高考英语复习读后续写练习：周六的温馨时光：爷爷餐厅里的善意故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习周六的温馨时光：爷爷餐厅里的善意故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Bobby,mybrother,andIwouldspendourusualSaturdaywithGrandpa,cleaninghishouse.Momwouldtakeustohishomeintheearlymorning.Sincechildhood,BobbyandIhadbeenspendingthedaydusting,moppingandchangingthesheetsonhisbed.Grandpagrewupinapoorfamily.Hisdaddiedwhenhewasateenager.Thenhehadtoleaveschool,runthefamilyfarmandraisehisbrotherandsister.Heworkedasanightdoorkeeperforacompanywithinwalkingdistanceofhishome,andthehighlightofhisweekwastherewardthathegavemybrotherandmeforcleaning.Anditwasthemomentwhenwefeltthehappiest.4续写原文ThisSaturday,afterBobbyandIfinishedcleaning,Grandpadecidedtoinviteustodinner.Whenwefinallyarrivedathisfavoriterestaurant,thewaitressesgreetedhimasalong-lostelder.Theirsmilesandwavesfollowedustoourfavoritetableasweplacedourorders.Andthenwelaughedandate.Grandpapraisedhowwellwehadcleanedhisplace,tellinganyonewhowouldliketolistenabouteverytaskwehadaccomplished.Regardlessofwhowasservingusatthetime,eachoftheotherwaitresseswouldcomeuptosay“hi”toGrandpaandcongratulatehisgrandkidsontheirwork.Itwasarestaurant,butitwaslikeourhome.Whendinnerwasover,thewaitresswouldbringthecheckandhandittoGrandpa.Thistime,itwasGloriathatbentclosetohim,andtoldhimtheamountofthecheck.Grandpacarefullydugintothepocketofhistrousersandbroughtoutaworncoinpurse.Hecarefullylaidoutthecoinsandpaidthebill.ThenhegaveGloriaatip,butitwasn’tenough.Iwasashamedthathegottheamountofthetipwrong,andwewereembarrassed.IwasabouttosaysomethingwhenGloriagrabbedmyhands.“Comeandgetsomeflowers,today’sgifts,Susie,”shesaidassheledmetowardthecounter.5段首句Paragraph1:“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Paragraph2:IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8每个周六，“我”和哥哥博比都会去爷爷家帮忙打扫卫生，这是我们一直以来的习惯。爷爷年少时家境贫寒，父亲早逝，他十几岁就不得不辍学，扛起经营家庭农场、抚养弟妹的重任。后来，他在离家不远的公司做夜班门卫。打扫完后，爷爷常带我们去他最喜欢的餐厅吃饭，餐厅的服务员们都热情地迎接他，就像对待久违的长辈。大家有说有笑地用餐，爷爷还向周围人夸赞我们打扫得好。用餐结束，服务员格洛丽亚告知爷爷账单金额，爷爷从破旧的钱包里仔细数出硬币付账，可给的小费不够。“我”因爷爷给的小费不足而感到羞愧和尴尬，这时格洛丽亚拉着“我”的手，说要带“我”去拿花，将“我”带到了柜台前。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Paragraph1:“Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,”Gloriasaidtomeseriously.“我想让你认真听我说，苏西。”格洛丽亚严肃地对我说。她拉着我站在柜台前，目光坚定地看着我。“你爷爷是我们餐厅最受欢迎的客人之一，他每次来都带着满满的热情和对生活的热爱。我们都很尊敬他，他的故事激励着我们每一个人。”格洛丽亚顿了顿，继续说道，“你知道吗，你爷爷的生活并不容易。他经历了很多困难和挫折，但他从来没有抱怨过，一直都坚强地面对生活。他给的小费虽然不多，但那是他的一片心意，是他对我们服务的认可和尊重。我们不能因为钱的多少而忽视他的这份心意。”我听着格洛丽亚的话，心中的羞愧和尴尬渐渐消散，取而代之的是对爷爷的敬佩和感激。格洛丽亚接着说：“而且，我们餐厅一直都有一个不成文的规定，对于像你爷爷这样的老顾客，我们会给予特别的照顾。那些所谓的‘礼物’，其实是我们表达对他的感谢和敬意的方式。我们希望他能在这里感受到家的温暖。”10续写思路分析Paragraph2:IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.我听着格洛丽亚的话，凝视着那些花，陷入了沉思。原来，在这看似平常的餐厅里，隐藏着这么多温暖和善意。爷爷虽然生活拮据，但他依然用自己的方式表达着对他人的尊重和感激。而餐厅的服务员们，也用他们的善良和细心，给予爷爷特别的关怀。我突然意识到，我之前因为爷爷给的小费不够而感到羞愧是多么的愚蠢。我应该为有这样一位坚强、乐观、懂得感恩的爷爷而感到骄傲。我转过身，看着爷爷，他正和博比开心地说着话。我走过去，紧紧地抱住了爷爷，说：“爷爷，我爱你。”爷爷有些惊讶地看着我，然后笑着摸了摸我的头，说：“我也爱你，苏西。”那一刻，我感受到了浓浓的祖孙情。从那以后，每次和爷爷来这家餐厅，我都会怀着一颗感恩的心，珍惜和爷爷在一起的每一刻，也更加懂得了尊重和理解他人的重要性。