【素材】05.指导性作文之图片类-2022年上海高考英语考前写作冲刺强化集训

备战高考写作之备战高考写作之图片类作文理论指导及实战演练要点精析要点精析一、题型指导图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式，是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画，要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文，主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。1．素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景，画面生动形象，具有趣味性，体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明，考生易获得直观信息。2．文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。二、写作步骤1．确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。2．确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称。3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。4．合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行适度的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。5．虚实结合、详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。三、注意事项1．看图记叙文的写作要注意把握写作素材的时间、地点、人物，以及事件的叙述。可以采取倒叙的方式，也可按事件的发生顺序进行描写。2．看图议论文的写作首先要认真阅读图画，把握图的意义，有时还要注意其隐含的观点与意图，并联系生活实际进行思考与阐述。3．看图说明文的写作要注意观察图画材料，找出所有内容，然后按一定的顺序有条理地阐述。说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序(比如按图画反映的数字大小进行叙述)。注意文章开头与结尾的呼应。四、常用句式1．用于描述图画或引入话题的句式①Asisdescribedinthepicture...②Asisshowninthepicture，wecanseeclearlytherelationshipbetween...③Thesightremindsmeofsomethinginmydailylife.2．用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的句式①Atfirst...then...fiveminuteslater...finally/intheend/atlast...开始时……然后……五分钟后……最后……②Someweredoing...，someweredoing...and/whileothersweredoing...一些人在做……，一些人在做……，而另一些人在做……③...was/weredoing...whensb./sth.did...当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一件事。④Moreandmorepeoplehavecometorealizetheimportanceof...3．用于发表议论或总结的句式①Ifsuchmeasureswerenottaken，theproblemof...wouldbemoreserious.如果不采取这样的措施的话，……的问题会更加严重。②Wecanconcludefromthispicturethat...从这幅图画我们可以推断……③Ashasbeenstatedabove，wemust...如上所述，我们必须……五、图片作文的模板Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,________(描述图片).Itisacommonphenomenonthat________(简单说现象).AsfarasIamconcerned,________(我的观点).Myreasonsarelistedasfollows.Tobeginwith,________(观点一)._______(论据).What’smore,________(观点二).________(论据).Lastbutnotleast,________(观点三).________(论据).Inconclusion,________________(重复主题，呼吁人们应该这样做).Onlybydoingthiscanwe__________(美好的憧憬seizeeverygoldenminutetowelcomeasplendidfuture/achieveoursuccessandlivingoutourvalues/).课堂典例课堂典例GuidedWritingDirections:Writeanessayof120-150wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshould1)describethedrawingbriefly,2)interpretitsintendedmeaning,3)giveyourcomments.YoushouldwriteneatlyontheANSWERSHEET______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作文解析第一段表述图画，需包括两点：三十年前是个什么样子，现在是什么样子。三十年前“我”还是个孩子，母亲大手拉小手陪伴着我成长;现在，母亲上年纪了，我快乐地陪伴在母亲的身旁。其实第一段还有两个需要注意的地方，一是题目要求是一幅图，大家在写作时尽量按照一幅图画去处理;二是图画下面的汉字“相携”比较难翻译，不过大家可以意译为陪伴。第二段涵义阐释。本段可分两个方面来具体写。一方面具体写明要照顾老人，因为他们为我们付出了自己的青春;另一方面，我们要关爱儿童的成长，因为他们是我们的未来，祖国的希望。第三段评论和建议。可以指出年轻人应该把尊重和照顾年迈的父母视为一种道义责任。另外，父母也要关注孩子的成长。只有这样，我们的家庭才能和睦，社会才能更加和谐!参考例文：Asisvividlyillustratedintheleftpartofthedrawing,thirtyyearsago,therestoodadelicatemother,holdingthetinyhandofalovelygirl,whoworearedscarf.Onthecontrary,therightpartofthepicturedescribesthatwithtimeflyingquickly,thelittlegirl,whohasalreadygrownupasagorgeouslady,issupportingheroldmother.Weareinformed:accompanying.Itiswithoutsayingthattheoldandtheyoungaretwoindispensablepartsinsociety.Ontheonehand,whatwehaveandenjoynowwascreatedbyourparentsintheearlydays,astheoldChinesesayinggoes,"Onegenerationplantstressunderwhoseshadeanothergenerationrests".Ontheotherhand,allofusaresupposedtotakegoodcareoftheyoungsters,too.Itischildrenwhomakeusseethefutureofourstate,fortheyarethefuturebuildersofourcountry.Theyoungshouldconsideritamoralobligationrespectingandtakingcareofoldparents.Meanwhile,itisalsothedutyoftheparentstoprotect,educateandlookaftertheyouths.Let'sbearthisinmindandcultivatethatvirtuetogether,becauseonlybydoingso,canwefeelasifwewerelivinginahappyandharmoniousfamily.实战演练实战演练演练1GuidedWritingdescribethedrawingbriefly,explainitsintendedmeaning,andgiveyourcomments.写作思路本图片的内容比较好解读——人们对美机产生了严重依赖，但在解读深层次的内涵时，考生需要朝"科技是一把双刃剑"这个宏观的问题论述。即∶科技在为生活带来便捷的同时，也给人们的生活带来了不好的影响，人们越来越依赖手机、虚拟社交网络，以至于我们忽略了人与人之间的面对面交流。Thepictureshowsagroupofyoungpeoplesittingaroundadinnertable.Ratherthaneatingthefood,theyareabsorbedintheirphonesWhatthepictureconveyisthatpeoplearenowsoattachedtotheirphonesthattheyneglectthepeoplearoundthem.Asthesayinggoes,"Technologyisadouble-edgedsword."'There'snodoubtthatthankstothegreatadvancesintechnologyinthepast20years,suchproductsascomputers,theInternet,smartphonesandsocialnetworkshaveenrichedourlivesconsiderablyandhavebecomeanindispensablepartofoflives.However,atthesametime.smartphonesandtheInternethavechangedusinnegativeways.Forexample,peoplenowspendlesstimetalkingtotheirfriendsorfamily,andevenwhentheirfriendsarejustsittingbesides,theyjustlookattheirphones.Inaword,whiletechnologyhasimprovedourlives,wearebecomingincreasinglydependentuponitPeoplearerelyingoninformationfromtheInternet,relyingonsmartphones,andIseemoreandmorepeoplebecomingisolatedfromeachotherbecauseofafalsesenseofconnection，duetosocialmedia.演练2如图反映了一种常见的现象：拖延症（procrastination）．请写一篇作文，内容包括：1．给procrastination下定义；2．用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．【分析】这是一篇图画作文，让我们写一篇关于拖延症（procrastination）的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：给procrastination下定义；用生活中的例子谈谈你对此现象的看法．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为拖延症的定义．第二部分为作者结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法．重点短语与句型：meandoing意味着做…becauseof因为whenitcomesto当谈到，提到relyon依靠，依赖高分句型一：Althoughwe'vebeenconstantlyremindedthattimeandtidewaitsfornoman，whenitcomestothecrux，westillprocrastinateandcomplainsomuch．此句用了that引导宾语从句高分句型二：Andthatisthereasonwhyweareinamaterialisticchasenowadays此句why引导定语从句，修饰thereason．【参考范文】Procrastinationmeansdelayinghugeandimportantdealsonuncertaintimebecauseofoutofunderstandinghowwemustdoit（拖延症的定义）Iwilldomyhomeworktomorrow.That'sasentencemanystudentswillsayatleastonceintheirlifetime.Althoughwe'vebeenconstantlyremindedthattimeandtidewaitsfornoman,whenitcomestothecrux，westillprocrastinateandcomplainsomuch.（高分句型一）Peopleareborntobelazyattimesandtheintrinsicmotivationlevelsaren'thighenoughtowarrantaction.Thus,werelyonextrinsicmotivationtohelppushustocompletethetaskswehaveonhand．Andthatisthereasonwhyweareinamaterialisticchasenowadays.（高分句型二）Becauseextrinsicmotivationblindsoureyestotheintrinsicmotivationsthatweshouldhave.（结合生活实例发表对拖延症的看法．）演练376.Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-l50wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.仔细阅读下图，针对图片反映的情况，谈谈你的看法。你的内容必须包括：1.简要描述图片；

