读后续写-2024年高考英语大题突破训练（新高考专用）含解析

专题08读后续写-【大题精做】冲刺2024年高考英语大题突破+限时

集训（新高考专用）大题08读后续写

该题型要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上，充分调动想象创新思维，大胆预测文章缺失部

分的内容走势（一般都是happyending）,进行充满个性色彩的设计（强调真、善、美）,并用英语进行续写

表达。

所提供短文多以记叙文故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折有起伏，但故事线索的逻

辑性比较强。

这就要求你既要读懂和理解原文，还要能够在原文的叙事逻辑基础上，通过续写推动情节的发展，对

学生英语阅读和写作相结合的综合能力要求高。

（2023年新高考I卷&II卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithout

thinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writing

wassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingofthe

Titanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyour

stories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourselfIthinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreed

togiveitatry.

IchosePaulReveredhorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（专艮匠）inBostonwhorodeahorseat

nightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcome

straightfromthehorse9smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I

sympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeReveredhorse,Ikeptgoing.I

workedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen

booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.^^

Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytothe

enjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Iwenttomyteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

龙血熊包猾曼

记叙类或夹叙夹议类文章有一个共同的特点一一都暗藏着一根“故事情节线”和一根“主角视角线”。我们准备了两个思

维模型，来帮助你进行合理推演续写部分的情节。

1.情节视角：“四幕剧”模型

四幕剧是最为常见的戏剧结构，是包括小说在内的各种剧本中最为常见和最为传统的经典叙事结构。

具体而言，四幕剧是指将剧本划分为四个部分：铺陈-冲突-转折-解决。

・第一幕是铺陈故事：一般含有开场背景、伏笔、导火索等要素；

•第二幕是形成冲突：一般含有主角的抉择、由此引发的问题（灾难）等要素；

•第三幕是出现转折：一般含有类似第三方人或物的介入这个要素；

•第四幕是解决冲突：一般含有解决办法、结局等要素。

这种戏剧结构使剧情跌宕起伏，给观众带来很大的冲击力和很强的沉浸感，又易于操作。因此，四幕

剧结构成为好莱坞电影主流的情节架构方式。

很多短篇小说也应用了这个模型，长篇小说则把多个模型按照主线进行组合，就变成一部跌宕起伏、

波澜壮阔的鸿篇巨著了。读后续写是记叙类或夹叙夹议类文章，也必然绕不开“四幕剧模型”的定律。

2.主角视角：“见感思行”模型

“见感思行”模型起源于“ORID”模型，是一种决策和沟通的思维工具。其具体内涵是——

•见（Objective）：客观性事件（我发现），一般是指我们通过感官所获得的体验，比如看到的、听到

的、触碰到的、闻到的、尝到的。在本题型中，可以认为就是阅读部分中的背景、伏笔、导火索以及

引发的问题（灾难）。

•感（Reflective）：反应性情绪（我感到），前面的所见所闻，带来哪些情绪反应，比如开心、难过、

激动、好奇、恐惧、期待、失望等。

•思（Interpretive）：诠释性理解（我认为），对于前面的所见所闻，产生了哪些观点、见解、主张、

意义、价值等。

•行（Decisional）：决定性行动（我决定或我建议），我们决定做些什么，来让前面的“所见所感所想”

更好地落地。

父龙立霆型噫.

（2024上.河北衡水•高三校联考期末）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Mydarlinggrandmahasacollectionofphotoalbumskeptoverseveraldecades.Ienjoyedjokingwith

grandmaaboutherpreferredold-fashionedmethodofphotostorage,butIknowthatthesealbumsarepreciousfor

her.Theyaretherecordsofourfamilyandouridentity.

