Unit5Feelingexcited单元写作指导-2024-2025年八年级英语下册易错易混考点（仁爱）

Unit5FeelingExcited单元写作指导★话题命题角度Unit5主要涉及个人经历情感体验方面的“经历与感受”这一话题主要考查：1.自己的经历与感受；2.他人的经历对自己的影响。此话题偶尔还会涉及社会热点进而提出一些自我提升的方法和建议。一、核心词句【词汇积累】品德修养1.quality品质；人品2.spirit精神3.honesty诚实4.kindness善良5.admire钦佩6.independent独立的7.positive积极的8.moral道德的9.grateful感激的10.behavepolitely举止文明11.respecteachother相互尊重12.keeppromises信守承诺13.strongwill坚强的意志14.befriendlyto对……友好15.beresponsiblefor对……负责16.bepatientwith对……有耐心17.bethankfultoothers感恩他人18.bereadytohelpothers乐于助人19.nevergiveup永不放弃自我认识与提升1.influence影响2.experience经验；经历3.dare敢于4.require需要5.fail失败6.silent不说话的；沉默的7.helpful有帮助的8.valuable宝贵的9.seldom很少10.dealwith应对；处理11.inpublic公开地12.inperson亲身；亲自13.takepridein为……感到自豪14.beproudof为……骄傲15.makeplans制订计划16.managetime管理时间17.overechallenges克服挑战18.sticktodoingsth.坚持做某事19.achievethegoal实现目标20.take…seriously认真对待……21.aslongas只要22.learnfrommistakes从错误中学习23.makeprogress取得进步二、话题佳句记背过去经历1.IusedtobeafraidofwritingEnglisharticles.我过去害怕写英语文章。2.HownervousIwaswhenIwastoldtogiveaspeech.当听说我要发表演讲时我紧张极了。3.ThebiggestchangeI’veevermadeisthatI’vefalleninlovewithreading.我做过的最大的改变是我爱上了阅读。4.Myteacherencouragedmetostudyhardandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.我的老师鼓励我努力学习，并给了我一些有用的建议。5.Ididn’tfallbehindtheotherswithhishelp/withthehelpofhim.在他的帮助下，我没有落在别人后面。6.Hespentonehoureverydaystudyingwithherandexplainingdifficultproblemstoher，soshemademuchprogressinmath.他每天花一个小时和她一起学习，给她解释难题，所以她在数学上取得了很大的进步。感受和影响1.Allinall，theworldneedsloveandweshouldgetreadytohelpothersatanytimewithoutexpectinganythinginreturn.总而言之，世界需要爱，我们应该随时准备帮助别人，不求任何回报。2.Inmyopinion，it’sveryimportanttolearntobethankful.Ifeveryonecanhelpeachother，theworldwillbefulloflove.在我看来，学会感恩非常重要。如果每个人都能互相帮助，世界将会充满爱。3.Nomatterhowhardlifeis，wewon’tfailunlesswegiveuphope.无论生活多么难，除非我们放弃希望，否则我们不会失败。我认识与提升1.Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.为了赶上我的同学，我开始每天放学后练习跑步。2.NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttosticktoexercising.无论我遇到了什么困难，我都竭尽全力坚持锻炼。3.Ifinditimportanttokeepapositiveattitudewhenwe'reintrouble.我发现当我们遇到麻烦时，保持积极的态度很重要。4.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.然而，我认为它是一个挑战，也是一个提高我的英语水平的好机会。个人成长5.Iusedtobeveryshy,notdaringtoexpressmyselfinpublic.我过去很害羞，不敢在公共场合表达自己。6.Butwiththeencouragementofmyteachers,Inotonlybeemoreoutgoingbutalsogetonwellwithallthepeoplearoundme.但是在老师的鼓励下，我不仅变得更加外向，而且与周围的人相处得很好。7.Makingandkeepingpromisesplaysanimportantroleinourlives.许下承诺并信守承诺在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色。8.Don'tspendtoomuchtimeonhardthinkingbecauseonlyactionleadsyoutosuccess.不要花太多时间苦思冥想，因为只有行动才能带你走向成功。三、开头中间结尾模板开头段1.Theactivityimpressedmemostwasabasketballgame.给我印象最深的活动是一场篮球赛。2.ItwasatthattimethatIdecidedtohelpmorepeopleinneed.就是在那个时候，我决定帮助更多需要帮助的人。3.Thereisalwayssomethingunforgettableinmylife，especiallythestoriesbetweenmyfriendandme.在我的生活中总有一些难忘的事情，尤其是我和朋友之间的故事。4.Thoughthephysicaltestintheentranceexaminationforseniormiddleschoolwasover，itleftmeadeepimpression.即使中招体育考试已经结束了，但它给我留下了深刻的印象。