读后续写+埃塞俄比亚的温暖瞬间+讲义 高三下学期一模英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Agoldenhazesettledoverthecornfields.Thesunpreparedtorestfortheevening,andIintendedtofollow.Sayinggoodbyetotheclan(宗族)Iwasstayingwith,Iheadedbacktocamp.IlookedforwardtosettingmycameraasideforaneveningtoreflectonmytimeinEthiopia.Itwasn’tlongwhenIheardavoicebehindme,“Photo,photo,photo.”AyoungSurmaboyabouteightyearsoldfollowedcloselyatmyheels.Ibreathedatiredsigh.Ihadnoenergytopresstheshutterbuttononemoretime,nomatterhowbeautifuloreagerhewas.Overthepastfourdays,manyinthecamphadwantedtheirphotographtaken.Ihopedtheboywouldfindsomeoneelsetosnaphisphotograph,buthekeptfollowingmeandsaying,“Photo,photo,photo.”Hemanagedtocatchmyeye.Witheyeswidefullofhope,heaskedmeagainwithanticipationonhisface.AsIlookedathim,halfinterested,anideaforacompositionflashedinmymind.Ikneeledinthecornfieldandinstructedtheboywheretostandandhowtopose.AsIpreparedtotakethephotograph,hisenergysuddenlyshiftedfromeagernesstoshynesstofear.NomatterwhatItoldhimtodo—howtostandandhowtolook—Ijustcouldn’tgettheshot.Frustrated,Igaveup.Ilookedattheboy,wholookedaloneandawkward.He’dwantedhisphotographtaken,andnowhe’dgonecamera-shy.Inanefforttocheerhim,Iclappedmyhands,saying,“Thatwasgreat.Youweregreat.”Othersinhisclangatheredaround,cheeringandclappingloudly.Theboy’sfaceimmediatelybrokeintoasmile.Iintuitivelytookafewshotsofthemoment.ThatphotographturnedouttobebetterthanI’dimagined.注意：续写词数应为150左右;请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IprintedalargecopyofthephotographandreturnedtotheSurmaboy’sclan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsIleftEthiopia,IheldontothememoryoftheSurmaboy’sjoyoustearsandthecollectivehopeofhisclan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意本文讲述了一位摄影师在埃塞俄比亚的旅行经历。在一次准备返回营地的途中，一位年轻的苏尔马族男孩请求他拍照。尽管摄影师感到疲惫，但被男孩的期待所打动，决定为他拍照。然而，男孩在镜头前变得害羞和紧张，导致拍摄失败。摄影师随后通过鼓励和掌声让男孩放松，最终捕捉到了男孩微笑的瞬间，这张照片意外地成为了最美的作品。后来，摄影师将照片打印出来送给了男孩和他的族人，男孩的喜悦和族人的欢呼让他深受触动。这段经历让他意识到，摄影的意义不仅在于捕捉完美的画面，更在于捕捉情感和瞬间。故事山分析引入：摄影师在埃塞俄比亚的田野中结束一天的拍摄，准备返回营地。上升：男孩请求拍照，摄影师虽疲惫但被其期待打动，决定尝试。冲突：男孩在镜头前变得紧张，拍摄失败。高潮：摄影师通过鼓励和掌声让男孩放松，捕捉到男孩微笑的瞬间。结局：摄影师将照片送给男孩，男孩和族人的喜悦让他深受触动。伏笔及回应伏笔：摄影师提到“我感到疲惫，不想再按快门”。回应：尽管疲惫，他还是被男孩的期待打动，决定尝试拍照。伏笔：男孩反复说“Photo,photo”，表现出强烈的期待。回应：摄影师最终为他拍出了最美的照片。伏笔：摄影师提到“我脑海中闪过一个构图的想法”。回应：他按照构图指导男孩，尽管拍摄失败，但最终捕捉到了更美的瞬间。伏笔：男孩从期待到害羞再到紧张。回应：摄影师通过鼓励和掌声让男孩放松，最终拍到男孩的微笑。伏笔：摄影师提到“我希望能拍到完美的照片”。回应：他意识到，最美的照片是捕捉到的情感，而非完美的构图。续写要点第一段：描述摄影师将照片送给男孩的场景，男孩和族人的反应。关键点：男孩的喜悦、族人的欢呼、摄影师的感动。第二段：总结这次经历对摄影师的影响，以及他的感悟。关键点：摄影的意义、情感的力量、旅行的意义。情感线文章通过男孩对拍照的期待、摄影师的疲惫与感动、以及男孩最终的喜悦，展现了情感的起伏。男孩的期待和紧张，摄影师的疲惫与尝试，以及最终通过鼓励和掌声让男孩放松，捕捉到最美瞬间，都体现了情感的力量。男孩的微笑和族人的欢呼让摄影师深受触动，他意识到摄影的意义不仅在于技术，更在于捕捉情感和瞬间，这种情感的共鸣贯穿全文。故事线摄影师在埃塞俄比亚的旅行经历。男孩对拍照的强烈期待。摄影师的疲惫与内心的挣扎。拍摄失败后的调整与鼓励。捕捉到男孩微笑的瞬间。摄影师的感悟与成长。