Onedaywhileexaminingoneofgrandma'salbums,Icameacrossphotosofmymotherandherbrotheras

childreninDisneyWorldinthe1980's.Grandmalookedthoughtfulandsmiled.<6Yourmotherandyourunclehad

suchanamazingshesaid."I'mgladIwasabletomakethatvacationhappenforthem.Everychildshould

visitDisneyatleastonceandjustgettobeakid...happyandcarefree.^^AsIcontinuedexaminingthephotos,I

noticedsomethingwhichdidn'tsitrightwithme.Ineveryphotomygrandmotherwasin,shewassmilinginan

unsettled,half-heartedwaywherehersmiledidn'tquitereachhereyes.WhenIaskedheraboutit,shegently

closedthealbumandsaid,“Oh,nowenoughoftheseoldphotos.Lefstalkaboutwhatwe'regoingtodofor

Christmasnextmonth.^^

Thatevening,IquietlyaskedmymotheraboutthephotosandthefamilytriptoDisneyland.Mombreathed

out.Sheexplainedthatmygrandparentswereconstantlyfightingandthattheyhadbeenhavingproblemsintheir

marriage.tcIthinkthatwasprobablythelasttripwetooktogetherasafamilybeforetheyseparated,Momsaid.

“Yourgrandmawassosadtheentireweekwewerethere,butshedideverythingshecouldtomakesureyouruncle

andIhadagreatexperience.WehadbeenbeggingtogotoDisneyforsolong.Sheorganizedtheentiretripforour

pleasure.I'msureitwasallphysicallyandemotionallytiringforher.^^

ThatnightIturnedrestlesslyinmybedthinkingaboutthedevotionmygrandmotherhadforherchildrenand

abouthoweventodayshecontinuestoputtheneedsofeveryoneinourfamilyaboveherown.Grandmadoesso

muchforherchildrenandgrandchildreneveryday.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Shouldn'twedosomethingforher?

WepulledoveratDisneyWorld,whichsurprisedmygrandma.

刷模拟

Passage（1）

（2024.江苏南通・统考一模）

FvealwaysknownthatI'mveryquickwithmyhands.Ifsomeonethrowssomething,Icatchitalmostbefore

I'mawareithasbeenthrown.WhenIwasyoung,Ihadnoideahowusefulthisskillwouldbecome.

Lastweek,Iwasgoingtovisitafriendwithhernewbornandwasonmywaytoatoystoretobuyagift.I'd

oncelivedintheneighbourhoodandIdecidedtoheadbacktomyoldcupcakeshopforacoffee.Sittingaloneata

tableoutsidewithmydrink,Iwasapproachedbyanolderman,whoinacalmandverymatter-of-factwaytoldme

tocall911,becausetherewasababyonafireescape.

Ijumpeduptoseewherethebabywas.Iwassosurprisedtoseeit,wearingalittleonesie（连体衣）andlying

onthefireescaperailings（栏杆）betweenthesecondandthirdstoreys.Iwasnervous,sothebabyboybecamemy

onlypriority.

AsIwasonthephonetotheemergencyservices,Imadeeyecontactwiththechild,keepinghimcalm,telling

himtostaythere.Somepeopleweregoingupthestairstofindtheparents,whowereapparentlysleepingthrough

thewholedrama.

Ijustwantedthechildtofeelsafe.Ihopedhe'dstaythereuntilsomebodycouldrescuehim.Apparentlyhe

hadslippedthroughpiecesofcardboardplacednexttoanair-conditioningunitinthewindow,andwithoutbarsto

protecthimhe'dcrawled（爬）outandupthefireescapetowardsthenextstorey.Hewasonly16monthsold.For

himtoevenclimbupandbalanceinthatpositionwasincredible.

Thenheslipped.Instinctively（本能），hegrabbedontherailingashefell,hangingbyhisarms.Iknewhe

couldn'tholdon,25feetabovethestreet,forlong.Isensedpeoplehadgatheredbehind,butmyattentionwas

purelyfocusedonmyintentiontocatchthebaby.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ImadesureIwaspositionedtocatchhim.

Themomentsafterhewassavedwereexciting.

