高二上学期期末英语读后续写思路解析课件

读后续写练习宜宾市2023级高二上期期末正确的读后续写应试流程:检查写思读思列大纲2段/10句(中文)好句式入格确定情节提升表达伏笔情节发展线人物情感线主题读用伏笔/五“所”设计情节点明主题照应第二段第一句第一段第一句第二段第一句vv用伏笔/五“所”设计情节Readthetextandmakeanoutlineforyourwriting,usingtheinstructionsasyourguide.（13min）Aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound._________________________

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。①It’sstrange,butIdon’treallyremembermuchaboutthehurricaneitself.Itallhappenedsoquickly.Iwassittinginmyroomwithmycat,Smartie,onmylap,whentheroofjustflewoff.Allofasudden,therewasskywheretheroofhadbeen.IwassofrightenedthatIjustfroze.②Momcriedtogetoutquickly,butitwasalreadytoolatebythen.Therainwascomingdownsohardandsofast.Ourstreetturnedintoariverinseconds.Weweregoingnowhere.(frightened)③Atfirst,Iwaspleasedwecouldstayathome,butsoonitgotreallytough.Withoutaroof,stayinginsidewastoodangerous.Therewaswatereverywhere,butwecouldn’tdrinkanyofitotherwisewe’dgetreallysick.Wejusthaddrinkingwaterthatwassenttousbyhelicopter,butitwasneverenough.ItwasAugust,soitwasreally,reallyhotanditsmelledsobadeverywhere!IjustspentthedayswatchingtheboatsgoingupanddownthestreetandlookingoutforSmartie.（hot,littledrinkingwater,messy,sick,）④Hehaddisappearedthemomentthestormhit.(vanished---worried)⑤Livingintheopenair,webecamebreakfast,lunchanddinnerforthemosquitos.ButMomsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏笔)Itwasdifficulttostaypositive,though.Wehadlostourhomeandeverythinginit,includingSmartie.Allwehadleftweretheclothesonourbacks.ButasMom

keptonremindingus,wewerealltogetherandsafe.(伏笔)Mom’swordsmadeusfeelbetter.Irememberusalllyingunderthemidnightskyandlookingupatthestars.Becausetherewerenolights,wecouldseetheBigDipper,theLittleDipperandtheMilkyWay.Itwasamazing!Eventhoughwehadlostalot,momentslikethosegaveushopeforthefuture.（主题）ThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildourhomes.________________

ThethemeofthetextWerebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbeforeWerebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbefore仿佛他在告诉我们，即使在最黑暗的时刻，仍然有一线希望。所感Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(动作）

Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,buthewasaliveandwell;

miracle担心他，欢迎他，洗漱并尽可能地为他准备了一顿他的食物盛宴。发现耳朵，脊背有多处伤口，但他的眼睛里依然闪烁着那种熟悉的光芒。我们开始制定计划，想象一个新的家从废墟中升起邻居们团结起来互相帮助，共享工具和资源Smartie的坚韧和毅力激励我们坚强和勇敢。我们知道康复的道路将会漫长而充满挑战，但有我们所爱的人和宠物在身边Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏笔)宾语从句with结构+虚拟语气独立主格；非谓ving所感所见所做所见所思所做、所说所说所听返回文本所思Aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsoundThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildourhomes.独立主格；非谓ving倒装；返回教材B1U3---Likefatherlikeson.v1,v2,v3+从句倒装Paragraph1:Onemorning,aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound.①Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(动作）②Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,but

hewasaliveandwell;miracle③担心他，欢迎他，洗漱并尽可能地为他准

备了一顿他的食物盛宴。④

发现耳朵，脊背有多处伤口，但他的眼睛

里依然闪烁着那种熟悉的光芒。⑤仿佛他在告诉我们，

即使在最黑暗的时

刻，仍然有一线希望。Paragraph2:ThereunionwithSmartiewasareminderthatwecouldrebuildour

homes.⑥我们开始制定计划，想象一个新的家从废墟中升起⑦邻居们团

结起来互相帮助，共享工具和资源⑧Smartie的坚韧和毅力激励我们坚强和

勇敢。我们知道康复的道路将会漫长而充满挑战，但有我们所爱的人和宠

物在身边⑨Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethe

goodsideofthings.(伏笔)⑩Werebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,and

wedidittogether,strongerthanbefore①Astonishment心理;incredible面部；walkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(动作）(简单句：心理活动+面部表情+身体动作)

Iwasinastonishment.Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression.Iwalkedwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart(升级句式：独立主格,句子，非谓作状语)

Asurgeofastonishmentfloodedoverme,Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression,walkingwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart.②Smartie!lookedabitthinanddirty,buthewasaliveandwell;miracle

(简单句)ItwasSmartie!Itlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell.Whatamiracle!

(升级句式：强调句，定从)

ItwasSmartiethatlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell,whichwasamiracle.③担心他，欢迎他，洗漱并尽可能地为他准备了一顿他的食物盛宴。

(简单句v1+v2+v3andv4)IWorriedabouthim,embracedhim,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible.(升级句式：形容词做状语,with结构)Worriedabouthim,Iembracedhimtightly,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible,withawaveofsorrowoverwhelmedme.④

发现耳朵，脊背有多处伤口，但他的眼睛

里依然闪烁着那种熟悉的光芒。(并列句)

Ifoundhisearsandbackwithmultiplewounds,buthiseyesstillshonewiththatfamiliarlight.⑤仿佛他在告诉我们，即使在最黑暗的时

刻，仍然有一线希望。（方式状从）

Asifhewastellingus,eveninthedarkestmoments,therewasstillaglimmerofhope.⑥我们开始制定计划，想象一个新的家从废墟中升起

Webegantomakeplans,imagininganewhomerisingfromtheruins⑦邻居们团结起来互相帮助，共享工具和资源

Neighborsunitedtohelpeachother,sharingtoolsandresources.⑧Smartie的坚韧和毅力激励我们坚强,勇敢。我们知道康复的道路将会漫长而充满挑战，但有我们所爱的人和宠

物在身边WithSmartie'stoughandperseveranceinspiringustobestrongandbrave,Weknowtheroadtorecoverywillbelongandchallenging,butwiththeandpetswelovebyourside⑨Momsaidthatwhateverhappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.(伏笔)

Asmomsaid,nomatterwhathappens,weshouldalwaystrytoseethegoodsideofthings.⑩Werebuiltnotjustourhouses,butourlives,andwedidittogether,strongerthanbeforeParagraph1:Onemorning,aboutaweekafterthestorm,wewokeuptothefamiliarsound.

“两段首句定一框”动作/心理描写(故事情节延续：心理描写):

①Asurgeofastonishmentfloodedoverme,Ilookedupwithanincredibleexpression,walkingwithasenseofjoybubbledwithinmyheart.（非谓：心理，面部，身体描写）

②过渡句配角动作ItwasSmartiethatlookedabitthinanddirtyduringtheseveraldays,buthewasaliveandwell,whichwasamiracle.（强调；定从）③过渡句主角动作Worriedabouthim,Iembracedhimtightly,washedhimupandpreparedafeastofhisfoodasbestaspossible,withawaveofsorrowoverwhelmedme.（形容词作状语）④过渡句主角动作Ifoundhisearsandbackwithmultiplewounds,buthiseyesstillshonewiththatfamiliarlight.（并列句）⑤衔接到P2首句Asifhewastellingus,eveninth