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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。AtthetimeIwaslivinginasmallvillageabout25milesfromLondon.ThatwastheadvantageoflivingtherebecauseyoucouldgettoLondoninhalfanhour.Thatwasbytrainofcourse.Ifyouwentbycar,it’dtakeaboutthreetimesaslongespeciallyifyoutravelledinthemorningrushhour.ThereasonwhyIwasgivingyouthistravelinformationindetailwasthatIhadtomakeachoicebetweenthecarandthetrain.I’dseenanadvertisementinanationalnewspaper,whichhadaskedforsomeonewhohadsomeknowledgeofcomputing,hadworkedatleastfortwoyearsincarsalesandfinallywasnotafraidoftravellingupanddownthemotorwaytoLondoneverydayfromaplacenotfarfromwhereIlived.ItseemedinterestingworkandwasquitedifferentfromthejobIhadatthetime.Theinterviewwastotakeplaceat10:00a.m.onaMondaymorninginJanuary.ThroughouttheweekendIcouldn’tmakeupmymindwhethertotravelbycarorbytrain.AttheendofSundayIdecidedtodrivemycarbecauseafterallthejobwastodowithcars.OnthedayoftheinterviewIgotupat6:00a.m.asIwasterrifiedofbeinglate.Iusuallywokeupearlybecauseoftheloudnoiseofthetrafficoutsidemybedroomwindowinthemorning.Onthisparticularmorning,everythingseemedstrangelysilent.Ilookedoutofthewindowandrealizedwhy:Therewasathickblanketofsnowontheroadanditwasstillsnowingheavily.Ipanicked.ClearlynowI’dhavetogobytrain.ItelephonedthestationandaskedwhattimethenexttraindowntoLondonwouldbe.Iwasinformedthatallserviceshadbeencancelled.Iaskedbywhomtheyhadbeencancelled.IneverknewtheanswertothatquestionbecauseI’dbeencutoff.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ObviouslyIwouldhavetorethinkofdrivingfortheday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However,soonafter,mycarbrokedownbecauseoftheslipperyroad.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________雪天求职故事的续写续写要点(两段)​第一段:​详细描述“我”决定开车后匆忙做准备的过程,如翻找厚衣物时的急切动作、在雪地里清理车上积雪的艰难操作,“我在衣柜里疯狂翻找,拽出那件最厚的羽绒服,又匆匆套上笨重的雪地靴。冲到车旁,拿起铲子用力铲着堆积在车顶、车窗的积雪,寒风如刀割般划过脸颊,双手很快被冻得通红,但我一刻也不敢停歇”。​着重刻画开车上路时的紧张状态,包括小心翼翼启动汽车的动作、对路况的密切关注,“我深吸一口气,按下启动按钮,汽车发出几声轰鸣后终于缓缓启动。眼睛紧紧盯着前方,双手死死握住方向盘,每前行一米都像是在挑战极限,车轮在雪地上时不时打滑,我的心也跟着提到了嗓子眼”。​突出“我”面对困难时的坚持,如内心的自我鼓励,“尽管困难重重,可我心里只有一个念头:一定要赶上这次面试,不能放弃。每一次车轮的转动,都像是在给自己加油打气”。​第二段:​深入描绘车抛锚后“我”的绝望,如眼神中的无助、身体的颓然姿态,“看着汽车彻底熄火,周围车辆一辆辆疾驰而过,我感觉整个世界都陷入了黑暗。瘫坐在驾驶座上,眼神空洞,双手无力地垂着,满心都是挫败感,开始怀疑自己是不是注定要错过这次机会”。​具体展现好心司机出现及帮忙修车的细节,包括司机停车时的举动、检查车辆时的专业动作和沟通的话语,“一辆车缓缓停在我旁边,一位中年男子从车上下来,他拍了拍我的车窗,温和地说:‘别着急,我看看。’他熟练地打开引擎盖,仔细检查线路和零件,边看边安慰我:‘问题不大,很快就能修好。’”。​细致描写“我”继续上路及到达面试地点后的复杂心情,如对陌生人的感激、对自己坚持的欣慰,“车修好后,我连声道谢,重新踏上旅程。当看到面试大楼时,心中满是感激,感激那位陌生司机的帮助,也庆幸自己在重重困难下没有放弃,终于抓住了这次机会”。​情感线(150字)​决定开车时,“我”从焦虑犹豫转为坚定,满怀希望地应对雪天挑战。车抛锚瞬间,希望破灭,陷入极度绝望,觉得面试无望。好心司机出现帮忙,“我”重燃希望,内心满是感激。到达面试地点,感恩与欣慰交织,因坚持和陌生人的善举,成功克服困难,完成了从绝望到希望的情感转变。​故事线(6条)​“我”看到一份汽车销售相关工作的广告,要求具备计算机知识、两年工作经验且能通勤,决定去面试。​面试在周一上午,整个周末“我”纠结是开车还是坐火车前往,最终决定开车。​面试当天清晨,发现下大雪,火车停运,无奈决定开车,匆忙准备后艰难上路。​路上车因路面湿滑抛锚,“我”陷入绝望,多次尝试启动无果。​一位好心司机停车帮忙,检查并修好车,“我”继续出发。​“我”最终及时赶到面试地点,对陌生人的帮助心怀感激,庆幸自己坚持下来。​主旨升华句5句英文​Thisarduousjourneyvividlydemonstratesthatperseveranceinthefaceofunexpectedobstaclescanturndespairintohope,andthekindnessofstrangerscanbethebeaconthatlightsourwayforward.