducatechildren.

Withthestandardoflivingimproving,peopletendtoprovidetheirchildrenwithmaterialcomfortandasaresult,

childrenareoftenspoiled.Theymaypossiblysucceedwiththeprotectionofthecomfortonthesurface.Butwhat

iftheyleavetheso-calledcomfort?Tolivealone,theycanbarelydo;tofacedrawbacks,theywillneverdo.

Muchworse,they'llprobablybedestroyedbytheharshrealityasmiserablyastheflower.

Ilisself-evidentthattheeducationoftheyoungisvitaltothenation.Don'tleithembaskinthegreenhouseall

thetime.Havetheyexposedtotheoutsidesurroundingandthey'llbestrongerandbelterpreparedfbrtheir

future.

7.DIRECTIONS;

Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould

I)describethedrawing,

2)interpretitsmeaning,and

3)supportyourviewwithexamples.

Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(20points)

婢点又3♦起点

谋篇分析

根据提纲中的信息1)describethedrawing..本文开头需要一个独立的段落，即描述漫画段。

根据提纲中的信息2)interpretitsmeaning本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即漫画所传递的

深刻含义。

根据提纲中的信息3)supportyourviewwithexamples.本篇文章结尾处要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即

引用具体实例阐述漫画表达的观点。

☆SAMPLE

Asisshowninthepicture,onarrivingatthefinishinglineofaraceontheplayground,theactiveyoungmanhas

tocontinuehisnewjourneyinnotimeinsteadofstoppingtotakearest.Hehassuccessfullysettledthepuzzleof

“stoppingorgoingon^^whichmighthaveconfusedmanyothers.

Withtheincreasingpaceofmodemlife,perhapsnochangehascharacterizedthepastdecademoredramatically

thanthatofpeople'sviewontheirownlife.Itisgenerallyagreeduponthatpeoplehavetoadjustthemselvesto

thisnewchange.Ontheonehand,nodoubt,peoplewillgainalotbysettingnewgoalsintheirdailylife.Take

thefamousscientistThomasEdisonforexample.Hehaddoneverywellinhisearlylife,butcontinuedtopursue

somethingmoredifficultallthroughhislifeiOntheotherhand,ifoneisobsessedwiththesuccesshehas

achieved,hewouldlosethechancetopursuenewsuccess.Whatismore,hemaybecomethesalveofhissuccess.

Therearemanycasesshowingthatpeoplelosetheircouragetobetterthemselvesafterbecomingsuccessful.

Tosumup,one'sv