Passage（2）

（2024•江苏连云港•统考一模）

"Bang..rSarapushedthedooropen.Shethrewherschoolbagontothefloorandcalledout,"I'mhome!^^

Noanswer.Thehousewassilent.Itsoundedempty,butsheknewitwasn't.Hermumanddadwereworking

upstairs.

Saragotaglassoforangejuice,wentintotheconservatory（玻王离房）andsatdowninherfavouritechair.The

gardenwasstillinthedarkafternoon.Ononeside,hermum'sgardenwasneatandtidywithboringshortgrass,

boringstraightflowerbedsandboringstraightpaths.Butontheotherside,Sara'sNatureGardenlookedwildand

excitingwithbigdeadsunflowersandtallgrasses.

“Nobodyisinterestedinme.Mumanddadonlythinkabouttheirwork,“shethoughtsadly.

Thensherecalled:Onemonthearlier,shelearnedinamagazinethatmanydogswereabandonedbecausetheir

ownersgotboredwiththem;Onehourearlier,shesawacutedogwaggingitstailandlickingherfriend'sface.

Saraknewtodaywasspecial.Todaythingswerechanging.Shecouldn'twaitanylonger.It'stimetotalktoher

parents.

SoSaragotupfromherchairandclimbedallthewaytotheloft（阁楼）.“Mum,Iwantatalk."saidSara.46Just

aminute!?,Hermumclickedonthekeyboard,tookoffherglassesandturnedtoherdaughter.Saracoughed,tooka

deepbreath,andtoldhermumthatshewantedadog."No,Sara.Thafsimpossible,hermumsaidfirmly.Sara

wenttoherfatherbutgotthesameanswer.Sherushedintoherroomangrilyandslammedthedoorshut.

Later,Sara'smumknockedatthedoorandwentin."Darling,weknowthisisimportanttoyou.Youcanhave

adogifyoutaketheresponsibility.ButlookatyourNatureGarden,yourschoolbag,yourbedroom!Whatamess!

Doyouthinkyoucantakegoodcareofadog?”saidhermum.

注意：L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Sarawaslostinthoughtanddecidedtomakesomechanges.

Withthedog'scompany,Sarabeganherbusybutjoyfullife.

Passage（3）

（2024.浙江杭州•学军中学校考模拟预测）

“Haveyoudecidedonyourmajor?^^myparentsinquired.

''Bioengineering,ofcourse.^^Irespondedwithouttheslightesthesitation.

IenteredthisworldwithPolandsyndrome,adiseasethatpreventedtheformationofmyrightarmand

pectoralmuscle（s胸肌）.Myparents,believingthatplayingwithLegocouldenhancemydexterity（灵巧），gifted

memyfirstkitwhenIwasfive.Strugglingtopiecethecomponentstogether,IcraftedmyfirstLegowork-acar.

AsIgotolder,IgrewobsessedwithLegoTechnic,amoreadvancedrange,andhowtouseittobuildmoredelicate

structures.Bytheageofnine,Ihadfashionedmyfirstprostheticarm（义肢）usingLegoTechnic-asimpleboxthat

perfectlyaccommodatedmyrightarm.

Thisearlycreationsparkedmydriveforfurtherexploration.Yearslater,Idevelopedanotherprostheticarm

thatIcalledtheMK-1,whichhadfingers,amotor,apressuresensor,amovableelbowjoint,andagrabbercapable

ofpickingthingsup.

Beforeconstructingit,Ihadalreadydecidedagainsttraditionalprosthetics.Notbecausetheywereineffective,

butbecauseplayingwithLegodidsignificantlyimprovemydexterity,helpingmeadapttomycondition.However,

amorefrustratingreasonwasthatprostheticsweretooexpensive.MyparentsandIhadlookedintogettingonea

fewyearsearlier,onlytobediscouragedbytheprohibitiveprice.So,IconcludedthatImightnotneedonebecause

Iwasmanagingwellwithout.Nevertheless,thejoyofcreatingprostheticswithLegoremained,andIcontinued

makingthempurelyforthefunofit.

