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读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasearlyinthemorningonDecember25.Thewindwasblowingfiercely,andthesnowwasstillfallingheavily.Despitethefreezingair,myfatherandIweredeterminedtosetout.WeweregoingtoOregontospendChristmaswithmymotherandgrandparents.Wegotintothecarandturneduptheheat.Andthenwemadeourwaydownthesnowyroad.Onthehalf-way,thecitylightsweren’tevenon.Feelingtired,Idecidedtotakeasmallnap(打盹)becauseitwassoearly.Fiveminutesafterbeingasleep,Iwaswokenupbythesoundofmudhittingthecarwindow.Wefeltshockedandscreamed.Myfatherstoppedthecarquickly.“Dad,whathappened?”Iaskedanxiously.Itwassoabruptthatmymindcouldn’tfigureitout.“Baby,don’tbeafraid.Getoffthecarfirst!”answeredmyfather.BeforeIknewit,myfathergotoutofthecar.Ialsocautiouslysteppedout.Amazingly,Isawpiecesofglassandallofourluggagelyingontheground.Ievenfounddeeptiremarkswereinthemud.Itturnedoutthatthecarhadhitblackiceandcouldn’tmoveatall.Luckily,neitherofuswashurt.Myfatherwasabouttocallforhelpafterwepickeduptheluggagewhenhefoundhisphonewasoutofpower.Atthattime,carsweredrivingpastusoneafteranother.Astimewentby,ourlegsweretremblingwithcold.Wefeltlostinthisstrangeplaceanddidn’tknowwhototurntoforhelp.Justthen,ayoungmancalledEric,whichwelaterknew,cametowardsusfromarestaurantnotfaraway.Aftermakingsurethatwewereokay,hecalledthepoliceandreportedthesituation,whichdidmakeadifferencetous.Ittookthepolicesometimetocometothescene.Myfatherexplainedeverythingtothepoliceman,andthenthetowtruck(拖车)droveustothegaragebeforewecouldexpressourthankstoEric.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withthecarrepaired,wedecidedtogobacktotherestauranttothankEric.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AfterbreakfastatEric’srestaurant,wesaidgoodbyetohimandcontinuedourjourneytoOregon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________续写汽车故障后的故事续写要点第一段续写要点:重点描写回到餐厅感谢Eric时的具体场景,如餐厅的布置、其他顾客的反应等。详细刻画人物的语言、动作和表情,展现彼此的友好互动,以及感谢方式的独特之处,比如赠送小礼物或者邀请Eric一起过节的想法。第二段续写要点:着重描述继续旅程中的细节,如路上的新风景、遇到的有趣小事等。深入探讨Eric的善举对“我”和父亲的影响,包括我们在行为和心态上的改变,以及对未来帮助他人的决心。情感线起初,“我”和父亲在车出故障时感到无助和迷茫,内心充满焦虑与担忧。Eric出现并给予帮助后,我们的情绪转为感激。在感谢Eric的过程中,感激之情愈发深厚,还收获了温暖与友谊。继续旅程时,带着这份温暖,我们的心情从焦虑转为喜悦与期待,对生活和他人的善意有了更深的信任和积极感受。故事线回到餐厅,发现Eric正忙碌,送上精心准备的小礼物,表达诚挚感谢。与Eric交流中,了解到他热衷于帮助他人的缘由,引发更深的共鸣。准备离开时,Eric邀请我们以后常来,留下联系方式,约定下次相聚。继续旅程,路上遇到车辆抛锚,“我”和父亲主动帮忙,传递善意。到达目的地,与家人分享这段经历,大家都被Eric的善举感动。之后的生活里,“我”和父亲以Eric为榜样,积极帮助他人,让善良延续。主旨升华句Eric'ssimpleactofkindnessnotonlyrescuedusfromadifficultsituationbutalsokindledaflameofhopeandwarmth,remindingusthatthereisalwayslightinthedarkestoftimes.(Eric简单的善举不仅将我们从困境中解救出来,还点燃了希望与温暖的火焰,提醒我们在最黑暗的时刻总有光明。)Thisencountertaughtusthatinthevastseaoflife,asmallactofhelpingotherscancreateripplesoflovethatspreadfarandwide,makingtheworldabetterplace.(这次相遇让我们明白,在生活的茫茫大海中,一个小小的帮助他人的举动可以产生爱的涟漪,传播得又远又广,让世界变得更美好。)