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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjob,andnowourfinancialsituationwasterrible.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,andabuyerwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.Deepindespair,Isattypinglettersforjobs.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemy13-month-oldson,Forrestplayingnearourbig,gentledog,Brigitte.BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpbutsighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingmadlyandrunningoutoftheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,Irealizedmysonwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:故事围绕“我”展开,因失业陷入财务困境,准备卖掉房子并放弃爱犬Brigitte。一天,“我”在为找工作打字时,13个月大的儿子Forrest在Brigitte附近玩耍。突然,Brigitte狂吠并跑向泳池,“我”发现儿子失踪,惊恐地跑到外面,看到儿子在水中挣扎。Brigitte勇敢地跳入水中救起儿子。后来,“我”向来看房的买家讲述了Brigitte的故事,买家深受感动,决定买下房子并帮“我”承担养犬费用,让Brigitte继续留在“我”家。故事山分析:开端:“我”失业,经济困难,准备卖房弃犬。发展:儿子在Brigitte附近玩耍,Brigitte突然狂吠冲向泳池。高潮:儿子溺水,Brigitte勇敢救子。结局:买家听了故事后决定买房并帮“我”养犬。伏笔及回应:伏笔:“我”准备卖房弃犬,暗示生活艰难。回应:在困境中发生了狗狗救子的奇迹,改变了“我”的命运。伏笔:Brigitte在圣诞夜神秘出现。回应:强调了Brigitte与“我”家的特殊缘分,为它救儿子增添合理性。伏笔:“我”看到儿子在Brigitte附近玩耍。回应:为儿子溺水时Brigitte能及时救援埋下伏笔。伏笔:Brigitte开始狂吠并跑向泳池。回应:引出儿子溺水,Brigitte施救的情节。伏笔:“我”家有泳池。回应:是儿子溺水以及Brigitte展现英勇行为的场景。续写要点:
第一段:重点描写Brigitte救儿子的过程,突出紧张氛围和Brigitte的勇敢。
第二段:详细描述“我”向买家讲述故事的过程以及买家的反应,展现温暖结局。情感线:故事开篇是“我”的绝望,因经济困境卖房弃犬。儿子溺水时“我”极度恐慌,Brigitte救子后“我”转为惊喜与感激。向买家讲述故事时情感真挚,买家的回应让“我”充满希望,从绝望到希望的情感转变明显。故事线:“我”失业陷入经济困境。准备卖房弃犬。儿子在Brigitte附近玩耍。儿子溺水,Brigitte救子。“我”向买家讲述故事。买家决定买房并帮“我”养犬。主旨升华句:Loveandloyaltycanturndespairintohope,asshownbyBrigitte'sheroicact.Eveninthefaceofgreatdifficulties,aglimmerofhopecanemergefromunexpectedplaces,likethearrivalofaloyaldog.Thebondbetweenahumanandadogcanbeunbreakable,capableofcreatingmiraclesinthemostdesperatesituations.Sometimes,themostpreciousgiftsinlifecomeintheformofloyaltyandselflessness,justlikeBrigitte'srescueofthebaby.Miraclesoftenhappenwhenloveandloyaltyarepresent,asdemonstratedbythisheartwarmingstoryofadogandafamily.写作示范一:
Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.Myheartseemedtostopbeatingforamoment,andIletoutablood-curdlingscream.Mylegsfeltlikejelly,butIforcedmyselftoruntowardsthepool.Brigitte,withadeterminationinhereyes,launchedherselfintothewater.Thecoldwatersplashedaroundher,butsheswamwithallhermighttowardsForrest.Herstrongstrokescutthroughthewaterasifshekneweverysecondcounted.Finally,shereachedmyson,andwithagentlenudge,shepushedhimtowardsthesideofthepool.IquicklygrabbedForrest,pullinghimtosafety.Hewascoughing,butalive.Iheldhimclose,sobbingwithrelief,andthenlookedatBrigitte,whowasshakingthewateroffherbody,hereyesshiningwithpride.Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.Irecountedeverydetail,fromthemomentBrigittearrivedonourdoorsteponChristmasEvetoherheroicrescuetoday.Thebuyerlistened,herexpressionamixofshockandadmiration.WhenIfinished,shewassilentforamoment.Then,shesaid,“Thishousehasaspecialstory,astoryofloveandcourage.Iwanttobeapartofit.I’llbuythehouse,andIinsistthatyoukeepBrigitte.I’llhelpyouwiththecosts.Adoglikeherisatreasure,andsheshouldstaywithherfamily.”Herwordsfilledmewithanewsenseofhope,andIrealizedthatsometimes,lifehasawayofturningthingsaroundwhenweleastexpectit.写作示范二:
Isawmysonstrugglinginthewater.Instantly,awaveofterrorwashedoverme.Ishoutedatthetopofmylungs,butmyvoiceseemedtobeswallowedbytheair.Brigitte,withoutamoment'shesitation,divedintothepool.ThewaterrippledaroundherassheswamtowardsForrestwithincrediblespeed.Shereachedhiminnotimeandusedherbodytokeephimabovethewater.IrushedtotheedgeofthepoolandpulledForrestout.Hewaspaleandgaspingforair,buthewasokay.Ihuggedhimtightly,tearsofjoyandreliefstreamingdownmyface.Then,IturnedtoBrigitte,whowasclimbingoutofthepool,exhaustedbutvictorious.Later,Itoldthestoryofthedogtothebuyer.IstartedfromtheunexpectedarrivalofBrigitteonChristmasEveandthendescribedtheheart-stoppingmomentwhenIsawmysoninthewaterandhowBrigittesavedhim.Thebuyerlistenedintently,hereyesfixedonme.WhenIfinished,shesmiledandsaid,“Thisisahousefullofloveandmiracles.Iwanttobuyit,andIwantyoutokeepyourdog.I’llhelpyouwiththeexpenses.Adogthatcansavealifelikethisisafamilymember,andfamilyshouldalwaysbetogether.”Herkindwordsgavemeanewleaseonlife,andIknewthateveninthedarkesttimes,thereisalw
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