读后续写-猫罐头里的温暖：兽医医院的暖心故事+讲义 高二上学期1月期末考试英语试题

expensivefood.Justthedaybefore,IhadhadaconverWhenIenteredthevethospital,theplacewasbusywithactivity.Thevetassistantwasoccupiedhelpinganothercustomer.Fortunately,sherecognizedmeandkneaskedmeifIwantedhalfacaseorathen,anothercustomepolitelysaid,“Goaheadandservethisgentleman.Meanwhile,IShelookedrelievedandsaid,"Thanks,tThegentleman,akind-lookiyouwereherebeforeme."IwavedmyhandandrepliedHejokinglyreplied,"Wow,howcanIthWithoutreallythinking,inamomentofcheerfulness,Isaid,“Youcouldbuymeacaseha."IlaughedandthenturnedtoAsIwalkedoutofthevethospital,Icouldn'thelpbuts注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 文章大意文章讲述了“我”在去当地药店途中，想起要给女儿的猫买兽医推荐的昂贵罐装猫粮。在兽医医院，忙碌的兽医助理认出了“我”，知道“我”所需的猫粮。这时另一位顾客进来，“我”因不着急，便让他先办理业务，自己去药店，还开玩笑说若要感谢就帮“我”买一箱猫粮。离开兽医医院时，“我”因这次意外互动感到温暖，却不知接下来会有惊喜。故事山分析开端：“我”要给女儿的猫买昂贵的兽医推荐的猫粮，女儿经济困难，“我”也负担有压力。发展：在兽医医院，“我”让后来的顾客先办理业务，还开玩笑说让他买箱猫粮作为感谢。高潮（续写部分）：10分钟后“我”回到兽医医院，发现那位顾客真的帮“我”买了猫粮，这一情节将故事推向高潮。结局：“我”带着猫粮回家，心中充满感动，领悟到生活中善良的互动能带来美好。伏笔以及在续写中的回应伏笔：“我”与女儿的对话提及猫粮昂贵，自己负担有压力。回应：为后面顾客帮忙买猫粮，“我”的惊喜和感动做铺垫，突出这份帮助的珍贵。伏笔：“我”在兽医医院让后来的顾客先办理业务。回应：体现“我”的善良，促使顾客产生回报的想法，推动顾客帮“我”买猫粮情节的发展。伏笔：“我”开玩笑说顾客若感谢就买箱猫粮。回应：顾客当真，直接引出续写中顾客买猫粮的情节。伏笔：“我”离开时因意外互动感到温暖。回应：与续写中“我”收到猫粮后的感动相呼应，强化情感递进。伏笔：“我”说不知未来有何惊喜。回应：续写中顾客买猫粮就是那个惊喜，前后呼应。续写要点（两段）第一段：10分钟后“我”回到兽医医院，看到那位顾客还在，且旁边放着一箱猫粮，兽医助理告知“我”顾客已帮“我”付款，“我”十分惊讶和感动，与顾客交流，表达感激。第二段：“我”带着猫粮回家，迫不及待告诉女儿这个温暖的故事，女儿也很感动。“我”深刻体会到生活中不经意的善良能带来意想不到的美好，决定以后也要更多传递善意。情感线起初，“我”因负担女儿猫咪昂贵的猫粮费用而有些忧虑。在兽医医院与顾客互动时，“我”以轻松玩笑的态度应对，离开时感到一丝温暖。当10分钟后回到医院发现顾客帮“我”买了猫粮，“我”从惊讶转为深深的感动。回家与女儿分享后，这种感动进一步升华，“我”意识到生活中善意的传递如此美好，内心充满对人性美好的赞美和对传递善意的坚定决心。故事线“我”因女儿猫咪的昂贵猫粮经济有压力，去兽医医院购买。在兽医医院，“我”让后来的顾客先办理业务，并开玩笑让他买猫粮感谢。10分钟后“我”回到医院，发现顾客真帮“我”买了猫粮。“我”与顾客交流，表达感激。“我”带着猫粮回家，告诉女儿这件事。“我”领悟到生活中善意传递的美好，决定传递善意。主旨升华句5句英文Thissmallactofkindnessnotonlylightenedmyfinancialburdenbutalsoreaffirmedmyfaithinthegoodnessofhumanity.这一小小的善举不仅减轻了我的经济负担，也再次坚定了我对人性美好的信念。Theunexpectedgenerosityfromastrangertaughtmethatasimpleactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpactonsomeone'slife.来自陌生人的意外慷慨让我明白，一个简单的善举能对他人的生活产生深远影响。Inaworldoftenfilledwithstressandchallenges,thisexperienceremindedmeofthepowerofkindnesstobringwarmthandhope.在一个常常充满压力和挑战的世界里，这次经历让我想起善良带来温暖和希望的力量。Thekindnessshownbythegentlemanmademerealizethateveninthemostordinarymoments,wehavetheopportunitytomakeadifferencebybeingkind.这位先生展现的善良让我意识到，即使在最平凡的时刻，我们也有机会通过善良产生影响。Thisheart-warmingincidentinspiredmetopayitforwardandspreadkindnesswhereverIgo,believingthatsmallactscancreateabigrippleeffect.这个暖心的事件激励我将善意传递下去，无论走到哪里都传播善良，相信小小的举动可以产生巨大的连锁反应。写作示范一Ireturned10minuteslater.AsIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Inoticedthekind-lookingmanstillstandingatthecounter.Tomyastonishment,therewasacaseofcatfoodbesidehim.Thevetassistantsmiledatmeandsaid,“Thisgentlemaninsistedonbuyingthecatfoodforyouasatokenofgratitudeforyourkindness.”IwassosurprisedthatIwasatalossforwords.Ilookedattheman,andhejustsmiledandsaid,“Apromiseisapromise.”Ithankedhimprofusely,andwechattedforawhileabouttheimportanceofkindness.

