高考英语复习读后续写练习+鲁本为母攒钱买胸针：爱与坚持的故事

高考英语读后续写语篇练习鲁本为母攒钱买胸针：爱与坚持的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch(胸针)inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Buttheprice—fivedollars—wasfarbeyondReubenEarle’smeans.Fivedollarscouldbuyalmostaweek’sfoodforhisfamily.Reubencouldn’taskhisfatherforthemoney.EverythingMarkEarlemadethroughfishingwenttohismother,Dora,whostruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren.However,heopenedtheshop’sweathereddoorandwentinside.Standingproudandstraightinhisoldbutcleanshirtandtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,“ButIdon’thavethemoneyrightnow.Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”4续写原文“I’lltry,”theshopkeepersmiled.Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethefivedollarsandnottellanybody.Onhearingthesoundofhammering(敲打)fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanidea.PeoplebuilttheirownhomesinBayRoberts,usingnails(钉子)boughtinlargebagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswerethrownawayattheconstruction,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.Thatdayhefoundtwobags,whichhesoldtothemaninchargeofpackingnails.5续写原文Theboy’shandtightlyheldthefive-centpiecesasheranthetwokilometershome.Nearhishousestoodtheancientbarn(谷仓).Reubenfoundanoldsodatinanddroppedhiscoinsinside.Thenheclimbedintothebarnandhidthetininit.ItwasdinnertimewhenReubengothome.HisfatherwasreadytoservedinnerasReubentookhisplaceatthetable.Helookedathismotherandsmiled.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehome,thegluethatheldittogether.Herchoreswerenever-ending.Butshewashappy.Herfamilyandtheirwell-beingwerehermostimportantthings.6段首句Paragraph1：Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.Paragraph2：Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了1945年，12岁的鲁本看到一枚5美元的漂亮胸针，虽价格远超其家庭承受能力，但他仍渴望买下。鲁本家境贫寒，父亲收入全交母亲维持家用。他请求店主为其保留胸针，之后想到收集废弃钉子袋卖钱的办法。整个夏天他四处奔波收集袋子换钱。暑假结束时，他终于攒够了钱，飞奔回家将装满硬币的罐子交给母亲，母亲感动落泪，为儿子的爱与坚持深感骄傲。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.暑假来临，鲁本兴奋不已，因为他有了充足的时间去实现自己的目标。他每天早早起床，背着一个破旧的袋子，前往各个正在建设的房屋附近。他在尘土飞扬的工地中仔细搜寻着每一个可能被丢弃的钉子袋，哪怕袋子被埋在杂物堆里，他也会耐心地翻找出来。有时他会遇到其他孩子在玩耍，他们邀请鲁本一起，但鲁本总是坚定地摇摇头，继续自己的“寻宝之旅”。每找到一个袋子，他就像找到了宝藏一样开心，因为这意味着他离给母亲买胸针的梦想又近了一步。随着时间的推移，他收集的袋子越来越多，换来的钱也逐渐增多，他心中充满了希望。11续写思路分析Para2：Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.鲁本冲进家门，激动地叫着母亲。母亲从厨房探出头来，看到儿子满头大汗却满脸笑容的样子，感到十分诧异。鲁本走到母亲面前，郑重地把旧苏打罐递给母亲，说：“妈妈，这是给您的。”母亲打开罐子，看到里面满满的硬币，瞬间明白了一切。她的眼眶湿润了，既感动又心疼地抱住鲁本，说：“孩子，你辛苦了。”鲁本依偎在母亲怀里，说：“妈妈，我想让您开心。”母亲抚摸着他的头，感慨儿子的懂事和坚持。这一刻，温馨与幸福弥漫在整个屋子里，他们的爱也在这个小小的举动中得到了最美的诠释。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Asthesummervacationarrived,Reubenwasoverjoyedashecouldnowfocusallhisenergyonearningthemoney.Everymorning,hewouldsetoutwithanoldsack,headingtotheconstructionsitesaroundtown.Hesearchedeverycornerforthediscardednailbags,notmindingthedirtanddust.Sometimes,thebagswereheavyanddifficulttocarry,buthenevergaveup.Herememberedthebeautifulbroochandhismother'ssmile,whichgavehimthestrengthtocontinue.Witheachbaghefound,hewouldrushtothefactorytoexchangeitforcents.Slowlybutsurely,themoneyinhissodatingrew,andhishopeofbuyingthebroochbecamestronger.14范文呈现Rushingintothehouse,Reubenshoutedforhismother.Whenshecameoutofthekitchen,shewasastonishedbyhissweatyyetexcitedface.Reubenwalkeduptoherandhandedhertheoldsodatin,saying,"Mom,thisisforyou."Ashismotheropenedthetinandsawthecoins,sheimmediatelyunderstood.Tearswelledupinhereyes.ShehuggedReubentightlyandsaid,"Son,you'veworkedsohard."Reubensnuggledinherarmsandreplied,"Mom,Ijustwanttomakeyouhappy."Hismotherstrokedhishead,deeplytouchedbyhisthoughtfulnessandperseverance.Atthatmoment,warmthandhappinessfilledthehouse,andtheirlovewasbeautifullyexpressedinthissimpleact.15升级版范文呈现Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.Withthearrivalofthevacation,hecouldwholeheartedlyengageinhismoney-earningmission.Everyday,hewouldsetoffearlyinthemorning,anoldsackslungoverhisshoulder,makinghiswaytothevariousconstructionsitesaroundtown.Searchingeverynookandcrannyforthediscardednailbags,hepaidnoheedtothedirtanddustthatcoveredhim.Despitethebagsbeingheavyandcumbersome,heneverthoughtofgivingup.Itwasthethoughtofthebeautifulbroochandhismother'slovingsmilethatdrovehimon.Wheneverhefoundabag,hewouldhurriedlyrushtothefactorytoexchangeitforcents.Gradually,themoneyinhissodatinaccumulated,andhisdreamofbuyingthebroochgrewnearer.16升级版范文呈现Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.Outrushedhismotherwhensheheardhisexcitedshouts.Beholdinghissweatyyetbeamingface,shewasfilledwithastonishment.Reubensteppedforwardandpresentedtheoldsodatintoher,declaring,"Mom,thisisforyou."Uponopeningt