高考英语复习读后续写练习：一片叶子的奇迹：父亲的爱点亮女儿的生命之光+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习一片叶子的奇迹：父亲的爱点亮女儿的生命之光1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文InDecember,anunseendiseasearrivedinavillage.Allywasoneofthevictims.Shelay,barelymoving,inherbedstaringatawalloutofthewindowunderherblanket.Thedoctortookherfather,whowasapainter,asideandclaimed,“Shehasonechancein—letussay,ten.Andthatchanceisforhertowanttolive.Trytoencouragehertothinkmorehopefulthoughts,aboutthefuture,aboutliving.”HerfathertooksomepaperandapenintoAlly'sroomandbeganapendrawing,inanattempttoraiseAlly'sspirits.Ally'seyeswereopen,buttheyweren'twatchinghim.Instead,shestaredoutthewindowandcountedbackwards,“Ten,nine,eight,seven...”4续写原文“Whatareyoucounting,dear?”askedherfather."They'refallingfasternow,"repliedAlly."Threedaysagotherewerealmostahundred.Butnowthereareonlyfiveleftnow.Fiveleavesontheivyvine(常春藤).Whenthelastonefalls,Imustgo,too.”“Oh,Ineverheardofsuchnonsense,”quicklyrepliedherfather.ButAlly'smindwasmadeup."lwanttoseethelastonefall.Iwanttogosailingdown,down,justlikeoneofthosepoor,tiredleaves.”5续写原文“Trytosleep,”saidherfather.Allyclosedhereyesquietly.Watchingherdaughter'spaleface,hewaslostindeepthought.Asapainter,hehadneverproducedamasterpiecehelongedtopaintin40years.Asafather,heevencouldn'thelpherdaughtercheerup.Lookingoutofthewindow,henoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What'smore,acoldrainwasfallingmixedwithsnow."Aretherepeopleintheworldthatarefoolishtothinkthey'lldiebecauseleavesdropofffromanivyvine?ThisisnotaplaceinwhichAllyshallliesick."Hemadeuphismindtodosomething.Thenextmorning,Allywokeandaskedforthecurtainstobeopened.Oneleafremainedontheivyvine,bravelyholdingoninthewindandrain."Itwillfalltoday.Andlwilldiewithit."6段首句Paragraph1:Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9在十二月，一种不明疾病席卷了一个村庄，艾丽不幸成为受害者之一。她虚弱地躺在床上，目光呆滞地望着窗外，毫无生气。医生告知身为画家的父亲，艾丽活下去的机会渺茫，只有她自己有求生的欲望才可能好转。为了鼓励艾丽，父亲带着纸笔走进她的房间画画，试图让她振作起来。然而，艾丽却一直盯着窗外常春藤上的叶子，数着它们一片片掉落，并坚信当最后一片叶子落下时，自己也将离世。父亲虽极力劝说，却无法改变艾丽的想法。看着女儿苍白的面容，再望向窗外仅剩一片叶子的常春藤，父亲心中满是痛苦与无奈，他下定决心要做点什么。第二天早晨，艾丽醒来让拉开窗帘，发现常春藤上仍有一片叶子在风雨中顽强地挂着，但她依旧认为叶子很快就会掉落，自己也会随之死去。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.第二天，艾丽又要求拉开窗帘。当窗帘缓缓拉开，那片叶子依旧在那里，在寒风中倔强地挺立着。艾丽的眼睛瞬间睁大，脸上写满了不可置信。她原本坚信这片叶子在前一晚的狂风暴雨中肯定会掉落，可事实却完全出乎她的意料。她张了张嘴，却一句话也说不出来，只是直勾勾地盯着那片叶子，眼神中不再是之前的绝望，而是多了一丝好奇与疑惑。父亲走进房间，看到艾丽的神情，心中暗自松了一口气。他走到床边，轻轻坐在艾丽身旁，温柔地说：“孩子，你看这片叶子多顽强啊，它经历了那么大的风雨都没有放弃，你也要像它一样，勇敢地与病魔抗争。你一定可以战胜病魔，重新变得健康快乐起来。”艾丽转过头，看着父亲，眼中闪烁着泪光，轻轻地点了点头。从那以后，艾丽每天都会早早醒来，让父亲拉开窗帘，观察那片叶子的情况。随着时间的推移，那片叶子始终没有掉落，艾丽的精神状态也越来越好。