OurexperiencewithEricservesasapowerfulreminderthatkindnessisauniversallanguagethattranscendsboundariesandcanbringstrangerstogetherinthemostunexpectedandheartwarmingways.(我们与Eric的经历有力地提醒我们,善良是一种通用语言,它跨越界限,能以最意想不到和温暖人心的方式将陌生人聚在一起。)ThroughEric'skindness,werealizedthateveryactofgoodness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtotouchlivesandinspireachainreactionofpositivechange.(通过Eric的善良,我们意识到每一个善举,无论多么微小,都有可能触动他人的生活,并引发积极改变的连锁反应。)ThisChristmasjourney,filledwithchallengesandthenthegiftofkindness,hasshownusthattruehappinessliesnotonlyinreceivinghelpbutalsoinbeingwillingtoofferahandtothoseinneed.(这个充满挑战,而后又收获善意的圣诞之旅,向我们表明真正的幸福不仅在于接受帮助,还在于愿意向有需要的人伸出援手。)写作示范示范一Withthecarrepaired,wedecidedtogobacktotherestauranttothankEric.Aswesteppedin,thefamiliarsmelloffreshlybrewedcoffeeandthesoundofChristmascarolsfilledtheair.Ericwaschattingwithacustomer,butwhenhesawus,heimmediatelycameover.MyfatherhandedhimahandmadeChristmascardwithagiftcardinside,saying,"Eric,thisisjustasmalltokenofourgratitude.Youmadeahugedifferencetous."Ericwastouched,hiseyesglisteningslightly.Wesatdown,andoverbreakfast,welearnedthatErichadoncebeeninasimilarsituationandwashelpedbyakindstranger,whichinspiredhisactsofkindness.AfterbreakfastatEric’srestaurant,wesaidgoodbyetohimandcontinuedourjourneytoOregon.Alongtheway,wesawacarwithaflattire.RememberingEric'sexample,myfatherandIstoppedtohelp.Thedriverwasayoungmomwithtwokids,andshewasextremelygrateful.Whenwefinallyarrivedatourdestination,wesharedthisstorywithourfamily,andtheChristmascelebrationwasevenmorespecial,asweallfeltthepowerofkindness.示范二Withthecarrepaired,wedecidedtogobacktotherestauranttothankEric.Asweentered,therestaurantwasdecoratedevenmorebeautifullythanbefore,withtwinklinglightsandcolorfulornaments.Ericwelcomeduswithopenarms.Ipresentedhimwithaphotoframewithapictureofusonthatsnowyday,saying,"Eric,wewantyoutorememberthis.You'relikeanangelsenttous."Ericwassurprisedanddelighted.Wespentalongtimechatting,andhetoldusabouthisChristmastraditions.WeeveninvitedhimtojoinusforChristmasdinner,buthehadtowork.AfterbreakfastatEric’srestaurant,wesaidgoodbyetohimandcontinuedourjourneytoOregon.Theroadwasclearer,andthesunmadethesnowsparklelikediamonds.WetalkedabouthowEric'skindnesshadchangedourperspective.WhenwereachedOregon,wetoldourrelativesaboutEric.Inspiredbyhisstory,wealldecidedtostartacommunityserviceprojecttohelpthoseinneed,makingthisChristmasatrulymemorableone.【参考答案】Withthecarrepaired,wedecidedtogobacktotherestauranttothankEric.Asweenteredtherestaurant,hesmiledwarmly.Weintroducedourselvesandthankedhimsincerelyforhelpingusinourtimeofneed.Hesimplyshruggedandsmiled,“Don’tmentionit.Ihopethatoneday,someonewilldothesameformeifIfindmyselfinasimilarsituation.”Heeventreatedustobreakf
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