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Icouldn'twaittotellmydaughterwhathadhappened.Hereyeswidenedindisbelief,andthenabigsmilespreadacrossherface.Shewasdeeplytouchedbythestranger'skindness.Thisexperiencemademerealizethatasimpleactofkindness,likelettingsomeonegoaheadinline,canleadtoawonderfulchainreaction.Italsotaughtmethatinaworldfullofchallenges,thereisalwaysroomforkindnessandunexpectedblessings.IdecidedthenandtheretobemoregenerousandspreadkindnesswhereverIcould.写作示范二Ireturned10minuteslater.WhenIenteredthevethospital,Iwasgreetedwithasightthatmademyheartskipabeat.Thegentlemanwasstandingtherewithahugesmile,andrightnexttohimwasthecaseofcatfoodIneeded.Thevetassistantexplained,“Hewaitedforyoutocomebackandpaidforthecatfood.Hesaiditwastheleasthecoulddo.”Iwasoverwhelmedwithgratitude.Ishookhishandfirmlyandexpressedhowmuchhisgesturemeanttome.Hejustsaid,“It'samazinghowalittlekindnesscanmakeabigdifference.”

Withthecaseofcatfood,Igothome.Irushedtosharethisheart-warmingstorywithmydaughter.Shewasmovedtotears,andwebothfeltasenseofwarmthandhope.Thisencountermademeunderstandthatkindnessisauniversallanguagethatcanbridgegapsbetweenstrangers.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtobekind,buttheimpactithascanbeimmeasurable.Fromthatdayon,Imadeupmymindtobeacarrierofkindness,hopingtocreatemorebeautifulmomentslikethisintheworld.OnepossibleversionIreturned10minuteslater.WhenIwalkedbackintothevethospital,Iwasgreetedbythevetassistantwithabigsmile.Shesaid,"Youhaveaverykindgentlemanwaitingforyou."IwasabitpuzzleduntilIsawthemanwhoIhadletgoaheadofme.Hewasstandingtherewithacaseofcatfoodwithhishands.Hesmiledatme,saying"IthinkIshouldkeepmypromise.Here'syourcaseofcatfoodasathankyouforyourkindness."Iwascompletelysurprised.Ineverthoughthewouldactuallytakemyjokeseriously.Ithankedhimgenerously,andhejustshruggedandsaid,"It'stheleastIcoulddo."Wechattedforawhile,andIfoundoutthathewasalsoananimallover