Astheyearspassed,mycreationsevolvedfromMK-1tothemoreadvancedandcomfortableMK-V.It

featuredacontrolunitthatcouldsendandreceiveordersfromsensorsonthearmtothemotors,withcablesthat

contractlikemuscles.

Oneday,acouplewiththeireight-year-oldson,wholostbotharmsinanaccident,reachedouttomeafter

learningaboutmycreations.Shortofmoney,theycouldn'taffordwell-functioningprosthetics.t6Daniel,^^thefather

earnestlyasked,"wewerewonderingifyoucouldpossiblyhelpbuildasetofprostheticsforourson.^^

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

Iknewitwouldbeachallenginganddemandingtask,butIrespondedwitha（＜yes

Paragraph2:

Irushedtotheboyshomeandsecuredtheprostheticsontohim!

Passage（4）

（2024.浙江嘉兴.海宁市高级中学校考模拟预测）

Firstasawife,thenasamother,andlaterasagrandmother,foraslongasTeressacouldremember,shehad

alwayslivedforothersandneverforherself.Beingselflessisnoteveryone'scupoftea,butforTeressa,thafshow

shehadspentallherlife.

WhenTeressawasalittlegirl,shehadbigdreams.Shespenthoursinherroomreadingfamousauthors9poetry.

“Iwanttobeapoet,Mommy!AndIwanttorecitemypoemsonstage!?,shesaidtohermother,whowouldsmile

backandassureherthatherdreamswouldcometrueoneday.Butunfortunately,thatdidnothappen.

Teressa^poemswerelockedinhercloset（壁橱）aslifekeptthrowingnewresponsibilitiesather.Afterher

daddied,shehadtolookafterhermother.Thenaftergettingmarriedcamekids,andthenthekids'kids.And

somewhere,Teressa'stalent,poems,anddreamofperformingonstagewereleftfarbehind.

OneSundayafternoon,herchildrenandgrandchildrenwerevisitingher,andshehadspentfivehours

preparingabigmealforthem!

Asthedoorbellrang,Teressaopenedherdoor.Shesmiledandhuggedeveryoneastheyentered.Brianwasthe

youngestinthefamily.HelovedGrandmaTeressa.Afterenjoyingdessertafterlunchthatday,Briansatwith

Teressalookingatoneoftheirfamilyalbums.6<Canyoubringmethealbumfrommycloset,honey?^^Teressaasked.

Whilesearchingforthealbum,Briandiscoveredapileofpapersbehindherclothes.

“Granny!”hecamerunningtoher."Aretheseyours?Doyouwritepoems?^^heasked."Oh,"Teressahidthe

papersnervouslyinthealbum.t6Well,sometimes,honey.Iwantedtoreadthemonstageoneday,butIneverhad

theopportunity.Anyway,forgetaboutthat.Lefsgothroughthepictures.^^

ButBriandidn'tforgetabouthisgrandma'spoems.Oneweeklater,hevisitedherwithanenvelope,andas

Teressareadtheletterinside,hereyeswerefilledwithtears.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

BrianhadsignedTeressaupforatalentshow.

Aftertheinterview,Teressawasofferedanopportunitytowriteforthelocalnewspaper.

Passage（5）

（2024•山东•高三专题练习）

Thewindhowled（口乎啸）withtheterriblestormatnight.Thestarswerestucktotheblacksheetofthesky.The

nextmorning,whenIwokeup,thewinter'sicywindcausedmetoshake

MyfriendsandIagreedtotakeuptheskiingcontest.Itookaseatneartheheater,warmingmyhandand

tryingtocalmmyselfbeforetheskiingcontest.Iwasencouragingmyselfbyshouting,canwinthiscontest.^^As

soonasIreachedthewhitemountaintop,Ibeganwearingmysafetyguardsfortheclimbdown.Werhythmically

recited“Ready-set-go“andtheracebegan.Ateverymomentmyspeedstartedtoincrease.Finally,winningwas

onlyonestepaway.Asawisemanhadoncesaid,"Withadeterminedheart,amousecanalsoliftanelephant.So

willpowerandcouragecanhelpconquer（战月生）ahardtask."Myhopehelpedmetoconquerthischallengingrace.