​这段艰难的旅程生动地表明,在面对意外障碍时坚持不懈能将绝望化为希望,而陌生人的善意可以成为照亮我们前行道路的灯塔。​Throughthisexperience,welearnthatlifeisfullofunpredictablechallenges,butit'sourdeterminationandthehelpinghandsfromothersthatenableustoovercomedifficultiesandreachourgoals.​通过这次经历,我们明白生活充满了不可预测的挑战,但正是我们的决心和他人的援手使我们能够克服困难并实现目标。​Thetransformationfromaseeminglyhopelesssituationtoasuccessfularrivalattheinterviewshowcasesthepowerofnevergivingupandtheprofoundimpactofhumankindnessinourlives.​从看似绝望的境地到成功到达面试现场的转变,展示了永不放弃的力量以及人性之善在我们生活中的深远影响。​Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthatevenintheharshestcircumstances,aglimmerofhopecanemerge,oftenfromthemostunexpectedsources,inspiringustokeepmovingforward.​这个故事有力地提醒我们,即使在最恶劣的环境中,希望的曙光也可能出现,而且往往来自最意想不到的地方,激励我们不断前进。​Fromtheinitialdecisiontobravethesnow-coveredroadtothefinalachievementofreachingtheinterviewontime,weseethateverystepofperseveranceandeveryactofkindnesscontributetothebeautyandresilienceofourlifejourney.​从最初决定勇敢踏上积雪的道路,到最终成功按时到达面试地点,我们看到每一步的坚持和每一个善举都为我们人生旅程的美好和坚韧增添色彩。​写作示范一​ObviouslyIwouldhavetorethinkofdrivingfortheday.PanicsetinasIrealizedthegravityofthesituation.Irummagedthroughmycloset,pullingoutmyheaviestwintergear.Outside,thesnowwaspilingup,makingthetaskofclearingmycaradauntingone.Afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,Imanagedtostarttheengine.Thedrivewasnerve-wracking.Theroadswerelikeicerinks,andIinchedforward,myknuckleswhitefromgrippingthewheel.ButIwasdeterminednottoletthesnowstopme.​However,soonafter,mycarbrokedownbecauseoftheslipperyroad.DespairwashedovermeasIwatchedtheworldpassby.Itriedeverythingtogetthecarstarted,buttonoavail.JustwhenIwasonthevergeoftears,acarpulledupbesideme.Akind-facedmangotout.“Letmetakealook,”hesaid.Hespentafewminutesunderthehoodandthen,tomyrelief,theengineroaredbacktolife.Ithankedhimprofuselyandcontinuedmyjourney.WhenIfinallyreachedtheinterview,Iwasfilledwithgratitudeforthestranger'shelpandproudofmyselffornotgivingup.​写作示范二​ObviouslyIwouldhavetorethinkofdrivingfortheday.Withoutamoment'shesitation,Isprintedtomycar.Igrabbedabroomandfuriouslysweptthesnowoffthewindshieldandroof.Thecoldseepedthroughmygloves,butIignoredit.Oncethecarwasclear,Ijumpedinandturnedthekey.Theenginesputtered,butfinallycaught.Thedrivewasterrifying.Everyturnwasabattleagainsttheslipperyroad.ButIrefusedtobedefeated.​However,soonafter,mycarbrokedownbecauseoftheslipperyroad.Isatinmycar,feelingcompletelyalone.Icalledforhelp,butmyphonehadnosignal.JustasIwasabouttoloseallhope,apickuptruckstopped.Thedriver,aburlyman,cameoverandaskedwhatwaswrong.Hequicklydiagnosedtheproblemandfixedit.Iwasspeechlesswithgratitude.Idrovetherestoftheway,myheartfullofthanks.WhenIarrivedattheinterview,IknewthatthisdaywouldbeoneI'dneverforget,adayofperseveranceandthekindnessofstrangers.​参考答案ObviouslyIwouldhavetorethinkofdrivingfortheday.AfterbreakfastImanagedtobrushoffallthesnowfromthecarandfortunatelyImanagedtogetitstartedatthethirdattempt.Beforelong,Isawanenormousqueueofcarsonebehindtheother.IrealizedIwasstuckrightinthemiddleofahugetrafficjam.However,w

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