中间段Toprepareforthephysicalexamination，Igotupearlyandusedsomefreetimetopracticethesesports.InP.E.class，Ialsohadapetitionwithothers.Finally，Igotfullmarksintheexamination.在这次体育考试的备考期间，我每天早起并用空闲时间练习这些考试项目。在体育课上，我也和其他人进行了比赛。最终，我考试得了满分。结尾段1.Throughthisexamination，Iunderstandthataslongasweworkhard，therewillbeharvest.SoIwillcontinuetoworkhardandnevergiveupinmyfuturelifeandstudy.通过这次考试，我明白了只要努力就会有收获。因此，在未来的生活和学习中，我会继续努力，永不放弃。2.Thisexperiencetaughtmenottolookdownonothers.这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。四、话题俗语谚语1.ThereareathousandHamletsinathousandpeople’seyes.一千个人眼中有一千个哈姆雷特。2.Youhavetosowbeforeyoucanreap.Youhavetogivebeforeyoucanget.先播种才能收获，先付出才能得到。3.Indoingwelearn.实践长才干。4.Allthingsaredifficultbeforetheyareeasy.凡事必先难后易。5.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.行动胜于空谈。6.Badluckoftenbringsgoodluck.塞翁失马，安知非福。7.Ajourneyofathousandlibeginswithasinglestep.千里之行，始于足下。水滴石穿，绳锯木断。坚持做好一件事情，成就更好的自己。请以“OnethingIkeepdoingeveryday”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。1.要点：1)你每天在坚持做什么；2)你坚持这么做的理由；3)它会给你带来怎样的影响或改变。2.要求：1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That'sall.Thankyou!【审题】人称：______________时态：______________【列纲】【成文】OnethingIkeepdoingeverydayGoodmorning,everyone!Iamveryhappytobeheretomakeaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisonethingIkeepdoingeveryday.IloverunningandIhavekeptrunningforthreeyears.WhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasnotgoodatsportsandrunningwasalwaysmyweakness.Ioftenfailedmyrunningtests.①Inordertocatchupwithmyclassmates,Ibegantopracticerunningeverydayafterschool.Sometimes,IwassotiredthatIreallywantedtogiveup.②ButIkepttellingmyselfthatIcouldmakeit.③NomatterwhatkindofdifficultyIfaced,Itriedmybesttokeeprunning.NowIdomuchbetterinrunning.I'mveryproudofmyselfandI'mreadyforanychallengeinthefuture.That'sall.Thankyou！加分亮点①句使用inorderto引导的目的状语，阐述作者每天坚持练习跑步的原因，表达干净利落，使文章句式结构多样；②句使用转折词but及that引导的宾语从句，生动形象地描述了作者不轻易放弃的决心，逻辑严密顺畅，内容更加连贯；③句使用nomatter引导的让步状语从句，再次阐明作者勇于面对困难，使文章句式更高级，内容更加充实。1．每个人都有自己的闪光点，请以“MyShiningPoint”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。要求：（1）讲述一个自己的故事；（2）你的感悟；（3）适当增加细节，行文连贯；（4）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

MyShiningPointImeetmanyexcellentpeopleeverydayandatthesametimeIalsofindmyselfreallygood.Icanseetheworldwithkindeyes.IthinkIdon’tliketoplain.Ifinditimportanttohaveapositiveattitude.Lastmonth,IwaschosentoplayaroleinanEnglishshow.Itwasdifficultformetomemorizethelinesinashorttime.However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.SoImadeanefforttopractice.Finally,Imadeitandreceivedhighpraise.Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；③提示：以“MyShiningPoint”为题并结合提示进行写作，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，简要说明自己有哪些闪光点；第二步，讲述一个自己的故事；第三步，介绍自己的感悟。[亮点词汇]①atthesametime同时②playarolein在……中扮演角色③regard…as把……当作[高分句型]①However,Iregardeditasachallenge,whichwasalsoagoodchancetoimprovemyEnglish.(which引导的定语从句)②Infact,itismypositiveattitudethatbringsoutthebestinmeallthetime.(强调句)2．你校EnglishReadingClub正在组织一次英文小说读书分享会，本周阅读内容为Auggie’sStory（阅读D篇）。请从以下两个标题中任选一个，写一篇英文读后感。