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题目原文I’dalwaysbeentoldtotakecareofmyolderbrother,Brian,whowasbornweakandsmall.I’doftentiehisshoesorprepareanotherglassofwaterforhim.MymomsawmylargersizeandstrongbodyasasignthatIwastobeakindofguardianangelforBrian.However,thatwasnotthecase.Onedayourschoolsponsoredapumpkin-carvingcontest.Firstprizewas$100,andIknewjusthowIwouldspendit.Therewasabrand-newgameIwasdyingtoown.SoIdecidedthefirst-placebonusdefinitelyhadtolandinmypocket.WhenIhadtocarvetheperfectpumpkinI’dpickedout,itdawnedonmethatwithmybigclumsyfingersI’dsurelyscrewitup.IthoughtofBrian’ssmaller,delicatehandsandknewhewasthemanforthejob.IimmediatelybeggedBrian.Unexpectedly,heaskedforacut.Thatwasfifty-fifty.Quicklydoingthemathinmyhead,IfiguredoutevenifIsplitthefirstprize,I’dstillhaveenoughcashforthegame.SoIgaveintoBrian’sdemands.Withskillfulhands,Briancarvedtheperfectface,andnowwehadthebestpumpkinever.Thentheunexpectedhappened:Wecameinsecond.Unfortunately,secondprizewasonly$50,andIneededeverypennyofthattobuythegame.Thedayoftheawardsceremony,theprincipalhandedoverthemoneytomebecauseBrianwashome,sickwithacold.Ifhereallywantedtowin,hewouldhavebeenheretoday,Ithoughttomyself,justifyingstealingthecashfromunderpoorBrian’srunnynose.Withhardlyathought,Irantothestoreandboughtmydreamgame.ThatnightwhenBrianaskedifwehadwon,Idenied,afraidtolookintohiseyes.ThewholethingwasnevermentionedagainuntilthedaywhenBrianwaspackingforcollege.IplayedmyusualroleinhelpinghimpackwhenIcameacrossanoldalbumfilledwithphotoshehadtakenastheschoolphotographer.Paragraph1:Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Youactuallyknewanddidn’tsayanything?”Iwasshocked.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————文本主旨“我”Brian更加深厚。同时也体现了“我”在得知真相后的愧疚以及决心改正，做一个更好的弟弟，守护这份亲情。词汇积累1.：吸引某人的目光。文中“Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.”表示一张照片吸引了“我”的注意。2.a：（心脏）突然停跳，此处指心跳加速，形容惊讶或激动的心情。“ButwhatmademyheartskipabeatwasthesmallnoteBrianhadwrittenontheback.”说明纸条上的内容让“我”十分震惊。3.a：喉咙哽咽，形容因激动、难过等情绪而说不出话。“Istaredatthewords,feelingalumpforminmythroat.”生动描绘出“我”看到纸条后的情绪反应。4.“MemoriesofallthetimesIhadbeenlessthankindtohimfloodedmymind...”形象地体现出“我”开始回忆过去对哥哥不好的种种时刻。5.a：使某人深受打击。“Hiswordshitmelikeatonofbricks.”突出哥哥的话给“我”带来的强烈冲击。6.：放下。“Iputdownthealbumandwalkedovertohim...”描述了“我”放下相册走向哥哥的动作。7.a“wrappinghiminatighthug”表达了“我”对哥哥的情感释放。续写分析1.衔接句：第一段首句“Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.”承接上文提到的在帮Brian收拾行李时看到旧相册，自然地引出关键照片及背后的纸条，从而推动情节发展。第二段首句“‘Youactuallyknewanddidn’tsayanything?’Iwasshocked.”则是基于第一段纸条内容的发现，直接引出与Brian的对话，衔接紧密，过渡流畅。2.Brian知晓“我”他一直以来宽容善良的性格特点。在比赛时他提出分成，说明他对金钱并非完全不在意，但在亲情面前选择了让步。而“我”在Brian中，整个情节发展符合人物性格和故事逻辑。3.“我”一直被要求照顾Brian南瓜雕刻比赛奖金这件事上表现自私，这为后文“我”的愧疚埋下伏笔。Brian对“我”愿意帮“我”“我”偷钱后选择沉默这一情节的情感铺垫充足，不显得突兀。情感走向起初，“我”看到纸条时内心充满震惊与愧疚，回想起过去对Brian的Brian“我”自身行为的悔恨。最后，“我”与Brian拥抱和解，情感变得温暖而坚定，决心要守护这份兄弟情，情感基调从低沉转向积极向上。主题深化来。Brian的宽容让“我”认识到亲情的珍贵，不能因一时的自私而破才能让亲情更加牢固。