主旨升华句1.Thetruebeautyofphotographyliesnotintheperfectshot,butintheemotionsitcaptures.2.Sometimes,themostmeaningfulmomentscomefromunexpectedplaces.3.Asimpleactofkindnesscanleavealastingimpactonsomeone’slife.4.Thejoyofotherscanbethemostrewardinggiftforaphotographer.5.Incapturingothers'smiles,weoftenfindourown.写作示范（两篇）示例一：IprintedalargecopyofthephotographandreturnedtotheSurmaboy’sclan.Theboy’seyessparkledwithexcitementashesawmeapproaching.Herantowardsme,hisfaceglowingwithanticipation.Ihandedhimthephotograph,andheheldittightly,examiningeverydetailwithwonder.Hisclanmembersgatheredaround,theirfacesfilledwithprideandjoyastheylookedattheimage.Theboy’ssmilewasinfectious,anditseemedtobrightentheentirearea.Hehuggedthephotographclosetohischest,andIcouldseetearsofhappinesswellingupinhiseyes.Hisclanmembersclappedandcheered,andIfeltadeepsenseoffulfillment.Inthatmoment,Irealizedthatthetruebeautyofphotographywasnotjustincapturingtheperfectshot,butincapturingtheessenceofamomentandtheemotionsitevoked.AsIleftEthiopia,IheldontothememoryoftheSurmaboy’sjoyoustearsandthecollectivehopeofhisclan.Itwasareminderofthepowerofasimpleactofkindnessandtheimpactitcouldhaveonsomeone’slife.Theboy’ssmileandthewarmthofhisclanstayedwithmelongafterIhadleftthecornfieldsbehind.Iknewthatthephotographwouldremainacherishedtreasureforthem,asymboloftheirconnectiontotheworldbeyondtheirvillage.Forme,itwasalessoninhumilityandempathy,teachingmethatsometimes,themostmeaningfulmomentscomefromunexpectedplaces.IhopedthatmyjourneythroughEthiopiahadleftapositivemark,notjustonmycameraroll,butintheheartsofthepeopleIhadmet.示例二：IprintedalargecopyofthephotographandreturnedtotheSurmaboy’sclan.Theboy’sfacelitupwithpurejoyashesawmeholdingthephotograph.Hereachedouteagerly,hissmallhandstremblingwithexcitement.Asheheldthepicture,hiseyesdancedwithhappiness,andheshowedittoeveryonearoundhim.Hisclanmembersgathered,theirfacesbeamingwithpride.Theboy’ssmilewasradiant,andhehuggedthephotographtightly,asifitwerethemostpreciousthingintheworld.Icouldseetearsofhappinessinhiseyes,andhisclanmembersclappedandcheeredloudly.Inthatmoment,Ifeltadeepsenseofconnectionandfulfillment.Irealizedthatthetruepowerofphotographywasnotjustincapturinganimage,butincapturingamomentthatcouldbringsomuchjoy.AsIleftEthiopia,IheldontothememoryoftheSurmaboy’sjoyoustearsandthecollectivehopeofhisclan.Itwasareminderthatthemostmeaningfulmomentsoftencomefromunexpectedplaces.Theboy’ssmileandthewarmthofhisclanstayedwithmelongafterIhadleftthecornfieldsbehind.Iknewthatthephotographwouldremainacherishedtreasureforthem,asymboloftheirconnectiontotheworldbeyondtheirvillage.Forme,itwasalessoninhumilityandempathy,teachingmethatsometimes,themostmeaningfulmomentscomefromunexpectedplaces.IhopedthatmyjourneythroughEthiopiahadleftapositivemark,notjustonmycameraroll,butintheheartsofthepeopleIhadmet.

参考答案IprintedalargecopyofthephotographandreturnedtotheSurmaboy’sclan.AsIhandedthephototohim,hiseyeswidenedwithexcitement.Hehelditupforeveryonetosee,andachorusofl