Iwasontopoftheworldbywinningtheskiingcontest.Skiinghasnowbecomemyhobby.

Thenextmorning,itwassnowingheavily.Watchingthiswonderfulsightalongwithtastingthedelicioushot

chocolate,wefriendswereplanningtogoforanovernightclimbtothetopofthemountain.Wecameoutofthe

hotelroomandsteppedintothedeepsnowwhichburiedhalfourlegsintothesoftsnowyground.Thebestmoment

tillnowwaslookingupatthegrandmountain.Alsotheviewwasclear.Iwaseagertostartmyclimb.Weclimbed

towardsthetopandallofasuddenIlostmybalanceandfellfromthemountain.FortunatelyIdidnotendup

givingupmylifebutgotaseverefracture（骨折）onmyleg.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thisputmeintocompletedisappointmentinthefirstfewdaysofmyrecovery.

Onefineevening,Isawajoyfulhawker（饲鹰者）withadisabledeagle.

Passage（6）

（2024・湖南长沙•统考一模）

WemovedtoasmallseasidecommunityinNewZealand10yearsago,becausemyhusbandPhilworkedasa

biologistandhehadtodoresearchnearthesea.Ihadseenseals（海豚）aroundPilotBay,whichisnearhere.

Sometimesyouseethemoutontherocks,sunningthemselvesorplaying-butusuallyintheirownterritory.They

neverthoughtaboutdisturbingtheirneighbors.

ItwasadarkwintermorninginAugustthisyearwhenasealcame.At5:50a.m.,Ileftthehousetogofitness

training.Iwentdowntothecarparkedinthedrivewayandheardagrowl（咆哮）.Ithoughtourcat,Coco,must

havechasedadogunderthecar.Ijumpedintothecartoavoidgettingmyanklesbitten,andmovedslowly,but

thenIfeltthecarhitsomething.WhenIgotouttohavealook,Icouldn'tseeanythingandthoughtitmusthave

movedon.ThenwhenIgotbackintomyseat,Isawababysealintheheadlights.

Ithought,Oh,myGod,"butdidn'tpanic——theoceanisjustdownthedrivewayandIthoughtitwouldfindits

wayback.OffIwenttothetrainingcenterandgaveeveryonetherealaughwhenIsaid,“SorryI'mlate;therewas

asealunderthecar.^^Ididn'tthinkaboutitagainuntilIgothome.AsIwalkedthroughthegarage（车库），Inoticed

ourbasketshadbeenmoved.Iwonderedifitwastheseal,butthenIguesseditcouldnotbethesealbecauseI

didn'tthinkitcouldfitthroughthecatdoor,whichwastheonlywayintothegarage.ButIwaswrong.AsIopened

thedoortothehouse,Ibrushedsomethingandheardthisflip-flip-flip-flipsound,andthought,<6MyGod,thatisthe

seal.”

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Itwassocutelikealovelysofttoy.

WecalledAnimalProtectionStation,andaworkercameover.

Passage（7）

（2024•福建泉州•统考二模）

SavingtheDaisies

Tayloraged14openedhersleepyeyesandlookedoutthewindowbelow."NO!”shecried,nowfullyawake.

ButtermilkthecowwasinMama'sdaisy（雏菊）garden.

“Imusthaveforgottentoclosethegatelastnight,9,Taylorthoughtasshepulledasweatshirtoverherhead.

Mamawasplanningtosellthedaisiesatthefairnextweek.ButButtermilkwaseatingtheflowers.Taylorhurried

outsideandgrabbedarope.

