读后续写练习+出国梦遇阻梦中惊醒后亲情和解 高三上学期英语一轮复习专项

高考英语读后续写语篇练习出国梦遇阻，梦中惊醒后亲情和解1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Daddy,Ihavesomethingtotellyou.IwantedtoaskyourpermissiontogotoAmerica.”Ididn’tfinishmyspeechasheshouted,“No!”“Butwhy?What…”,Ireplied.“Ifthisallisaboutmoney,thenyoumaynotworry,Igotascholarship…”Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Ifeltawarmtearrunningdownmycheek.IthoughttherewouldbenoproblembecausehealwaysknewhowmuchIdreamtaboutstudyingabroad.Iwassoangryandsaid:“ButwhydoIhavetoaskyourpermission?Iamalready18andI’mnotakidanymore.Youcan’ttellmewhatisrightandwhatiswrong.”4续写原文Ishutthedoorsohardthatitstaggered.Iwassodisappointedthatalltheseyearshecouldn’tseewhatIwasdoing.Thetearswereflowingontheirown.Irealizedhowmuchmylovefordadwas,however,Ijustcouldnotstayatmyhometownanymore.Ilefthomeandmyeyeswerefullofangerandtears.Ididn’tknowwhattodoandwhattoexpect,butIdecidedtogofarawayfromhomeandstartcreatingmydreamlife.Itookabusandwenttotheairport.Iclosedmyeyesandfeltthatsomethingwaswrong.EverythingwassosilentwhensuddenlyIheardmyphoneringing.Itwasanursefromthelocalhospital:5续写原文“Hello!AreyouthedaughterofKuat?”,sheasked.“Yourdadhashadaheartattackandhe’sinacomanow.Thesituation’sserious.Wewantyou…”Iwasn’tlisteningtoheranymore.TearswereflowingandIstartedtochokewhenallofasuddenIheardaman’svoiceandopenedmyeyes.Irealizedthatitwasanightmare.6段首句Paragraph1：Istartedsearchingformyphoneandwantedtohearmydad’svoice.Paragraph2：“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9主人公满心期待地向父亲提出想去美国留学，还表示已有奖学金。可父亲却坚决反对，主人公愤怒地指责父亲，觉得父亲不理解自己多年来的梦想。她负气离家前往机场，途中却接到医院电话，称父亲心脏病发作昏迷，情况危急。就在她悲痛欲绝时，却发现这只是一场噩梦。经历这场梦，她对父亲的情感有了新的感悟，也为后续与父亲的交流埋下伏笔。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:

Istartedsearchingformyphoneandwantedtohearmydad’svoice.从噩梦中惊醒的“我”，内心慌乱不已，双手不受控制地在包里翻找手机，急切地想听到父亲的声音。找到手机后，手抖得厉害，差点连号码都拨错。电话接通的那一刻，“我”的泪水再次夺眶而出，带着哭腔喊出“爸爸”。父亲被“我”的反应弄得一头雾水，“我”赶紧向他讲述噩梦的经过，声音因激动而颤抖，每一个字都饱含着对父亲深深的担忧与害怕失去的恐惧。在讲述过程中，“我”不断抽噎，脑海中不断浮现梦中父亲的样子，情绪久久无法平复。11续写思路分析Para2：“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.电话那头，父亲沉默片刻后，缓缓开口，声音里带着一丝愧疚与温柔，“宝贝，爸爸之前不同意你出国，是害怕你走得太远，会渐渐忘记家，忘记爸爸”。听到这话，“我”愣住了，没想到父亲拒绝背后藏着这样的担忧。“我”连忙向父亲解释，去美国留学是为了实现梦想，可无论走多远，对他的爱永远不会变。两人在电话里推心置腹地交流，父亲终于理解了“我”，还承诺会全力支持“我”。经过这场风波，“我”和父亲的心更近了，“我”也有了勇气和信心，去拥抱充满未知的未来。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Wakingupfromthenightmare,Iwasinastateofpanic.MyhandswereshakingsoviolentlythatIcouldhardlysearchformyphoneinmybag.ThemomentIgotit,Idialedmydad'snumberwithouttheslightesthesitation.Everyringofthephoneseemedtostretchintoanendlesswait.Whenhefinallyanswered,Iburstintotearsandcriedout,"Dad!"inasobbingvoice.Confused,helistenedpatientlyasIrecountedthenightmare.Iwassoemotionalthatmywordswereinterruptedbyfrequentsobs.AsIspoke,theterrifyingimagesofmydadinthedreamkeptflashingthroughmymind,makingitimpossibleformetocalmdown.14范文呈现Afterabriefsilence,mydadsaidgentlyoverthephone,hisvoicetingedwithabitofguilt,"Honey,thereasonIdidn'tallowyoutogoabroadwasthatIwasafraidyou'dbesofarawaythatyoumightgraduallyforgetabouthomeandme."Iwasstunneduponhearingthis.IimmediatelyexplainedtohimthatstudyingintheUSwastopursuemydreams,butnomatterhowfarIwent,myloveforhimwouldneverfade.Wehadaheart-to-heartconversationonthephone.Eventually,heunderstoodmeandpromisedtosupportmewholeheartedly.Afterthisincident,ourrelationshipbecameevencloser.Ifeltmorecourageousandconfidenttoembracethefuturefullofuncertainties.15升级版范文呈现Thatafternoon,Winstonreturnedtothebarbershop,hopingtofindoutthetruth.Itwasthebarberwho,uponseeingWinstonenter,turnedredwithembarrassment.Winston,withadeterminedlookonhisface,askedthebarberwhathadhappened.Thebarberexplainedthatduetoasuddenpowerglitch,theclippersmalfunctioned,resultinginthisunexpectedhaircut.Notonlydidthebarberapologizesincerely,buthealsoofferedtofixitforfreerightaway.Underthebarber'sskilledhands,Winston'shairwastransformedintoafashionablestyle.Finally,Winstonleftthebarbershop,readytoembracehisnewlifewithabigsmile.16升级版范文呈现“Hereyouare,mysweetie.I’mnotlettingyouleavebecauseIdon’twantyoutoforgetme.”hesaidsoftly.Stunnedintosilenceforamoment,Ihadneverfathomedsuchareason.Swiftly,Iassuredhimthatmyloveforhimwasunshakable,andstudyingabroadwasaboutchasingmydreams,notaboutseveringtieswithhim.Whatfollowedwasaprofoundconversation,duringwhichhecametounderstandmyaspirations.Promisinghisfu