专题09 书面表达（单元主题写作满分范文）-八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津上海版）

PAGE1PAGE2姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________专题09书面表达（单元主题写作，满分范文15篇）（解析版）一、书面表达1．（22-23八年级下·上海金山·期中）Writingapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mymostexcitingday”.(以“最令我激动的一天”为题，写一篇至少60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯，标点符号不占格)(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)Suggestedquestions(以下问题仅供参考)(1)Whenwasyourmostexcitingday?(2)Whatdidyoudoonthatday?(3)Whywasitthemostexcitingday?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IcanstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttothezoo.That’sthemostexcitingdayI’veneverhad.Itwasafineday.WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.Thereweresomanyanimalsinit,suchasmonkeys,tigers,lions,bears,elephants,pandasandsoon.Allofthemwereinthecages.Themonkeyswerenaughty.Tigersandlionsmademescared.Andthepandasweresolovely.IwassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍最兴奋的一天是什么时候，讲述那天做了什么，谈谈为什么那天是最激动人心的一天。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍最兴奋的一天是什么时候；第二步，讲述那天做了什么；第三步，谈谈为什么那天是最激动人心的一天。[亮点词汇]①getto到达②can’twaittodosth迫不及待做某事③suchas例如[高分句型]①IwassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.（使用because引导原因状语从句）②WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.（使用when引导时间状语从句）2．（22春八年级下·上海嘉定·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthegiventopic(根据以下话题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)Therearealotofusefulresourcesinourlife.Pleasechooseoneandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof____________”(我们的生活中有许多有用的资源，请选取一种以“____________的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)Suggestedquestions:Whyisthethingimportant?Whatcanwedowithit?Whatcanwedotoprotectit?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheimportanceofsavingwaterItiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.So,whatshouldwedo?AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldusewatertwiceormore.Forexample,wecanusewateraftercleaningthericetowatertheplants.Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.Lastbutnotleast,pollutedwatershouldbedealtwithintimetokeeptherivercleanbecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,weshouldpaycloseattentiontodailywater.Let’sactnowtosavewater.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作时需要围绕题干提出的问题展开，并可适当发挥，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，并引出要保护的资源；第二步，详细介绍采取的措施；第三步，最后进行总结。[亮点词汇]①asfarasIamconcerned就我而言②turnoff关闭③lastbutnotleast最后[高分句型]①Itiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.（it作形式主语）②Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）3．（22春八年级下·上海长宁·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Useelectricitysafely”.（你发现你身边的亲朋好友经常有不安全用电的行为，有很大的危险隐患。请以“安全用电”为题写一篇60—120词的短文，标点符号不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:（写作必须包含以下内容）1.Howdosomepeopleuseelectricity?2.Whyshouldweuseelectricitysafely?3.What’syoursuggestiononusingelectricitysafely?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Useelectricitysafely

Usingelectricitysafelyisaveryimportanttopicinourdailylives.

First,ensureanyelectricalitemsareapprovedstandardwhenpurchasingandkeepthemcorrectlymaintained.Second,unplugelectricalitemsthatarenotinregularuseandensurethatyouunplugandswitchoffelectricalitemswhenyouareawayfromthehouseforanylengthoftime.Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.Butwhenyouusethem,makesurenottogetthemwetandavoidpluggingandunpluggingwithwethands.Thelast,alwaysturntheelectricsoffatthemainsifcarryingoutanyelectricalrepairsandonlyattemptrepairsifyouknowwhatyouaredoing.

Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“应该如何用电；安全用电的原因以及安全用电的建议”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“安全用电是我们日常生活中非常重要的话题。”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何安全用电以及安全用电的建议”重点介绍安全用电的具体情况；第三步，书写结语。表达“我们应该谨慎用电，因为插上电源的物品如果处于待机状态，则可能会引发火灾，并浪费能源。”[亮点词汇]①switchoff关上②makesurenottodosth确保不做某事[高分句型]①Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表劝告）②Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.（because引导的原因状语从句，if引导的条件状语从句）4．（22春八年级下·上海浦东新·期中）TheEarthDayiscomingonApril22nd.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?Pleasewriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“HowtoprotectourMotherEarth”.（以“如何保护我们的地球母亲”为题，根据英文提示写一篇不少于60个单词的短文）Suggestedquestions:1.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?2.WhatcanyoudotoprotectourMotherEarth?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoprotectourMotherEarthInthelastfewyears,wehavebeenfacedwithseriousenvironmentalproblems,suchasglobalwarming,airpollutionandenergyshortage.IthinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.Firstofall,weshouldformthehabitofsavingfoodfromnowon.Besides,we’dbettertravelbybusorbybiketoprotecttheenvironment.What’smore,itisagoodideatorecyclewaste.Itcanhelpusmakebetteruseofthelimitedresource.WeonlyhaveoneEarth.Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中你能做什么来保护我们的地球，注意要点要齐全。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题。介绍我们的地球面临着严重的环境问题；第二步，具体阐述我们能做什么来保护我们的地球；第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家现在就行动起来。[亮点词汇]①befacedwith面临，面对②suchas比如③firstofall首先④fromnowon从现在起⑤what’smore除此之外还⑥makeuseof利用[高分句型]①IthinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.（省略that的宾语从句）②Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!（祈使句；before引导的时间状语从句）5．（22-23八年级下·上海青浦·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）假如你是李华，最近你发现学校里存在浪费和破坏各类资源的情况，例如：有的学生在水龙头边打水仗等。请你选取一个方面，给同学们写一篇倡议书，说说你的看法，并提出解决问题的具体行动。（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,Ihavefoundthattherearesituationsofwasteanddestructionofvariousresourcesinschools.Forexample,insomeclassrooms,thelightsareonwithoutanyone.Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.Soweneedtosaveelectricity.Firstly,whenweleavetheclassroom,wemustturnoffthepowersupply.Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，针对存在浪费和破坏各类资源的情况介绍你的看法；第二步，提出解决问题的具体行动。[亮点词汇]①sufficient足够的②turnoff关掉[高分句型]①Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.（although引导让步状语从句）②Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.（if引导的条件状语从句）6．（22-23八年级下·上海奉贤·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof________”(我们的生活中有很多重要的东西，你认为什么对于你或者人们很重要，谈谈你的想法并阐述理由，鉴于它的重要性，我们应当怎么做？请以“__________的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数。)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatdoyouthinkisimportant?2.Whydoyouthinkitisimportant?3.Whatshouldwedotoprotectit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.Thefirstchoiceisafriend.Friendsaresoimportantinourlives.Welivetogetherandweshareourhappinessorsadnesswiththem.Friendsarepartsofourlives.Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?Wehearthatthecriminalsareisolatedbyothersbecausemostofthemhavenofriends.Withoutfriends,peoplecannotexpresstheiremotionsandtheywillbecomelonelyandindifferenteasily.Wecan’tlivewithoutfriends.Weshouldlearntocaremoreaboutothersandhelpothers.Inthisway,wewillmakemorefriendsandourfriendshipwilllastlongeraswell.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时及一般将来时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，直入主题表述我认为生活中朋友是重要的；第二步，表述为什么认为朋友很重要；第三步，表述我们如何做才能维持友谊。[亮点词汇]①talkabout讨论②careabout关心③Inthisway用这种方式[高分句型]①Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.（when引导的时间状语从句）②Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?（if引导的条件状语从句）7．（23-24八年级·上海奉贤·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AhelpinghandIgave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格）帮助别人自己也会快乐，即使一件微不足道的小事也会令自己感到快乐。你在生活中一定也有向需要帮助的人伸出援助之手的经历。请你选取其中一件，谈一谈你是如何提供帮助的及你的感受。（注意：短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AhelpinghandIgaveHelpingothersbringsmehappinessandmakesmylifemeaningful.Igrowupalotbyhelpingothers.IamgoodatEnglishandcanalwaysgetgoodgradesinEnglishexams.Thenoneday,mybestfriendTinaaskedmetohelpherwithherEnglish.SoIsharedsomeusefulwaystolearnEnglish.Eachtimeshehastroublewithherhomework,I’lltrymybesttoexplainasclearlyaspossible.I’mgladthatTinahasmadegreatprogressinEnglish.Ifeelastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenhelpingothers.Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，帮助别人能够带给我快乐，让我的生活更有意义；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，详细说明如何提供帮助；第三步，书写结语，帮助别人能够给我带来满足感。[亮点词汇]①getgoodgradesinEnglishexams英语考试取得好成绩②tryone’sbesttodo尽最大努力去……[高分句型]Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.(宾语从句)8．（23-24八年级·上海浦东新·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“An/A__________(unusual,interesting,special...)experienceinmylife”(以《一次……的经历》为题写一篇不少于60词的短文。要求内容贴切，意思连贯，不少于60个词，标点符号不占格。)

Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下问题仅供参考）1.

Whenandwheredidithappen?2.

Whathappened?3.

Howdidyoufeelaboutit?4.

Whydidyouthinkso?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AsuccessfulexperienceinmylifeInmymemory,therearefullofsuccessfulexperiences.Themostunforgettableonehappenedatschoollastterm.IwasnotgoodatsubjectsatschoolandIcouldn’tgetgoodmarksinexams.IfeltworriedaboutmystudysoIdecidedtoworkmuchharder.Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.What’smore,Ioftenaskedmyteachersforhelp.AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.NowIhavedonebetterinmystudy.IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.IfImeetwithdifficultiesinmylife,Ishouldtrymybesttoovercomethem.Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；描述经历用“一般过去时”③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要描述什么样的经历及发生的时间和地点；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了这次经历的过程；第三步，描述自己的感受和启发。[亮点词汇]①arefullof充满②themostunforgettableone最难以忘怀的③difficulty困难④overcome克服[高分句型]①Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.（比较级）②AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.（让步状语从句）9．（22-23八年级·上海奉贤·期中）Everyonehassomechallengesinhislife.Howcanyoudealwithchallengeswhenyoufacethem?Thinkaboutoneofthechallengesyouhavefacedandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“facingchallenges”.（每个人的生活中会遇到各种挑战，想一想当你面对挑战时，你是如何应对的。联系一次你的相关经历，以“面对挑战”为题，写一篇不少于60字的短文。以下问题可供参考。）1.Whatwasyourchallenge?2.Howdidyoufeelwhenyoufacedthechallenge?3.Howdidyoudealwiththechallenge?4.Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例：FacingchallengesLifeisfilledwithchallenges.Inmystudy,Ialwaysmeetwithnewchallenges.WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.Thiswasaseriousproblembecausemathisaveryimportantsubject.However,Ididnotquit.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass.IalsodidasmanyexercisesasIcould.Besides,Iturnedtomyteacherandclassmatesforhelp.Intheend,afterseveralmonths’hardwork,Ipassedthefinalexam.Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.What’smore,thosechallengesmakemewhoIam.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点以问题的方式给出，考生应注意不要遗漏；适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写作主题“生活充满挑战”；第二步，阐述具体写作内容。从挑战的内容、面对挑战的感受、解决措施三方面阐述面对挑战的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，总结面对挑战学习到的经验。[亮点词汇]①befilledwith充满②as…assb.could尽可能……③turntosb.forhelp向某人求助④sparenoefforts不遗余力[高分句型]①WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.(usedto)②Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.(动名词作主语；if引导的条件状语从句)10．（22-23八年级下·河北邢台·期中）假设你是李华，学校英语俱乐部要开展以“KeepSafe,StartwithMe”为主题的英语征文活动。请根据下列提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。要求：（1）结构完整、条理清晰、语言通畅。（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?TodayI’dliketotellyousomewaystokeepsafe.First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.Wemustn’tplayonthestreet.Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.Second,followthetrafficrules.Beforecrossingaroad,stopandlookbothways.Neverputyourheadoutofarunningcar.Manypeoplegethurtbydoingso.Third,don’ttalktoastrangerorgowithhimorher.Fourth,wehadbetterknowhowtogivefirstaidincaseofanaccident.That’swhatIwanttosay.Startwithmenow,let’skeepsafeinourdailylife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据思维导图内容进行描述并适当拓展。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题，介绍保持安全的方法；第二步，具体介绍保持安全的方法；第三步，倡导大家从自己做起，在日常生活中保证自己的安全。[亮点词汇]①tellsb.sth.告诉某人某事②followthetrafficrules遵守交通规则③givefirstaid进行急救[高分句型]①First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.（祈使句的肯定形式）②Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.（because引导原因状语从句；therebe句型）11．