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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ifearedgoingintomyroomafterschool.Everydayitwassomethingdifferent.Thehoursawayatschoolwerelongenoughtocauseaterriblechangetomyprivateroom.Todaycanbenodifferent.AsIenteredthehouse,Momgreetedmewithasmile.Itseemedlikenothingwaswrong.Still,Iwouldn’tbelieve.Yesterday,Idiscoveredachocolatecookiespreadaroundthemouthofmyangelstatue.Itspinklipswerecoveredinchocolate.Obviously,Calliehadsharedhercookiewithmyangel.Ilookedaroundformylittlesister,Callie,whohadjustturnedthree.Ididn’tseeher.AsIcheckedthesittingroom,Inoticeditwasprettymessy.Thereweretoysallaround.Therewereafewheadlessdolls,someblocks,theremainsofagrapestuckintothecarpet.Isearchedaroundandthereshewas,sittingonthesofawiththeTVremoteinherstickyhands.Shelookedupandsawme.Ahugesmilebrokeoutonherface,andshelaughed,clappingherhands.Iwassurprisedthattheydidn’tsticktogether.“Sissy(sister)!”Shejumpedoffthesofaandrantome,huggingmykneesandalmosttippingmeover.“Hi,Callie,”Isaid,withtheslightestsmile.Iruffled(抚弄)herlongthickhair,andsomewhitecrumbs(残渣)felltothecarpet.“Cheese,sissy”,Calliesaid,pointingatthecrumbsthathadsettledontothecarpet.Ifoundastrongsmellofcheesefromthem.HadCalliefocusedondestroyingonlythesittingroom?Avoiceracedacrossmymind.Noway.Notmysister,thedestroyer.Notmysister,thethree-year-oldterror.Iturnedaroundandstartedthescaredclimbtomyroom.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意文章讲述了“我”放学后害怕回房间,因为三岁的妹妹Callie总是把房间弄得一团糟。有一天,“我”回家后发现客厅一片狼藉,到处是玩具、头身分离的玩偶、积木,地毯上还有葡萄残渣。Callie坐在沙发上,手里拿着黏糊糊的电视遥控器,看到“我”后兴奋地跑过来抱住“我”的膝盖,她的头发里掉出了奶酪残渣。“我”满心怀疑Callie是不是又把“我”的房间弄乱了,怀着忐忑的心情向房间走去。文章通过对房间混乱场景的描写和“我”的心理活动,展现了妹妹的调皮和“我”对房间被破坏的担忧。故事山分析开端:“我”放学后害怕回房间,预感房间又被破坏。发展:“我”回家看到客厅被Callie弄得乱七八糟,Callie开心迎接“我”,头发里掉下奶酪残渣。高潮(待续写):“我”推开房间门看到混乱场景后的反应,以及与Callie的互动。结局(待续写):“我”和Callie之间的矛盾化解,体现亲情或对妹妹的包容等情感。伏笔以及在续写中的回应“我”害怕回房间:暗示房间会有糟糕的状况,续写中“我”推开门看到混乱场景回应了这一伏笔。客厅的混乱:预示Callie的调皮和破坏力,续写中Callie对房间的破坏与客厅的混乱相呼应。Callie的开心迎接:与“我”的担忧形成对比,在续写中Callie面对“我”的生气会有不同反应,推动情节发展。奶酪残渣:暗示Callie的饮食行为,可能与房间的混乱有关,续写中可涉及Callie因吃奶酪在房间留下痕迹等。“我”的怀疑:“我”猜测Callie破坏了房间,续写中证实“我”的猜测并展开后续情节。续写要点(两段)第一段:描述“我”推开门看到房间混乱的具体场景,如物品的摆放、损坏情况等,以及“我”的愤怒、无奈等情绪反应,还可以写Callie在房间里的行为或状态。第二段:看到Callie的眼泪后,“我”内心的转变,从生气到心疼、包容,然后和Callie一起收拾房间,或者表达对妹妹的爱,体现亲情的温暖。情感线“我”一开始对房间可能被破坏充满担忧,看到客厅的混乱后怀疑加重,推开门看到房间的混乱时愤怒、无奈达到顶点。当看到Callie眼中的泪水,“我”内心的愤怒瞬间消散,转为心疼和自责,意识到自己对妹妹的态度过于严厉。最后“我”选择包容妹妹,情感从负面的情绪转变为亲情的温暖,体现了对妹妹的爱。故事线“我”放学后害怕回房间。“我”回家看到客厅混乱,Callie开心迎接。“我”推开门看到房间混乱。“我”对Callie生气,Callie流泪。“我”内心转变,心疼Callie。“我”和Callie一起收拾房间或表达亲情。