高二下学期7月期末联考英语试题读后续写-画笔与心门：父女间的情感纠葛+讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Alisonwasaverydeterminedfour-year-oldgirl.Shewasinterestedineverything,butdrawingespeciallywasherexpertise(专长).HermotherAnnboughtherpapers,colors,brushesandpencilsanditseemedthatAlisonusedthemupallinadayortwo.Alisonshowedherdrawingstoeveryone.Sheespeciallywantedtoimpressherfather.Thereisatimewhendaughtersanddadsbondstrongly,andAlisonsurelylovedherdadandwantedtobond.Shewantedtobondverymuch—butDadalwaysseemedtobetoobusy.AnnwatchedwithaheavyhearthowDaughterandDadveryseldomplayedtogetherandhowthefatherreactedtoAlison’sattemptstoshowherdrawingstohim.“Yes,honey,thatislovely,”hewouldbarelyglimpse(瞥)atAlison’sdrawings,andthenanswerhiscellphoneorgotohisstudy.Oneday,Alisonusedmanyhourstodrawareallydetailedhouse.Itwasmagnificent(壮丽的).Shehaddrawnindividualtiles(砖)andcoloredthemonebyone,carefullyleavingsomespacebetweenthetiles.Shehaddrawncurtainsinthewindows,andherself,MomandDadlookingoutofthem.Onthelawnwasthepuppyshesomuchwantedtohave.“Look,Mom!”sherantoshowherdrawingtohermother.“Oh,Alison,thisissobeautiful!Yourbestever!”hermomsaidwithasmile.Alisonwashappy.“I’llshowthistoDadnow!”shesaid.Sherandownthehalltothecloseddoorofherfather’sstudy.“Dad!Dad!”Shetriedtoopenthedoor.Itwaslocked.Alison’smomsawtheexpressionofdisappointmentonherdaughter’sface.Shereachedforthedoorknobonceagain.Theycouldhearhimtalkingonthephonewithsomeone.Thenthetalkingstopped.“DAD!”Alisonknockedonthedoor,“IwantyoutoseethehouseImade!”“I’msorry,Alison.Iambusy,”camethevoicebehindthedoor.“Can’tyoushowittosomeoneelse?”注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：四岁的艾莉森对一切都充满好奇，尤其热爱绘画，妈妈总是全力支持她的爱好，为她购置各种绘画工具。然而，她格外渴望得到父亲的关注，父女间本应在这一阶段建立亲密纽带，可父亲却总是忙碌，每次艾莉森满心欢喜拿着画作想展示给他时，父亲都只是匆匆一瞥，便接着接电话或回书房，让艾莉森屡屡受挫。有一回，艾莉森耗费数小时精心绘制了一座细节满满的房子，屋内有家人，屋外有渴望的小狗，满心期待能得到父亲认可，可父亲依旧以忙碌为由将她拒之门外，这让艾莉森极度失望，母女俩的心情也随之沉重。伏笔及续写中的回应：伏笔：艾莉森尤其想给父亲留下深刻印象，总是急切地向父亲展示画作。回应：为后文父亲多次忽视她的作品，导致她极度失落，以及最终父亲意识到错误后态度转变，两人关系修复做铺垫。续写中父亲看到女儿伤心欲绝的模样，深感愧疚，开始重视她的画作，实现情感转折。伏笔：父亲总是很忙，对艾莉森展示画作的举动反应冷淡，常瞥一眼就去忙自己的事。回应：突出父亲前期对女儿情感需求的忽视，使艾莉森的失望顺理成章，也引发读者对父女关系走向的好奇。续写里父亲因愧疚改变行为模式，主动花时间陪伴女儿，与前文形成对比。伏笔：艾莉森精心绘制包含家人与梦想小狗的房子画作，投入大量心血。回应：解释艾莉森期望得到父亲认可的急切心情，画作越用心，被拒绝后的伤害越大。续写中父亲看到画作的精美，震惊之余懊悔不已，进一步推动情节发展。伏笔：母亲心疼地看着父女相处状况，目睹艾莉森的失落。回应：侧面烘托父亲行为的不妥，也为母亲后续可能的安慰、引导作用埋下伏笔。续写中母亲给予艾莉森拥抱安慰，在父亲转变后，家庭氛围更加温馨。伏笔：父亲在书房内锁门打电话，拒绝艾莉森进门。回应：强化父亲的忙碌形象，让艾莉森的受阻显得更加无奈，凸显矛盾。续写中父亲打开门，走出封闭空间面对女儿，象征着打破隔阂，走向和解。续写要点：第一段情感线：艾莉森从极度失望、伤心，到陷入自我封闭，对绘画失去热情；故事线：艾莉森被父亲拒绝后，默默回到母亲身边，暗自落泪，之后几天都不再触碰绘画工具，沉浸在难过之中。第二段情感线：父亲从愧疚、懊悔，到决心弥补，艾莉森则由起初的犹豫、不信任，逐渐重燃希望，最终恢复快乐；故事线：父亲听到哭声，心怀愧疚地开门，诚恳道歉并认真欣赏画作，此后每天特意留出时间陪伴艾莉森，父女关系升温。主旨升华句：Loveisnotjustaboutbeingpresentphysically,buttrulytuningintotheheartsofourlovedones.（爱不仅仅是身体在场，更要真正关注所爱之人的内心。）