（22-23八年级·上海普陀·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Theheroinmyheart”(以“我心中的英雄”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)提示：每个人在成长的过程中总会遇见一些对你产生深远影响的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。请你用一件具体事例来讲述你心中的英雄激励你的故事。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheHeroinMyHeartYuanLongpingisaheroinmyheart.Hewasbornin1930anddiedattheageof91.Mr.Yuanspentnearly60yearsdoingresearchonbetterriceinordertomakepeopleintheworldhaveenoughfood.Andhewassuccessful!HewashonoredasFatherofHybridRice.IthinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.Iwillneverforgethim.Asastudent,Ihavedecidednottowasteanyfoodfromnowon.Also,I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.WhenIgrowup,I’llworkhardforourcountrylikehim.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：本文话题已给出，介绍心目中的英雄，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，直入主题引出自己心目中的英雄；第二步，详细介绍其基本情况并介绍他都做了什么事；第三步，写你为什么崇拜他；第四步，写你从他身上学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①attheageof在……岁②inorderto为了③behonoredas被授予④studyharder更努力地学习[高分句型]①IthinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.（宾语从句）②Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.（so...that引导的结果状语从句）③I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）12．（22-23八年级下·上海宝山·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Makeourcitybetter”（以“使我们的城市更美好”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）作为上海的公民，建设美丽的绿色城市是我们每个人的责任。生活中，有些人积极做到低碳出行，有些人严格进行垃圾分类，有的人注意节约能源，还有的参与绿化城市……请你谈谈你打算怎样做，并阐明理由。（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakeourcitybetterWeshouldmakeourcityabetterplacetolivein.Inourdailylife,wecandolotsofthings.Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.Recyclingglasses,cansandwastepaperisalsoagoodideatoprotecttheenvironment.Second,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Breakingrulesisverydangerousanditmaycausebigaccidents.Ifweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：写作题目已给出，考生注意不要偏题，并适当添加细节，突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出主题，使城市更好；第二步，细节介绍做法。[亮点词汇]①insteadof而不是②Recycling回收利用[高分句型]①Ifweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.（条件状语从句）②Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.（when引导的时间状语从句）13．（22春八年级下·上海·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsabout“Electricityinourdailylife”.（以“电和我们的日常生活”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下内容仅供参考）1.Whatrolesdoeselectricityplayinourdailylife?2.Whatshouldwedotouseelectricityproperly?Electricityinourdailylife____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文ElectricityinourdailylifeElectricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.Athomeweuseitforthelights,TVs,airconditioningandsoon.Andinfactories,electricitymakesthelargemachinesworksothattherearesomanydifferentsortsofproductsinthemarket.Therefore,electricitygivesusamorecolorfullifeandhelpsthesocietydevelop.Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.So,weshouldsaveelectricity.Weshouldturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.Inaword,everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingelectricity.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：考生应注意按照所给问题的提示作答，不要遗漏要点；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，点明电力与人类的关系，并具体阐述电力在生活中的作用；第二步，书写结语，提醒大家节约用电。[亮点词汇]①akindof一种②turnoff关掉，关闭③playapartin在……中起作用[高分句型]①Electricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.（省略引导词的定语从句）②Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.（if引导条件状语从句）14．（22-23八年级下·上海静安·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothetopic“Electricity”.以“电”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。.Suggestedquestions：1.Whatiselectricity?2.Wheredoeselectricitycomefrom?3.Whyiselectricityimportant?_____