她开始主动和父亲聊天，询问一些关于外面世界的事情，也愿意吃一些有营养的食物，积极配合医生的治疗。父亲看着女儿的变化，心中充满了喜悦和希望11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletelyandthesecretwasrevealed.几周后，艾丽完全康复了。她像一只欢快的小鸟，在花园里跑来跑去，脸上洋溢着灿烂的笑容。一天，她和父亲坐在花园的长椅上，享受着温暖的阳光。艾丽突然想起了那片神奇的叶子，心中的疑惑再次涌上心头。她转过头，看着父亲，认真地问道：“爸爸，那片叶子为什么一直没有掉落呢？它真的太神奇了，就好像有生命一样。”父亲微笑着看着艾丽，眼中充满了慈爱。他拉着艾丽的手，站起身来，带着她回到房间，走到窗前。父亲指着窗外的常春藤，对艾丽说：“孩子，其实那片叶子是我画上去的。那天晚上，我看到只剩下最后一片叶子，而你又那么绝望，我害怕你真的会因为这片叶子的掉落而放弃生命。所以，我趁着夜色，冒着风雨，爬上梯子，用颜料在墙上画了一片叶子。我希望这片叶子能给你带来希望，让你重新燃起对生活的渴望。”艾丽听后，眼中闪烁着感动的泪花。她紧紧地抱住父亲，哽咽着说：“爸爸，谢谢你，是你给了我第二次生命。”父亲轻轻地抚摸着艾丽的头，说：“傻孩子，只要你能健康快乐地成长，爸爸做什么都值得。”从那以后，艾丽更加珍惜生命，努力地生活着，因为她知道，在她的背后，有父亲深深的爱一直在守护着她。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Asthecurtainswereslowlydrawnback,theleafwasstillthere,standingstubbornlyinthecoldwind.Ally'seyeswidenedinstantly,andherfacewasfilledwithdisbelief.Shehadfirmlybelievedthattheleafmusthavefallenintheviolentstormthepreviousnight,butthefactwascompletelybeyondherexpectation.Sheopenedhermouth,butcouldn'tsayaword.Shejuststaredstraightattheleaf,andtherewasnolongerdespairinhereyes,butahintofcuriosityandconfusioninstead.Herfatherwalkedintotheroom.SeeingAlly'sexpression,hesecretlybreathedasighofrelief.HewalkedtothebedsideandsatdowngentlybesideAlly."Mydear,lookhowtenaciousthisleafis.Ithasenduredsuchaseverestormandstillhasn'tgivenup.Youshouldalsobelikeit,bravelyfightagainsttheillness.Youwilldefinitelyovercometheillnessandbecomehealthyandhappyagain,"hesaidtenderly.Allyturnedherheadandlookedatherfather,withtearsglisteninginhereyes.Shenoddedslightly.Fromthenon,Allywouldwakeupearlyeverydayandaskherfathertoopenthecurtainstoobservethesituationoftheleaf.Astimewentby,theleafneverfell,andAlly'smentalstategotbetterandbetter.Shebegantochatwithherfatheractively,askingaboutthingsintheoutsideworld,andwasalsowillingtoeatnutritiousfoodandcooperateactivelywiththedoctor'streatment.HerfatherwatchedAlly'schanges,filledwithjoyandhopeinhisheart.14范文呈现Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletely.Shewaslikeacheerfullittlebird,runningaroundinthegardenwithabrightsmileonherface.Oneday,sheandherfatherweresittingonabenchinthegarden,enjoyingthewarmsunshine.Suddenly,Allythoughtofthemiraculousleaf,andthedoubtsinherheartwelledupagain.Sheturnedherheadandlookedatherfatherseriously."Dad,whydidn'tthatleafeverfall?It'sreallyamazing,asifithasalifeofitsown,"sheasked.HerfatherlookedatAllywithasmile,hiseyesfulloflove.HetookAlly'shand,stoodup,andledherbacktotheroom,thenwalkedtothewindow.Pointingattheivyvineoutsidethewindow,herfathersaidtoAlly,"Mychild,actuallythatleafwaspaintedbyme.Thatnight,whenIsawtherewasonlythelastleafleft,andyouweresodesperate,Iwasafraidthatyouwouldreallygiveupyourlifebecauseofthefallingofthisleaf.So,Iclimbeduptheladderinthedarkandinthewindandrain,andpaintedaleafonthewallwithpaint.Ihopedthisleafcouldbringyouhopeandrekindleyourdesireforlife."Afterhearingthis,tearsofgratitudeglistenedinAlly'seyes.Shehuggedherfathertightlyandchokedout,"Dad,thankyou.Yougavemeasecondlife."HerfathergentlystrokedAlly'sheadandsaid,"Sillychild,aslongasyoucangrowuphealthyandhappy,everythingDaddoesisworthit."Fromthenon,Allycherishedlifeevenmoreandlivedhard,becausesheknewthatbehindher,therewasherfather'sdeeplovealwaysprotectingher.15升级版范文呈现Thefollowingday,Allyaskedagainforthecurtainstobeopened.Asthecurtainsweregraduallydrawnaside,thereitwas,theleaf,standingdefiantlyinthebitingwind.Ally'seyeswidenedinaninstant,andherfacewasetchedwithdisbelief.Shehadbeenconvincedthattheleafmusthavesuccumbedtothepreviousnight'sfiercestorm,yettherealitywasfarfromwhatshehadanticipated.Sheopenedhermouth,butwordsfailedher.Shesimplystaredfixedlyattheleaf,andinhereyes,despairwasreplacedbyaglimmerofcuriosityandconfusion.Herfatherenteredtheroom,anduponseeingAlly'sexpression,heinwardlyheavedasighofrelief.Hemadehiswaytothebedsideandsatdowngentlybesideher."Mydear,beholdhowtenaciousthisleafis!Ithasweatheredsuchaviolentstormandstillrefusestoyield.You,too,shouldbelikeit,courageouslybattlingagainsttheillness.Youareboundtoovercometheillnessandregainyourhealthandhappiness,"hesaidtenderly.Allyturnedherheadandlookedatherfather,hereyesglisteningwithtears.Shenoddedfaintly.Fromthatmomenton,Allywouldwakeupearlyeachdayandrequestherfathertoopenthecurtainstocheckontheleaf'scondition.Astimeelapsed,theleafremainedsteadfast,andAlly'smentalstateimprovedsignificantly.Shebegantoengageinactiveconversationswithherfather,inquiringabouttheoutsideworld,andwasalsowillingtoconsumenutritiousfoodandactivelycooperatewiththedoctor'streatment.Herfather,witnessingAlly'stransformation,wasfilledwithjoyandhope.16升级版范文呈现Afewweekslater,Allyrecoveredcompletely.Shewaslikealivelylittlebird,frolickingaboutinthegarden,herfacebeamingwithabrightsmile.Oneday,assheandherfatherwereseatedonabenchinthegarden,baskinginthewarmsunshine,Allysuddenlythoughtofthemiraculousleaf,andthedoubtsinhermindresurfaced.Sheturnedherheadandlookedatherfatherearnestly."Dad,whyonearthdidthatleafneverfall?It'strulyastonishing,asifitpossessedalifeofitsown,"shequestioned.HerfatherlookedatAllywithasmile,hiseyesbrimmingwithaffection.HetookAlly'shand,rosetohisfeet,andledherbacktotheroom,thenapproachedthewindow.Pointingattheivyvineouts