Inthehustleandbustleoflife,don'tletthemostpreciousbondsfadeaway;cherisheverymomentwithfamily.（在忙碌的生活中，别让最珍贵的亲情纽带消逝；珍惜与家人相处的每一刻。）Sometimes,asincereapologyandachangeofheartcanhealthedeepestwoundsandreignitethesparkoflove.（有时候，一个真诚的道歉和心意的改变，能治愈最深的创伤，重燃爱的火花。）Thetruemeasureofaparent'sloveliesnotinprovidingmaterially,butinnurturingachild'sspiritwithtimeandattention.（衡量父母之爱的真正标准，不在于物质给予，而在于用时间和关注滋养孩子的心灵。）Achild'sworldissimple:alltheyneedisalittlerecognitiontomaketheirsunshineagain.（孩子的世界很简单：他们只需要一点认可，就能让心中的太阳再次闪耀。）写作示范一：Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Tearsstreameddownhercheeksuncontrollablyasshetrudgedbacktohermother.Thedrawingthathadoncebeenasourceofpridenowfeltlikeaheavyburden.Sheshoveditunderherpillowandclimbedintobed,pullingthecoversoverherhead.Fordays,shemopedaroundthehouse,ignoringtheinvitingblankpapersandbrightcolors.Hermothertriedtocoaxheroutofherfunk,butitwasasifalighthadgoneoutinsideAlison.Sheevenstoppedaskingaboutthepuppyshehadsolongedfor,herdreamsseeminglycrushedalongwithherspirit.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hisfacewasetchedwithremorseashebeheldhisdaughter'sforlornstate.Hequietlysatontheedgeofthebedandgentlypulledbackthecovers.“Alison,I'vebeenafool.Iforgotwhattrulymattered.”Reachingunderthepillow,heretrievedthewrinkleddrawing.Ashestudiedit,hiseyesgrewmisty.“Thisisamasterpiece,baby.You'vegotagift.”Heheldouthisarms,andafteramoment'shesitation,Alisonflungherselfintothem.Fromthenon,hecarvedoutspecialtimeeachday,whetheritwaspaintingwithherintheparkorframingherdrawingsathome.Thehousewasonceagainfilledwithlaughter,andAlison'shearthealed,onebrushstrokeatatime.写作示范二：Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.

Asenseofdesolationwashedoverher.Shelookedatthedrawinginherhand,nowseemingsoworthless.Slowly,shewalkedtoherroom,closedthedoor,andleanedagainstit,sobbingsoftly.Thecolorsonthepaperblurredashertearsfell.Inthefollowingdays,sheavoidedtheartcornerinthelivingroom.Whenherfriendscameoverandaskedtodraw,sheshookherhead.Thejoythatarthadoncebroughtherwasgone,replacedbyacoldemptiness.ThedoorwasopenedandAlison’sdadappeared.

Hesteppedintothehallway,guiltgnawingathim.SpottingAlison'sdoorajar,hepeekedin.Seeinghersmall,tremblingform,herushedtoherside.“Alison,I'msosorry.Iwaswrong.”Kneeling,hetookthedrawing,smoothingoutthecreases.“Lookatthis!It'samazing.Ishouldhavebeenhereforyou.”Hisvoicecracked.Alisonliftedhertear-stainedface,andastheireyesmet,aglimmerofhopereturned.Afterthat,hemadeaschedule,dedicatingeveningstoartprojectswithAlison.Theirrelationshipblossomedanew,provingthatlovecanalwaysfinditswayback,evenafterthedarkestmoments.【答案】 Alisonfeltdisappointedandherhandfelldowntoherside.Shelookeddownonherbeautifuldrawingandherlowerlipstartedtotremble.“Idon’twantt