下水文一Paragraph1:Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.Itwasapictureofthepumpkinwecarvedtogether.ButwhatmademyheartskipabeatwasthesmallnoteBrianhadwrittenontheback.Itread,“Iknewyoutookthemoney.Ijustdidn'twanttoruinourrelationship.”Istaredatthewords,feelingalumpforminmythroat.Thisdiscoverywaslikeawake-upcall.Alltheseyears,Ihadbeenlivingwithmyselfishact,thinkingIwasgettingawaywithit.ButBrianhadseenthroughmeandstillchosetoloveme.IrealizedhowmuchIhadgrownupsincethen.Iusedtobesofocusedonmyowndesires,butnow,lookingatthisnote,Ifeltastrongurgetomakethingsright.MemoriesofthetimesIhadletBriandownfloodedmymind,andIknewIcouldn'tkeepbeingthatperson.Paragraph2:“Youactuallyknewanddidn’tsayanything?”Iwasshocked.Brianlookedupfromhispackingandsmiledgently.“You'remybrother.Iloveyou.Iknewhowmuchthatgamemeanttoyou.AndIwassickthatday,soIcouldn'treallygotoclaimtheprizeanyway.”Hiswordshitmelikeatonofbricks.Inotonlyfeltguiltybutalsoinspired.Iputdownthealbumandwalkedovertohim,wrappinghiminatighthug.“I'msosorry,Brian.Iwaswrong.Ishouldhavenevertakenthemoney.Youdeservedhalfofit.”Brianhuggedmeback.“It'sokay.Let'sjustforgetaboutit.We'rebrothers,andthat'swhatmatters.”Fromthatdayon,Imadeapromisetomyself.IwouldnotonlybeabetterbrothertoBrianbutalsousethisexperiencetobecomeamorehonestandcaringpersoninallaspectsofmylife.IwouldnolongerletmydesirescloudmyjudgmentandwouldalwaysprioritizethefeelingsofthoseIloved.下水文二Paragraph1:Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.Itwasapictureofthepumpkinwecarvedtogether.ButwhatmademyheartskipabeatwasthesmallnoteBrianhadwrittenontheback.Itread,“Iknewyoutookthemoney.Ijustdidn'twanttoruinourrelationship.”Istaredatthewords,feelingalumpforminmythroat.AsIstoodthere,memoriesofthatdaycamefloodingbackevenmorevividly.IrememberedhownervousIwaswhenBrianfirstaskedforacutoftheprize.IwassofocusedongettingthatgamethatIdidn'tevenconsiderhisfeelingsproperly.Now,lookingatthisnote,IsawallthetimesIhadbeenimpatientwithhimwhenheneededhelptyinghisshoesorgettingaglassofwater.Irealizedhowmuchhehadenduredfromme,yethestillheldontoourbrotherlybond.Paragraph2:“Youactuallyknewanddidn’tsayanything?”Iwasshocked.Brianlookedupfromhispackingandsmiledgently.“You'remybrother.Iloveyou.Iknewhowmuchthatgamemeanttoyou.AndIwassickthatday,soIcouldn'treallygotoclaimtheprizeanyway.”Hiswordshitmelikeatonofbricks.Iputdownthealbumandwalkedovertohim,wrappinghiminatighthug.“I'msosorry,Brian.Iwaswrong.Ishouldhavenevertakenthemoney.Youdeservedhalfofit.”Brianhuggedmeback.“It'sokay.Let'sjustforgetaboutit.We'rebrothers,andthat'swhatmatters.”Fromthatdayon,everytimeIthoughtofBrian,Iwouldalsorememberthismomentoftruth.Iwouldrecallallthelittleandbigthingshehaddoneformeovertheyears.AndImadeasolemnvowtomyself.Iwouldcherishourrelationship,andwheneverIwasfacedwithachoice,IwouldalwaysthinkofhowmyactionswouldaffectBrian.Iwouldbethebrotherhetrulydeserved,makingupforallthetimesIhadfallenshortinthepast.参考答案Paragraph1:Iwasenjoyingthephotoswhenonecaughtmyeye.Itwasapictureofthepumpkinwecarvedtogether.ButwhatmademyheartskipabeatwasthesmallnoteBrianhadwrittenontheback.Itread,“Iknewyoutookthemoney.Ijustdidn'twanttoruinourrelationship.”Istaredatthewords,feelingalumpforminmythroat.Alltheseyears,IhadthoughtIgotawaywithit,butBrianhadknownallalong.Icouldn'tbelieveIhadbeensoselfishandthathehadbeensoforgiving.MemoriesofallthetimesIhadbeenlessthankindtohimfloodedmymind,andIfeltanoverwhelming