主旨升华句Inthefaceofthechaoscreatedbylove,weshouldlearntoembraceitwithpatienceandunderstanding,forfamilyaffectionisfarmorepreciousthanatidyroom.Thisexperiencetaughtmethatthemessmadebyalovedoneisjustasmallpartoflife,andtheloveandconnectionwithinthefamilyarewhattrulymatter.Nomatterhowmessytheroommaybe,thelovebetweensiblingscanalwayssweepawaytheangerandbringwarmthandharmonybackintoourhearts.Throughthisincident,Irealizedthatthemostvaluablethinginlifeisnotaperfectlyorderedspace,buttheloveandtolerancewesharewithourfamilymembers.Inthejourneyoffamilylife,weshouldcherisheverymomentwithourlovedones,evenwhenitcomeswithabitofchaos,forthesearethememoriesthatbindustogether.写作示范一Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Mybookswerescatteredalloverthefloor,somewiththeircoverstorn.Mydeskwascoveredincoloredscribbles,andmyfavoritestuffedanimalwasmissinganarm.Calliestoodinthemiddleoftheroom,hereyeswidewithamixofexcitementandabitoffear.“Sissy,look!Imadeacastle!”shesaid,pointingtoapileofmyclothesthatshehadstackedup.Iwasfurious.“Callie,whydidyoudothis?Thisismyroom!Youcan’tjustcomeinhereanddestroyeverything!”Ishoutedather.Callie’sfacefell,andtearswelledupinhereyes.Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.“I’msorry,Callie.Ishouldn’thaveshoutedatyou.Iknowyoujustwantedtohavefun.”Isaidsoftly.Calliesniffledandwrappedherarmsaroundmyneck.“Sissy,don’tbemad.Iloveyou.”shemurmured.Ihuggedhertightly,realizingthatherinnocentjoywasmoreimportantthanatidyroom.“Let’scleanuptogether,okay?Andwecanbuildanevenbettercastlelater.”Isuggested.Callienoddedeagerly,abigsmilereturningtoherface.Aswestartedcleaning,Iknewthatthiswasjustasmallpartofourlifefullofloveandlaughter.写作示范二Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Thebedsheetswereonthefloor,andmyartsupplieswerespilledeverywhere.Calliehadusedmywatercolorstopaintonthewall,creatingacolorfulbutchaoticscene.Iwassoangrythatmyhandswereshaking.“Callie!Whathaveyoudone?”Iyelled.Callieflinchedandbackedaway.“I...Iwantedtomakeitprettyforyou,sissy.”shesaidinasmallvoice.IwasabouttoscoldhermorewhenIsawthefearinhereyes.Seeingthetearsinhereyes,Ibentdownandliftedherupgently.“I’msorryforgettingsoangry,sweetie.Itwasniceofyoutowanttomakeitprettyforme,butwecan’tdothistomyroom.”Isaid,tryingtostaycalm.Callieburiedherfaceinmyshoulder.“Iwon’tdoitagain,sissy.”shesobbed.Istrokedherhairandsaid,“Howaboutwecleanupnow,andthenIcanteachyouhowtopaintonpaper?”Callielookedupatmewithhopeinhereyes.“Really?”sheasked.Inodded,andwestartedthetaskofrestoringmyroom,whilealsostrengtheningthebondbetweenus.【答案】Ipushedthedooropenandsawacompletemessagain!Mybedanddeskwerefullycoveredbywhitecrumbs,andthewallswerefullofgrapejuicegraffiti.What’sworse,Idiscoveredcheesespr
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