“Whycan'tyoustayinthefield?^^shecalledtoButtermilkassheheadedacrosstheyardtothedaisygarden.

Buttermilkstoodbitingthetenderflowers.

“WhenIgrowup,I'llbeanartistandpaintpicturesallday,“Taylorthought.atFllnotownacow.Toomuch

trouble.Taylorwasfondofpaintingsincethedayshehadmemory.Shewouldliketohelpwithfamilybutshe

lovedseeingbirdsandflowersaliveunderherbrushmore.

JustasTaylorwasabouttothrowtheropeontoButtermilk^collar,thefamilydogbarked.Buttermilkcouldn't

standitandtookoff,tearingthroughthedaisies.Itfinallyranthroughtheopengateandintothefieldoutside.

“Thankgoodness!?,Taylorsaidassheclosedthegateandsecuredthelock.Butassheturnedtolookattheflower

garden,mostofthedaisieswereeithereatenorleftinpieces.

MamaandDadcameoutofthehouse."What'sgoingon?”Mamaasked.Shelookedsadlyathergarden."I

forgottoclosethegate,"Taylorsaid."I'msosorry.”"Iknowyouare."MamasighedandgaveTaylorahug.

Taylor'sheartwasheavyasshewentbackintothehouse.Mamahadpreparedmuchforthefairbutnowhalf

ofhereffortswereinvain.Taylordecidedtothinkofawaytomakeituptohermother.Theproblemtasked

Taylor'smind.Couldsheplantotherflowersinaweek?Notenoughtime.Couldshemakeuseofthedaisiesin

pieces?Notenoughmagic.Taylorfoundnowayout.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Suddenly,Taylornoticedadaisypaintinginthehouseandanideajumpedin.

Aweeklater,whenherparentswereloadingthecar,Taylorbroughtherpaintingsdownstairs.

Passage(8)

（2024・湖南永州・统考二模）

“Number7.JobieNymble,takesthelead.^^Aquinocriedtheannouncer.taJustonemorehurdle(跨栏)and—9,

Cheerserupted.

“JobieNymblefromRiversideMiddleSchooltakesfirstplaceinthegirls5100-meterhurdles!,9Thecrowd

wentwildasJobie'steammatesshouted.aaWaytogo,SweetJobie?,,theyyelled.

“Countychampionships,herewecome,^^spokeexcitedlyJobie,pattingherwornneon-greentrackspikes（钉

鞋）.Theywereburstingattheseams（接缝），butshedidn'tcare.Theywereherluckyshoesandshelovedthem.

“NextSaturday,we'retakinghomethegold,^^Jobiewhisperedtoherspikes,excitedlyretyingthem.

“Don'tforget,guys,“saidMarisol,oneofherteammates.t4MybirthdaypartyisnextFridayatHiddenPark.”

“Beep.Partyrecordedincalendar,jokedJobieinherbestrobotvoice.

Nextweekendcouldn'tcomesoonenough,Jobiebrimmedwithexcitementallweeklong.Attrackpractice,

sheleapedoverthosehurdlesfasterthanshe'deverleapedbefore.

ThedayofMarisol'sparty,Jobieputonherfavoriteoutfit:herswishyblueshorts,anoldtrackT-shirtfrom

herdad,andherluckyspikes.uPerfect.^^Shesmiledatherselfinthemirror.

ThepartywasinfullswingwhenJobiearrivedatHiddenPark.Shestoppedbythetrackfirst,planningtodoa

coupleofsprints（短靴）.Evenatthatendofthepark,musicandthesmellofgrilledfoodfilledtheair.

“SweetJobie!^^TwoofJobie'steammatesrushedtowardher,breathlessandbarefoot."Comeon,^^they

shouted.t6Youhavetotrytheslide.Jobie'seyesdartedtowardthepartyarea.”"Slide?Whatsli一"Suddenly,she

sawit.TheBIGGESTinflatable（充气的）slideshehadeverseenwasonthefarsideofthepark.Withoutthinking

twice,Jobiechucked（抛出）herspikesandrantowardtheslide.Itsladderstretchedtothesky,butshereachedthe

topinnotime.Sheploppeddown,hurriedtotheedge,andclosedhereyesassheletgo.”Woo-hoo!”Jobiecouldn't

getenough.Sheconqueredtheslideagainandagain.