2.分析该情况产生的原因；

3.谈谈你的看法和建议。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】Fromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertotheapplicantwithhighereducationaldegree.Meanwhile,anotherapplicantgraduatedfromavocationaltechnicalinstituteiswaitinginlinewithaconfusedlook.Thecartoonrevealsthatthesocietyhasbeenplacingahighervalueoneducationaldegree.Whatfactorsmightcontributetothisphenomenon?Answerstothisquestionmayinvolvemanyaspects,andhereareafewguesses.Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducationaldegreepeoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.Foranother,fromtheobjectiveaspect,withtheprofessionsinmodernsocietybecomingincreasinglysegmented,employeesarerequiredtoacquirehigherdegreetofulfilltheirtasksefficiently.AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants’ability.Asforthecompanies,itisnotnecessarilyagoodprincipleaswell.Weshouldrealizethattheoperationalcapabilityandserviceabilitycanhelpyoutofindagoodjob.【解析】这是一篇图画作文。要求学生就图画反应的“学历歧视”问题进行简要介绍，并分析背后原因和给出自己的观点。1.词汇积累困惑的：puzzled→confused导致：leadto→contributeto就我而言：Inmyopinion→AsfarasIamconcerned完成：complete→fulfill2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants’ability.拓展句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardwhichassessesapplicants’abilityinaninterview.【点睛】[高分句型1]Fromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertotheapplicantwithhighereducationaldegree.(运用了过去分词given作后置定语以及that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducationaldegreepeoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及“the+比较级，the+比较级”句式)演练4Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.简要描述图片，并谈谈自己的看法。【参考答案】Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,theboyisterriblyshockedwhenhefacesthesummervacationwithcountlesstasks,suchasvariousofhome-worksandtutoringclasses.Thephenomenonreflectsnotonlyhimbutalsomostofus.Thisisbadforourgrowth,bothinmentalandinphysics.Withlotsoftasktodo,wedon'thaveanypossiblesparetimetorelaxforrelieveourtense.Fast-forwardtoseveralmonths,whenwebegintofacethenextsemester,wewillpossiblybetiredandweaktostudyfurther.However,wehavetoattendvariousoftutoringcoursesbecauseofthestudypressure.Theexaminationisbecomingmoreandmoredifficultandourcompetitorsareallattendtheseclasses.Tofollowthepace,wehavenoalternativebuttodosuchthings.Tosumup,Ithinkweshoulddothecourseworkandattendtutoringclasses,butwhatseriouslyisthatmakesurethattheyfityou.【思路点拨】本文是一篇看图写作，描述图片主要内容，并写出自己对它的看法。【精准解析】词汇积累描述：describe→depict许多：alotof→countless步伐：step→pace选择：choice→alternative2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theexaminationisbecomingmoreandmoredifficultandourcompetitorsareallattendtheseclasses.拓展句：Asourcompetitorsareallattendtheseclasses,theexaminationisbecomingmoreandmoredifficult.【名师指导】[高分句型1]Fast-forwardtoseveralmonths,whenwebegintofacethenext