高考英语复习读后续写练习+兄妹助力逐梦路

高考英语读后续写语篇练习兄妹助力逐梦路1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Inasmalltown,therelivedagirlnamedLilyandherolderbrother,Alex.Lilyhadadreamtobecomeaprofessionaldancer,adreamwhichfilledherlifewithbothexcitementandchallenges.Alex,whohadalwaysbeenherrolemodel,understoodherpassionmorethananyoneelse.While,growingup,LilylookeduptoAlex.Hewasthestarathleteofhishighschool,admiredbymany.ButtoLily,hewasmorethanthat;hewashersupportsystem,alwaysencouraginghertopursue(追求)herdream.However,Lily’spathtobecomingadancerwasfilledwithdifficulties.Financiallimitsandlackofresourcesintheirsmalltownwereconstantchallenges.4续写原文AsLilyenteredhighschool,Alexnoticedhissister’sstrugglesandknewhehadtostepin.Hestartedbyorganizingdanceworkshopsandfundraisingeventsintheircommunity.HespenthiseveningshelpingLilypractice,turningtheirgarageintoadancestudio.Hiseffortsbroughtthecommunitytogether,andsoon,Lilyhadasmallbutdevotedgroupofsupporterscheeringheron.WithAlex’shelp,Lilystartedtogainconfidence.Sheimprovedherskillsandbegantoparticipateinlocaldancecompetitions.Eachtimesheperformed,Alexwasthereinthefrontrow,cheeringtheloudest.HisstrongbeliefinherfueledLily’sdeterminationtosucceed.5续写原文AsLily’ssenioryearapproached,asignificantopportunityarose—achancetocompeteinanationaldancecompetition,withtheprizebeinganentryintoafamousdanceacademy.Lilysignedupforitandpracticeddayandnightforthecompetition.Thenightbeforetheevent,Lilyfeltextremelyanxious.Alexstayedupwithher,talkingthroughherroutinesandremindingherofthestrengthandbeautyinhermovements.HiswordscalmedLilydownandfilledherwithnewfoundconfidence.6段首句Paragraph1：Thedayofthecompetitionarrived.Paragraph2：ThankstoAlex,Lily’sdreamwascomingtrue.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了莉莉梦想成为专业舞者，哥哥亚历克斯给予她支持和鼓励。在成长过程中，莉莉面临诸多困难，如经济条件限制和资源匮乏。亚历克斯为帮助妹妹，组织舞蹈工作室、举办募捐活动，陪她练习。莉莉在哥哥的帮助下逐渐自信，参加各种舞蹈比赛。最终，她迎来了参加全国舞蹈比赛的机会，哥哥在赛前为她加油鼓劲，让她充满信心。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thedayofthecompetitionarrived.比赛那天，莉莉站在舞台边，心里既紧张又兴奋。她深吸一口气，走上舞台。音乐响起，她随着节奏舞动起来，动作流畅而优美。台下观众被她的表演吸引，目不转睛地看着。亚历克斯在台下，紧盯着妹妹，眼神里充满期待。莉莉努力发挥出自己最好的水平，每一个动作都充满力量。11续写思路分析Para2：ThankstoAlex,Lily’sdreamwascomingtrue.比赛结束后，评委宣布莉莉获胜。莉莉激动得热泪盈眶，她终于实现了自己的梦想。亚历克斯跑上台，紧紧地抱住妹妹，为她感到骄傲。莉莉知道，这一切都离不开哥哥的支持。她感谢哥哥为她付出的努力，也感谢哥哥一直以来的鼓励。在未来的日子里，莉莉将继续追求自己的舞蹈梦想，而哥哥也会一直陪伴在她身边。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thedayofthecompetitionarrived.Lilysteppedontothestagewithbutterfliesinherstomach.Thespotlighthither,andshebegantodancewithallherheart.Hermovementswasaperfectblendofgraceandstrength.Asshedanced,shecouldhearthecheeringoftheaudience,andsheknewAlexwasthere,watchingherwithpride.Whenshefinishedherperformance,shefeltasenseofaccomplishment.14范文呈现ThankstoAlex,Lily’sdreamwascomingtrue.Thejudgesannouncedherasthewinnerofthecompetition.Shewasofferedaplaceinthefamousdanceacademy.Lilywasoverjoyed.Alex’ssupportandencouragementhadmadeherdreamareality.Sheknewthatwithouthim,shewouldn’thavebeenabletoachievethis.Shelookedatherbrother,andtearsofjoyfilledhereyes.Alexhadalwaysbeenherinspiration,andnowhewasthereasonshecouldpursueherdream.15升级版范文呈现Thedayofthecompetitionarrived.Lily,withamixofnervesandexcitement,steppedontothestage.Thespotlightilluminatedher,andshebegantodancewithanintensitythatwasbothcaptivatingandawe-inspiring.Hermovements,aseamlessblendofgraceandstrength,wasatestamenttothecountlesshoursofpracticeshehadputin.Asshedanced,theaudiencewasspellbound,andshecouldhearthecheersofthecrowd.Alex,standinginthefrontrow,watchedherintentlywithaproudsmileonhisface.Witheachstep,Lilywasnotonlyperformingforherselfbutalsoforherbrotherwhohadbeenherconstantsourceofsupportandencouragement.16升级版范文呈现ThankstoAlex,Lily’sdreamwascomingtrue.Thejudgesannouncedherasthewinnerofthecompetition,andshewasofferedaplaceintheprestigiousdanceacademy.Themomentsheheardthenews,awaveofjoywashedoverher.Alex’ssupportandguidancehadbeeninstrumentalinherjourney.Hehadbeenthereeverystepoftheway,fromorganizingdanceworkshopstohelpingherpracticedayandnight.Itwashisunwaveringbeliefinherthathadkepthergoing.Lilylookedatherbrother,hereyeswellingupwithtearsofhappinessandgratitude.Sheknewthatshecouldn't