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeseriously.Shepulledmetostandinfrontofthecounterandlookedatmewithfirmeyes."Yourgrandpaisoneofthemostpopularguestsinourrestaurant.Everytimehecomeshere,hebringsfullenthusiasmandloveforlife.Weallrespecthimverymuch,andhisstoryinspireseveryoneofus."Gloriapausedforamomentandcontinued,"Youknow,yourgrandpa'slifeisnoteasy.Hehasgonethroughalotofdifficultiesandsetbacks,buthehasnevercomplainedandhasalwaysfacedlifebravely.Althoughthetiphegaveisnotmuch,itishissincereintentionandhisrecognitionandrespectforourservice.Wecan'tignorehisintentionjustbecauseoftheamountofmoney."AsIlistenedtoGloria'swords,theshameandembarrassmentinmyheartgraduallydissipated,replacedbyadmirationandgratitudeformygrandpa.Gloriathensaid,"Moreover,ourrestauranthasalwayshadanunwrittenrulethatwewillgivespecialcaretoregularcustomerslikeyourgrandpa.Thoseso-called'gifts'areactuallythewayweexpressourgratitudeandrespectforhim.Wehopehecanfeelthewarmthofhomehere."13范文呈现IlistenedtoGloriaandstaredatthoseflowers,deepinthought.Itturnedoutthatthereweresomanywarmthandkindnesshiddeninthisseeminglyordinaryrestaurant.Althoughmygrandpa'slifewashard,hestillexpressedhisrespectandgratitudetoothersinhisownway.Andthewaitressesintherestaurant,withtheirkindnessandthoughtfulness,gavemygrandpaspecialcare.IsuddenlyrealizedhowstupidIwastofeelashamedbecausemygrandpa'stipwasnotenough.Ishouldbeproudofhavingsuchastrong,optimisticandgratefulgrandpa.Iturnedaroundandlookedatmygrandpa.HewastalkinghappilywithBobby.Iwalkedoverandhuggedmygrandpatightly,saying,"Grandpa,Iloveyou."Mygrandpalookedatmeinsurpriseandthensmiledandtouchedmyhead,saying,"Iloveyoutoo,Susie."Atthatmoment,Ifeltthestrongaffectionbetweengrandparentsandgrandchildren.Fromthenon,everytimeIcametothisrestaurantwithmygrandpa,Iwouldcherisheverymomentwithhimwithagratefulheartandalsounderstandmoredeeplytheimportanceofrespectingandunderstandingothers.14升级版范文呈现"Iwantyoutolistencarefully,Susie,"Gloriasaidtomeearnestly.Sheledmetothecounterandfixedhereyesonmewithalookofdetermination."Yourgrandpaisoneofthemostbelovedguestsinourrestaurant.Eachtimehestepsthroughourdoors,hebringswithhimaninfectiousenthusiasmandadeep-seatedloveforlife.Weallholdhiminthehighestregard,andhisstoryservesasaninspirationtoeveryoneofushere."Gloriapausedbriefly,hereyesfilledwithsincerity,beforecontinuing."Yousee,yourgrandpahasenduredagreatdealinhislife.Hehasfacednumeroushardshipsandsetbacks,yethehasneveroncecomplained.Instead,hehasalwaysconfrontedlife'schallengeswithunwaveringcourage.Thetipheoffered,thoughmodestinamount,isatestamenttohisgenuineappreciationandrespectforourservice.Weshouldneverletthemonetaryvalueovershadowtheheartfeltsentimentbehindit."AsIlistenedintentlytoGloria'swords,thefeelingsofshameandembarrassmentthathadbeengnawingatmegraduallymeltedaway,replacedbyaprofoundsenseofadmirationandgratitudeformygrandpa.Gloriathenadded,"Furthermore,ourrestauranthaslong-standingunwrittenruleswhenitcomestotakingcareofourregularcustomerslikeyourgrandpa.Theseso-called'gifts'areourwayofshowingourgratitudeandrespectforhim.Westrivetomakehimfeelasifhe'sathomewheneverhe'shere."15升级版范文呈现IlistenedattentivelytoGloria'swordsandgazedintentlyattheflowers,lostindeepthought.Itdawnedonmethatthisseeminglyordinaryrestaurantwasfilledwithanabundanceofwarmthandkindness.Despitehisfinancialstruggles,mygrandpahadalwaysfoundawaytoexpresshisrespectandgratitudetowardsothers.Andthewaitresses,withtheirremarkablekindnessandthoughtfulness,hadgoneaboveandbeyondtoprovidehimwithspecialcare.IsuddenlyrealizedhowfoolishIhadbeentofeelasha