选择一：以Sometimespeoplesurpriseus为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。选择二：以Troubleisafriend为题，内容包括：1．你对这句话的理解；2．结合实际生活举例说明；3．你得到的启发。注意：1．词数：100左右；2．请先填写你所选的标题，再写文章；3．照抄阅读语篇不得分；4．文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Title:____________AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Title:Troubleisafriend AfterreadingAuggie’sstory,I’mreallytouched.AndIthinktroubleisafriend.Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.InmyEnglishstudylastyear,mygrammarwasverybad.Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.Butthankstothehelpofmydeskmate,shehelpedmemakeagrammarstudyscheduleandhelpedmewithgrammareveryweek.AndIspentanhourstudyinggrammareveryday.Intheend,mygrammarimprovedgreatly.Inmyopinion,troubleisbad,butitsometimesmakesusbetter.Itremindsusnottogiveupwhenfacingdifficultiesandtofacethembravely.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：选择一个话题完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，请先填写你所选的标题并介绍你对这句话的理解；第二步，结合实际生活举例说明；第三步，最后表达你得到的启发。[亮点词汇]①thanksto多亏②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事③inmyopinion在我看来[高分句型]①Themeaningofthissentenceisthatalthoughtroublemaybefrustratingandupsetting,itisalsoaremindertobemorecarefulandavoidbiggerproblems,justlikeafriend.（表语从句，让步状语从句）②Thatwasabigtroubleforme,becauseitloweredmyEnglishscore.（原因状语从句）3．假定你是李华，学校正举办“我劳动，我快乐”为主题向学生开展征文活动。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。要点包括：（1）分享你的劳动经历；（2）谈谈你的劳动感受；（3）表达你的观点并发出倡议。注意：（1）词数90左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Lastweekend,Igotupearlyandcookednoodlesformyparents.First,Iboiledsomewater.ThenIputsomenoodlesintothepot.Aboutfiveorsixminuteslater,Iplacedtheminthebowlsandaddedsomesaltandoil.Whenmyparentsgotup,theyweresurprisedandpraisedmewithabigsmile.Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.Alittlebittiredbuthappy,IfeltproudofmyselfbecauseIcouldtakecareofmyparents.Fromthisunforgettableexperience,I’vealsogotadeeperunderstandingofmyparents.Ithinkit’sourdutytosharesomehousework.Besides,doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.Asteenagers,weshouldtakeactiontohelparoundthehouse.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，同时注意用一般过去时叙述自己的劳动经历和感受，用一般现在时谈自己的观点。[写作步骤]第一步：介绍自己的劳动经历；第二步：谈谈自己从这次劳动经历中获得的感受；第三步：表达自己对劳动的观点。[亮点词汇]①surprised惊讶的②praise表扬③takecareof照顾④unforgettable难以忘记的⑤takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①Itwasthefirsttimeformetocookforthem.（itis/wasthefirsttimetodosth.第一次做某事）②doingsomehardhouseworkisakindofphysicalexercise.（动名词作主语）4．某英文网站正在开展以“我最想感谢的人”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你最想感谢的人，他/她是怎样帮助你的，以及你的收获。提示词语:trouble,encourage,improve,stickto提示问题:.·Whodoyouwanttothankmost?·Howdidhe/shehelpyou?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Inmylife,manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.Mymotherismyrolemodel.Iadmireherverymuch.Mymotherisresponsibleandcareful.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,ShedidalotformewhenIwasupset.OnceIfailedasingingpetitionandfeltveryupset.Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.Shehandedmeapieceoftissueandhuggedmetenderly.ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.Fromherwords,Ibecamecalmandfoundconfidenceagain.IloveherandIwilllearnfromher.Shemakesmeknowtheimportanceofdiligence.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出“我最想感谢的人”的话题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“身份、事件、感悟”等方面进行介绍；第三步，书写结语，总结全文。[亮点词汇]①admire钦佩②diligence勤奋③notonly…butalso…不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Iwascryinginthecornerofthehallwhenmymothercametome.（when引导的时间状语从句）②ShekeptfortingmeandencouragedmetillIstoppedcrying.（till引导的时间状语从句）5．家是温馨的港湾，家是幸福的源泉，家是永远的依恋，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(InternationalDayofFamilies)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动，请结合自身的成长经历，破解家庭幸福的“密码”，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.你对家庭幸福的理解；2.你家发生的一件有意义的事；3.促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Familyisthesourceofhappinessandtheharborofwarmth.Tome,ahappyfamilymeansmutualrespect,understanding,andsupportamongallmembers.Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.Everyonehadaroletoplay,andthejoyonherfacewaspriceless.Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.First,spendqualitytimetogether,suchashavingmealsorplayinggames.Second,municateopenlyandhonestlytounderstandeachother’sfeelingsandneeds.Lastly,showappreciationandgratitudeforeachother’seffortsandcontributions.Byfollowingthesesteps,wecancreatealovingandsupportivefamilyenvironment.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。[写作步骤]第一步，整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解；第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事；第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。[亮点词汇]①thesourceof……的来源②preparefor准备③showappreciationfor对……表示感谢[高分句型]①Onemeaningfuleventinmyfamilywaswhenweallworkedtogethertoprepareasurprisebirthdaypartyformygrandmother.（表语从句）②Topromotefamilyharmonyandhappiness,Ihaveafewsuggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语）6．在成长过程中，青少年面临越来越多的烦恼与压力，请以此为话题给英语报社投稿，写一篇文章谈谈你的看法。内容包括：（1）导致青少年压力大的主要原因？（学习、与他人相处等，至少两条）（2）减少压力的措施？（运动、听音乐、与他人谈心等，至少两条）（3）简要谈谈你对压力的看法。要求：（1）包含所有要点，可适当发挥。（2）词数80左右。（3）不得出现真实姓名和校名。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Themainreasonforpressureisschoolworkandgettingalongwithothers.Studentshavesomuchhomeworkthattheyhavenotimetorelax.Somestudentsdon’tknowhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Theyfeellonely.I’llgiveyousomewaystorelievepressure.Firstofall,youneedtotakepartinallkindsofclassactivities,suchassportsmeetings,footballgamesandsingingpetitions.Besides,youshouldtrytomunicatewithyourclassmatesasoftenaspossible.Inmyopinion,properpressureisbeneficialtoourgrowthanddevelopment.Weshouldlearntofacepressureinourlife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：材料所给提示不得遗漏，注意“原因”和“措施”部分至少写明两条。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍青少年压力大的原因；第二步，阐述减轻压力的方法；第三步，表达自己对压力的看法。[亮点词汇]①growup长大②getalongwithsb.与某人相处③firstofall首先④takepartin参加[高分句型]①Studentshavesomuchhomeworkth