Whenitwasfinallytimetogohome,shereluctantlymadeherwaybacktothetrackwhereshe'dlefther

shoes.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:Assheeyedthetrackfromadistance,panicsetin.

Paragraph2:Jobieslowlywalkeddowntothestartinglinewearingherbrand-newspikes.

刷真题

Passage（1）

（2022年新高考I&II卷）

Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthe

smalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute（路线）throughthickevergreenforest.

IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewas

smallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn't

withtheotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.

Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!

Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.64Iwasafraidthatkids

fromotherschoolswouldlaughatheexplaineduncomfortably.t4Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlet

himdecide.”

Ibitbackmyfrustration（懊恼）.Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.After

makingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrocking

fromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.

Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhis

classmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheywere

doing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.

Itjusttookhimlonger-thafsall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrun

longaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwith

thechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.

Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

［答案］Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Isaidgentlyandquietly,“Noonecan

changeyourmind,exceptyourself.Ifyoudesiretochallengeyourselfthereisnothingtodowithothers9thoughts.^^

Hesatstillwithadeepbreath."Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreason

whyyoushowuphere”,Iaddedwithasinceretone.Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtears

spillingoutofhiseyesandexpressedhehadmadeafirmdeterminationtofinishthecross-countryrun.Hiscoach

heardwhatDavidsaidandgavemealook-thekindthatwasmoredeterminedthananyoneelse's.

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Theracestarted.Itseemedthattherunway

wasextremelylongforyoungchildren,nottomentionachildwithabraindisease.Davidinsistedonrunningasif

hehadforgottenallhisweaknesses,thoughhewastrippedoverwithintheafewkilometers.Itdidn'ttakelong

beforehepickedhimselfupagainandcontinuedhismission.Classmatesallappearedontheracingtrack,cheering

forhim."Comeon!Youcanmakeit!Weareproudofyou!^^theyshoutedenthusiastically.Toeveryone'sjoy,he

reachedthefinallineandrankedthe20th.Itwasnomoreimportantwhetherhewonthefirstplaceornot.Itwas

hisbraveheartandstrongfaiththatcouldmakesomethingunusualhappenfinally.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者是一名特殊教育教师，在大型越野赛跑那天，发现患有大脑

疾病的大卫独自站在一旁。作者问其原因，他说准备放弃比赛。从教练口中得知，因为担心同学们会嘲笑

大卫，所以教练想让大卫自己去决定是否参加赛跑。作者让大卫追寻自己的内心，不理会别人的看法，大

卫最终参赛，尽管遇到困难，他战胜了自己，这已经无关名次，而是他的勇敢和坚定让这一切成为可能。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我们挨着坐着，但大卫不愿看我一眼。”可知，第一段可描写作者鼓励大卫继续完成比

赛，大卫经过强烈的心理斗争，最终决定参加比赛。

②由第二段首句内容“我看着大卫和其他选手一起走到起跑线上。”可知，第二段可描写大卫开始参赛，虽然

中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，完成比赛。

2.续写线索：鼓励大卫--心理变化——决定参赛——克服困难——加油助威——完成比赛——感悟

3.词汇激活：

行动类：

①深呼吸：withadeepbreath/breathedeeply

②坚持做：insistedondoing/besticktodoing

情绪类：

①热情：enthusiastically/withgreatpassion

②骄傲：beproudof/takepridein

【点睛】[高分句型l]Youhaveafullpreparationbeforethisevent,whichisthemostimportantreasonwhyyou

showuphere.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句和why引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Hearingmywords,Davidturnedtometremblinglywithtearsspillingoutofhiseyesandexpres